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Read Like a ReaderRead Like a Writer

What do readers do when they read? Sounds like a strange question,doesn’t it? After all, readers just read, don’t they? Sort of. Actually, the whole ques-tion turns on what you think reading is.

Your mind is very active while you process text. You may think you’re justsaying words to yourself and hearing them somewhere inside your head, butchances are there’s more going on — a lot more. Becoming aware of what your mind is doing when you read helps you become a better reader.

Nobody knows for sure what goes on in the mind of a reader. Frankly, there’sno way to tell and no two readers read exactly the same way. So, we have to makeup a theory about it. I like to think that there are two different ways to read:

• Reading like a reader. We might think of this as the “normal” way of reading where we try to figure out what a piece of writing

means by understanding the words a writer is using. But even this“normal” way is more complicated than it seems.

• Reading like a writer. When we read from the perspective of a writer, we focus less on what the writer is trying to say and more on how the writer is saying it. Specifically, we look at the techniques the writer is using to get his or her message across and how those tech-niques affect us as we experience the text.

These certainly aren’t the only ways to read. But I think they representinteresting and valuable ways of thinking about a text. The point of all this is tohelp us enjoy reading more by making it a more active and interactive process. When we read actively, we don’t just wait for the meaning to come to us, we goafter it — aggressively. We look deeply into the text hunting in certain specific ways searching for clues as to what the writer is trying to say. When we readinteractively, we ask questions about the text and our reactions to it, and we usethe answers we to develop a sense of how the text works. It’s as if we start a conversation between the writer, the writing, and our self.



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Read Like a ReaderWhat’s going on here? Personally, I find teaching reading to be rather intimidating because Ican never really know for sure how students are doing it. I can look out across a classroom and see

a group of kids with their faces buried in between the pages of their books, but I have no way of knowing what’s really going on. For all I can tell, they could be sitting quietly, thinking aboutnothing, and turning pages just to make me feel good.

There’s no way to know for sure what goes on in a reader’s head. And every reader probably readsa little differently. But here’s a list of six things I think all readers do, things that make them moresuccessful, and make reading more fun. I call this “reading like a reader”:

Question. Readers ask good questions about the things they read. What kinds of questions dothey ask? Just about anything that comes to mind: why something is happening or not happen-

ing, why a character feels or acts a certain way, things we wonder about or are confused by, words we may not know the meanings of, and so on. Questions help readers clarify their understanding.

Predict. Readers make guesses about what is coming up next. No reader, it seems, can resistthinking about what a writer is going to say next. It’s just part of human nature to anticipatethings. Predicting helps readers sort out important information from unimportant information, ithelps them organize their thinking as they encounter new material.

Infer. Readers figure out things about what they read that aren’t actually written in the text.There’s almost always more to a story than just the words on the page. Often, writers leave “clues”that good readers can use to discover important information.

Connect. Readers think about what their reading reminds them of. We can’t help but be re-minded of our own lives as we read. We’re also reminded of similar things we’ve read in other texts and other parts of the same text we’re reading at the time.

Feel. Readers have feelings while they read, they express emotions. Sometimes, it seems like wehave a direct connection to what we’re reading: sad parts make us feel sad, happy parts make us feel happy, scary parts scare us, and so on. But often, the feelings we have are more subtle, we

may feel them only slightly, for example, when we read with more expression. Much of the mean-ing we get from a piece of writing comes from the emotions we feel when read it.

Evaluate. Readers make judgments while they read. Is this good? If so, what’s good about it? DoI like it? Why? Should I keep reading or should I put this down and get something else? Readersare finicky, impatient, judgmental. The evaluations they make help them decide whether or not what they are reading is valuable and, if so, how they might use it.



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Reading Like a ReaderEddie had always been able to fly, but it wasn’t until his fifth birthday party that he realized

that it would turn out to be a bit of a social problem. Until that embarrassing day on the

Johnsons’ lawn, Eddie’s parents had treated his airborne peculiarity as something of a childish whim. “Boy’s gotta stretch out, learn what he can do,” said his father. “I just worry that he’ll hurthimself, you know, bump into the ceiling or get his eye poked out by a bird, I don’t know...” saidhis mother. For the young Eddie, flying was just another discovery about his developing body, likelearning that he could reach out his arm and ring the bell on his cradle railing, or finding thathe loved the taste of peas. The first time his parents came into the nursery and found Eddie hover-ing a foot or two off the floor it came as a bit of a shock. But, after all, parents are forever discover-ing special little things about their children. Eddie’s mother thought that perhaps they shouldtake their son to see a specialist, but his father vetoed the idea. “It’s not like anything’s wrong withhim, and I don’t want him getting a complex about it.”

— Opening paragraph from Eddie Takes Off by Ben Hippen

Question: Is this a fantasy story where people have special powers? Or is the author using theidea of flying to stand for something else? If he can really fly, why aren’t his parents a little more freaked out about it?

Predict: I think Eddie’s flying is going to get him in trouble. In the very first sentence, the au-thor refers to Eddie’s flying as “a bit of a social problem” and to me that hints that things canonly get worse.

Infer: Eddie’s parents seem strange. They don’t sound like real people, more like characters froma bad TV show. I think the author is trying to tell us that they may not be very smart or very sensi-tive.

Connect: This reminds me of Harry Potter where a boy has special powers. But it also makes methink of other kids I have seen who may be different. Sometimes, kids with unusual abilitiesaren’t accepted by other people.

Feel: I feel sorry for Eddie. I get the feeling that he’s going to be lonely because people aren’t go-ing to understand him.

Evaluate: I think the beginning is good. I’m curious about Eddie and his flying. I want to findout if he really can fly and if he’s the only kid in the story who can do something like this. I also want to see what trouble he gets into. The author has an entertaining and funny style. I especially like the way he describes Eddie’s parents though I don’t like them at all, especially Eddie’s father.This is exactly the kind of story I like: realistic but with a little bit of a twist.



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Read Like a WriterThere’s another way to read? Normally, when we read, we focus on what the writer is try-ing to say. When we read like a writer, however, we focus on how the writer is saying it. Because we

are writers ourselves, we pay close attention to the techniques a writer is using and how those tech-niques contribute to the meaning of the piece and improve its quality. We may even borrow thetechniques we learn for our own writing. I call this “reading like a writer.” When we read like this,there are six things we pay attention to:

Ideas. Ideas are the heart of the piece — what the writer is writing about and the informationher or she chooses to reveal about it. When we read like a writer, we try to answer questions likethese: How does the writer reveal the main idea? What types of details does the writer use? How does the writer achieve his or her purpose? How does the writer’s choice of ideas affect the reader?

Organization. Organization refers to the order of ideas and the way the writer moves from oneidea to the next. When we read like a writer, we try to answer questions like these: What kinds of leads does the writer use and how do they pull us in and make us want to read more? What kindsof endings does the writer use and how do they work to make the writing feel finished and to giveus something important to think about? How does the writer handle transitions? What techniquesdoes the writer use for sequencing? How does the writer control pacing?

Voice. Voice is how the writing feels to someone when they read it, it’s the expression of the writ-er’s individual personality through words. When we read like a writer, we try to answer questionslike these: How does the writer demonstrate passion for the topic? How does the writer reveal emo-tions? How does the writer put personality into the piece?

Word Choice. Word Choice refers to writer’s selection of particular words and phrases to expressideas. When we read like a writer, we try to answer questions like these: What techniques (simile,metaphor, strong verbs, etc.) does the writer use to make the word choice more specific, morememorable, and more effective?

Sentence Fluency. Sentence Fluency is the rhythm and flow of the language as we read it, it’show the writing sounds when read aloud. When we read like a writer, we try to answer questions

like these: What kinds of sentence constructions does the writer use? How does the writer vary thelength and construction of his or her sentences? How does the writer use “sound” effects like allit-eration, rhyme, and rhythm?

Conventions. Conventions are the ways we agree to use punctuation, spelling, grammar, andother things that make writing consistent and easy to read. When we read like a writer, we try toanswer questions like these: How does the writer use conventions to make the writing easy to readand more meaningful? Does the author use conventions in unusual ways that are successful?



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Reading Like a WriterEddie had always been able to fly, but it wasn’t until his fifth birthday party that he realized

that it would turn out to be a bit of a social problem. Until that embarrassing day on the

Johnsons’ lawn, Eddie’s parents had treated his airborne peculiarity as something of a childish whim. “Boy’s gotta stretch out, learn what he can do,” said his father. “I just worry that he’ll hurthimself, you know, bump into the ceiling or get his eye poked out by a bird, I don’t know...” saidhis mother. For the young Eddie, flying was just another discovery about his developing body, likelearning that he could reach out his arm and ring the bell on his cradle railing, or finding thathe loved the taste of peas. The first time his parents came into the nursery and found Eddie hover-ing a foot or two off the floor it came as a bit of a shock. But, after all, parents are forever discover-ing special little things about their children. Eddie’s mother thought that perhaps they shouldtake their son to see a specialist, but his father vetoed the idea. “It’s not like anything’s wrong withhim, and I don’t want him getting a complex about it.”

— Opening paragraph from Eddie Takes Off by Ben Hippen

Ideas: A flying baby boy, in the context of what appears to be a realistic setting, is a curious andcompelling idea.

Organization: The opening line is great. It certainly gets our attention and makes us want to find out more. The author has us wondering about three things: Eddie’s flying ability, his parentsstrange reaction, and the embarrassing incident on his fifth birthday.

Voice: The author’s voice is light-hearted and playful, just as one might imagine a flying baby boy to be.

Word Choice: The phrase “airborne peculiarity” in the second sentence is both unusual andmemorable. It also seems like the perfect way to describe Eddie’s unique talent as viewed by his parents, as though it were something just slightly odd or mildly eccentric. In the last sentence, thestrong verb “vetoed” tells a lot about how Eddie’s mom and dad interact: Eddie’s dad is sort of likethe “president” of the family; any time he wants he can cancel his wife’s ideas.

Sentence Fluency: The parallelism of the two quotes works nicely. And the last sentence, laidout in four pieces, with just a little bit of alliteration near the end, sounds smooth and satisfying.

Conventions: Normally, when quoting characters in a story, we have to start a new paragraph for each new speaker. But here the author quotes the two parents inside a paragraph. The use of the ellipsis at the end of the mother’s comment makes her seem even more vague than her cli-chéd words imply.



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R e a d L i k e a R e a d e r , R e a d L i k e a W r i t e r

“ J u s t w h a t a r e y o u t r y i n g t o p r o v e ? ” s p u t t e r e d M r s . J o h n s o n

. “ I d o n ’ t k n o w

w h a t k i n d o f s t u p i d t r i c k t h i s i s , b u t y o u j u s t s c a r e d t h e b e j e e z u

s o u t o f a l l t h e

c h i l d r e n . S o m e o n e c o u l d

h a v e g o t t e n h u r t . O u t , n o w ! I w a n t y o

u o u t o f m y

y a r d , a n d d o n ’ t e v e r c o m

e b a c k ! ”

E d d i e ’ s m o t h e r g r a b b

e d h i m b y t h e h a n d a n d b e g a n d r a g g i n g h i m a w a y .

E d d i e ’ s d e s p e r a t e a t t e m p t s a t e x p l a n a t i o n d i s p l a c e d h i s t e a r s . “ M o m m y , h e w a s

h i t t i n g m e . . . .

H e ’ s b i g g e r t h a n I a m . . . . ”

B u t h i s p l e a d i n g w a s s w

a l l o w e d b y h i s

m o t h e r ’ s m o r t i f i e d s i l e n c e . A s t h e y r e a c h e d t h e s i d e w a l k t h e y c o

u l d h e a r t h e

a g i t a t e d m u t t e r i n g s o f t h e g r o u p o n t h e l a w n b e h i n d t h e m : c h i l d r e n b e g i n n i n g

t o c r y , p a r e n t s t r y i n g t o r e a s s u r e t h e m t h a t i t w a s j u s t a t r i c k , t h

a t i t w a s n ’ t

r e a l . A l e x ’ s v o i c e r e a c h e d t h e m j u s t a s t h e y t u r n e d o n t o t h e s i d e w a l k t o g o

b a c k t o t h e i r o w n h o u s e : “ W e i r d o ! ”

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T h a t e v e n i n g E d d i e l a y i n b e d , m i s e r a b l e . H e t r i e d s n u g g l i n g i n t o h i s

s h e e t s ; h e t r i e d l e v i t a t i n g a f e w i n c h e s a b o v e t h e m a t t r e s s , w h i c h u n t i l t o d a y

h a d a l w a y s c o m f o r t e d h i m

w h e n h e w a s t r y i n g t o g e t t o s l e e p . H

e f e l t e m b a r -

r a s s e d , a s h a m e d t h a t h e h a d h u r t h i s m o t h e r . H e f e l t e x p o s e d i n a w a y t h a t w a s

n e w t o h i m . A n d

s o E d d i e

m a d e a p r o m i s e t o h i m s e l f w i t h t h e i n t e n s i t y o f a

c h i l d ’ s c o n f u s e d p a i n : h e w o u l d n e v e r a g a i n a l l o w a n y o n e t o s e

e h i m f l y .

F o r t h e f i r s t w e e k o r s o a f t e r t h e p a r t y E d d i e s t u c k t o h i s p r o m i s e . H e c o n -

t i n u e d t o a m u s e h i m s e l f w i t h a n o c c a s i o n a l l o o p j u s t u n d e r t h e d i n i n g r o o m

c e i l i n g , b u t n e v e r w h e n h i s p a r e n t s o r a n y o n e e l s e w a s p r e s e n t .

A f t e r a c o u p l e

o f w e e k s h i s p r o m i s e f a d e d f r o m a d a i l y m a n t r a t o a v a g u e r i n t e n t i o n , b u t t h e

h a b i t s t u c k o f n e v e r l e t t i n g a n y o n e s e e h i m f l y . H i s p a r e n t s n o t i c e d , o f c o u r s e .

“ I h o p e n o t h i n g ’ s w r o n g , ” s a i d h i s m o t h e r . “ I j u s t w a n t h i m t o

b e n o r m a l a n d

h a p p y l i k e o t h e r c h i l d r e n . ”

“ I t w a s j u s t a p h a s e , ” s a i d h i s f a t h e

r . “ I f i g u r e d

h e ’ d g r o w o u t o f i t . ” A n d E d d i e d i d s e e m h a p p y , w h i c h t o o k s o m

e o f t h e s t i n g

o u t o f t h e f a c t t h a t E d d i e ’ s m o t h e r n e v e r w a s i n v i t e d b a c k t o M r s . J o h n s o n ’ s

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E d d i e s l o w l y s h u f f l e d

o u t o f t h e s c h o o l b u i l d i n g c a r r y i n g

h i s b o o k b a g .

O n l y t h r e e d a y s i n t o n i n t h g r a d e a n d a l r e a d y i t w a s a d r a g —

b o r i n g c l a s s e s ,

n o n e w f r i e n d s , t o o m u c h

h o m e w o r k . H e w a l k e d d o w n t h e s i d e w a l k , l o s t i n d e -

p r e s s i n g t h o u g h t s a b o u t s c h o o l , u n t i l h e b e c a m e a w a r e , s e c o n d

s t o o l a t e , o f

t h e f o o t s t e p s o f t h r e e b o y s

r u n n i n g u p b e h i n d h i m . H e f e l t t h e

f i r s t b l o w o n h i s

b a c k , c a u s i n g h i m t o s t u m

b l e a n d d r o p h i s b a g , w h i c h w a s p r o m p t l y k i c k e d

i n t o t h e b u s h e s b y a n o t h e

r o f t h e t h r e e . B o o k s a n d p a p e r s f l e w e v e r y w h e r e . A s

h e t u r n e d t o f a c e h i s a t t a c k e r s a f i s t s l a m m e d i n t o h i s s t o m a c h , k n o c k i n g

t h e

w i n d o u t o f h i m a n d c a u s i n g h i m t o c o l l a p s e o n t h e g r o u n d . H e h e a r d l a u g h -

t e r a n d a f a m i l i a r v o i c e s h o u t “ W e i r d o ! ” a b o v e h i m . T h e t h r e e

b o y s r a n o f f ,

o n e o f t h e m s a y i n g , “ G o o d o n e , J o h n s o n ! ”


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E d d i e s a t t h e r e f o r a m i n u t e t r y i n g t o r e g a i n h i s b r e a t h . T h

e n h e c r a w l e d

o v e r t o t h e b u s h e s o n h i s h a n d s a n d k n e e s a n d h a l f - h e a r t e d l y b

e g a n c o l l e c t i n g

t h e s p i l l e d c o n t e n t s o f h i s

b o o k b a g . A s h e r e a c h e d f o r t h e m a t h

w o r k s h e e t d u e

t o m o r r o w a s m a l l , d e l i c a t e h a n d w e a r i n g n a i l g l o s s a n d a p i n k

i e r i n g g r a b b e d

i t . H e l o o k e d u p a t t h e o w n e r o f t h e h a n d . S h e w a s b l o n d , w i t h m o r e f r e c k l e s

t h a n h e ’ d e v e r s e e n i n h i s l i f e .

“ H i , I ’ m J a n e . I ’ m i n

y o u r S c i e n c e c l a s s . H e r e , l e m m e h e l p

y o u . ” S h e

p i c k e d u p t h e r e m a i n i n g b o o k s a n d p u t t h e m i n t o E d d i e ’ s b a g w h i l e h e h e l d i t

o p e n . “ W h a t ’ s y o u r n a m e ? ”

“ U m , E d d i e . ”

“ N i c e t o m e e t y o u , E d d i e . ” S h e s m e l l e d g r e a t . “ T h a t A l e x J o h

n s o n i s t h e b i g -

g e s t j e r k . I d o n ’ t k n o w w h y h e ’ s s o m e a n . W e l l , t h a t ’ s a l l y o u r s t u f f . I g o t t a r u n .

S e e y o u t o m o r r o w i n c l a s s . ”

A s E d d i e w a t c h e d h e r w a l k a w a y h e d i d n ’ t n o t i c e h i s

a c h i n g s t o m a c h . A n d h e d i d n ’ t n o t i c e t h a t h e w a s g r i n n i n g l i k e a

n i d i o t .


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E d d i e s u d d e n l y d e v e l o p e d a n i n t e n s e i n t e r e s t i n S c i e n c e c l a

s s . H e t o o k a d -

v a n t a g e o f e v e r y o p p o r t u n

i t y t o s a y a f e w w o r d s t o J a n e : “ H e r e , y o u d r o p p e d

y o u r p e n . ” “ T h i n k i t ’ l l r a i n d u r i n g g y m c l a s s t h i s a f t e r n o o n ? ” O n c e E d d i e a n d

J a n e w e r e l a b p a r t n e r s . T h

e y f i n i s h e d t h e a s s i g n m e n t s u c c e s s f u l l y , a l t h o u g h

E d d i e b u r n e d h i s t h u m b o n a B u n s e n b u r n e r . H e b a r e l y e v e n n o t i c e d , h e w a s

s o n e r v o u s . J a n e w a s a l w a

y s p o l i t e , b u t s h e n e v e r r e a l l y g o t i n v o

l v e d i n c o n v e r -

s a t i o n w i t h h i m . I n

f a c t , s h e d i d n ’ t t r e a t E d d i e a n y d i f f e r e n t l y f r o m a n y o f t h e

o t h e r b o y s i n t h e c l a s s . J a n e , o n t h e o t h e r h a n d , w a s a l l t h a t E d d i e c o u l d t h i n k

a b o u t . E d d i e w o u l d l i e a w

a k e i n h i s b e d a t n i g h t t h i n k i n g a b o u

t h e r . H e w o u l d

s l o w l y l e v i t a t e o f f t h e m a t t r e s s , r a i s i n g h i s b r o w n c o m f o r t e r f r o m u n d e r n e a t h ,

l o o k i n g l i k e a l o a f o f b r e a

d r i s i n g i n t h e o v e n .


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E d d i e d i d n ’ t k n o w w h a t t o d o . O n e e v e n i n g h e a p p r o a c h e d h

i s m o t h e r ,

w h o w a s s i t t i n g i n f r o n t o f t h e T V k n i t t i n g s o m e t h i n g l a r g e a n d b l u e w i t h g r e a t

d e t e r m i n a t i o n .

“ M o m , ”

h e s t a r t e d , “ t h e r e ’ s t h i s g i r l i n m y S c i e n c e c l a s s . . . . ”

“ W h a t ’ s h e r n a m e ? ” H

i s m o t h e r k e p t k n i t t i n g .

“ H e r n a m e ’ s J a n e , a n d

s h e ’ s . . . w e l l ,

I m e a n , I k i n d o f — ”

“ W h a t i s i t , d e a r ? ” K n i t , k n i t , k n i t .

“ N e v e r m i n d , M o m . ”



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T h e n e x t e v e n i n g E d d i e m a d e u p h i s m i n d t o c a l l J a n e a n d

a s k h e r o u t o n

a d a t e . H e w a i t e d u n t i l a f t e r d i n n e r , t h e n l e f t h i s p a r e n t s i n f r o n

t o f t h e T V t o

u s e t h e u p s t a i r s p h o n e . H e p a c e d f o r a b o u t t w e n t y m i n u t e s , h i s

p a l m s g e t t i n g

s w e a t y . H e p i c k e d u p t h e p

h o n e , h e l d i t f o r a w h i l e , t h e n p u t i t b a c k d o w n a n d

p a c e d s o m e m o r e . F i n a l l y , b a r e l y r e a l i z i n g

w h a t h e w a s d o i n g , h e p i c k e d u p

t h e p h o n e a g a i n a n d d i a l e d J a n e ’ s n u m b e r . S h e a n s w e r e d o n t h

e s e c o n d r i n g .

“ H e l l o ? ” E d d i e c o u l d n ’ t m

a k e a s o u n d c o m e o u t o f h i s m o u t h .

“ H e l l o ? I s t h e r e

a n y b o d y t h e r e ? ” J a n e h u n

g u p , l e a v i n g E d d i e l i s t e n i n g t o t h e d i a l t o n e f o r a

m i n u t e . T h e n h e s e t d o w n

t h e p h o n e a n d w e n t t o b e d .


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F o r t h e r e s t o f t h e s c h

o o l y e a r E d d i e w a s i n c o n s o l a b l e . H e n o l o n g e r e v e n

h a d t h e c o u r a g e t o t r y t o m a k e s m a l l t a l k w i t h J a n e . W h e n s h e

w o u l d m a k e

s o m e c a s u a l c o m m e n t t o

h i m i n c l a s s h e w o u l d s t a m m e r a n d f l e e a s q u i c k l y

a s h e c o u l d . I t f e l t l i k e t h e o n l y s o c i a l c o n t a c t h e h a d f o r a l l t h o s e m o n t h s w a s

t h e c o n t i n u a l b a i t i n g a n d

o c c a s i o n a l b e a t i n g f r o m A l e x J o h n s o

n . E v e n t u a l l y i t

w a s s p r i n g , a n d t h e n t h e l a s t d a y o f s c h o o l . T h i s w a s i t , E d d i e k

n e w ; i f h e d i d n ’ t

a s k J a n e o u t t o d a y h e w o u l d n e v e r m a k e i t t h r o u g h t h e s u m m e

r . A f t e r t h e l a s t

c l a s s h e w a i t e d i n t h e h a l l n e a r J a n e ’ s l o c k e r . W h e n h e s a w h e r w a l k i n g t o h e r

l o c k e r h e s t e p p e d t o w a r d h e r , f o r c i n g h i m s e l f n o t t o t h i n k a b o u

t a n y t h i n g e x -

c e p t f o r w h a t h e n e e d e d t o s a y .



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“ H i , E d d i e , i t ’ s g o o d t o s e e y o u . H o w ’ r e y o u d o i n g ? ” J a n e s m

i l e d . I t s e e m e d

l i k e s h e w a s g e n u i n e l y g l a d t o s e e h i m . M

a y b e , j u s t m a y b e , s h e

w o u l d a g r e e t o

a d a t e . E d d i e f e l t a s u r g e o f o p t i m i s m . I n

f a c t h e f e l t a l m o s t g i d

d y , s o g i d d y t h a t

h e w a s o n t h e v e r g e o f l i f t i n g i n t o t h e a i r w i t h o u t e v e n r e a l i z i n g i t . H i s h e e l s

w e r e o f f t h e f l o o r , l e a v i n g

h i m s t a n d i n g o n t i p t o e . I f o n l y J a n e k n e w h o w s p e -

c i a l h e w a s ! H e c o u l d s h o w h e r , s h e w o u l d u n d e r s t a n d ! H e f e l t s o h a p p y t h a t h e

h a d n ’ t r e a l i z e d t h a t s o m e o n e w a s s t a n d i n g b e h i n d h i m . B

a m !

H e w e n t f l y i n g

i n t o t h e l o c k e r s f a c e f i r s t ,

t h e n c r u m p l e d t o t h e f l o o r .

“ W e i r d o ! ”

“ A l e x ! P i c k o n s o m e b

o d y y o u r o w n s i z e ! ” J a n e w a s w a t c h i n

g A l e x J o h n s o n

a n d h i s f r i e n d s r u n a w a y d o w n t h e h a l l . S h e t u r n e d b a c k t o E d d i e , w h o w a s

w i p i n g a t t h e b l o o d t h a t w

a s s t a r t i n g t o r u n f r o m h i s n o s e . “ A r e y o u o k a y ? ”

“ Y e a h , I ’ m f i n e . H a v e a g o o d s u m m e r , J a n e . ” E d d i e w a l k e d

d o w n t h e h a l l

a n d o u t o f t h e s c h o o l b u i l d i n g a s f a s t a s h e c o u l d .

I t w a s a l o n g , m i s e r a b l e s u m m e r f o r E d d i e .

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T h e s e n i o r p r o m w a s n ’ t t u r n i n g o u t a t a l l l i k e E d d i e h a d e x p e c t e d . H e h a d

n e v e r r e a l l y g o t t e n o v e r J a

n e . H e h a d m a n a g e d a c o u p l e o f d a t e s w i t h o t h e r

g i r l s d u r i n g h i g h s c h o o l , b u t t h e y n e v e r r e a l l y a m o u n t e d t o a n y t h i n g — c o m -

p a r e d t o J a n e , a n y o t h e r g

i r l f e l l s h o r t . T h e b i g g e s t i m p a c t s h e h a d w o u n d u p

h a v i n g o n h i s l i f e w a s t h a

t s i n c e t h a t h u m i l i a t i n g l a s t d a y o f n i n t h g r a d e h e

h a d n e v e r f l o w n a g a i n , n o t e v e n i n p r i v a t e . H e w a s n ’ t s u r e i f h e

w a s e v e n s t i l l

a b l e t o f l y , a n d h e w a s n ’ t s u r e i f h e c a r e d . O v e r t h e y e a r s h e h a d t h o u g h t m a n y

t i m e s a b o u t t a k i n g J a n e t o t h e s e n i o r p r o m , b u t w a s n ’ t r e a l l y s

u r p r i s e d t o f i n d

h i m s e l f h e r e t o n i g h t , n o t

w i t h t h e g i r l o f h i s d r e a m s , b u t w i t h a c o u p l e o f h i s

b u d d i e s , M a x a n d J e r r y . “ S t a g n i g h t ! ” t h e y ’ d s a i d t o e a c h o t h e r , a n d

l a u g h e d .

L o s e r n i g h t , t h e y ’ d t h o u g h t t o t h e m s e l v e s , a n d s i g h e d . S t i l l , t h e n i g h t h a d n ’ t

b e e n t h a t b a d , a n d E d d i e h a d a r r a n g e d f o r t h e m t o w i n d u p a t a n a f t e r - d a n c e

p a r t y t h a t h e k n e w J a n e w

o u l d b e c o m i n g t o . A t l e a s t h e w o u l d g e t a c h a n c e t o

s e e J a n e t o n i g h t , e v e n t h o

u g h h e k n e w t h a t h e w o u l d n ’ t b e a b l e t o t a l k t o h e r

w i t h o u t g o i n g t o p i e c e s .



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J e r r y c a m e b a c k f r o m

t h e k i t c h e n c a r r y i n g t h r e e c a n s o f p o

p t o t h e c o r n e r

w h e r e E d d i e a n d M a x w e r e s t a n d i n g . N o n e o f t h e m r e a l l y k n e w

w h a t t o d o a t a

p a r t y , s o t h e y s t o o d t h e r e s i p p i n g a n d t r y i n g t o l o o k n o n c h a l a n t , w h e n t h e

f r o n t d o o r o p e n e d a n d M a x s a i d “ H e r e c o m e s o m e h a p p y c o u p l e s . ” E d d i e s a w

J a n e w a l k i n t o t h e r o o m . S h e w a s w e a r i n g a l o n g b l u e d r e s s w h

i c h b a r e d h e r

f r e c k l e - c o v e r e d a r m s . S h e

h a d h e r h a i r s w e p t u p o n t o p o f h e r h

e a d . F o r a m o -

m e n t t h e i m a g e o f t h e g a n g l y n i n t h g r a d e r t h a t E d d i e h a d f i r s t

f a l l e n f o r

f l a s h e d i n f r o n t o f h i s e y e s , o n l y t o b e r e p l a c e d b y t h e s i g h t o f t h

e b e a u t i f u l

y o u n g w o m a n s h e h a d b e

c o m e . E d d i e t w i t c h e d w i t h a s p a s m o f h e a r t a c h e .



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T h e n h e n o t i c e d w h o

J a n e h a d w a l k e d i n w i t h a n d s p i l l e d h i s p o p o n h i s

r e n t e d t u x e d o . J a n e ’ s p r o m

d a t e w a s A l e x J o h n s o n . E d d i e f e l t f a

i n t . T h e b l o o d

d r a i n e d o u t o f h i s f a c e . M a x n o t i c e d a n d a s k e d i f E d d i e w a s o k a y . I t s o u n d e d

l i k e M a x ’ s v o i c e w a s c o m i n g f r o m t h e b o t t o m o f a s w i m m i n g p

o o l . A l e x

J o h n s o n ! E v e r y i n j u s t i c e ,

e v e r y d i s a p p o i n t m e n t , e v e r y t h i n g t h a t h a d e v e r g o n e

w r o n g i n E d d i e ’ s e n t i r e l i f e s e e m e d l i k e n o t h i n g c o m p a r e d t o t h i s . F o r t u n a t e l y

m o r e a n d m o r e p e o p l e w e r e s h o w i n g u p a t t h e p a r t y , s o h e c o u l d h i d e i n t h e

c o r n e r a n d s i l e n t l y l i s t e n t o M a x a n d J e r r y m a k e s t u p i d j o k e s a b o u t a r r i v i n g

c o u p l e s a n d w h a t t h e y w e r e w e a r i n g . H e h a d n o i d e a h o w m u c h t i m e h a d

p a s s e d w h e n h e r e a l i z e d t h a t M a x a n d J e r r y ’ s i n f a n t i l e c o m m e n

t a r y h a d t a k e n

a n e w t u r n . M a x h a d o v e r h e a r d t h a t “ . . . s o m

e o f t h e m a r e g o i n g o u t t o t h e l a k e

p a s t t h e V a l l e y A c r e s d e v e l o p m e n t t o b u i l d a b o n f i r e a n d s t a y u p a l l n i g h t . ”

E d d i e h e a r d h i m s e l f s a y “ W h o ’ s g o i n g ? ”

“ A b u n c h o f t h e m . G r e g a n d A l l i s o n , J e r e m y a n d L i s a , A l e x

a n d J a n e — ”

J e r r y c h i m e d i n : “ Y e a

h , t h e y ’ r e g o n n a h a v e a r e a l p a r t y o u t t h e r e t o n i g h t ! ”



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E d d i e c h u g g e d t h e r e s t o f h i s p o p i n o n e h u g e g u l p . H e l o o k e d f o r J a n e i n

t h e c r o w d , h o p i n g f o r o n e

l a s t g l i m p s e o f h e r b e f o r e h i s l i f e w a s r u i n e d f o r e v e r .

T h e r e t h e y w e r e , J a n e a n d

A l e x , s t a n d i n g a b i t a p a r t f r o m t h e r e s t o f t h e i r

f r i e n d s . I t l o o k e d l i k e t h e y w e r e h a v i n g a d i s a g r e e m e n t . J a n e k e

p t s h a k i n g h e r

h e a d , a n d A l e x w a s r a i s i n g h i s v o i c e . A s E d d i e w a t c h e d , A l e x g r a b b e d J a n e ’ s

w r i s t , n o t v e r y g e n t l y , a n d

b e g a n d r a g g i n g h e r i n t h e d i r e c t i o n o f t h e f r o n t

d o o r . A s A l e x j e r k e d h e r i n

t o m o t i o n , J a n e ’ s h a i r c a m e u n d o n e a n d f e l l o v e r h e r

s h o u l d e r s . W i t h o u t t h i n k i n g , E d d i e t h r e w d o w n h i s e m p t y p o p c a n a n d r u s h e d

t o w a r d s t h e m . H e s t r e t c h e

d o u t h i s a r m s i n f r o n t o f h i m a n d u n c o n s c i o u s l y

p r o p e l l e d h i s b o d y b y f l y i n g , r u s h i n g o v e r t h e c a r p e t s o l o w t h a t n o b o d y r e a l -

i z e d t h a t h e w a s n ’ t j u s t r u

n n i n g . H e s l a m m e d i n t o A l e x , w h o l e t J a n e ’ s w r i s t g o

a n d s l a m m e d i n t o t h e w a l l s o h a r d t h a t h i s h e a d m a d e a s m a l l i n d e n t a t i o n i n

t h e p l a s t e r .



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E v e r y o n e i n t h e r o o m

s t a r e d , f r o z e n a n d s p e e c h l e s s . A l e x s t o o d a n d t u r n e d

t o f a c e E d d i e , h i s h a n d s b a l l i n g i n t o f i s t s . B u t h e s t a y e d w h e r e h e w a s . S o m e -

t h i n g i n h i m w h i s p e r e d t h a t E d d i e h a d h i t h i m w i t h m o r e f o r c e t h a n s h o u l d

h a v e b e e n p o s s i b l e t o b u i l d u p b y s i m p l y r u n n i n g a c r o s s t h e r o o m . A n d

s o m e -

t h i n g a b o u t t h e s u r r o u n d i n g c r o w d , s t a r i n g a n d s i l e n t , t r i g g e r e

d a m e m o r y o f

a f i v e - y e a r - o l d b o y w h o h a d j u s t d r o p p e d a b l u e g a r b a g e t r u c k a n d w a s c o n -

f r o n t e d b y t h e i m p o s s i b l e

s p e c t a c l e o f a n o t h e r f i v e - y e a r - o l d b o y

f l o a t i n g i n

m i d - a i r a b o v e h i m . F o r a

m o m e n t a b a t t l e r a g e d i n A l e x ’ s m i n d : t h e c o c k y

t e e n a g e r , l i v i d w i t h r a g e , s t r u g g l e d w i t h t h e l i t t l e b o y w h o s e b u l l y i n g h a d p r o -

v o k e d a n i m p o s s i b l e , t e r r i f y i n g s i t u a t i o n . T h e l i t t l e b o y w o n . A l e x r a n f o r t h e

f r o n t d o o r a n d b o l t e d o u t s i d e . M o m e n t s l a t e r e v e r y o n e i n t h e h o u s e h e a r d t h e

r o a r o f h i s C a m a r o a s h e s p e d a w a y . E d d i e b e c a m e a w a r e o f J a n

e ’ s h a n d o n h i s

s h o u l d e r . “ O h , G o d , ” s h e

s a i d . “ L e t ’ s g e t o u t o f t h i s p l a c e . ” T h e

t w o o f t h e m

w a l k e d o u t t h e f r o n t d o o r

t o g e t h e r . N o b o d y i n t h e r o o m h a d s a i d a w o r d .



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O u t s i d e i t w a s c o o l . T h e m o o n w a s f u l l a n d c a s t t h e i r s h a d o w s i n f r o n t o f

t h e m a s t h e y w a l k e d . J a n e s t o p p e d a n d t u r n e d t o f a c e E d d i e . “ T h a n k s . I f e e l s o

s t u p i d . I d o n ’ t e v e n k n o w

w h a t I w a s d o i n g t h e r e w i t h h i m . I s h

o u l d h a v e

k n o w n i t w o u l d t u r n o u t b a d . ” S h e p u t h e r a r m s a r o u n d E d d i e

a n d h u g g e d

h i m . H e p u t h i s a r m

s a r o u n d h e r a n d h u g g e d b a c k . H e s t a r t e d t o s a y s o m e -

t h i n g , t h e n s t o p p e d . H e s t a r t e d t o m o v e h i s f a c e c l o s e r t o h e r s , t h e n s t o p p e d .

S h e l o o k e d u p a t t h e m o o n a n d s a i d , “ I t ’ s s u c h a b e a u t i f u l n i g h t . I w i s h t h a t

w e c o u l d j u s t g e t o u t o f h e r e . ”

E d d i e t i g h t e n e d h i s g r i p a r o u n d h e r w a i s t . “ M a y b e w e c a n . ”

H i s f e e t l i f t e d

f r o m t h e s i d e w a l k . H e f e l t

t h e s u r p r i s e i n J a n e ’ s a r m s a s t h e y t i g

h t e n e d a r o u n d

h i m . A n d

t h e n , w i t h o u t w o r d , t h e t w o o f t h e m b e g a n r i s i n g i n t o t h e c a l m n i g h t

a i r .



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