2010 retrospective - part 2 · the marking schemes used during the marking operation and included...
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Short Response (SR)CommentaryThis year’s SR subtest comprised 18 items across eight units. As students worked through each unit, they interacted with challenging and engaging stimulus material. Test developers paid careful attention to framing each item in a way that made it accessible to most students. The SR testpaper comprised units with stimulus material selected from fields as diverse as mathematics, logic, astronomy, literature, physical and social sciences and visual arts.
This year’s paper was again varied in its content, covering a broad range of CCEs. The different tasks included showing how to fold a simple envelope by drawing a diagram and composing step-by-step instructions, writing a formal apology, following an intricate mathematical method accurately, ruling lines on a map, determining percentages, drawing a page imitating an alphabet book, drawing a line graph, crafting a description. These tasks aimed to interest students and impart knowledge while assessing student achievement.
Model responses and commentaries on student performanceWhat follows is an item-by-item discussion that includes model responses and marking schemes, tables and graphs of the distributions of grades and commentaries that discuss how students handled the tasks and that give suggestions which might help. At times, references to specific student responses are included to exemplify observations. As much as possible model responses are actual student responses. Model responses are those that demonstrate a high level of performance and would have been awarded the highest grade, A.
For some items, especially the more open-ended items, responses were extremely varied. For these it is not possible to provide examples of the many ways in which students responded. The detailed, item-specific marking schemes indicate the scope of acceptable responses for different grades. Even for the more closed items the marking schemes demonstrate that different ways of perceiving “the solution” were able to gain credit.
Marking schemesThe marking schemes used during the marking operation and included in this section of the Retrospective are not designed to be read in isolation. They are but one element of the marking prescription. During the marking operation markers undergo rigorous training in how to apply the marking schemes to student responses of one marking unit. The training involves careful consideration and application of the material presented by immersers.
For organisational purposes during the marking operation, the testpaper units were grouped into five marking units. In 2010, Marking Unit 1 contained testpaper units One and Eight, Marking Unit 2 contained testpaper units Two and Five, Marking Unit 3 contained testpaper units Three and Four, Marking Unit 6 contained testpaper unit Six and Marking Unit 7 contained testpaper unit Seven.
Since all short response items are double marked, this means that a student’s response booklet was marked by at least 10 different independent markers — more, if any response(s) required referee marking.
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SR 2010 summary
Note: CCEs specific to an item are listed on the item’s marking scheme.The baskets into which CCEs are grouped are shown in Appendix 2.
Unit Item Basket Common Curriculum Elements
OneAlex & Tom
1 28 Empathising31 Interrelating ideas/themes/issues33 Reaching a conclusion which is consistent with a given set of
assumptions38 Generalising from information
2
TwoSleeve
3 26 Explaining to others44 Synthesising50 Visualising
ThreeStyle Guide
4 2 Finding material in an indexed collection4 Interpreting the meaning of words …10 Using vocabulary appropriate to a context26 Explaining to others31 Interrelating ideas/themes/issues44 Synthesising
5
FourLarge Numbers
6 7 Translating from one form to another16 Calculating with or without calculators37 Applying a progression of steps to achieve the required answer44 Synthesising7
FiveTordesillas
8 6 Interpreting the meaning of … maps …16 Calculating with or without calculators17 Estimating numerical magnitude50 Visualising57 Manipulating/operating/using equipment9
SixAlphabet Books
10 4 Interpreting the meaning of words …9 Using correct spelling, punctuation, grammar10 Using vocabulary appropriate to a context29 Comparing, contrasting31 Interrelating ideas/themes/issues34 Inserting an intermediate between members of a series43 Analysing46 Creating/composing/devising48 Justifying49 Perceiving patterns
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SevenIce-cream
13 6 Interpreting the meaning of … graphs15 Graphing19 Substituting in formulae22 Structuring/organising a mathematical argument16 Calculating with or without calculators37 Applying a progression of steps to achieve the required answer48 Justifying
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15
16
EightThunderbird Inn
17 4 Interpreting the meaning of words or other symbols10 Using vocabulary appropriate to a context26 Explaining to others31 Interrelating ideas/themes/issues43 Analysing46 Creating/composing/devising
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Unit One
This unit was based on a short extract from James Patterson’s detective novel Jack and Jill. The extract records the meeting between President Thomas Byrne and Alex Cross.
The following table shows the percentage of responses awarded the various grades for the items in this unit.
Item 1
Model response
CommentaryItem 1 is a two-star item which tested achievement in CCEs 28 Empathising, and 31 Interrelating ideas/themes/issues.
In the extract Alex Cross is deciding how he will introduce himself to the President. Students were asked to describe a likely train of thought that led to his decision. Alex’s train of thought had four elements. He rejected the use of the title “Detective” (this was to be inferred as it was not articulated in the text). He perceived the use of the title “Doctor” would indicate some status, reputation or formality so he rejected this title. He decided that he wanted to be addressed by his given name. Students had to ensure that their response was consistent with
the text. A creditable reason for Alex choosing to be addressed by his given name had to go beyond mere personal preference.
Responses that were awarded an A-grade covered the four elements by clearly articulating a plausible train of thought which provided a reason for rejecting the use of “Detective”, indicating the perceived status/
A B C D E N O
Item 1 6.2 41.5 33.8 15.7 2.9
Item 2 15.2 21.7 48.7 11.7 2.7
A shaded box indicates that the grade was not available for that item.
In the first half of the extract, Alex Cross goes through a process of deciding how he wants to
be addressed by the President.
Describe a likely train of thought that led him to his decision.
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Alex has a choice of using Doctor or Detective. He’s quite aware that many at the
White House would attach a certain status to anyone called ‘Doctor’—but Alex is not
after status. If he used ‘Detective’, the President may become very wary of what he
says (‘What you say may be used in evidence against you’). He wants to create an
atmosphere without pretensions or defensiveness—one of open communication. So,
he rejects both titles, and chooses to be addressed as Alex, because it’s more friendly.
A B C N O
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reputation/formality of the title “Doctor”, providing a reason for rejecting the use of the title “Doctor” and providing a reason for Alex choosing to be addressed by his given name.
Many students had difficulty identifying all four elements. Some failed to indicate why Alex rejected the use of the title “Detective” or, while some recognised the status/reputation/formality associated with the title “Doctor”, they failed to provide a clear reason for rejecting it.
One way a response could be awarded a B-grade was to provide a reason for Alex Cross rejecting the use of the title “Detective” and showing (or, by default, indicating) that he chose to be addressed by his given name. Defaulting meant that the student made it clear that they were addressing the two elements together by providing clear grammatical signals such as the comparative (e.g. “less intrusive”, “more approachable”) or a connector like “on the other hand” or “on second thought”. A second way was to focus on the title “Doctor” or to consider the two titles together as professional titles. The student needed to indicate the perceived status/reputation/formality of the title “Doctor” or the professional title and then provide a reason for rejecting that title. As well, the response needed to show (or, by default, indicate) that Alex Cross chose to be addressed by his given name. It was also acceptable for students to reverse this defaulting process; that is, provide a reason for Alex Cross choosing to be addressed by his given name and show (or, by default, indicate) that Alex rejected being addressed as “Doctor” or using a professional title. This latter category of the B-grade response was very common.
Students need to be attentive to the wording of stems. The stem required students to consider Alex’s “train of thought” and to articulate each step of his thought process not to answer the question why he chose to be addressed by his given name. Responses that ignored this instruction and merely provided a creditable reason for Alex choosing to be addressed by his given name/rejecting the other titles could, at best, be given a C-grade. Stems are carefully constructed and need to be carefully considered when devising a high quality response.
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for
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addr
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his
giv
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pons
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pla
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rain
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thou
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for
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se o
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by
defa
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s) t
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to
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by
his
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1.
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th
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or
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x C
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dre
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by h
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ust
go b
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pre
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for
his
giv
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as
a c
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of
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or
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of
wh
at
he
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you
say m
ay b
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in
evid
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again
st y
ou
’).
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ts t
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t p
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s or
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ne
of
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en c
om
mu
nic
ati
on
.
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he
reje
cts
both
tit
les,
an
d c
hoose
s to
be
ad
dre
ssed
as
Ale
x,
bec
au
se i
t’s
more
fri
end
ly.
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Item 2
Model response 1
Model response 2
CommentaryItem 2 is a two-star item which tested achievement in the CCEs 33 Reaching a conclusion which is consistent with a given set of assumptions and 38 Generalising from information.
Students were asked what the extract suggested about Alex Cross’s impression of the President just after he had met him. The cue indicated that the students had to give reasons to support their conclusions regarding Alex’s impression of the President. Two model responses are provided on the marking scheme as students may have interpreted the extract in two different but equally valid ways. One
interpretation was that the President presented himself in a friendly, helpful way because that was part of his character. Another interpretation was that the President was a studied politician who used his charming manner as a political “bag of tricks” to befriend Alex and therefore Alex could not trust him.
An A-grade response provided a credible and specific impression by describing one or more characteristics of the President and giving clear reason(s) linked to the characteristic(s) and based on the extract for forming this impression. This characteristic might have been described with one or two adjectives, as in “friendly and genuine” or with a phrase or clause. It was important that the reasons were clearly matched to the
What does the extract suggest about Alex Cross’s impression of the President just after
he has met him?
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Give reasons to
support your
conclusion.
1. Alex thinks that the President is a man who is not bound by
formalities—this can be seen from the President asking Alex to call him by
his first name, Tom, resulting in them ‘shaking off their surnames’. Further, he sees the
President as honest, with strength of character because of his firm handshake.
What does the extract suggest about Alex Cross’s impression of the President just after
he has met him?
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Give reasons to
support your
conclusion.
2. He thinks that the President is a practised performer, a chameleon. He
gives Alex a practised ‘broad smile’ designed to appeal to the public because
it is charming. He also repeats the actual words of Alex by introducing himself with ‘And I
prefer Tom’. He is reflecting what people want to hear and see.
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characteristic(s) given. A mismatch between these two was a common error, e.g. “He is genuine because he had a ‘charismatic’ smile.”
Some responses detailed Alex going through an intricate thought process, perhaps a reflection of Item 1. As long as students came to a definite conclusion about an impression or why, the response could be awarded an A-grade. The reasons proffered had to match the steps in Alex’s thinking.
The marking scheme specifies two important notes when determining a grade. The first note says that the impression must be formed by Alex Cross and that it must be an impression of the President. Some students gave their impression of Alex’s emotions and reactions on meeting the President instead of focusing on Alex's impression of the President. Others gave The President’s impression of Alex. Such responses gained no credit.
Students should read the stem (and any cues) carefully and respond to what is asked of them, not a variation.
The second note demanded that the response demonstrated that the student understood the meaning of “charismatic” (a word in the stimulus material) if it was used or was the supporting evidence for a reason. Simply saying that the President was “charismatic” was not sufficient to be creditable. It had to be clear from the response that the meaning of “charismatic” was understood.
To be awarded a B-grade, the response provided a credible and specific impression by describing a characteristic of the President and a reason, linked to the characteristic and based on the extract, for forming this impression. Many responses fell into this category because one of the pieces of evidence matched the characteristic but a second piece of evidence was either absent, mismatched or simply cited “charismatic”.
There were two ways for a response to be awarded a C-grade. The first way was to identify one characteristic of the President that can be inferred from the text, e.g. “He is casual and laid-back.” The second was to provide evidence from the text to support either a broadly positive or negative impression of the President.
Students did this in different ways. If they used broad general descriptors such as he is average, OK, a good bloke, a real person, they were awarded a C-grade as long as they provided evidence from the text. The requirement for “evidence” rather than “reasons” allowed for responses that simply provided positive or negative observations about the encounter, e.g. “His impression of the President was very positive because they seemed to like each other and they used their first names.”
The cue instructs students to give reasons (plural).
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Mark
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Un
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N
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un
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or d
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not
sati
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the
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fo
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he
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hat
can
be in
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rom
the
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the
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her
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or
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essi
on o
f th
e P
resi
dent
.
OR
A
The
res
pons
e pr
ovid
es
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cred
ible
and
spe
cifi
c im
pres
sion
by
desc
ribi
ng
one
or m
ore
char
acte
rist
ics
of t
he P
resi
dent
•cl
ear
reas
ons
— li
nked
to
the
char
acte
rist
ic(s
) an
d ba
sed
on t
he e
xtra
ct —
for
form
ing
this
im
pres
sion
.
B
The
res
pons
e pr
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es
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cred
ible
and
spe
cifi
c im
pres
sion
by
desc
ribi
ng
a ch
arac
teri
stic
of
the
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side
nt
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reas
on —
link
ed to
the
char
acte
rist
ic a
nd b
ased
on
the
ext
ract
— fo
r fo
rmin
g th
is im
pres
sion
.
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
1.
Ale
x t
hin
ks
that
the
Pre
sid
ent
is a
man
wh
o i
s n
ot
bou
nd
by f
orm
ali
ties
—th
is c
an
be
seen
fro
m t
he
Pre
sid
ent
ask
ing A
lex t
o c
all
him
by
his
fir
st n
am
e, T
om
, re
sult
ing
in
th
em ‘
sha
kin
g o
ff t
hei
r su
rna
mes
’. F
urt
her
, h
e se
es t
he
Pre
sid
ent
as
ho
nes
t, w
ith
str
eng
th o
f
chara
cter
bec
au
se o
f h
is f
irm
han
dsh
ak
e.
2.
He
thin
ks
that
the
Pre
sid
ent
is a
pra
ctis
ed p
erfo
rmer
, a c
ham
eleo
n. H
e giv
es A
lex a
pra
ctis
ed ‘
bro
ad
sm
ile’
des
ign
ed t
o a
pp
eal
to t
he
pu
bli
c b
ecau
se i
t is
ch
arm
ing.
He a
lso r
epeats
th
e act
ual
word
s of
Ale
x b
y i
ntr
od
uci
ng h
imse
lf w
ith
‘A
nd
I p
refe
r T
om
’. H
e is
refl
ecti
ng w
hat
peo
ple
wan
t to
hea
r an
d s
ee.
Note
s:
1.
Th
e im
pre
ssio
n i
s th
e im
pre
ssio
n f
orm
ed b
y A
lex
Cro
ss.
2.
Th
e re
spon
se m
ust
sh
ow
th
at
the
can
did
ate
kn
ow
s th
e m
ean
ing o
f “ch
ari
smati
c” f
or
“ch
ari
sma
tic”
to
be
incl
ud
ed a
s a
ch
ara
cter
isti
c
or
as
sup
port
ing e
vid
ence
in
a r
easo
n.
Sim
ply
sayin
g t
hat
the
Pre
sid
ent
is c
hari
smati
c is
in
suff
icie
nt
to g
ain
cre
dit
.
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Unit Two
The item in this unit was based on the folding of a decorative paper sleeve (a simple envelope). The stimulus material was a photograph showing two different views of such a design. Students were told that the sleeve was folded from a single square sheet of paper that had not been cut or torn.
The following table shows the percentage of responses awarded the various grades for the item in this unit.
Item 3
Model response
A B C D E N O
Item 3 7.8 24.3 31.1 15.7 10.0 8.9 2.2
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Show only the crease
lines. Do not include
labels or other
markings.
Present written instructions that are not supplemented with any diagrams and do not rely on reference to the
square above for clarity.
1. Fold the paper into equal thirds from top to bottom.
2. Unfold.
3. Fold the top right hand corner down until the right hand edge of the top
third lies along the top fold line.
4. repeat step 3. for the bottom right hand corner.
5. Fold the bottom third of the paper up to cover the middle third.
6. Fold the top third down to cover the other two thirds.
7. Fold in half from left to right.
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CommentaryItem 3 is a three-star item which tested achievement in CCEs 50 Visualising, 44 Synthesising and 26 Explaining to others.
Students were asked to show how to fold the pictured decorative sleeve by ruling lines of dashes within the square provided to show the crease lines. They were also asked to write step-by-step instructions to explain how to fold the sleeve. The response area included the square and a lined area for the written instructions. One cue directed students to show only the crease lines within the square and not to include labels or other markings. The other cue asked them to present written
instructions that were not supplemented by any diagrams and that did not rely on reference to the square for clarity.
To be awarded an A-grade, the response had to show the three sets of crease lines (the thirds, the half and the triangles) ruled and correctly positioned within the square. No incorrect information was to be shown or given. The written instructions had to be clear, stand-alone instructions (as defined in the notes on the marking scheme).
Grades other than an A-grade hinged on how many ambiguities (as classified in note 9, on the marking scheme), omissions or incorrect instructions were made throughout the response. The most common ambiguities were related to: the orientation of the square (which could alter where the corners would be folded or how the thirds and half were aligned); how to fold the corners (if the instruction was simply to fold to the crease line, the fold may not have been in the correct position); and the omission of an instruction to unfold (which indicated that the corners were folded while the paper was still folded in thirds).
It is worth noting that a large number of students confused the definitions of basic concepts such as halves, quarters, thirds, triangles, squares.
This item highlights the importance of presenting to do the QCS Test with all the essential equipment as listed on the front of the testpaper. Some crease lines appeared to have been drawn without using a ruler.
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IT
TW
OIT
EM
3
PE
RF
OR
MA
NC
E D
OM
AIN
MA
RK
IN
G S
CH
EM
E
Mark
ing
Un
it 2
N
Res
pon
se i
s
un
inte
llig
ible
or
does
not
sati
sfy t
he
req
uir
emen
ts
for
an
y o
ther
gra
de.
O
No r
esp
on
se
has
bee
n m
ad
e
at
an
y t
ime.
50
Vis
ua
lisi
ng
4
4S
yn
thes
isin
g2
6E
xp
lain
ing
to
oth
ers
C
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es
inst
ruct
ion
s th
at,
wh
en
clari
fied
by t
he
dia
gra
m i
f
nec
essa
ry, w
ou
ld f
orm
th
e
slee
ve.
A
Th
e re
spo
nse
pro
vid
es
•cl
ear
stan
d-a
lon
e
inst
ruct
ion
s th
at
wou
ld
form
the
slee
ve
•th
e sq
uare
wit
h t
he
thre
e
sets
of
crea
se lin
es r
ule
d a
nd
all
corr
ectl
y p
osi
tion
ed.
Th
e sq
uare
does
not
incl
ud
e
lab
els
or
oth
er m
ark
ing
s.
No i
nco
rrect
in
form
ati
on
is
sho
wn
or
giv
en.
B
Th
e re
spo
nse
pro
vid
es
•st
an
d-a
lon
e in
stru
ctio
ns
that,
exce
pt
for
no m
ore
than
on
e am
big
uit
y, w
ou
ld
form
the
slee
ve
•th
e sq
uare
wit
h t
he
thre
e
sets
of
crea
se lin
es
ru
led
an
d
reaso
nab
ly p
osi
tion
ed.
D
Th
e re
spo
nse
pro
vid
es
inst
ruct
ion
s th
at,
wh
en
cla
rifi
ed b
y t
he
dia
gra
m i
f
nec
essa
ry, w
ou
ld f
orm
a
slee
ve.
Th
e re
spo
nse
pro
vid
es t
he
squ
are
wit
h t
he
thre
e se
ts o
f
crea
se l
ines
rea
son
ab
ly
posi
tion
ed.
OR
E
Th
e re
spo
nse
pro
vid
es
inst
ruct
ion
s th
at,
wh
en
clari
fied
by t
he
dia
gra
m i
f
nec
essa
ry, w
ou
ld f
orm
tw
o s
ets
of
crea
se l
ines
rea
son
ab
ly
posi
tion
ed.
Th
e re
spo
nse
pro
vid
es t
he
squ
are
wit
h t
wo s
ets
of
crea
se
lin
es r
easo
nab
ly p
osi
tion
ed.
OR
No
tes:
1.
“C
lear”
in
stru
ctio
ns
are
in
stru
ctio
ns
that
can
be
per
form
ed i
n o
nly
on
e w
ay.
2.
“S
tan
d-a
lon
e” i
nst
ruct
ion
s d
o n
ot
rely
on
an
y d
iagra
m,
lab
el o
rre
fere
nce
to t
he
squ
are
.
3.
“a
sle
eve”
has
fold
ed-d
ow
n c
orn
ers,
fold
ed-i
n s
ides
an
d i
sfo
lded
in
half
to f
orm
a p
ock
et.
Th
e sl
eev
e is
a s
leev
e th
at
if u
nfo
lded
wou
ld p
rod
uce
th
e th
ree
sets
of
crea
se l
ines
rea
son
ab
ly p
osi
tion
ed.
4.
Th
e se
ts o
f cr
ease
lin
es a
re:
the
“th
ird
s”, th
e “h
alf
” a
nd
th
e “tr
ian
gle
s”.
5.
Corr
ectl
y p
osi
tion
ed t
ria
ngle
cre
ase
lin
es j
oin
th
e en
d o
f th
e th
ird
s cr
ease
lin
e to
a p
oin
t tw
o-t
hir
ds
of
the
dis
tan
ce b
etw
een
th
e co
rner
an
d t
he
half
cre
ase
lin
e.
6.
Rea
son
ab
ly p
osi
tion
ed t
rian
gle
cre
ase
lin
es j
oin
th
e en
d o
f th
e th
ird
s cr
ease
lin
e to
a p
oin
t th
at
lies
bet
wee
n o
ne
sixth
an
d a
lmost
a h
alf
way d
ow
n t
he
sid
e of
the
squ
are
.
7.
Un
less
oth
erw
ise
state
d,
ass
um
e th
e co
rner
s are
fold
ed i
n t
he
sam
e d
irect
ion
an
d t
he
fin
al
fold
-in
-half
in
stru
ctio
n i
s acr
oss
, n
ot
alo
ng, th
e re
ctan
gle
an
d p
lace
s th
e tr
ian
gle
on
th
e in
sid
e.
8.
Th
e sl
eeve
can
have
the
“th
ird
s” f
old
ed i
n e
ith
er o
rder
, i.
e. l
eft
over
rig
ht
or
righ
t over
lef
t.
9.
An
am
big
uit
y i
s:
•a
n i
nst
ruct
ion
th
at
can
be
per
form
ed i
n m
ore
th
an
on
e w
ay,
on
e of
wh
ich
wil
l fo
rm t
he
slee
ve
•a
n u
nst
ate
d b
ut
imp
lied
in
stru
ctio
n (
such
as
un
fold
ing).
10.
If t
he
inst
ruct
ion
to u
nfo
ld i
s m
issi
ng i
t m
ay b
e ass
um
ed f
or
C-,
D-
or
E-
gra
des
.
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RK
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ing
Un
it 2
UN
IT
TW
OIT
EM
3
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
1.
Fold
th
e p
ap
er i
nto
eq
ual
thir
ds
from
top
to b
ott
om
.
2.
Un
fold
.
3.
Fold
th
e to
p r
igh
t h
an
d c
orn
er d
ow
n u
nti
l th
e ri
gh
t h
an
d e
dge
of
the
top
th
ird
lie
s alo
ng t
he
top
fold
lin
e.
4.
rep
eat
step
3. fo
r th
e b
ott
om
rig
ht
ha
nd
corn
er.
5.
Fold
th
e b
ott
om
th
ird
of
the
pap
er u
p t
o c
over
th
e m
idd
le t
hir
d.
6.
Fold
th
e to
p t
hir
d d
ow
n t
o c
over
th
e oth
er t
wo t
hir
ds.
7.
Fold
in
ha
lf f
rom
lef
t to
rig
ht.
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Unit Three
The two items in this unit were based on an adapted extract from a style guide. Students were told the purpose of a style guide is to make document writing clear, correct and unambiguous.
The following table shows the percentage of responses awarded the various grades for the items in this unit.
Item 4
Model response
A B C D E N O
Item 4 0.5 25.5 34.0 28.3 10.6 1.2
Item 5 18.1 22.8 26.2 26.7 2.9 3.4
A shaded box indicates that the grade was not available for that item.
Due to all the reminders about mutual respect, we are now better able to co-operate.
................................................................................................
Its a shame the amount of unforced errors he makes effects how well the team does.
................................................................................................
The gift she gave me was a rather unique acknowledgement of all my efforts on her behalf.
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Neither of them were happy that the true facts about the crime had been misused in the trial.
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Owing cooperate
It’s number affects
rather acknowledgment
was true
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CommentaryItem 4 is a three-star item which tested achievement in CCEs 2 Finding material in an indexed collection and 4 Interpreting the meaning of words or other symbols.
Students were required to find and then to correct errors in the four given sentences, based on the conventions listed in a style guide extract. In the stem they were told that each sentence had more than one error. Corrections required in this item included replacing words, deleting words or correcting the spelling of words. Only the nine errors and corrections shown in the model response were allowed and markers were instructed not to credit other corrections. The cue
instructed students to make corrections based on the style guide information only. The purpose of a style guide is to ensure all users adopt the same language conventions, especially where common usage may allow different uses of a word.
The errors in the sentences were:
for sentence one,• according to the style guide, “due to” is not to be used to start a sentence. Therefore it is incorrect as
given and the appropriate correction would be to change it to “owing to”.• “co-operate” should not have a hyphen. The word should be spelled “cooperate”.
for sentence two,• “Its” is incorrect and should be written as “It's” or as “It is”.• “amount” refers to a quantity of something that cannot be counted. Therefore in this context, it needs to
be replaced with “number”.• “effects” is identified as a noun in the style guide, so in this context needs to be replaced with the verb
“affects”.
for sentence three,• the style guide indicates the word “unique” cannot be modified, so “rather” must be deleted.• “acknowledgement” is misspelled according to the style guide. The corrected word does not contain the
second “e”.
for sentence four,• the subject/verb agreement is incorrect. “Neither” is singular; therefore, it requires a singular verb. The
word “were” should be changed to “was”. This is deemed to be the only acceptable correction for this error because any other correction would have to be based on information not specified in the extract of the style guide.
• the style guide indicates that the word “facts” cannot be modified by the word “true” or “false” so “true” needs to be deleted.
The A-grade response had to indicate only the nine errors and make the appropriate corrections for each.
Students found this item very accessible with omits accounting for just slightly more than 1% of responses. The number of A-grade responses was not high. The correction that presented the most challenge for students was correcting the subject/verb agreement in the last sentence. Students also did not always adhere to the direction: “according to information in the style guide extract”.
The stimulus for this item could be considered quite lengthy if it had to be read in its entirety. The instruction to “Read the words in bold…. Return to the extract as needed” is important to follow to make the most efficient use of time.
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it 3
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Res
pon
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s
un
inte
llig
ible
or
does
not
sati
sfy t
he
req
uir
emen
ts
for
an
y o
ther
gra
de.
O
No r
esp
on
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has
bee
n m
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e
at
an
y t
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ind
ing
ma
teri
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in a
n i
nd
exed
co
llec
tio
n
4In
terp
reti
ng
th
e m
ean
ing
of
wo
rds
…
C
Th
e re
spon
se
•in
dic
ate
s at
least
5 o
f th
e er
rors
•m
ak
es a
t le
ast
5 o
f th
e a
pp
rop
ria
te
corr
ecti
on
s
•m
ay i
ncl
ud
e at
most
th
ree
un
nec
essa
ry c
orr
ecti
on
s.
A
Th
e re
spon
se
•in
dic
ate
s O
NL
Y t
he
9 e
rrors
•m
ak
es O
NL
Y t
he
9 a
pp
rop
riate
corr
ecti
on
s.
B
Th
e re
spon
se
•in
dic
ate
s at
least
7 o
f th
e er
rors
•m
ak
es a
t le
ast
7 o
f th
e ap
pro
pri
ate
corr
ecti
on
s
•m
ay
incl
ud
e a
t m
ost
tw
o u
nn
eces
sary
corr
ecti
on
s.
D
Th
e re
spon
se
•in
dic
ate
s a
t le
ast
3 o
f th
e er
rors
•m
ak
es a
t le
ast
3 o
f th
e a
pp
rop
ria
te
corr
ecti
on
s.
Note
s:
1.
Th
e m
eth
od
of
ind
icati
ng a
nd
corr
ecti
ng m
ust
be
clea
rly s
how
n a
nd
un
am
big
uou
s.
2.
An
“u
nn
eces
sary
corr
ecti
on
” o
ccu
rs w
hen
a c
orr
ecti
on
is
mad
e to
som
eth
ing t
hat
is n
ot
on
e of
the
9 e
rro
rs.
3.
No p
enalt
y f
or
low
er c
ase
“o” f
or
Ow
ing n
or
“i”
for
It’s
is
to b
e ap
pli
ed.
4.
Sp
elli
ng t
hro
ugh
ou
t th
e re
spon
se m
ust
be
con
sist
ent
wit
h t
he
style
gu
ide.
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
Th
eg
ift
she
gav
em
ew
asa
rath
eru
niq
ue
ack
no
wle
dg
emen
to
fal
lm
yef
fort
so
nh
erb
ehal
f.
Nei
ther
of
them
wer
eh
app
yth
atth
etr
ue
fact
sab
ou
tth
ecr
ime
had
bee
nm
isu
sed
inth
etr
ial.
rather
ackn
owled
gment
was
true
Its
ash
ame
the
amo
un
to
fu
nfo
rced
erro
rsh
em
akes
effe
cts
ho
ww
ell
the
team
do
es.
It’s
number
affec
ts
Du
eto
all
the
rem
ind
ers
abo
ut
mu
tual
resp
ect,
we
are
no
wb
ette
rab
leto
co-o
per
ate.
Owing
coopera
te
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Item 5
Model response
CommentaryItem 5 is a three-star item which tested achievement in CCEs 26 Explaining to others, 10 Using vocabulary appropriate to a context, 44 Synthesising and 31 Interrelating ideas/themes/issues.
Students were required to choose one disruption from one of a list of three possible disruptions to public transport. They were instructed to write a formal apology related to their choice, to structure the apology to include a reason for the disruption and provide an undertaking that steps were being taken to overcome any problems associated with the disruption. They were also told their apology would be posted on public notice boards and on relevant websites. Finally,
students were asked to include three (from a list of nine) seed words. These words, together with their meanings, were included in the style guide extract. The first cue reminded students to give a plausible explanation for the disruption and to use an appropriate tone. The second cue asked them to underline their three chosen words.
To be awarded an A-grade, responses needed to: appropriately use three of the seed words as they were given; include an apology; “fully attend to” an explanation for the disruption and an undertaking to fix the problem or a reassurance that some action was being taken; have an apt tone for a public notice. Of special note is the requirement to use the seed words appropriately.
Many responses fell short of meeting these requirements. Most commonly students either did not use the seed words as given, or appropriately, or in sufficient number. Explanations that were implausible or unconvincing were credited as only “referencing” (rather than “fully attending to”), as was an undertaking that was inadequate. Some responses failed to give an explanation for the disruption and/or to give any undertaking. Very few responses did not maintain an apt tone.
Students should check to make sure all instructions in the stem and the cues have been followed to have the best opportunity of attaining the highest grade.
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Use an
appropriate
tone and give
a plausible
explanation for
the disruption.
Underline your
three chosen
words.
Queensland Rail wishes to apologise for the delayed Ipswich service.
Trains are delayed until further notice due to a track fault. We
you this kind of disruption is rare and unpredictable. Qld Rail will
the problem will be cleared up in the next hour. As an , buses
will be provided at all affected stations.
assure
ensure
alternative
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it 3
N
Res
pon
se i
s
un
inte
llig
ible
or
does
not
sati
sfy t
he
req
uir
emen
ts
for
an
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ther
gra
de.
O
No r
esp
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nth
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3
1In
terr
ela
tin
g i
dea
s/th
emes
/iss
ues
C
Th
e re
spon
se
•ap
pro
pri
ate
ly u
ses
at
least
tw
o o
f th
e
seed
wo
rds
or
thei
r v
ari
an
ts
•in
clu
des
an
ap
olo
gy
•fu
lly
att
end
s to
on
e es
sen
tia
l el
emen
t.
Th
e re
spon
se
•ap
pro
pri
ate
ly u
ses
at
least
tw
o s
eed
word
s o
r th
eir
va
ria
nts
•in
clu
des
an
ap
olo
gy
•in
clu
des
ref
eren
ce t
o t
he
two
esse
nti
al
elem
ents
.
OR
A
Th
e re
spo
nse
•ap
pro
pri
ate
ly u
ses
thre
e se
ed w
ord
s,
as
giv
en
•in
clu
des
an
ap
olo
gy
•fu
lly a
tten
ds
to t
he
esse
nti
al el
emen
ts
•h
as
an
ap
t to
ne.
B
Th
e re
spon
se
•ap
pro
pri
ate
ly u
ses
thre
e se
ed w
ord
s
or
thei
r vari
an
ts
•in
clu
des
an
ap
olo
gy
•fu
lly a
tten
ds
to o
ne
esse
nti
al
elem
ent
•in
clu
des
ref
eren
ce t
o t
he
oth
er
esse
nti
al
elem
ent.
Th
e re
spon
se
•ap
pro
pri
ate
ly u
ses
at
least
tw
o s
eed
word
s or
thei
r vari
an
ts
•in
clu
des
an
ap
olo
gy
•fu
lly a
tten
ds
to t
he
two e
ssen
tial
elem
ents
.
OR
D
Th
e re
spon
se
•ap
pro
pri
ate
ly u
ses
at
least
on
e se
ed
word
s or
its
vari
an
t
•in
clu
des
an
ap
olo
gy
•in
clu
des
ref
eren
ce t
o o
ne
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nti
al
elem
en
t.
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e re
spon
se
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lly a
tten
ds
to o
ne
esse
nti
al ele
men
t
•in
clu
des
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o t
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er
esse
nti
al
elem
ent.OR
Note
s:
1.
An
ap
olo
gy i
s a s
orr
y o
r re
gre
tfu
l ack
now
led
gm
ent
of
fau
lt o
r fa
ilu
re.
Use
of
“u
nfo
rtu
nate
ly” i
s n
ot
suff
icie
nt
to b
e co
nsi
der
ed a
n a
polo
gy.
2.
Th
e tw
o e
ssen
tia
l el
emen
ts a
re
- an
exp
lan
ati
on
wh
ich
giv
es a
rea
son
for
the
dis
rup
tion
or
the
dif
ficu
lty
- an
un
der
tak
ing w
hic
h i
s a p
rom
ise
to f
ix o
r a r
eass
ura
nce
th
at
som
e act
ion
is
bei
ng t
ak
en.
3.
An
exp
lan
ati
on
th
at
“fu
lly a
tten
ds”
is
pla
usi
ble
an
d c
on
vin
cin
g.
4.
An
un
der
tak
ing t
hat
“fu
lly a
tten
ds”
wou
ld s
pec
ify h
ow
th
e si
tuati
on
wil
l b
e re
med
ied
or
wh
at
alt
ern
ati
ve
act
ion
can
be
tak
en. “T
his
wil
l n
ot
hap
pen
again
” (
or
equ
ivale
nt)
“re
fere
nce
s” a
n u
nd
erta
kin
g.
5.
Th
ere
is n
o p
enalt
y i
f th
e se
ed w
ord
s are
not
un
der
lin
ed i
n t
he
resp
on
se.
6.
If m
ore
th
an
th
ree
seed
word
s are
in
clu
ded
, gra
de
the
resp
on
se o
n t
he
firs
t th
ree
on
ly.
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tran
sport
wil
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rovid
ed
to e
nsu
re t
hat
you
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wou
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tim
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ass
ure
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, valu
ed c
ust
om
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th
at
rep
lace
men
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use
s w
ill
stop
at
all
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Sm
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Man
ager
Met
lin
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Ser
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ern
ate
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ern
ati
ve:
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mean
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do
th
ing
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y t
urn
s; a
ltern
ati
ve m
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cho
ice
ass
ure
/en
sure
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sure
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mean
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rom
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sure
mean
s m
ake c
ert
ain
; in
sure
: re
serv
e f
or
leg
al s
itu
atio
ns
con
tin
ual/
con
tin
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us:
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tin
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co
nst
antl
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eq
uen
tly r
ecu
rrin
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tin
uo
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nb
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Unit Four
The two items in this unit were based on the Conway-Wechsler system naming exceedingly large numbers. The stimulus material outlined the method for doing this. The mathematics involved was basic arithmetic.
The following table shows the percentage of responses awarded the various grades for the items in this unit.
Item 6
Model response
Commentary
Item 6 is a two-star item which tested achievement in CCEs 37 Applying a progression of steps to achieve the required answer and 7 Translating from one form to another.
Students were required to translate 102272 into words using the Conway-Wechsler system and show all steps.
Following the method, students had to subtract three from 2272 and then divide the result by three, giving the answer 756 remainder one. The translation process began with conversion of the remainder into the word “ten” as directed by the stimulus. The quotient digits then needed to be
A B C D E N O
Item 6 6.4 15.1 22.1 26.0 19.6 10.7
Item 7 13.7 13.1 15.6 35.9 8.3 13.4
A shaded box indicates that the grade was not available for that item.
Name 10 to the power of 2272 (102272) using the Conway-Wechsler system.
............................................................................................................
Show all steps.
Translate carefully.
Write the name here.
2272
2272 – 3 = 2269
2269 ÷ 3 = 756 remainder 1, so use ten in front
6 = se(sx)
5 = (ns)quinquaginta
7 = (n)septingenti
ten sesquinquagintaseptingentillion
A B C D N O
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translated from the table — the units digit 6 gave “se”, then the tens digit 5 translated to “quinquaginta” and the hundreds digit 7 became “septingenti”.
The name had to be assembled from these components with the “ten” standing alone as the first word of the name. The three name segments then had to be strung together in the order units, tens, hundreds using the connective letters stipulated by the stimulus. This meant an “s” was added after the “se” to form “sesquinquagintaseptingenti”. The final step was to remove the last “i” of “septingenti” and add “illion” to complete the second word as, “sesquinquagintaseptingentillion”.
A response which showed the correct answer “ten sesquinquagintaseptingentillion” with evidence of the application of the method shown was awarded an A-grade.
A B-grade was awarded to responses that evidenced all three stages of the method but made a minor error. An error was defined as minor if the student made an arithmetic mistake in the calculations stage, a transcription error in the translation stage or if the connective letter between “se” and “quinquaginta” was other than “s” and/or if an “n” was unnecessarily added after “quinquaginta”. The resulting answer needed to be consequentially correct for the B-grade to be awarded.
C-grade responses made at most three errors with at most one of them being a major error. Major errors involved: leaving out steps like subtracting the three; not assembling the name-segments in the right order to form the second word; mistranslating the remainder into a first word other than “ten” and not completing the second word by adding “illion”. The name again needed to be consequentially correct to be awarded a C-grade. One of the more frequently observed answers awarded a C-grade was “ten septenquinquagintasescentillion”. This answer showed the student had forgotten to reverse the quotient digits before translating them. Other students struggled to convert the .3333… shown on their calculator after the division into a remainder of one and translate it successfully into “ten” at the start of the name.
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spon
se p
rovid
es
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iden
ce o
f th
e ap
pli
cati
on
of
the
met
hod
all
ow
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or
at
most
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ree
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rs, on
ly o
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of
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n b
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r
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seq
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Th
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se p
rovid
es
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iden
ce o
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on
of
the
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hod
•th
e co
rrec
t n
am
e giv
en a
s tw
o
sep
ara
te w
ord
s.
B
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es
•ev
iden
ce o
f th
e ap
pli
cati
on
of
the
met
hod
all
ow
ing f
or
at
most
on
e
min
or
erro
r
•a n
am
e th
at
is c
on
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uen
tiall
y
corr
ect.
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e re
spon
se s
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1 (
or
its
equ
ivale
nt)
.
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s tw
o c
orre
ctl
y
tran
slate
d p
art
s of
the
nam
e.
OR
Note
s:
1.
Th
e m
eth
od
in
volv
es t
he
thre
e m
ult
iste
p s
tages
:
2.
A m
ino
r er
ror
is e
ith
er a
sin
gle
ari
thm
etic
err
or
OR
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ingle
tra
nsc
rip
tio
n e
rro
r O
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rro
rs a
men
din
g l
ette
rs i
n p
are
nth
eses
to
form
th
e se
con
d w
ord
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3.
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ajo
r er
ror
is w
her
e on
e of
the
step
s of
the
met
hod
is
mis
sin
g o
r in
corr
ectl
y a
pp
lied
exce
pt
for a
men
din
g o
f le
tter
s in
pare
nth
eses
to f
orm
th
e se
con
d w
ord
.
4.
Giv
ing t
he
corr
ect
nam
e as
two s
epara
te w
ord
s is
a r
equ
irem
ent
for
the
A-g
rad
e on
ly.
calc
ula
tion
sth
e su
btr
act
ion
, i.
e. 2
27
2 –
3 =
22
69
the
div
isio
n t
o g
ive
the
qu
oti
ent
an
d r
emain
der
, i.e
. 2269 ÷
3 =
756 r
1 o
r eq
uiv
ale
nt
use
of
tab
le a
nd
sti
mu
lus
to t
ran
slate
the
rem
ain
der
to g
ive
the
firs
t w
ord
the
qu
oti
ent
to g
ive
the
thre
e se
gm
ents
of
the
seco
nd
wo
rd
nam
e ass
em
bly
the
firs
t w
ord
to s
tan
d a
lon
e (s
ee n
ote
4)
the
thre
e se
gm
ents
in
co
rrec
t o
rder
to
form
th
e se
con
d w
ord
the
corr
ect
am
endin
g o
f le
tter
s in
pare
nth
eses
to f
orm
th
e se
con
d w
ord
the
del
etio
n o
f th
e fi
nal
vow
el a
nd
ad
dit
ion
of
“il
lion
”
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
1.
22
72
22
72 –
3 =
22
69
2269 ÷
3 =
756 r
emain
der
1, so
use
ten
in
fro
nt
6 =
se(
sx)
5 =
(n
s)q
uin
qu
agin
ta
7 =
(n
)sep
tin
gen
ti
ten s
esquin
quag
inta
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ngen
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Item 7
Model response
CommentaryItem 7 is a three-star item which tested achievement in CCEs 44 Synthesising and 16 Calculating with or without calculators.
Students were given the name of a very large number: “one hundred novemvigintioctingentillion”. The item required them to use the Conway-Wechsler system in reverse to determine the power of ten for this number. As shown in the marking scheme, there were six stages that students needed to go through to get the correct answer.
For an A-grade, the response had to provide 2492 as the answer and there had to be no incorrect working; that is, if working was shown, it could not contain errors. Most responses that were awarded an A-grade showed clear working.
It is advisable to show working even when it is not required as parts of it could contribute to the awarding of a creditable grade.
The majority of responses showed some working. Errors generally involved leaving out one or more of the stages required. Most students were able to translate the segments of the name into at least some of the correct digits.
Determine the power of 10 for the number that has the name:
one hundred novemvigintioctingentillion.
Show your working here.
Write the power in the box.
10
one hundred means a remainder of 2
novem 9 units, viginti 2 tens, octingenti 8 hundreds
829 x 3 = 2487
2487 + 2 = 2489
2489 + 3 = 2492
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2492
A B C N O
100%
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it 3
N
Res
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inte
llig
ible
or
does
not
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sfy t
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req
uir
emen
ts
for
an
y o
ther
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de.
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No r
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ad
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44
Sy
nth
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ing
16
Ca
lcu
lati
ng
wit
h o
r w
ith
ou
t ca
lcu
lato
rs
C
Th
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spon
se s
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s
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e co
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ecu
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of
two o
f
Sta
ges
I, II
an
d I
II
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e co
rrec
t ex
ecu
tio
n o
f o
ne
of
Sta
ges
IV
, V
an
d V
I.
A
Th
e re
spon
se
•p
rovid
es 2
492 a
s th
e an
swer
•sh
ow
s n
o i
nco
rrec
t w
ork
ing
.
B
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es 2
492 a
s th
e an
swer
.
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s
•co
rrec
t ex
ecu
tio
n o
f S
tag
es I
an
d I
I
•co
rrec
t ex
ecu
tion
of
thre
e of
the
oth
er f
ou
r
stages
, re
sult
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n a
n a
nsw
er t
hat
is o
ne
of
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e re
spon
se s
how
s
•a
ll s
ix s
tag
es h
av
e b
een
ex
ecu
ted
•an
an
swer
th
at
wo
uld
hav
e b
een
co
rrec
t
exce
pt
for,
at
most
eith
er –o
ne
tran
slati
on
or
tran
scri
pti
on
err
or
in
on
e of
Sta
ges
I,
II, or
III
or
–on
e ca
lcu
lati
on
err
or
in o
ne
of
Sta
ges
IV, V
or
VI.
OR
OR
D
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s
•co
rrec
t ex
ecu
tio
n o
f S
tag
e I
•a c
orr
ect
tran
slati
on
of
on
e se
gm
ent
to d
igit
s in
Sta
ge
II.
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s
•a
corr
ect
tran
slati
on
of
two s
egm
ents
to d
igit
s in
Sta
ge
II.
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s th
e
•co
rrec
t ex
ecu
tion
of
two o
f S
tages
III,
IV
an
d V
I.
OR
OR
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
on
e h
un
dre
d m
ean
s a r
emain
der
of
2
no
vem
9 u
nit
s, v
igin
ti
2 t
ens,
oct
ing
enti
8
hu
nd
red
s
82
9 x
3 =
24
87
24
87
+ 2
= 2
48
9
24
89
+ 3
= 2
49
2
10
24
92
Last
Page
Cou
nt
No
te:
1.
Th
e si
x s
tages
in
th
e m
eth
od
are
:
I.tr
an
slati
on
of
firs
t w
ord
of
the
na
me
to t
he
rem
ain
der
dig
it f
rom
th
e
stim
ulu
s
II.
tran
slati
on
of
nam
e se
gm
ents
to d
igit
s fr
om
th
e ta
ble
III.
reve
rse
ord
er
of
dig
its
to g
ive
qu
oti
ent
IV.
mu
ltip
lica
tio
n o
f q
uoti
ent
by
3
V.
addit
ion
of
rem
ain
der
dig
it
VI.
addit
ion
of
3.
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Unit Five
This unit was based on historical information about the Treaties of Tordesillas and Zaragoza. Students were required to convert units which they may have been unfamiliar with.
The following table shows the percentage of responses awarded the various grades for the items in this unit.
Item 8
Model response
A B C D E N O
Item 8 25.6 13.2 11.4 8.0 29.1 12.8
Item 9 6.0 1.8 6.0 7.8 11.2 22.2 45.0
A shaded box indicates that the grade was not available for that item.
I. Calculate the distances in kilometres from the westernmost point of the Cape Verde
Islands to the Line as defined by the treatyTordesillas of 1494, first using Spanish leagues
and then Portuguese leagues.
Using Spanish leagues
...........................................................................................
...........................................................................................
Using Portuguese leagues
...........................................................................................
...........................................................................................
II. On the map, where 1 mm represents 50 km, rule and label lines to show clearly where
each of Spain and Portugal believed the Tordesillas Line to be.
Show all steps
required to
calculate each
distance.
Working space.
370 x 4.179 km = 1546.23 km
370 x 6.174 km = 2284.38 km
Spanish line 1546.23/50 = 30.9 31 mm
Portuguese line 2284.38/50 = 45.7 46 mm
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Model response continued
CommentaryItem 8 is a three-star item which tested achievement in CCEs 16 Calculating with or without calculators, 6 Interpreting the meaning of …maps… and 57 Manipulating/operating/using equipment.
The stimulus material provided historical information regarding the two differing interpretations of a line of demarcation, known as the Tordesillas Line, which was used by Portugal and Spain to settle territorial disputes in the 1400s. Students were told that the line was 370 leagues to the west of the Cape Verde Islands which was identified on the map provided. The Spanish located the line in one
place because they defined a league as being 4179 metres. The Portuguese located it in another as they defined a league as being 6174 metres.
Part I instructed students to convert 370 leagues to kilometres using each of the two definitions. The cue instructed them to show all steps required to calculate each distance. To be awarded an A- or B-grade,
Portuguese Spanish
equator
Cape Verde Is.
PORTUGAL
ATLANTIC
OCEANSPAIN
AFRICA
AMERICA
SOUTH
N
A B C N O
100%
D
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evidence of this working was mandatory. The stem instructed students to calculate the distances to the Tordesillas Line in kilometres.
Part II of this item provided students with a map of the North Atlantic Ocean on which they were required to locate, rule and label the Portuguese and the Spanish versions of the Tordesillas Line.
Showing working was not mandated in Part II; however, most students did use the space provided to perform the scaling calculations needed to locate the lines on the map to the degree of accuracy required. Working provided may be used to award creditable grades.
For an A-grade, the response had to calculate the correct distances in Part I and then use these distances to accurately locate and label the corresponding Tordesillas Lines on the map.
A common error was the incorrect positioning of both map lines to the east (rather than the west) of the Cape Verde Islands. Also a lack of skill in measuring map distances with a ruler was evident in responses.
As part of their early preparation for the QCS Test students should be encouraged to collect the necessary equipment, keep it in good order and become proficient at using it. A ruler that can be used to accurately measure millimetres and centimetres and that has a straight edge is an important piece of equipment every year.
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UN
IT
FIV
EIT
EM
8
PE
RF
OR
MA
NC
E D
OM
AIN
MA
RK
IN
G S
CH
EM
E
Mark
ing
Un
it 2
N
Res
pon
se i
s
un
inte
llig
ible
or
does
not
sati
sfy t
he
req
uir
emen
ts
for
an
y o
ther
gra
de.
O
No r
esp
on
se
has
bee
n m
ad
e
at
an
y t
ime.
16
Ca
lcu
lati
ng
wit
h o
r w
ith
ou
t ca
lcu
lato
rs6
Inte
rpre
tin
g t
he
mea
nin
g o
f …
ma
ps
…5
7M
an
ipu
lati
ng
/op
era
tin
g/u
sin
g e
qu
ipm
ent
C
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
sat
least
tw
o o
f th
e
foll
ow
ing
•on
e co
rrec
t d
ista
nce
usi
ng
lea
gu
es
•on
e co
rrec
t ca
lcu
lati
on
of
a m
ap
dis
tan
ce u
sin
g t
he
scale
•a
To
rdes
illa
s li
ne
dra
wn
an
d
reaso
nab
ly p
osi
tion
ed o
n t
he
map
.
A
For
part
I t
he
resp
on
se s
how
s
•su
ffic
ien
t w
ork
ing
•th
e co
rrec
t d
ista
nce
in
kil
om
etre
s
usi
ng S
pan
ish
lea
gu
es
•th
e co
rrec
t d
ista
nce
in
kil
om
etre
s
usi
ng P
ort
ugu
ese
leagu
es.
For
part
II
the
resp
on
se s
how
s, o
n t
he
map
, on
ly t
he
two T
ord
esil
las
lin
es
corr
ectl
y p
osi
tion
ed a
nd
lab
elle
d.
B
For
part
I t
he
resp
on
se s
how
s
•su
ffic
ien
t w
ork
ing
•th
e co
rrec
t d
ista
nce
usi
ng S
pan
ish
leagu
es
•th
e co
rrec
t d
ista
nce
usi
ng
Port
ugu
ese
leagu
es.
For
part
II
the
resp
on
se s
how
s, o
n t
he
map
, n
o m
ore
th
an
tw
o T
ord
esil
las
lin
es w
ith
eith
er
•o
ne
lin
e re
aso
nab
ly p
osi
tion
ed a
nd
corr
ectl
y l
ab
elle
d
or
•b
oth
lin
es r
easo
nab
ly p
osi
tion
ed.
For
part
I t
he
resp
on
se s
how
s, w
ith
at
most
on
e er
ror,
•su
ffic
ien
t w
ork
ing
•a (
con
seq
uen
tiall
y)
corr
ect
dis
tan
ce
usi
ng S
pan
ish
lea
gu
es
•a (
con
seq
uen
tiall
y)
corr
ect
dis
tan
ce
usi
ng P
ort
ugu
ese
leagu
es.
For
part
II
the
resp
on
se s
how
s, o
n t
he
ma
p, o
nly
th
e tw
o T
ord
esil
las
lin
es
reaso
nab
ly p
osi
tion
ed a
nd
corr
ectl
y
lab
elle
d.
OR
D
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s o
ne
of
the
foll
ow
ing
•on
e co
rrec
t d
ista
nce
usi
ng
lea
gu
es
•on
e co
rrec
t ca
lcu
lati
on
of
a m
ap
dis
tan
ce u
sin
g t
he
sca
le
•a T
ord
esil
las
lin
e d
raw
n a
nd
reaso
nab
ly p
osi
tion
ed o
n t
he
map
.
Note
s:
1.
Th
e co
rrec
t d
ista
nce
fro
m t
he
wes
tern
most
poin
t of
the
Cap
e V
erd
e Is
lan
ds
to t
he
To
rdes
illa
s L
ine
for
Sp
an
ish
lea
gu
es i
s 1546.2
3 k
m a
nd
th
e co
rrec
t d
ista
nce
for
Port
ugu
ese
leagu
es i
s 2284.3
8 k
m. T
hes
e d
ista
nce
s co
rrec
tly r
ou
nd
ed t
o t
he
firs
t d
ecim
al
pla
ce o
r to
a
wh
ole
nu
mb
er a
re t
o b
e co
nsi
der
ed c
orr
ect.
2.
Th
e S
pa
nis
h lin
e, if
corr
ectl
y p
osi
tion
ed, sh
ou
ld p
ass
th
rou
gh
th
e A
of
OC
EA
N a
nd
th
e A
at
the
end
of
AM
ER
ICA
.
Th
e P
ort
ug
ues
e li
ne,
if
corr
ectl
y p
osi
tio
ned
, p
ass
es t
hro
ugh
th
e se
con
d T
in
AT
LA
NT
IC
an
d t
he
T i
n S
OU
TH
.
3.
A T
ord
esil
las
lin
e th
at
is “
reaso
nab
ly p
osi
tion
ed” i
s lo
cate
d t
o t
he
wes
t of
the
Cap
e V
erd
e
Isla
nd
s an
d i
s ei
ther
•in
th
e ab
sen
ce o
f w
ork
ing, w
ith
in 2
mm
of
the
corr
ect
posi
tion
or
•w
ith
in 2
mm
of
the
posi
tion
th
at
the
work
ing i
n t
he
resp
on
se i
nd
icate
s th
e li
ne
shou
ld b
e.
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MA
RK
IN
G S
CH
EM
E
Mark
ing
Un
it 2
UN
IT
FIV
E
IT
EM
8
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
Usi
ng S
pan
ish
lea
gu
es
370 x
4.1
79 k
m =
1546.2
3 k
m
Usi
ng P
ort
ugu
ese
leagu
es
370 x
6.1
74 k
m =
2284.3
8 k
m
Work
ing s
pace
.
Sp
an
ish
lin
e 1546.2
3/5
0 =
30.9
3
1 m
m
Po
rtu
gu
ese
lin
e 2
28
4.3
8/5
0 =
45
.7
46 m
m
Port
ugue
se
Sp
ani
sh
eq
ua
tor
Ca
pe
Ve
rde
Is.
PO
RT
UG
AL
AT
LA
NT
IC
OC
EA
NS
PA
IN
AF
RIC
A
AM
ER
ICA
SO
UT
H
N
}op
tion
al
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Item 9
Model response
CommentaryItem 9 is a four-star item which tested achievement in CCEs 17 Estimating numerical magnitude, 50 Visualising and 16 Calculating with or without calculators.
The stimulus for this item introduced more information about a second demarcation line, called the Zaragoza Line. The two lines of demarcation basically divided the world into two parts, one for Portugal and one for Spain. Students were asked to determine the percentage of the world that was attributed to Portugal. It was a challenging item requiring good visualisation skills.
To arrive at the required answer, it was necessary to visualise the Portuguese section of the world divided into four regions by their longitude. Two regions were to the west of the prime meridian and two to the east. The widths of these four regions needed to be added to find the total width. Most students receiving A- or B-grades worked in degrees of longitude and converted the two widths given in leagues into degrees. Fewer chose to work in leagues. Generally the working shown was clear and easy to follow. A minor error in the working was allowable for a B-grade.
The C-grade was awarded to responses which contained a visualisation error that led to the addition of only three widths instead of four. Another type of visualisation error existed where students added three widths and subtracted the fourth due to confusion with widths being east or west of given longitudes. A C-grade response showed evidence of finding the total width for Portugal in leagues or degrees of longitude but then either forgetting to work this out as a percentage or by giving an incorrect percentage.
D-grades were awarded to responses that contained at least one conversion from degrees of longitude to leagues (or vice versa) and also demonstrated the adding of two widths. At least one conversion was necessary in order to arrive at the correct answer so conversions were required for A- through to D-grades.
Responses containing at least one correct conversion or the addition of two widths or the determination of a fraction of the world that was attributed to Portugal were awarded an E-grade.
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Show all steps.
Longitude of Tordesillas Line
370/17.5 = 21.14° west of 25.35° W.
21.14 + 25.35 = 46.49°W.
Portuguese section
46.49 + 146.38 = 192.87°
As a percentage of 360° this is 192.87/360 = 0.53575 x 100
Or approximately 54%
Longitude of Zaragoza Line
297.5/17.5 = 17° east of 129.38° E.
17 + 129.38 = 146.38°E.
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UN
IT
FIV
EIT
EM
9
PE
RF
OR
MA
NC
E D
OM
AIN
MA
RK
IN
G S
CH
EM
E
Mark
ing
Un
it 2
N
Res
pon
se i
s
un
inte
llig
ible
or
does
not
sati
sfy t
he
req
uir
emen
ts
for
an
y o
ther
gra
de.
O
No r
esp
on
se
has
bee
n m
ad
e
at
an
y t
ime.
17
Est
ima
tin
g n
um
eric
al
ma
gn
itu
de
50
Vis
ua
lisi
ng
16
Ca
lcu
lati
ng
wit
h o
r w
ith
ou
t ca
lcu
lato
rs
C
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s, w
ith
at
most
on
e m
inor
erro
r, s
tep
s
that
•u
se a
co
rrec
t co
nv
ersi
on
•a
dd
th
ree
wid
ths
•giv
e a c
on
seq
uen
tiall
y
corr
ect
fract
ion
.
Th
e re
spon
se g
ives
a c
orr
ect
wid
th f
or
Port
ugal’
s se
ctio
n o
f
the
wo
rld
.
OR
A
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s st
eps
that
•u
se c
orr
ect
con
ver
sion
s
•a
dd
th
e fo
ur
wid
ths
•giv
e th
e co
rrec
t p
erce
nta
ge
for
Po
rtu
gal.
B
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s, w
ith
at
mo
st o
ne
min
or
erro
r, s
tep
s
that
•u
se c
on
ver
sion
s
•a
dd
th
e fo
ur
wid
ths
•giv
e a c
on
seq
uen
tiall
y
corr
ect
perc
en
tage.
Th
e re
spo
nse
giv
es t
he
corr
ect
per
cen
tag
e fo
r P
ort
ug
al.
OR
D
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s st
eps
that
•u
se a
co
rrec
t co
nv
ersi
on
•ad
d t
wo w
idth
s.
E
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s a c
orr
ect
con
ver
sion
.
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s th
e
ad
dit
ion
of
two
wid
ths.
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s a w
idth
con
ver
ted
to a
fra
ctio
n o
f th
e
worl
d.
OR
OR
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
Lon
git
ud
e of
Tord
esil
las
Lin
e
37
0/1
7.5
= 2
1.1
4°
wes
t o
f 2
5.3
5°
W.
21.1
4 +
25.3
5 =
46.4
9°W
.
Lon
git
ud
e of
Zara
goza
Lin
e
29
7.5
/17
.5 =
17
° ea
st o
f 1
29.3
8°
E.
17
+ 1
29
.38
= 1
46
.38°E
.
Port
ugu
ese
sect
ion
46.4
9 +
146.3
8 =
192.8
7°
As
a p
erce
nta
ge
of
360°
this
is
192.8
7/3
60 =
0.5
3575 x
100
Or
ap
pro
xim
ate
ly 5
4%
Note
s:
1.
Con
ver
sion
s in
clu
de
deg
rees
to l
eagu
es,
leagu
es t
o d
egre
es.
2.
A w
idth
is
the
dis
tan
ce a
lon
g t
he
equ
ato
ran
d c
an
be
mea
sure
d in
deg
rees
of
lon
git
ud
e or
leagu
es.
Wid
ths
wh
en a
dd
ed m
ust
be
in t
he
sam
e u
nit
.
3.
Th
e fo
ur
wid
ths
are
: th
e T
ord
esil
las
Lin
e to
th
e C
ap
eV
erd
e Is
lan
ds,
th
e C
ap
e V
erd
e Is
lan
ds
to
the
pri
me
mer
idia
n, th
e p
rim
e m
erid
ian
to t
he
Molu
ccas
an
d t
he
Molu
ccas
to t
he
Zara
goza
Lin
e.
4.
Min
or
erro
rs i
ncl
ud
e:
•a
rith
met
ic a
nd
tra
nsc
rip
tion
erro
rs t
hat
resu
lt i
n a
n a
nsw
er t
hat
cou
ld r
easo
nab
ly b
e
Port
ugal’
s p
rop
ort
ion
of
the
worl
d
•re
ver
sin
g s
ecti
on
s ass
ign
edto
th
e tw
o c
ou
ntr
ies.
5.
A f
ract
ion
may b
e w
ritt
en w
ith
a v
incu
lum
, as
a d
ecim
al
or
as
a p
erce
nta
ge.
Last
Page
Cou
nt
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Unit Six
A selection of colourful plates from a children’s alphabet book together with an explanatory text about such books formed the stimulus for this unit.
The following table shows the percentage of responses awarded the various grades for the items in this unit.
Item 10
Model response
CommentaryItem 10 is a three-star item which tested achievement in CCEs 4 Interpreting the meaning of words, 10 Using vocabulary appropriate to a context and 9 Using correct spelling, punctuation, grammar.
Part I required students to explain the problem that writers of alphabet books have when choosing a suitable object, animal or person to illustrate any letter. The cue instructed them to refer to examples from the first paragraph. The first paragraph of the stimulus material warns that the letter p should not be illustrated with “phantom” or “pterodactyl”. Both these words begin with the letter p but neither sounds as though it starts with the letter p. In other words, they do not
A B C D E N O
Item 10 13.0 18.3 30.2 15.4 20.7 2.2
Item 11 6.8 16.6 30.5 37.3 7.2 1.2
Item 12 4.0 12.9 33.5 26.4 14.6 4.4 4.1
A shaded box indicates that the grade was not available for that item.
I. Explain the problem — discussed in the first paragraph — that writers of alphabet books
must be aware of when choosing a suitable object, animal or person to illustrate any letter.
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II. For each of the letters, g and k, provide an example of an object, animal or person
that would, if illustrated in an alphabet book, have the problem discussed in the first
paragraph.
g k
Refer to
examples from
the first
paragraph.
Some words don’t sound the way they look. For example you don’t
hear the p in ‘pterodactyl’ so pterodactyl sounds like a t word.
Some combinations of letters can sound like another letter,
e.g. ph in ‘phantom’ sounds like f in fan.
gnome knife
A B C D N O
100%
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behave as if they begin with their initial letter. It was expected that students would explain in some way that the word chosen for each letter in an alphabet book should behave as if it begins with its initial letter. To support the explanation, the examples of “phantom” and “pterodactyl” had to be provided in the response, as required by the cue. In Part II of the item, students were required to give an example of an object, animal or person that would exemplify the same problem already discussed for the letters g and k.
In responding to Part I, most students recognised why the ph and pt letter combinations in “phantom” and “pterodactyl” would not be suitable in an alphabet book page for the letter p. Most responses included both the required examples of “phantom” and “pterodactyl” but some did not pay sufficient attention to the cue and gave only one example.
In Part II students had to supply two suitable correctly spelled words that demonstrated the problem identified in the text. Some overlooked the requirement to supply an example of an object, animal or person and instead gave examples that were adjectives, verbs, adverbs or abstract words like concepts or qualities. Some students failed to read the stem thoroughly and consequently provided words such as “golf” and “kitten” which do not demonstrate the problem.
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UN
IT
SIX
IT
EM
10
PE
RF
OR
MA
NC
E D
OM
AIN
MA
RK
IN
G S
CH
EM
E
Mark
ing
Un
it 6
N
Res
pon
se i
s
un
inte
llig
ible
or
does
not
sati
sfy t
he
req
uir
emen
ts
for
an
y o
ther
gra
de.
O
No r
esp
on
se
has
bee
n m
ad
e
at
an
y t
ime.
4In
terp
reti
ng
th
e m
ean
ing
of
wo
rds
…
10
Usi
ng
vo
cab
ula
ry a
pp
rop
ria
te t
o a
co
nte
xt
9U
sin
g c
orr
ect
spel
lin
g,
pu
nct
uat
ion
, g
ram
mar
C
Th
e re
spon
se:
for
I
•ex
pla
ins
that
the
word
does
not
beh
av
ea
s if
it
beg
ins
wit
h i
ts i
nit
ial
lett
er
•re
fers
to “
ph
an
tom
” O
R
“p
tero
dact
yl”
.
Th
e re
spon
se:
for
I
•ex
pla
ins
that
som
e w
ord
s d
o n
ot
beh
ave
as
if t
hey
beg
in w
ith
th
eir
init
ial
lett
er
AN
D
for
II
•p
rovid
es o
ne
suit
ab
le e
xam
ple
.
Th
e re
spon
se:
for
II
•p
rovid
es a
t le
ast
on
e su
itab
le a
nd
on
e
con
ced
ed e
xa
mp
le.
OR
OR
A
Th
e re
spon
se:
for
I
•ex
pla
ins
that
the
word
s d
o n
ot
beh
ave
as
if t
hey
beg
in w
ith
th
eir
init
ial
lett
er
•re
fers
to “
ph
an
tom
”
•re
fers
to “
pte
rod
act
yl”
AN
D
for
II
•p
rovid
es t
wo s
uit
ab
le,
corr
ectl
y
spel
led
exam
ple
s.
B
Th
e re
spon
se:
for
I
•ex
pla
ins
that
the
word
does
not
beh
av
ea
s if
it
beg
ins
wit
h i
ts i
nit
ial
lett
er
•re
fers
to “
ph
an
tom
” O
R
“p
tero
dact
yl”
AN
D
for
II
•p
rovid
es t
wo s
uit
ab
le e
xam
ple
s, a
t
least
on
e of
wh
ich
is
corr
ectl
y s
pel
led
.
Th
e re
spon
se:
for
I
•ex
pla
ins
that
the
word
s d
o n
ot
beh
ave
as
if t
hey
beg
in w
ith
th
eir
init
ial le
tter
•re
fers
to “
ph
an
tom
”
•re
fers
to “
pte
rod
act
yl”
AN
D
for
II
•p
rovid
es o
ne
suit
ab
le a
nd
on
e
con
ced
ed e
xam
ple
, at
lea
st o
ne
of
wh
ich
is
corr
ectl
y s
pel
led
.
OR
D
Th
e re
spon
se:
for
I
•ex
pla
ins
that
som
e w
ord
s d
o n
ot
beh
ave
as
thei
r sp
elli
ng w
ou
ld
sugges
t.
Th
e re
spon
se:
for
II
•p
rovid
es a
t le
ast
on
e su
itab
le
exam
ple
.
Th
e re
spon
se:
for
II
•p
rovid
es a
t le
ast
tw
o c
on
ced
ed
exam
ple
s.
OR
OR
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
Som
e w
ord
s d
on
’t s
ou
nd
th
e w
ay t
hey
look
. F
or
exam
ple
you
don
’t
hea
r th
e p
in
‘p
tero
dact
yl’
so p
tero
dact
yl
sou
nd
s li
ke
a t
word
. S
om
e
co
mb
inati
on
s of
lett
ers
can
sou
nd
lik
e an
oth
er l
ette
r,
e.g.
ph
in
‘p
han
tom
’ so
un
ds
lik
e f
in f
an
.
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Note
s:
1.
Cre
dit
is
giv
en w
her
e re
fere
nce
on
ly t
o “
ph
” a
nd
/or
“p
t” (
as
per
gra
de
req
uir
emen
t) i
s m
ad
e an
d i
t is
cle
ar
it i
s u
sed
to e
xem
pli
fy t
he
pro
ble
m.
2.
Pa
rt I
I ex
am
ple
s —
word
s th
at
start
wit
h g
or
k b
ut
do n
ot
beh
ave
as
if t
hey
do:
•S
uit
ab
le
word
s fo
r ob
ject
s, a
nim
als
or
per
son
s su
ch a
s —
gn
om
e, g
nu
, gem
, gir
aff
e, g
nei
ss,
gn
om
on
, gaol,
gym
, k
nig
ht,
kn
ee, k
nit
tin
g.
•C
on
ced
ed
ab
stra
ct w
ord
s, a
dje
ctiv
es,
ver
bs,
ad
ver
bs,
con
cep
ts o
r q
uali
ties
su
ch a
s —
gn
aw
, gn
ost
ic, gen
ero
us,
kn
ow
led
ge,
kn
ock
ing.
•N
o c
red
it
pro
per
nou
ns
or
acr
on
ym
s su
ch a
s —
Gen
eva,
Geo
rge,
Geo
ff, G
hee
rull
a, G
eelo
ng, G
NO
R,
Kn
an
ap
ur,
Kn
oxvil
le.
3.
Wh
ere
corr
ect
spel
lin
g i
s n
ot
a r
equ
irem
ent
the
word
mu
st b
e a r
eco
gn
isab
le v
ersi
on
of
the
sup
pose
d w
ord
, e.
g.
gn
och
i in
stea
d o
f gn
occ
hi.
4.
A s
uit
ab
le e
xam
ple
can
be
cred
ited
as
a c
on
ced
ed e
xam
ple
if
nec
essa
ry, e.
g. “p
rovid
es a
t le
ast
on
e su
itab
le a
nd
on
e co
nce
ded
exam
ple
, at
least
on
e of
wh
ich
is
corr
ectl
y
spel
led
” w
ou
ld b
e sa
tisf
ied
by t
wo s
uit
ab
le e
xam
ple
s w
her
e on
e is
sp
elle
d c
orr
ectl
y a
nd
on
e in
corr
ectl
y.
5.
No c
red
it i
s giv
en f
or
rep
eati
ng t
he
stim
ulu
s.
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Item 11
Model response
CommentaryItem 11 is a three-star item which tested achievement in CCEs 49 Perceiving patterns, 43 Analysing and 29 Comparing and contrasting.
Part I required students to look closely at four illustrations taken from the alphabet book, compare and contrast the images in order to perceive patterns and provide three different ways in which continuity and predictability were used. Students were also required to supply an example for each of the ways they provided. In responding to Part I, most students were able to identify how continuity and predictability had been used but some students did not provide examples from the illustrations for each of the ways identified and so did not
respond fully to the stem and could not gain the highest grade.
Part II required students to give one example of how incongruity was used in the illustrations. To respond correctly students needed to understand the meaning of incongruity. This word had been glossed when first used in the stimulus material. Students should keep in mind all information given in a unit when responding to individual items within the unit.
I. Referring to the illustrations on the opposite page, identify three different ways in which
continuity and predictability have been used to create interest and promote the learning of
letters and their sounds. Give an example for each of the ways.
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II. Give one example of how incongruity has been used in these illustrations.
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You may use
point form.
The illustration that will appear on the letter page is always in the
preceding page in a smaller way, for example: the owl is flying in the
background in the n page and then is the major illustration in the “o is for owl” page.
In each page there is either the man or the woman as a minor character, for
example: in the n page the woman is writing a note.
There are often illustrations from previous letters on a page, for example: the o
page has the moon and the nest in its page.
An example of incongruity is how the feature animal/object is depicted doing human
things such as wearing glasses (owl), smiling (moon) or wearing a napkin (panda).
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Res
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s
un
inte
llig
ible
or
does
not
sati
sfy t
he
req
uir
emen
ts
for
an
y o
ther
gra
de.
O
No r
esp
on
se
has
bee
n m
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e
at
an
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ime.
49
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ceiv
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pa
tter
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43
An
aly
sin
g
29
Co
mp
ari
ng
, co
ntr
ast
ing
C
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es:
•at
least
tw
o d
iffe
ren
t w
ays
•an
exam
ple
fro
m t
he
illu
stra
tion
s fo
r
on
e of
the
ways.
On
e ex
am
ple
of
the
use
of
inco
ng
ruit
y
in t
he
illu
stra
tio
ns
is g
iven
.
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es:
•tw
o d
iffe
ren
t w
ays
•an
exam
ple
fro
m t
he
illu
stra
tion
s fo
r
each
wa
y.
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es t
hre
e d
iffe
ren
t
ways.
On
e ex
am
ple
of
the
use
of
inco
ng
ruit
y
in t
he
illu
stra
tio
ns
is g
iven
.
OR
OR
A
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es:
•th
ree
dif
fere
nt
wa
ys
•a
n e
xam
ple
fro
m t
he
illu
stra
tion
s fo
r
each
way.
On
e ex
am
ple
of
the
use
of
inco
ngru
ity
in t
he
illu
stra
tion
s is
giv
en.
D
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es:
•o
ne
wa
y
•an
ex
am
ple
fro
m t
he
illu
stra
tio
ns
for
tha
t w
ay.
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es o
ne
way.
On
e ex
am
ple
of
the
use
of
inco
ngru
ity
in t
he
illu
stra
tion
s is
giv
en.
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es t
wo d
iffe
ren
t
ways.
OR
OR
B
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es:
•tw
o d
iffe
ren
t w
ay
s
•a
n e
xam
ple
fro
m t
he
illu
stra
tio
ns
for
each
way.
On
e ex
am
ple
of
the
use
of
inco
ngru
ity
in t
he
illu
stra
tion
s is
giv
en.
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es:
•th
ree
dif
fere
nt
wa
ys
•a
n e
xam
ple
fro
m t
he
illu
stra
tio
ns
for
each
way.
OR
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
Th
e il
lust
rati
on
th
at
wil
l ap
pea
r on
th
e le
tter
page
is a
lways
in t
he
pre
ced
ing p
age
in a
sm
all
er w
ay,
for
exam
ple
: th
e ow
l is
fly
ing i
n t
he b
ack
gro
un
d i
n t
he
n p
age
an
d t
hen
is
the
majo
r il
lust
rati
on
in
the
“o i
s fo
r ow
l” p
age.
In e
ach
page
ther
e is
eit
her
th
e m
an
or
the
wom
an
as
a m
inor
chara
cter
, fo
r ex
am
ple
: in
th
e n
page
the
wom
an
is
wri
tin
g a
note
.
Th
ere
are
oft
en i
llu
stra
tion
s fr
om
pre
vio
us
lett
ers
on
a p
age,
for
exam
ple
: th
e o p
age
has
the
moon
an
d t
he
nes
t in
its
pag
e.
An
exam
ple
of
inco
ngru
ity is
how
th
e fe
atu
re a
nim
al/
ob
ject
is
dep
icte
d d
oin
g h
um
an
th
ing
s su
ch a
s
wea
rin
g g
lass
es (
ow
l), sm
ilin
g (
moon
) or
wea
rin
g a
nap
kin
(p
an
da).
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s:
1.
“W
ays”
are
in
stan
ces
from
th
e il
lust
rati
on
s th
at
have
lin
ks
to c
reati
ng i
nte
rest
an
d p
rom
oti
ng t
he
learn
ing o
f le
tter
s an
d t
hei
r so
un
ds
thro
ugh
con
tin
uit
y a
nd
pre
dic
tab
ilit
y.
2.
An
“ex
am
ple
” i
s an
exp
lici
t re
fere
nce
to o
ne
or
more
com
pon
ents
in
on
e or
more
of
the
pages
.
3.
Th
e fo
llow
ing t
ab
le g
ives
a s
elect
ion
of
ways,
wit
h e
xam
ple
s, s
how
ing h
ow
th
ey w
ork
toget
her
.
4.
Exam
ple
s of
inco
ngru
ity m
ay i
ncl
ud
e:
•an
imals
or
peo
ple
are
oft
en d
isto
rted
in
sh
ap
e or
size
•an
imals
an
d o
bje
cts
are
tre
ate
d l
ike
peo
ple
— a
nth
rop
om
orp
his
ed (
gla
sses
an
d n
ap
kin
s, s
mil
ing f
ace
of
the
moon
)
•p
eop
le a
nd
ob
ject
s so
met
imes
sli
p o
uts
ide
the
fram
es
•sc
ale
is
oft
en i
gn
ore
d,
e.g. m
ap
is
hu
ge
an
d p
eop
le l
ook
dis
tort
ed.
WA
YS
E
XA
MP
LE
S
Th
e il
lust
rati
on
of
TH
E w
ord
for
the
page
is b
igger
th
an
th
e oth
er o
bje
cts.
For
the
lett
er M
th
e m
oon
is
the
larg
est
ob
ject
on
th
e p
age.
Th
e p
rece
din
g p
age
con
tain
s a s
mall
er v
ersi
on
of
TH
E w
ord
’s i
llu
stra
tion
.T
he
ow
l ap
pea
rs m
uch
sm
all
er o
n t
he
N p
age
an
d t
hen
it
is t
he
cen
tral
focu
s of
the
O p
ag
e.
Eit
her
th
e m
an
or
wom
an
is
on
ever
y p
age.
A s
mall
man
is
hold
ing a
map
on
th
e M
page.
Lan
dsc
ap
es h
ave
a p
att
ern
in
th
e p
ages
.N
an
d O
pages
have
a f
arm
sce
ne;
oth
ers
have
mou
nta
ins.
On
most
pages
at
least
on
e oth
er i
llu
stra
tion
for
TH
E l
ette
r ap
pea
rs.
Th
ere
are
pic
ture
s of
a p
ie,
pea
rs a
nd
a p
um
pk
in o
n t
he
P p
age.
Rep
etit
ion
of
som
e of
the
alr
ead
y v
isit
ed o
bje
cts
in a
vari
ety o
f p
ages
.T
he
moon
ap
pea
rs o
n t
he
M a
nd
O p
age.
Th
e co
lou
r p
ale
tte
is s
imil
ar i
n a
ll p
ictu
res.
Bri
gh
t b
lue
is r
epea
ted
on
all
fou
r p
ages
.
Th
e re
pet
itio
n o
f a s
imil
ar
style
of
dra
win
g.
Use
of
the
craze
d b
ack
gro
un
d o
n e
ach
pa
ge.
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Item 12
Model response
I. In the page space below create a rough sketch for an illustration for the letter q. Be careful
to follow the design elements already established in the other pages.
II. Provide a rationale for what you have included in your sketch.
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q is for.....................
Use pencil.
Colour is not required.
You may write in the white space and use
arrows to clarify the contents of your sketch.
Complete this statement.
Refer to design
elements.
The reason I chose ‘quilt’ is because it is the item evidenced in ‘p is for panda’ that
begins with the letter ‘Q’. It also represents the most common phonetic sound of
the letter. I included the female person, as the images alternate beween male and
female in each image randomly, but remain fair in doing so. I included the rabbit, as
each image so far has shown the next item/ animal in the background of the image.
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In this item, students were shown the coloured plates of the pages for the letters m to r. The page for the letter q was left blank. Students were instructed to study progression in the illustrations and note common features of the design and content of the illustrations. Students were provided with a blank template for the q page as part of the response area.
Part I required students to create a rough sketch for an illustration for the letter q page, following the design elements already established by the other pages. Cues advised students to use pencil, that colour was not required and that they may write in the white space, using arrows to clarify the contents of the sketch. Beneath the template, students were required to complete the statement “q is for ........” in keeping with their illustration. Part II required students to provide a rationale for what was sketched, referring to design elements.
The most notable elements of design in the progression of pages in the alphabet book were the foreshadowing of an image (in smaller form) on the page preceding the one in which it is featured and the man or the woman being included on every other page. Other examples of elements of design used in the progression of pages included: the object featured being the focal point and larger than other objects; a number of words beginning with the featured letter being included; backgrounds (nature, mountains, grass, trees) on all the pages being similar; and some objects being repeated on multiple pages.
From an examination of the illustrations, and recognition that the featured illustration for a letter must appear smaller on the preceding page, either “quilt”, “quince” or “question mark” could be the featured word for the q page.
For an A-grade response, the students were required to complete the statement “q is for …….” with one of these words: quilt, quince, or question mark. Their visual response had to contain a sketch of the word chosen and show it as the focal point, a rabbit (foreshadowing the r page feature) and the man or the woman. A rationale was required for each of the mandatory (required for that grade) elements. The rationale had to identify the design elements which justified the inclusion of each element. The rationale for each required that: the featured object (quilt, quince, or question mark) appeared on the previous page and hence was the preferred object for the q page; the small illustration of the rabbit prepared readers for its appearance as the focal point for the r page; the man or the woman appeared on every page. It was expected that the contents of the sketch made effective use of the page space as had been the case in all the other pages. There was no penalty for the misspelling of words, nor was there any extra credit or penalty for the use of colour.
It was surprising that a number of students recognised the backward referencing and provided “quilt”, “quince” or “question mark” as the q word, but did not acknowledge the forward referencing; that is, the rabbit.
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an
or
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wom
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on
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word
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D
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least
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bb
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wb
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ain
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rose
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an
or
the
wom
an
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n e
lem
ent
in k
eep
ing w
ith
the
pro
gre
ssio
n o
f p
ages
.
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exp
lan
ati
on
is
pro
vid
ed f
or
two o
f th
e m
an
dato
ry c
on
ten
ts.
OR
A
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e re
spon
se c
om
ple
tes
the
sta
tem
ent,
“q
is
for
…”
wit
h
on
e o
f q
uil
t,q
uin
ce o
r q
ues
tio
n
mark
.
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e vis
ual
resp
on
se m
ust
con
tain
sk
etch
es o
f:
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the”
wo
rd a
s th
e fo
cal p
oin
t
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rab
bit
•th
e m
an
or
the
wom
an
.
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ati
on
ale
is
pro
vid
ed f
or
each
of
the
ma
nd
ato
ry
con
ten
ts.
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e co
nte
nts
mak
e ef
fect
ive
use
of
the
pa
ge
space
.
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spon
se s
up
pli
es o
ne
of
qu
ilt,
qu
ince
, q
ues
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n m
ark
,
qu
esti
on
/s o
r qu
ich
e.
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e vis
ual
resp
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ust
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sk
etch
es o
f:
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the”
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rd a
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cal p
oin
t
•a
rab
bit
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D
at
least
on
e of
•th
e m
an
or
the
wom
an
•a
n e
lem
ent
in k
eep
ing w
ith
the
pro
gre
ssio
n o
f p
ages
.
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ati
on
ale
is
pro
vid
ed f
or
two
of
the
man
dato
ry c
on
ten
ts,
at
least
on
e of
wh
ich
mu
st b
e
fro
m t
he
firs
t tw
o l
iste
d.
D
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e re
spon
se s
up
pli
es
an
ap
pro
ved
q w
ord
.
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e vis
ual
resp
on
se m
ust
con
tain
sk
etch
es o
f:
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ord
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D
at
least
on
e of
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bb
it,
row
boat,
rain
bow
,
rose
/s
•th
e m
an
or
the
wom
an
•an
ele
men
t in
kee
pin
g w
ith
the
pro
gre
ssio
n o
f p
ag
es.
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e re
spon
se s
up
pli
es
an
y q w
ord
.
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e vis
ual
resp
on
se m
ust
con
tain
sk
etch
es o
f:
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e” w
ord
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D
at
least
on
e of
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bb
it,
row
boat,
rain
bow
,
rose
/s
•th
e m
an
or
the
wom
an
•an
ele
men
t in
kee
pin
g w
ith
the
pro
gre
ssio
n o
f p
ag
es.
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ex
pla
na
tio
n i
s p
rov
ided
fo
r
on
e o
f th
e m
an
da
tory
co
nte
nts
.
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E
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e re
spon
se s
up
pli
es
an
y q
wo
rd.
Th
e vis
ual
resp
on
se c
on
tain
s a
bel
iev
ab
le s
ket
ch o
f th
at
wo
rd.
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e vis
ual
resp
on
se c
on
tain
s a
sket
ch o
f a r
ab
bit
.
A r
ati
on
ale
is
pro
vid
ed f
or
the
rab
bit
.
OR
Note
s:
1.
Th
e re
spon
se s
up
pli
es “
the”
word
in
a g
rad
e d
escr
ipto
r w
hen
it
is u
sed
to
co
mp
lete
th
e st
ate
men
t “q
is
for
…” o
r is
men
tion
ed in
the
rati
on
ale
an
d i
s ob
vio
usl
y t
he
inte
nd
ed w
ord
.
2.
If “
the”
word
is
the
foca
l p
oin
t, i
t fo
llow
s th
at
an
y o
ther
con
ten
t
is l
ess
ob
vio
us.
3.
An
“a
pp
rove
d q
wo
rd”
is
a w
ord
— f
or
an
ob
ject
, a
nim
al
or
per
son
— s
tart
ing w
ith
q a
nd
may i
ncl
ud
e su
ch w
ord
s as
qu
een
, q
uail
, q
uok
ka.
4.
“an
y q w
ord
” i
s a w
ord
— t
hat
may b
e a
con
cep
t, s
ou
nd
,
ver
b,
etc.
— s
tart
ing w
ith
q a
nd
may i
ncl
ud
e su
ch w
ord
s as
qu
arr
el, q
uie
t, q
uack
, Q
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nsl
an
d, Q
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Unit Seven
This unit was based around the popularity of ice-cream and the process of manufacturing ice-cream.
The following table shows the percentage of responses awarded the various grades for the items in this unit.
Item 13
Model response
CommentaryItem 13 is a two-star item which tested achievement in the CCEs 19 Substituting in formulae and 37 Applying a progression of steps to achieve the required answer.
This item required students to find how many scoops of ice-cream an Australian eats on average per year. The stem reminded students about the formula for the volume of a sphere and indicated that one litre equals 1000 cm3. The first cue instructed students to show all steps. The second cue indicated that they should round their answer to the nearest whole number of scoops.
An A-grade response needed to provide evidence of correct substitution into the formula, i.e. students needed to show the formula rewritten with the “r” replaced by the value of the radius. Next the calculation had to be done correctly making sure that radius cubed was performed as radius x radius x radius, not radius
A B C D E N O
Item 13 37.2 19.3 27.2 10.3 6.0
Item 14 11.8 15.9 17.2 21.2 17.5 16.4
Item 15 18.3 14.7 22.7 24.0 8.3 12.0
Item 16 1.1 0.6 3.2 15.8 14.8 31.5 33.0
A shaded box indicates that the grade was not available for that item.
Suppose an average scoop of ice-cream is a solid sphere 6 centimetres (cm) in diameter.
Find how many scoops of ice-cream an Australian eats on average per year.
Reminder: Volume of a sphere 1 litre 1000 cm3
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3
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Show all steps.
Round your
answer to the
nearest whole
number of
scoops.
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4 3
3
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number of scoops =
volume of one scoop =
= 159
= 113.1
= 159.1518000
113.1
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x3 and that when finding the number of scoops, the units used for the yearly intake and the volume of one scoop were consistent. Finally, correct rounding had to give the whole number of scoops.
The majority of students were able to substitute into the given formula for the volume of a sphere. However some students substituted the diameter (6 cm) rather than the radius (3 cm). This could still be awarded a B-grade if subsequent calculations were correct. Other students, after substitution, made calculation errors by either failing to divide by the 3 in the denominator or failing to find 33 correctly. Again, correct subsequent calculations could lead to a B-grade. After finding the correct volume of one scoop, students needed to divide this figure into the volume of the yearly intake to arrive at the nearest number of scoops per year.
Use of mathematical formulae including substitution is important. Students should become more proficient at this.
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N
Res
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inte
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or
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not
sati
sfy t
he
req
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ts
for
an
y o
ther
gra
de.
O
No r
esp
on
se
has
bee
n m
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e
at
an
y t
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19
Su
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itu
tin
g i
n f
orm
ula
e3
7A
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lyin
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pro
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f st
eps
to a
chie
ve
the
req
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ed a
nsw
er
C
Th
e re
spon
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how
s o
r eq
uiv
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nt.
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es 9
04.7
… o
r eq
uiv
ale
nt
as
the
vo
lum
e o
f on
e sc
oo
p.
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s th
e yea
rly in
tak
e volu
me
div
ided
by w
hat
is i
nd
icate
d t
o b
e th
e volu
me
of
on
e sc
oop
.
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R
OR
A
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s
•co
rrec
t su
bst
itu
tio
n i
nto
th
e fo
rmu
la
•co
rrec
t ca
lcu
lati
on
fo
r th
e n
um
ber
of
sco
op
s
•co
rrec
t ro
un
din
g t
o g
ive
fin
al
nu
mb
er o
f sc
oo
ps.
No e
rrors
wer
e m
ad
e in
arri
vin
g a
t th
e n
um
ber
of
scoop
s.
B
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s
•su
bst
itu
tion
in
to t
he
form
ula
•ca
lcu
lati
on
of
the
nu
mb
er o
f sc
oop
s
At
most
on
e m
ech
an
ical
erro
r is
all
ow
ed.
A c
on
seq
uen
tiall
y c
orr
ect
nu
mb
er o
f sc
oop
s is
giv
en.
Th
e re
spon
se p
rov
ides
159 o
r eq
uiv
ale
nt
as
the
nu
mb
er o
f sc
oop
s.
OR
Note
s:
1.
“co
rrec
t su
bst
itu
tion
in
to f
orm
ula
” s
how
s th
e r
rep
lace
d b
y 3
or
.
“co
rrec
t ca
lcu
lati
on
fo
r th
e n
um
ber
of
scoop
s” s
how
s d
ivid
ing v
olu
me
of
yea
rly
in
tak
e b
y v
olu
me
of
on
e sc
oop
— i
t m
ust
be
evid
ent
that
con
sist
ent
un
its
have
bee
n u
sed
.
“co
rrec
t ro
un
din
g t
o g
ive
fin
al
nu
mb
er o
f sc
oop
s” m
ay r
esu
lt i
n 1
59
, 1
58 (
18
x 8
.8)
or
16
2 (
18
x 9
).
2.
Rou
nd
ing t
o t
he
nea
rest
wh
ole
nu
mb
er o
f sc
oop
s is
on
ly a
req
uir
emen
t at
the
A-g
rad
e.
3.
At
the
B-g
rad
e, m
ech
an
ical
erro
rs a
re:
•tr
an
scri
pti
on
or
calc
ula
tin
g m
ista
kes
•u
sin
g r
= 6
(n
ot
3)
wh
ich
yie
lds
V=
904.7
…an
d 2
0 s
coop
s or
equ
ivale
nt
•u
sin
gw
hic
h y
ield
s V
= 3
7.6
… a
nd
477
scoop
s or
equ
ivale
nt
•u
sin
gw
hic
h y
ield
s V
= 3
39
.2…
an
d 5
3 s
coo
ps
or
equ
iva
len
t
•18 L
= 1
800 c
m3 w
hic
h y
ield
s 1
6 s
coo
ps
or
equ
ivale
nt.
4.
At
the
C-g
rad
e, t
he
equ
ivale
nt
of
cou
ld b
e 11
3,
113.1
… o
r eq
uiv
ale
nt
or
an
y o
f th
e fo
llow
ing s
imp
lifi
cati
on
s:,
,.
5.
At
the
C-g
rad
e, t
he
equ
ivale
nt
of
904.7
… c
ou
ld b
e (u
sin
g
): 9
05, 904.8
, 904.7
8,
904.7
79…
or
(usi
ng 3
.14):
904, 904.3
, 904.3
2.
6.
At
the
C-g
rad
e, “
wh
at
is i
nd
icate
d t
o b
e th
e volu
me
of
on
e sc
oop
” c
ou
ld b
e w
ord
s to
th
at
effe
ct o
r a n
um
ber
pre
vio
usl
y a
ckn
ow
led
ged
as
the
volu
me
of
on
e sc
oop
.
6 2---
4r2
3----
-------
4r3
433
3----
--------
432
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36
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
volu
me
of
on
e sc
oop
= =
113.1
nu
mb
er o
f sc
oop
s =
=
159.1
5
= 1
59
433
3----
--------
1800
011
3.1
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Item 14
Model response
CommentaryItem 14 is a three-star item which tested achievement in the CCEs 37 Applying a progression of steps to achieve the required answer and 16 Calculating with or without calculators.
Students were given a recipe for making a type of ice-cream mixture based on one litre of milk. They were then asked to determine how many kilograms of ice-cream mixture could be made from 1500 litres of milk if 0.2 percent of the mass of all the recipe ingredients was lost while making the ice-cream mixture. The cue indicated that students should show all steps.
The A-grade response needed to show correct execution of the four steps: multiple, % loss, conversion, summation, indicated in the marking scheme. The result 2174 or equivalent had to be provided as the answer and no inaccuracies could be included in the response.
With respect to “indicates steps have been executed correctly” (see note 1) the response had to contain a statement acknowledging the nature of a step or appropriate maths symbols for the step in question.
Students chose to perform the four steps in many ways. While some took the more direct path, summing the ingredients for one litre of milk first and then performing the multiple (i.e. changing to 1500 litres), percentage loss and conversion (grams to kilograms) step on the total, others chose to perform each of these steps on each of the seven ingredients! Although correct, this was certainly a much more time consuming way to perform the calculations. There was also a greater chance of errors occurring than in the more direct method. The response area provided may not have been sufficient if the longer method was used and this should have pointed students to a more succinct method. The amount of response area given is a good indication of the space that would be required to correctly and efficiently provide a response to an item.
Students found the percentage loss step the most difficult. Some multiplied their total by 0.998 and others multiplied by 0.002 and then subtracted this result from the original number either way being correct. However, some mistakenly used 0.98 (as in 2%) or 0.8 (as in 20%) or only found the amount lost and not what was left. Careful reading of the stimulus and stem is important.
To make one type of ice-cream mixture, milk is first brought to a temperature of 50°C. Then, to
each litre of milk, 70 grams (g) of skim milk powder, 100 g of butter and 220 g of sugar are
added. Next, 8 g of gelatin and 6 g of glycerol monostearate are combined and added to the
milk mixture along with 15 g of vanilla. One litre of milk has a mass of 1033 g.
Determine how many kilograms of ice-cream mixture can be made from 1500 litres of milk
if 0.2 per cent of the mass of all the ingredients is lost while making the ice-cream mixture.
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Show all steps.1033 + 70 + 100 + 220 + 8 + 6 + 15 = 1452 g
% loss =
Remainder = 1452 – 2.9 = 1449.1
In 1500 L = 1449.1 x 1500 = 2173650 g
= 2173.65 kg
= 2174 kg
1452 x2
1000= 2.9 g
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s
un
inte
llig
ible
or
does
not
sati
sfy t
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req
uir
emen
ts
for
an
y o
ther
gra
de.
O
No r
esp
on
se
has
bee
n m
ad
e
at
an
y t
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37
Ap
ply
ing
a p
rog
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of
step
s to
ach
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e th
e re
qu
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an
swer
16
Ca
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exec
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at
least
3 o
f
the
step
s:
•m
ult
iple
•%
loss
•co
nver
sion
•su
mm
ati
on
.
Th
e re
sult
21
73
64
4 o
r eq
uiv
ale
nt
is
pro
vid
ed.
OR
B
Res
pon
se i
nd
icate
s th
at
3 o
f th
e
step
s:
•m
ult
iple
•%
loss
•co
nver
sion
•su
mm
ati
on
have
bee
n e
xec
ute
d c
orr
ectl
y.
A r
esu
lt, b
ase
d o
n t
he
step
s, h
as
bee
n
pro
vid
ed a
s th
e an
swer
.
Th
e re
sult
21
74 o
r eq
uiv
ale
nt
is
pro
vid
ed a
s th
e an
swer
.
OR
A
Res
po
nse
in
dic
ate
s th
e 4
ste
ps:
•m
ult
iple
•%
loss
•co
nver
sion
•su
mm
ati
on
have
bee
n e
xec
ute
d c
orr
ectl
y.
Th
e re
sult
2174 o
r eq
uiv
ale
nt
is p
rovid
ed
as
the
an
swer
.
No i
nacc
ura
cies
are
in
clu
ded
.
D
Res
pon
se i
nd
icate
s th
at
an
att
emp
t h
as
bee
n m
ad
e to
exec
ute
2 o
f th
e st
eps:
•m
ult
iple
•%
loss
•co
nver
sion
•su
mm
ati
on
.
Mod
el R
esp
on
se 1
:
mass
= 1
452
1452 x
1500 =
2178000 g
21
78
00
0 x
0.9
98
= 2
17
36
44
= 2
173.6
44
Mo
del
Res
po
nse
2:
1.0
33 x
1500 x
0.9
98 =
1546.4
kg
0.0
7 x
15
00
x 0
.99
8 =
10
4.8
kg
0.1
x 1
500 x
0.9
98 =
149.7
kg
0.2
2 x
15
00
x 0
.99
8 =
32
9.3
kg
0.0
08
x 1
50
0 x
0.9
98 =
11
.98 k
g
0.0
06
x 1
50
0 x
0.9
98 =
8.9
8 k
g
0.0
15 x
1500 x
0.9
98 =
22.4
6 k
g
Tota
l =
2173.6
kg
Mod
el R
esp
on
se 3
:
10
33 +
70
+ 1
00
+ 2
20
+ 8
+ 6
+ 1
5 =
14
52
g
% l
oss
=
Rem
ain
der
= 1
452 –
2.9
= 1
449.1
In 1
50
0 L
= 1
44
9.1
x 1
50
0 =
21
73
65
0 g
= 2
17
3.6
5 k
g
= 2
17
4 k
g
1452
210
00----
--------
2.
9=
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Note
s:
1.
For
the
A-g
rad
e re
qu
irem
ent
of
“in
dic
ate
s st
eps
ha
ve
bee
n e
xec
ute
d c
orr
ectl
y”, th
e re
spon
se m
ust
con
tain
a s
tate
men
t ack
now
led
gin
g t
he
natu
re o
f th
e st
ep
or
ap
pro
pri
ate
math
emati
cal
sym
bols
for
the
step
in
qu
esti
on
.
Corr
ect
exec
uti
on
of
the
4 s
tep
s (o
rder
ma
y v
ary
) a
re:
sum
mati
on
ste
p/s
— (
mil
k +
all
in
gre
die
nts
) w
hic
h l
ead
s to
th
e co
rrec
t an
swer
% l
oss
ste
p/s
— (
each
/tota
l x 0
.998)
or
(each
/tota
l – 0
.002 x
ea
ch/t
ota
l) w
hic
h l
ead
s to
th
e co
rrec
t an
swer
/s
mu
ltip
le s
tep
/s —
(ea
ch/t
ota
l x
15
00
)w
hic
h l
ead
s to
th
e co
rrec
t an
swer
/s
con
ver
sion
ste
p/s
— (
each
/tota
l )
wh
ich
lea
ds
to t
he
corr
ect
an
swer
/s.
2.
Th
e om
issi
on
of
un
its
or
the
incl
usi
on
of
inco
rrec
t u
nit
s in
th
e w
ork
ing o
r in
th
e fi
nal
resu
lt d
oes
not
att
ract
a p
enalt
y.
3.
“2174 o
r eq
uiv
ale
nt”
mea
ns
2174, 2173.6
, 2
17
3.6
4 o
r 2
17
3.6
44
.
4.
At
the
C-
an
d D
-gra
des
, th
e re
qu
irem
ent
“in
dic
ate
s th
at
an
att
emp
t h
as
bee
n m
ad
e to
exec
ute
… t
he
step
s” m
ean
s:
sum
mati
on
ste
p/s
— o
bse
rve
at
least
3 o
f th
e in
gre
die
nts
have
bee
n a
dd
ed c
orr
ectl
y
% l
oss
ste
p/s
— o
bse
rve
(at
least
on
e valu
e x {
on
eof
0.9
8, 0.9
98 o
r 0.8
}) o
r (a
t le
ast
on
e valu
e – {
on
e of
0.0
2,
0.0
02 o
r 0.2
} x t
he
valu
e) h
as
bee
n d
on
e co
rrec
tly
mu
ltip
le s
tep
/s —
ob
serv
e (a
t le
ast
on
e v
alu
e x
15
00
) h
as
bee
n d
on
e co
rrec
tly
con
ver
sion
ste
p/s
— o
bse
rve
the
resu
lt o
f at
least
on
e co
nver
sion
is
corr
ect.
5.
“2
17
3644 o
r eq
uiv
ale
nt”
mea
ns
2173
500 o
r 2
173
650.
1000
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Item 15
Model response
CommentaryItem 15 is a three-star item which tested achievement in the CCEs 15 Graphing and 6 Interpreting the meaning of graphs.
This item required students to draw a line graph to show the temperature throughout the ice-cream making process from the time the milk was at 50° C at the beginning until the time the ice-cream was ready for transportation. Students were told to assume each change of temperature mentioned in the process took 10 minutes. The stimulus dot-pointed the six stages in the process.
The A-grade response showed a line graph consisting of the starting point at (0, 50), the five appropriate horizontals (showing how long the mixture was at certain
temperatures), the five required connecting diagonals (showing the 10 minutes taken to change temperatures) and an end point at –20° C.
The cue instructed students to use a ruler. Unfortunately a number of responses showed that some students did not have this piece of essential equipment.
temperature (°C)
-20
-10
time (h)0
1 2 3 4 5 6
10
20
30
40
50
60
70
On the axes below draw a line graph to show the temperature throughout the process from the
time the milk is 50°C at the beginning until the time the ice-cream is ready for transportation.
Assume each change of temperature mentioned in the process takes 10 minutes.
Use a ruler.
1.
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OR
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N
Res
pon
se i
s
un
inte
llig
ible
or
does
not
sati
sfy t
he
req
uir
emen
ts
for
an
y o
ther
gra
de.
O
No r
esp
on
se
has
bee
n m
ad
e
at
an
y t
ime.
15
Gra
ph
ing
6In
terp
reti
ng
th
e m
ean
ing
of
… g
rap
hs
C
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s a l
ine
gra
ph
con
sist
ing o
f:
•th
e st
art
ing
po
int
at
(0, 5
0)
•a
t le
ast
3 a
pp
rop
ria
te h
ori
zon
tals
•an
en
d p
oin
t at
°C.
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s a l
ine
gra
ph
ind
icati
ng
, in
co
rrec
t o
rder
, a
ll 6
of
the
dif
fere
nt
req
uir
ed t
emp
eratu
res.
{corr
ect
ord
er, le
ft t
o r
igh
t, i
s:
,,
, ,
,
}
20– OR
5070
44–
7–20–
A
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s a l
ine
gra
ph
con
sist
ing o
f:
•th
e st
art
ing
po
int
at
(0, 5
0)
•th
e 5 a
pp
rop
riate
hori
zon
tals
•th
e 5 r
equ
ired
con
nec
tin
g d
iagon
als
•a
n e
nd
po
int
at
°C.
20–
B
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s a l
ine
gra
ph
con
sist
ing o
f:
•th
e st
art
ing
po
int
at
(0, 5
0)
AN
D
at
most
on
e p
lott
ing e
rror
in o
ne
of
•th
e 5 h
ori
zon
tals
•th
e 5 c
on
nec
tin
g d
iagon
als
•th
e en
d p
oin
t.
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s a l
ine
gra
ph
con
sist
ing o
f:
•a
t le
ast
4 a
pp
rop
ria
te h
ori
zon
tals
•a
t le
ast
3 r
equ
ired
co
nn
ecti
ng
dia
go
na
ls
•a
n e
nd
poin
t at
°C.
OR 20–
D
Th
e re
spon
se s
how
s, in
corr
ect ord
er, a
t
least
4 o
f th
e d
iffe
ren
t re
qu
ired
tem
per
atu
res.
{corr
ect
ord
er, le
ft t
o r
igh
t, i
s:
,,
, ,
,
}
5070
44–
7–20–
Note
s:
1.
For
the
gra
ph
to b
e re
gard
ed a
s a l
ine
gra
ph
th
e p
oin
ts m
ust
be
con
nec
ted
in
a “
forw
ard
s-ti
me”
man
ner
.
2.
“ap
pro
pri
ate
ho
rizo
nta
ls”
ha
ve
the
corr
ect
hei
gh
t an
d t
he
corr
ect
len
gth
.
3.
“re
qu
ired
con
nec
tin
g d
iagon
als
” j
oin
th
e en
d o
fa
ho
rizo
nta
l to
th
e b
egin
nin
g o
f th
e n
ext
hori
zon
tal
an
d s
how
tim
e el
ap
sed
is
10
min
ute
s (1
sq
uare
).
4.
A p
lott
ing e
rror
is o
ne
of:
•in
corr
ect
hei
gh
t of
on
e h
ori
zon
tal
•in
corr
ect
len
gth
of
on
e h
ori
zon
tal
•in
corr
ect
slop
e of
on
e d
iagon
al
•in
corr
ect
en
d p
oin
t
•th
e gra
ph
, w
ith
no e
rro
rs t
o t
hat
poin
t, f
inis
hin
g a
t .
5.
To c
red
it a
“te
mp
eratu
re” a
n i
nte
nti
on
al
mark
or
a c
han
ge
in d
irec
tion
of
dra
wn
lin
es m
ust
be o
bse
rved
at
that
tem
per
atu
re
(th
e x c
oord
inate
does
not
have
to b
e co
rrec
t).
7–
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Mod
el R
esp
on
ses:
tem
pera
ture
(°C
)
-20
-10
tim
e(h
)0
12
34
56
10
20
30
40
50
60
70
tem
pera
ture
(°C
)
-20
-10
tim
e(h
)0
12
34
56
10
20
30
40
50
60
70
1.
2.
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Item 16
Model response
The air that is whipped into the ice-cream mixture during the manufacturing process makes the
texture of the resulting ice-cream softer. The volume of air incorporated into the mixture can
vary, affecting what is referred to by ice-cream manufacturers as the ‘overrun figure’.
Ice-cream with an overrun figure of 0 per cent would have no air in it and would essentially be
just frozen ice-cream mixture. An overrun figure of 100 per cent doubles the volume of
ice-cream that can be made from a given volume of ice-cream mixture.
A particular ice-cream mixture has a density of 1125 g/litre and the mass of the resulting
ice-cream in a three-litre tub is 1900 g.
Calculate the overrun figure for this ice-cream and then clearly explain your reasoning.
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Show all steps of your
calculations here.
Write your
explanation here.
The resulting ice-cream is ice-cream mix + air and since air has no mass the
1900 g is ice-cream mix.
The volume that the ice-cream mix takes up in the 3 L tub is only 1.689 L
so there is 1.311 L of space for expansion.
The overrun figure is the % of air contained in the final mixture. Hence to
determine the overrun figure find the % increase for 1.689 L of ice-cream
mix to produce 3 L of ice-cream.
volume of solid in the 3 L tub = 1.689 L= (1900 1125)�
increase in volume = 3 – 1.689 = 1.311 L
% increase = 1.311
1.689
x 100 = 77.6
overrun figure = 77.6
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CommentaryItem 16 is a four-star item which tested achievement in the CCEs 48 Justifying and CCE 22 Structuring/organising a mathematical argument.
This item required students to calculate the overrun figure, as a percentage of air added to ice-cream mixture during the whipping process in manufacturing a particular batch of ice-cream. The stimulus provided the information that an ice-cream mixture has air whipped into it for improved texture. A mixture with no air in it had an overrun figure of zero percent and a mixture that doubled in volume due to air added in the whipping process had an overrun figure of 100 per cent.
The first cue instructed students to show all steps of the calculations. The second instructed students to write a clear explanation. The stimulus stated that a particular ice-cream mixture prior to whipping had a density of 1125 g/litre. A batch of this mixture had air whipped into it and three litres of the resulting ice-cream had a mass of 1900g.
Grades were awarded based on the combination of the calculations and the explanation. It was possible for the explanation to either enhance or detract from the grade suggested by the calculations alone.
Responses were awarded an A-grade if they showed an overrun figure of 77.6 and it had been arrived at via a sequence of clear, creditable steps, accompanied by a legitimate explanation with no inconsistencies. To be awarded an A-grade the overall response had to have volume as the context. A response that showed a sequence of calculations primarily based on mass or density could, if the explanation clearly showed how the mass or density was linked to volume, be awarded an A-grade.
Some of the explanations contained poor articulation of the thought processes behind the solution while others had an explanation that merely verbalised steps carried out in the calculations. Unfortunately, many responses had little or no explanation which meant that they could be awarded a C-grade. The separation of the response area into the calculation part and the explanation part guides students to do both and thus have the greatest opportunity to achieve a high grade.
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N
Res
pon
se i
s
un
inte
llig
ible
or
does
not
sati
sfy t
he
req
uir
emen
ts
for
an
y o
ther
gra
de.
O
No r
esp
on
se
has
bee
n m
ad
e
at
an
y t
ime.
48
Ju
stif
yin
g
22
Str
uct
uri
ng
/org
an
isin
g a
ma
them
ati
cal
arg
um
ent
C
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es:
•a
lo
gic
al
an
d c
orr
ect
seq
uen
ce o
f st
eps
•at
most
on
e er
ror.
Th
e st
eps
— i
f th
e er
ror
had
not
bee
n m
ad
e —
wou
ld l
ead
toth
e co
rrec
t over
run
fig
ure
.
A
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es:
•a
lo
gic
al
an
d c
orr
ect
seq
uen
ce o
f st
eps
that
lead
s
toth
e c
orr
ect
over
run
fig
ure
•a
leg
itim
ate
exp
lan
ati
on
wit
h n
o i
nco
nsi
sten
cies
.
B
Th
e re
spon
se p
rovid
es:
•a
lo
gic
al
an
d c
orr
ect
seq
uen
ce o
f st
eps
•a
t m
ost
on
e er
ror
•a
leg
itim
ate
exp
lan
ati
on
.
Th
e st
eps
— i
f th
e er
ror
ha
d
not
bee
n m
ad
e —
wou
ld l
ead
toth
e co
rrec
t ov
erru
n f
igu
re.
D
Th
e re
spo
nse
pro
vid
es
•at
least
tw
o s
tep
s
•at
most
on
e er
ror.
Th
e st
eps
— i
f th
e er
ror
had
not
bee
n m
ad
e —
cou
ld h
ave
bee
n u
sed
in
a c
orr
ect
seq
uen
ce o
f st
ep
s to
fin
d t
he
ov
erru
n f
igu
re.
E
Th
e re
spo
nse
pro
vid
es
•on
e st
ep
•at
most
on
e er
ror.
Th
e st
ep —
if
the
erro
r h
ad
no
t
bee
n m
ad
e —
cou
ld h
ave
bee
n
use
d i
n a
corr
ect
seq
uen
ce o
f
step
s to
fin
d t
he
ov
erru
n
figu
re.
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
volu
me
of
soli
d i
n t
he
3 L
tu
b =
L
incr
ease
in
volu
me
= L
% i
ncr
ease
=
over
run
fig
ure
= 7
7.6
Exp
lan
ati
on
:
Th
e re
sult
ing i
ce-c
ream
is
ice-
crea
m m
ix +
air
an
d s
ince
air
ha
sn
o m
ass
th
e 19
00
g i
s ic
e-cr
eam
mix
.
Th
e volu
me
that
the
ice-
crea
m m
ixta
kes
up
in
th
e 3
L t
ub
is o
nly
1.6
89 L
so t
her
e is
1.3
11 L
of
space
for
exp
an
sion
.
Th
e over
run
fig
ure
is
the
% o
f air
con
tain
ed i
n t
he
fin
al
mix
ture
. H
ence
to d
eter
min
e th
e over
run
fig
ure
fin
d t
he
% i
ncr
ease
fo
r 1
.68
9 L
of
ice-
crea
m m
ix t
o p
rod
uce
3 L
of
ice-
crea
m.
1900
1125
1.68
9=
31.
689
1.31
1=
–
1.31
11.
689
--------
-----
100
77.6
=
No
tes:
1.
For
the
A-
an
d B
-gra
des
, it
mu
st b
e cl
ear
from
th
e
calc
ula
tion
s an
d/o
r th
e ex
pla
nati
on
th
at
volu
me/
space
is
the
con
text.
2.
An
err
or
may b
e a m
ech
an
ical
or
tran
scri
pti
on
err
or
or
may o
ccu
r in
pre
sen
tin
g t
he
ov
erru
n f
igu
re a
s valu
es s
uch
as
177.6
, 1.7
7, 0.7
7, …
3.
An
exp
lan
ati
on
is
not
req
uir
ed a
t th
e C
-, D
- or
E-g
rad
es.
How
ever
, if
an
exp
lan
ati
on
is
pro
vid
ed i
n a
res
pon
se t
hat
ap
pea
rs e
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le f
or
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ld b
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ct f
rom
the
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ted
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he
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ula
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s on
ly.
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Page
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nt
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Unit Eight
This unit was based on an extract from Don Watson’s American Journeys, where he gave an account of some accommodation he encountered in America. Students were told hyperbole is a language technique that employs exaggerated or extravagant statements to produce a strong impression and that hyperboles are not meant to be taken literally.
The following table shows the percentage of responses awarded the various grades for the items in this unit.
Item 17
Model response
A B C D E N O
Item 17 3.4 15.9 39.2 25.5 5.4 10.6
Item 18 2.4 11.9 31.5 19.7 7.0 7.3 20.2
A shaded box indicates that the grade was not available for that item.
Don Watson’s descriptions are intensified by im agery and figurative language such as simile,
metaphor and personification. Quote two examples of his descriptions that are especially vivid.
Explain what each conveys and why each is effective.
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Use at most
one simile in
your response.
“penetrated the sinuses like a bamboo skewer” is used to convey the
message that the room smelt extremely revolting and so strong that
it shot up his nose and made him feel like he was being stabbed in the
nostrils. It allows the reader to grasp an understanding of just how
dirty and revolting the Thunderbird Inn is.
“In the manner of classic motels, you spit on the road from the door of
your room”. This is a vivid image as it conveys the closeness of the
roadway and also the type of neighbourhood — somebody spitting
from the doorway does not conjure up thoughts of an upmarket motel.
The author is giving us a clue about the usual coarse clientele.
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CommentaryItem 17 is a three-star item which tested achievement in the CCEs 4 Interpreting the meaning of words, 43 Analysing and 26 Explaining to others.
In the stem, students were told that Don Watson's descriptions are intensified by the use of imagery and figurative language such as simile, metaphor and personification. Students were required to quote two examples of descriptions that were especially vivid, explain what each conveyed, and explain why each was effective. The cue demanded that at most one simile should be used.
A-grade responses identified two vivid images, explained what each conveyed and explained why each was effective. There were two issues that arose with the
choice of a vivid image. Some extracts did not meet the criteria for what constituted a vivid image, for example, the first sentence of the extract and the two questions within the extract. It was acceptable for students to select two vivid images from a single sentence (i.e. “a roach as big as a small mouse …sitting on its hind legs like a kangaroo defending its territory”).
It was important for students to realise the difference between what an image conveyed and why it was effective. Convey refers to what the image imparts or makes known, e.g. what is made known about the smell, the cockroach, the girl, and so on. This information dealt with the specific piece of text. Effective refers to how the image puts into effect the purpose of the author. He was deliberately showing the reader that the motel was misrepresented or “dodgy” through mockery, distortion, exaggeration, etc. Thus effectiveness could be addressed in three ways: the response could link to subject matter (e.g. to give an account of the state of the accommodation) or to the author’s intention or the reader’s response.
Some responses addressed the “big picture” of the author’s intention and the reader’s response too generally and received no credit for explaining effectiveness. Sometimes the students cued convey and effectiveness incorrectly but they were not penalised for this as long as they addressed the text specifically (in convey) and the “big picture” specifically (for effectiveness).
The image could be identified variously. Generally, students identified the quotation accurately using quotation marks. However, identifying key words from the quotation, making a line reference or paraphrasing the image were acceptable methods of identifying the image.
Some students focused on defining figures of speech and failed to obey the stem, presumably a carryover from the previous items.
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IT
EIG
HT
IT
EM
17
PE
RF
OR
MA
NC
E D
OM
AIN
MA
RK
IN
G S
CH
EM
E
Mark
ing
Un
it 1
N
Res
pons
e is
un
inte
lligi
ble
or d
oes
not
sati
sfy
the
requ
irem
ents
fo
r an
y ot
her
grad
e.
O
No
resp
onse
ha
s bee
n m
ade
at a
ny t
ime.
4In
terp
reti
ng t
he m
eani
ng o
f w
ords
or
othe
r sy
mbo
ls
43A
naly
sing
26E
xpla
inin
g to
oth
ers
C
The
res
pons
e
•id
enti
fies
one
viv
id im
age
•ex
plai
ns w
hat
it c
onve
ys•
expl
ains
why
it is
eff
ecti
ve.
The
res
pons
e
•id
enti
fies
tw
o vi
vid
imag
es
•ex
plai
ns w
hat
each
imag
e co
nvey
s.
The
res
pons
e •
iden
tifi
es t
wo
vivi
d im
ages
•ex
plai
ns w
hy e
ach
imag
e is
eff
ecti
ve.
The
res
pons
e
•id
enti
fies
tw
o vi
vid
imag
es•
expl
ains
wha
t on
e im
age
conv
eys
•ex
plai
ns w
hy t
he o
ther
imag
e is
eff
ecti
ve.
OR
OR
OR
A
The
res
pons
e
•id
enti
fies
tw
o vi
vid
imag
es
•ex
plai
ns w
hat
each
con
veys
•ex
plai
ns w
hy e
ach
is e
ffec
tive
.
B
The
res
pons
e
•id
enti
fies
tw
o vi
vid
imag
es
and
for
one
of th
e im
ages
,
•ex
plai
ns w
hat
it c
onve
ys
•ex
plai
ns w
hy it
is e
ffec
tive
and
for
the
othe
r im
age,
eith
er
•ex
plai
ns w
hat
it c
onve
ys
or •ex
plai
ns w
hy it
is e
ffec
tive
.
D
The
res
pons
e
•id
enti
fies
one
viv
id im
age
•ex
plai
ns w
hat
it c
onve
ys.
The
res
pons
e •
iden
tifi
es o
ne v
ivid
imag
e
•ex
plai
ns w
hy it
is e
ffec
tive
.
The
res
pons
e id
enti
fies
tw
o vi
vid
imag
es.
OR
OR
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
•“p
enet
rate
d th
e si
nuse
s lik
e a
bam
boo
skew
er”
is u
sed
to c
onve
y th
e m
essa
ge th
at th
e ro
om s
mel
t ext
rem
ely
revo
ltin
g an
d so
str
ong
that
it s
hot
up h
is n
ose
and
mad
e hi
m f
eel l
ike
he w
as b
eing
sta
bbed
in t
he n
ostr
ils. I
t al
low
s the
rea
der
to g
rasp
an
unde
rsta
ndin
g of
just
how
dir
ty a
nd r
evol
ting
th
e T
hund
erbi
rd I
nn is
.
•“I
n th
e m
anne
r of
cla
ssic
mot
els,
you
spit
on
the
road
from
the
door
of y
our
room
”. T
his
is a
viv
id im
age
as it
con
veys
the
clos
enes
s of
the
road
way
and
al
so t
he t
ype
of n
eigh
bour
hood
— s
omeb
ody
spit
ting
fro
m t
he d
oorw
ay
does
not
con
jure
up
thou
ghts
of
an u
pmar
ket
mot
el. T
he a
utho
r is
giv
ing
us a
clu
e ab
out
the
usua
l coa
rse
clie
ntel
e.
Note
s:
1.
If a
fig
ure
of
spee
ch h
as
bee
n m
isca
tegori
sed
, n
o p
enalt
y a
pp
lies
.
[Note
3 a
pp
lies
to a
ctu
al
sim
iles,
not
wh
at
a s
tud
ent
may h
ave
cate
gori
sed
as
sim
ile.
]
2.
If a
res
pon
se c
ites
more
th
an
tw
o v
ivid
im
ages
, gra
de
the
resp
on
se
on
th
e b
asi
s of
the
viv
id i
mage(
s) t
hat
wou
ld y
ield
th
e h
igh
est
gra
de.
3.
If m
ore
th
an
on
e si
mil
e is
use
d,th
e cu
e h
as
bee
n o
ver
-rid
den
.
Wh
ere
the
gra
de
is b
ase
d o
n t
wo s
imil
es [
incl
ud
ing t
he
ap
pli
cati
on
of
No
te 2
], t
he
resp
on
se i
s n
ot
elig
ible
fo
r an
A-g
rad
e, b
ut
can
be
aw
ard
ed B
-, C
-, D
- or
N-g
rad
e.
4.
To b
e cr
edit
ab
le, th
e re
spo
nse
mu
stn
ot
be
inco
nsi
sten
t w
ith
th
e
extr
act
.
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Item 18
Model response
In a style consistent with the author’s, continue the account of the motel, introducing two
additional features of the Thunderbird Inn.
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Craft your response
using vivid descriptions
that differ from those in
the extract.
1. The bald lightbulb that hung above my narrow mouldering bed
was glowing only dimly; the last effort of a terminal firefly. It
had a crack down its centre, a crack that entranced me as
surely as any hypnotist, for it was artfully done, splintered just so, to provide the
bulb with a sense of poverty and shattered dreams. It even swung slightly back
and forth — just enough to give the impression that as soon as I lay down on my
equally unsteady bed, the wires that suspended it in space like the tether that
connects an astronaut to his spacecraft would snap and split open my poor head
like a melon. It did not, however, do so. As I settled down for the night, I gave the
appropriate credit to my host: Even the bed was perfect. The slats were unevenly
spaced so my spine sagged down as if an anvil had been rested upon my stomach.
The blanket was thinner than paper and crawled with countless tiny insects that
danced the tarentella over my cold and shivering body. Overhead, the bulb broke
free of its restraints, showering me with glass.
2. Having refreshed myself, I headed for the hotel diner for a bite to eat. As it
turned out, the Thunderbird Inn’s idea of a bite would have fed a small country and
their drinks were almost big enough to come with their own rowing boat. I waddled
back to my room and flopped onto the bed like a hippopotamus into mud - dry
mud! The next thing I knew I was enveloped by 50 years of dust particles arising
from the bedspread like a desert storm. Did I dare turn on the huge cube of a TV
sitting ponderously on the dresser opposite the bed?
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CommentaryItem 18 is a four-star item which tests achievements in the CCEs 46 Creating/ composing/devising, 10 Using vocabulary appropriate to a context and 31 Interrelating ideas/ themes/ issues.
The stem asked the students to continue the account of the motel in a style consistent with the author’s, introducing two additional features of the Thunderbird Inn. The cue reminded the students to craft their response using vivid descriptions that differed from those in the extract.
To be awarded an A-grade the response was required to continue the description in a manner consistent with the style and intent of the author. This meant that the
response had an element of linkage to the extract or that it felt a part of a single piece. This might have been recognised through a mocking or ironic tone that described the additional features as malfunctioning or unsavoury or through an entertaining or humorous tone “to raise a smile”. To be consistent with the style of the extract, the response had to be in the past tense. Some responses failed to focus on description and instead transformed into an exciting narrative.
The response had to evoke the time and place of the extract. The time might have been recognised through references to 50 years of dust, outdated technology, aged equipment, furniture or décor clearly associated with the past. The place might have been recognised through references to a retro hotel, run-down features or an overall sense of disappointment. Many students achieved this with great subtlety and cleverness.
The response was also required to introduce two additional features. The note on the marking scheme indicated that for an additional feature to be creditable, it had to be in keeping with the Thunderbird Inn as described in the extract and be located at the motel or within its surroundings. The features of the motel identified in the extract were the office, neon sign, girl, Coke machine, shower, smell, cockroach and the proximity to road. It should be noted that these features could be mentioned in students’ writing to establish a sense of continuity. Some commonly used additional features were the bed, ceiling, diner, television and other staff.
A-grade responses were required to build and sustain vivid descriptions that differed from those in the extract. Vivid descriptions are those that appeal to the senses, use figurative language and powerful imagery, and/or use creative diction (powerful verbs, adverbs and interesting adjectives and/or provide specific details). The quality of the description had to be sustained throughout the response.
A-grade responses had to use vocabulary appropriately and to effect. Responses that had a wide and interesting vocabulary were able to build the atmosphere and entertain the reader with their witty/funny/colourful writing. A-grade responses were required to use hyperbole “to raise a smile”. The intention of the hyperbole was to support the mocking tone and not to deviate into moods or genres that weren't consistent with the style of the original extract. Therefore, it was deemed not acceptable for responses to use hyperbole to generate excessive violence, distaste or fear which would not have been found in a travelogue such as American Journeys. The phrase “to raise a smile” was deemed to mean anything on a continuum from obvious delight (laugh out loud) to quite subtle amusement (gentle or wry observations). Also, for an A-grade response, any lapses in the use of spelling, punctuation and grammar could not detract from the readability of the response.
This item required students to analyse the style of the passage so that they could write in a similar style. They had to be able to control their creative ideas so that the response was in the style of the original extract, mocking but not gross. Some responses tried to achieve hyperbole by making their writing as distasteful as possible rather than by exaggerating in keeping with the style of the author. Students with control over a wide vocabulary achieved outstanding results in this item.
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UN
IT
EIG
HT
IT
EM
18
PE
RF
OR
MA
NC
E D
OM
AIN
MA
RK
IN
G S
CH
EM
E
Mark
ing
Un
it 1
N
Res
pons
e is
un
inte
lligi
ble
or d
oes n
ot
sati
sfy
the
requ
irem
ents
fo
r an
y ot
her
grad
e.
O
No
resp
onse
has
bee
n m
ade
at a
ny t
ime.
46C
reat
ing/
com
posi
ng/d
evis
ing
10U
sing
voc
abul
ary
appr
opri
ate
to a
con
text
31In
terr
elat
ing
idea
s/th
emes
/issu
es
A
The
res
pons
e •
con
tin
ues
th
e d
escr
ipti
on
of
the
mote
l in
a m
an
ner
con
sist
ent
wit
h
the
sty
le a
nd
in
ten
t o
f th
e a
uth
or
•ev
okes
the
tim
e an
d pl
ace
(of
the
extr
act)
•in
trod
uce
s T
WO
ad
dit
ion
al
fea
ture
s o
f th
e m
ote
l
•b
uil
ds
an
d s
ust
ain
s th
e u
se o
f
viv
id d
escr
ipti
on
s (o
f th
e fe
atu
res)
that
dif
fer
from
th
ose
use
d i
n t
he
extr
act
•u
ses
vo
cab
ula
ry a
pp
rop
ria
tely
an
d t
o e
ffec
t
•u
ses
hyp
erb
ole
to “
rais
e a s
mil
e”.
Any
laps
es in
the
use
of
gram
mar
, pu
nctu
atio
n or
spe
lling
do
not
detr
act
from
the
rea
dabi
lity
of t
he
resp
onse
.
D
The
res
pons
e
•ad
ds
to t
he
des
crip
tion
of
the
mote
l
•u
ses
som
e d
escr
ipti
ve
voca
bu
lary
or
hyp
erb
ole
to f
ocu
s o
n
neg
ati
ve
asp
ect(
s) o
f
fea
ture
(s)
of
the
mote
l.
E
The
res
pons
e
•ad
ds
to t
he
des
crip
tion
of
the
mo
tel
•re
info
rces
a n
egati
ve
asp
ect
of
a f
eatu
re o
f
the
mo
tel.
No
te:
For
an
ad
dit
ion
alfe
atu
re t
o b
e cr
edit
ab
le it
mu
st b
e in
kee
pin
g w
ith
the
Th
un
der
bir
d I
nn
as
des
crib
ed i
n t
he
extr
act
an
d b
e lo
cate
d a
t
the
mote
l or
wit
hin
its
su
rrou
nd
ings.
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
1.
Th
e b
ald
lig
htb
ulb
th
at
hu
ng a
bove
my n
arr
ow
mou
lder
ing b
ed w
as
glo
win
g o
nly
dim
ly;
the
last
eff
ort
of
a t
erm
inal
fire
fly.
It
had
a c
rack
dow
n i
ts c
entr
e, a
crack
th
at
entr
an
ced
me
as
sure
ly a
s an
y h
yp
noti
st,
for
it w
as
art
full
y d
on
e, s
pli
nte
red
ju
st s
o, to
pro
vid
e th
e b
ulb
wit
h a
sen
se o
f p
over
ty a
nd
sh
att
ered
dre
am
s. I
t ev
en s
wu
ng s
ligh
tly b
ack
an
d f
ort
h —
ju
st e
nou
gh
to g
ive
the
imp
ress
ion
th
at
as
soon
as
I la
y
dow
n o
n m
y e
qu
all
y u
nst
ead
y b
ed, th
e w
ires
th
at
susp
end
ed i
t in
sp
ace
lik
e th
e te
ther
th
at
con
nec
ts a
n a
stro
nau
t to
his
sp
ace
craft
wou
ld s
nap
an
d s
pli
t op
en m
y p
oor
hea
d l
ike
a m
elon
. It
did
not,
how
ever
, d
o
so. A
s I
sett
led
dow
n f
or
the
nig
ht,
I g
ave
the
ap
pro
pri
ate
cre
dit
to m
y h
ost
: E
ven
th
e b
ed w
as
per
fect
. T
he
slats
wer
e u
nev
enly
sp
ace
d s
o m
y s
pin
e sa
gged
dow
n a
s if
an
an
vil
had
bee
n r
est
ed u
pon
my s
tom
ach
.
Th
e b
lan
ket
was
thin
ner
th
an
pap
er a
nd
cra
wle
d w
ith
cou
ntl
ess
tin
y i
nse
cts
that
dan
ced
th
e ta
ren
tell
a o
ver
my
co
ld a
nd
sh
iver
ing b
od
y. O
ver
hea
d, th
e b
ulb
bro
ke
free
of
its
rest
rain
ts, sh
ow
erin
g m
e w
ith
gla
ss.
2.
Havin
g r
efre
shed
myse
lf, I
hea
ded
for
the
hote
l d
iner
for
a b
ite
toea
t. A
s it
tu
rned
ou
t, t
he
Th
un
der
bir
d I
nn
’s i
dea
of
a b
ite
wou
ld h
ave
fed
a s
mall
cou
ntr
y a
nd
th
eir
dri
nk
s w
ere
alm
ost
big
en
ou
gh
to c
om
e
wit
h t
hei
r ow
n r
ow
ing b
oat.
I w
ad
dle
d b
ack
to m
y r
oom
an
d f
lop
ped
on
to t
he
bed
lik
e a h
ipp
op
ota
mu
s in
to m
ud
- d
ry m
ud
! T
he
nex
t th
ing I
kn
ew I
wa
s en
vel
op
ed b
y 5
0 y
ea
rs o
f d
ust
pa
rtic
les
ari
sin
g f
rom
th
e
bed
spre
ad
lik
e a d
eser
t st
orm
. D
id I
dare
tu
rn o
n t
he
hu
ge
cub
e o
f a T
V s
itti
ng p
on
der
ou
sly o
n t
he
dre
sser
op
posi
te t
he
bed
?
B
The
res
pons
e
•co
nti
nu
es t
he
des
crip
tio
n o
f th
e m
ote
l in
a
man
ner
th
at
is l
arg
ely c
on
sist
ent
wit
h t
he
sty
le a
nd
in
ten
t o
f th
e a
uth
or
•su
gges
ts t
he t
ime
or p
lace
(of
the
ext
ract
)
•ei
ther
– i
ntr
od
uce
s T
WO
ad
dit
ion
al
featu
res
of
the
mo
tel
or
– in
trod
uce
s O
NE
ad
dit
ion
al fe
atu
re o
f th
e
mote
l A
ND
ela
bora
tes
on
ON
E
pre
vio
usl
y m
enti
on
ed f
eatu
re o
f th
e
mo
tel
•b
uil
ds
viv
id d
escr
ipti
on
s (o
f th
e fe
atu
res)
tha
t d
iffe
r fr
om
th
ose
use
d i
n t
he
extr
act
•u
ses
voca
bu
lary
ap
pro
pri
ate
ly
•u
ses
hyp
erb
ole
to
“ra
ise
a s
mil
e”.
In t
he m
ain,
any
laps
es in
the
use
of
gram
mar
, pun
ctua
tion
or
spel
ling
do n
ot
detr
act
from
the
rea
dabi
lity
of t
he r
espo
nse.
Las
t P
age
Cou
nt
C
The
res
pons
e
•co
nti
nu
es t
he
des
crip
tion
of
the
mo
tel
in a
ma
nn
er t
ha
t sh
ow
s
som
e re
cogn
itio
n o
f th
e st
yle
an
d
inte
nt
of
the
au
thor
•ei
ther
–u
ses
viv
id d
escr
ipti
on
th
at
dif
fers
fro
m t
hose
use
d i
n t
he
extr
act
to i
ntr
od
uce
ON
E
ad
dit
ion
al
featu
re o
f th
e m
ote
l
or
–u
ses
viv
id d
escr
ipti
on
sto
po
rtra
y T
WO
fea
ture
s o
f th
e
mote
l
•in
th
e m
ain
, u
ses
voca
bu
lary
ap
pro
pri
ate
ly
•in
clu
des
th
e d
elib
erate
use
of
word
s or
ph
rase
s th
at
are
“over
the
top
”.
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UN
IT
EIG
HT
IT
EM
18
PE
RF
OR
MA
NC
E D
OM
AIN
MA
RK
IN
G S
CH
EM
E
Mark
ing
Un
it 1
N
Res
pons
e is
un
inte
lligi
ble
or d
oes n
ot
sati
sfy
the
requ
irem
ents
fo
r an
y ot
her
grad
e.
O
No
resp
onse
has
bee
n m
ade
at a
ny t
ime.
46C
reat
ing/
com
posi
ng/d
evis
ing
10U
sing
voc
abul
ary
appr
opri
ate
to a
con
text
31In
terr
elat
ing
idea
s/th
emes
/issu
es
A
The
res
pons
e •
cont
inue
s th
e de
scri
ptio
n of
the
m
otel
in a
man
ner
cons
iste
nt w
ith
the
styl
e an
d in
tent
of
the
auth
or
•ev
okes
the
tim
e an
d pl
ace
(of
the
extr
act)
•in
trod
uces
TW
O a
ddit
iona
l fe
atur
es o
f th
e m
otel
•bu
ilds a
nd su
stai
ns th
e us
e of
viv
idde
scri
ptio
ns (
of t
he f
eatu
res)
tha
t di
ffer
fro
m t
hose
use
d in
the
ex
trac
t•
uses
voc
abul
ary
appr
opri
atel
y an
d to
eff
ect
•us
es h
yper
bole
to
“rai
se a
sm
ile”.
Any
laps
es in
the
use
of
gram
mar
, pu
nctu
atio
n or
spe
lling
do
not
detr
act
from
the
rea
dabi
lity
of t
he
resp
onse
.
D
The
res
pons
e
•ad
ds t
o th
e de
scri
ptio
n of
the
m
otel
•us
es so
me
desc
ript
ive
voca
bula
ry o
r hy
perb
ole
to fo
cus o
n ne
gati
ve a
spec
t(s)
of
feat
ure(
s) o
f th
e m
otel
.
E
The
res
pons
e
•ad
ds t
o th
e de
scri
ptio
n of
the
m
otel
•re
info
rces
a n
egat
ive
aspe
ct o
f a
feat
ure
of
the
mot
el.
No
te:
For
an
ad
dit
ion
alfe
atu
re t
o b
e cr
edit
ab
le it
mu
st b
e in
kee
pin
g w
ith
the
Th
un
der
bir
d I
nn
as
des
crib
ed i
n t
he
extr
act
an
d b
e lo
cate
d a
t
the
mote
l or
wit
hin
its
su
rrou
nd
ings.
Mod
el R
esp
on
se:
1.
Th
e b
ald
lig
htb
ulb
th
at
hu
ng a
bove
my n
arr
ow
mou
lder
ing b
ed w
as
glo
win
g o
nly
dim
ly;
the
last
eff
ort
of
a t
erm
inal
fire
fly.
It
had
a c
rack
dow
n i
ts c
entr
e, a
crack
th
at
entr
an
ced
me
as
sure
ly a
s an
y h
yp
noti
st,
for
it w
as
art
full
y d
on
e, s
pli
nte
red
ju
st s
o, to
pro
vid
e th
e b
ulb
wit
h a
sen
se o
f p
over
ty a
nd
sh
att
ered
dre
am
s. I
t ev
en s
wu
ng s
ligh
tly b
ack
an
d f
ort
h —
ju
st e
nou
gh
to g
ive
the
imp
ress
ion
th
at
as
soon
as
I la
y
dow
n o
n m
y e
qu
all
y u
nst
ead
y b
ed, th
e w
ires
th
at
susp
end
ed i
t in
sp
ace
lik
e th
e te
ther
th
at
con
nec
ts a
n a
stro
nau
t to
his
sp
ace
craft
wou
ld s
nap
an
d s
pli
t op
en m
y p
oor
hea
d l
ike
a m
elon
. It
did
not,
how
ever
, d
o
so. A
s I
sett
led
dow
n f
or
the
nig
ht,
I g
ave
the
ap
pro
pri
ate
cre
dit
to m
y h
ost
: E
ven
th
e b
ed w
as
per
fect
. T
he
slats
wer
e u
nev
enly
sp
ace
d s
o m
y s
pin
e sa
gged
dow
n a
s if
an
an
vil
had
bee
n r
est
ed u
pon
my s
tom
ach
.
Th
e b
lan
ket
was
thin
ner
th
an
pap
er a
nd
cra
wle
d w
ith
cou
ntl
ess
tin
y i
nse
cts
that
dan
ced
th
e ta
ren
tell
a o
ver
my
co
ld a
nd
sh
iver
ing b
od
y. O
ver
hea
d, th
e b
ulb
bro
ke
free
of
its
rest
rain
ts, sh
ow
erin
g m
e w
ith
gla
ss.
2.
Havin
g r
efre
shed
myse
lf, I
hea
ded
for
the
hote
l d
iner
for
a b
ite
toea
t. A
s it
tu
rned
ou
t, t
he
Th
un
der
bir
d I
nn
’s i
dea
of
a b
ite
wou
ld h
ave
fed
a s
mall
cou
ntr
y a
nd
th
eir
dri
nk
s w
ere
alm
ost
big
en
ou
gh
to c
om
e
wit
h t
hei
r ow
n r
ow
ing b
oat.
I w
ad
dle
d b
ack
to m
y r
oom
an
d f
lop
ped
on
to t
he
bed
lik
e a h
ipp
op
ota
mu
s in
to m
ud
- d
ry m
ud
! T
he
nex
t th
ing I
kn
ew I
wa
s en
vel
op
ed b
y 5
0 y
ea
rs o
f d
ust
pa
rtic
les
ari
sin
g f
rom
th
e
bed
spre
ad
lik
e a d
eser
t st
orm
. D
id I
dare
tu
rn o
n t
he
hu
ge
cub
e o
f a T
V s
itti
ng p
on
der
ou
sly o
n t
he
dre
sser
op
posi
te t
he
bed
?
B
The
res
pons
e
•co
ntin
ues
the
desc
ript
ion
of t
he m
otel
in a
m
anne
r th
at is
larg
ely
cons
iste
nt w
ith
the
styl
e an
d in
tent
of
the
auth
or
•su
gges
ts t
he t
ime
or p
lace
(of
the
ext
ract
)
•ei
ther
– i
ntr
od
uce
s T
WO
ad
dit
ion
al
featu
res
of
the
mo
tel
or
– in
trod
uce
s O
NE
ad
dit
ion
al fe
atu
re o
f th
e
mote
l A
ND
ela
bora
tes
on
ON
E
pre
vio
usl
y m
enti
on
ed f
eatu
re o
f th
e
mo
tel
•bu
ilds
vivi
d de
scri
ptio
ns (
of t
he f
eatu
res)
th
at d
iffe
r fr
om t
hose
use
d in
the
ext
ract
•us
es v
ocab
ular
y ap
prop
riat
ely
•us
es h
yper
bole
to
“rai
se a
sm
ile”.
In t
he m
ain,
any
laps
es in
the
use
of
gram
mar
, pun
ctua
tion
or
spel
ling
do n
ot
detr
act
from
the
rea
dabi
lity
of t
he r
espo
nse.
Las
t P
age
Cou
nt
C
The
res
pons
e
•co
ntin
ues
the
desc
ript
ion
of t
he
mot
el in
a m
anne
r th
at s
how
s so
me
reco
gnit
ion
of th
e st
yle
and
inte
nt o
f th
e au
thor
•ei
ther
– u
ses
viv
id d
escr
ipti
on
th
at
dif
fers
fro
m t
hose
use
d i
n t
he
extr
act
to i
ntr
od
uce
ON
E
ad
dit
ion
al
featu
re o
f th
e m
ote
l
or
– u
ses
viv
id d
escr
ipti
on
s to
po
rtra
y T
WO
fea
ture
s o
f th
e
mo
tel
•in
the
mai
n, u
ses
voca
bula
ry
appr
opri
atel
y•
incl
udes
the
del
iber
ate
use
of
wor
ds o
r ph
rase
s th
at a
re “
over
th
e to
p”.
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