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Power Peer EditingStep-by-Step Program
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• Always remember these lessons:
– A good peer editor makes a better self-editor because you learn by correcting other peoples’ work!
– Treat your peer’s paper like you’ll be graded on his/her errors and weaknesses.
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• Step One:
– Read your peer’s whole paper aloud.
– This can be very quiet, but the point is to hear whether the words flow or are awkward.
– Plug your ears and read aloud to block out other people around you.
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• Step Two:– Read the first paragraph again, aloud and...
• Double check that paragraph has a good: Hook- make your essay stand out with a catchy hook Thesis statement Elaboration (detail) Establishment of topics discussed
• Mark convention errors.– Save time: don’t re-word sentences. Put “awk” by awkward
areas and move on.– Don’t fix the spelling- just circle the word and write “sp”
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• Step Three- Four-Five.– Read second paragraph (repeat third & fourth)
• Double check:– Introductory sentence
– Elaboration
– Concluding sentence
• Mark convention errors– Save time: don’t re-word sentences. Put “awk” by awkward areas
and move on.
– Don’t fix the spelling- just circle the word and write “sp”
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• Step Six.– Read conclusion
• Double check: Restatement of thesis Detail, anecdote, examples, call to action
• Mark convention errors– Save time: don’t re-word sentences. Put “awk” by
awkward areas and move on.– Don’t fix the spelling- just circle the word and
write “sp”
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Power Peer Editing• Step seven.
– Does the person’s self-evaluation seem true?• Suggest to peer what their greatest area of weakness is:
ideas/content, organization, sentence fluency, voice, or word choice.
• Suggest what your peer’s greatest weakness on conventions is.
– Go back to each paragraph and write a positive comment if you didn’t already. Positive feedback makes writers happy.
Add “peer edited by: ____________________” at the end of the paper
Now you’re a Power Peer Editor!