4. teaching poetry in efl class
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Teaching Poetry in EFL Class: A Detailed Teaching Plan for
The Lake Isle of Innisfree
By Laura Chao
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Teaching Poetry in EFL Class: A Detailed Teaching Plan for The
Lake Isle of Innisfree
INTRODUCTION: THE REASONS FOR TEACHING POETRY IN EFL
CLASS
Traditionally, poems are included in the textbooks for senior high school students in
Taiwan. Nonetheless, most of the English teachers here would skip the lesson or finish
it in a very short time, for they tended to think it less important compared with the
other lessons. It is a great pity to underestimate the role of poetry in language
teaching.
In fact, poetry is terrific material for EFL class. As we know, most of the materials
written for EFL class are centered on some topics for grammar or for communicative
competence. Being exposed to the kind of material for a long period of time, students
will inevitably become tired of them for lack of intellectual inspiration. But poetry can
turn the dullness into excitement, for it can offer “many pleasures---pleasures of
sound and meaning, of image and symbol, of speech and feeling and thoughts.”
(DiYanni, 1998) With the teaching of poetry, students can be motivated not only to
learn English but also to appreciate the deeper dimension and exquisiteness of the
language.
In addition to the linguistic benefits poetry provides, it can foster the aesthetic sense
of students. Poems are usually composed of condensed words and vivid images.
Reading them can make us more receptive to imagination and improve our ability in
appreciation of beauty (DiYanni, 1998). Moreover, our experience and feeling will be
strongly evoked to look into ourselves and look around the outer world. It is the kind
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of mental process that makes one a lifelong reader.
Therefore, the poems in textbooks should not be regarded as empty units; on the
contrary, they should be taught with more care. In this article, I will present detailed
examples of strategies and activities for the poem “The Lake Isle of Innisfree,” by W.
B. Yeats.
TEACHING PROCEDURES
I. Vocabulary
According to research, vocabulary is the main reading problem for second language
learners (Mckinley, 1974). This is not surprising, considering the extensive English
lexicon. Thus, to prepare students for a poem, the teacher should define vocabulary
items critical to understanding the text as a whole. However, only the most critical
items need to be taught in advance. Students should be encouraged to use context
clues to derive meaning by themselves. Besides that, it is necessary to allow the
students to practice the pronunciation and usage.
In teaching the poem “The Lake Isle of Innisfree,” the teacher should give the
meanings of glade, cricket, and glimmer to students beforehand, for these words form
very important images in this poem which may affect the students’ appreciation of it.
Definition of Vocabulary:
glade: open space in a forest
cricket: small brown jumping insect that makes a shrill sound by rubbing its front
wings together
glimmer: weak faint unsteady light
Then, the meanings of arise, hive, linnet, lapping, pavement, and core can be
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guessed:
a) I will arise and go now, and go to Innisfree,
(Students can get the meaning of arise from the phrase arise and go.)
b) Nine bean rows will I have there, a hive for the honey bee,
(The phrase honey bee indicates the meaning of hive.)
c) And evening full of the linnet’s wings.
(From the word wings, students can define the word linnet as a kind of bird.)
d) I hear lake water lapping with low sounds by the shore;
(By using their schema, students can easily know lapping is the action of lake water.)
e) While I stand on the roadway, or on the pavements grey,
(The words roadway and grey can be connected with pavement.)
f) I hear it in the deep heart’s core.
(The meaning of core can be guessed by deep heart.)
Ⅱ. Grammar
Grammatical complexity does not seem as a great problem as vocabulary in reading
to students. As a result, the key to dealing with grammatical structures is to clarify
them when encountered. They should be analyzed within the reading to facilitate and
thereby deepen the students’ understanding of the material (Stern,1991), and at last to
enhance their writing ability. Sometimes, grammatical irregularities occur in poems;
the teacher can forewarn students to pay more attention to them and try to work on
their own to see what they can make of it.
In teaching poems, restructuring and simplifying can help students master the
irregularities and unfamiliar grammatical structures.
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Restructuring
a) Nine bean rows will I have there,
→ I will have nine bean rows there. (The unusual front of the noun in the beginning
is to emphasize what the poet has. It may be small but important to him.)
b) And a small cabin build there, of clay and wattles made;
→ And a small cabin made of clay and wattles builds there. (The ungrammatical
division of the adjective clause is to impress the readers with the picture, where there
is no other building except the small cabin.)
Simplification
c) I will arise and go now, and go to Innisfree,
And a small cabin build there, of clay and wattles made;
→ I will arise and go to Innisfree now, where a small cabin of clay and wattles is
build.
d) And I shall have some peace there, for peace comes dropping slow,
Dropping from the veils of the morning to where the cricket sings;
→ And I shall have some peace there, for peace comes dropping slowly from
morning till night.
Ⅲ. Reading
(A) The experience of poetry
In teaching poetry, the reader response theory is an effective approach to keep the
students interested in the text (Maxwell, 1993). In Taiwan, most students feel afraid of
reading poems for lack of touch with it. Thus, to evoke their feeling about poems, the
teacher’s job is to get rid of their fear and create a relationship between poems and
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them. The first step of teaching should be about the experience of poetry.
In teaching “The Lake Isle of Innisfree,” the teacher can ask the following
questions after the first reading:
1. Is there any place you desire for?
2. What do you yearn for in life?
It is easy for students to think of what they really wish because of the strong emotion
expressed in the poem. Teenagers as they are, they are under heavy pressure from
their family and society. Traditionally, they are expected to do well in studies; it
means that they have to cram a lot of books and take a lot of tests to prepare for the
Joint College Entrance Exam. Most of them feel unhappy, but they accept the fact as
their responsibility to their family. Anyway, they must have some dreams in their
minds just like the author, who lives in a big city but longs for the peaceful country
life.
(B) The interpretation of poetry
After the previous reading and discussion, the teacher can lead the students to learn
more about the poem. This further interpretation should rely on our intellectual
comprehension and rational analysis rather than on our emotional response.
In “The Lake Isle of Innisfree,” the author uses many visual and sound images to
express his longing for returning to nature. The teacher can inspire students to read the
poem more slowly and carefully to find them and form the connections:
Visual Images: a small cabin, nine bean rows, the various scenes from morning till
night.
Sound Images: bee, cricket, linnet, water lapping.
In more details, the teacher can indicate the following phrases to students:
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a) the veils of morning: Veil means a covering by women to protect or hide the face,
and here, it means Morning opens her face from the darkness. It becomes a process
of daybreak.
b) where the cricket sings: As we know, crickets sing only at night, so the phrase
vividly refers to the abstract noun—night.
c) midnight’s all a glimmer: The definition of glimmer is weak faint unsteady light.
Thus, it implies the twinkling stars in the sky.
d) and noon a purple glow: Originally, purple is the color of scarlet, so that it means
the sun shines brightly at noon.
e) and evening full of the linnet’s wings: Birds use the wings to fly, so the author tries
to describe the scene that the linnets are flying to their nests in the evening.
Ⅳ. Writing
Poetry can be a rich and inspiring source for writing in EFL. The teacher can use it
as a model or as subject matter in guiding students to practice writing.
(A) Reproducing the poem
The teacher can ask students to rewrite the poem in narration. Students should
describe the poem in their own words. Here is an example.
The Lake Isle of Innisfree
I wish I could go to Innisfree now. Innisfree is my dreamland. If I go there, I’d like to grow
some beans and have a hive for bees, for the busy bees can keep me company in the beautiful
place. Here, I could enjoy peace by myself and admire the various scenes from morning till night.
In the morning, I could see the daybreak; at night, I could hear the crickets singing; at midnight, I
could watch the star twinkling in the sky. At noon, I could feel the sun shining brightly, and in the
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evening, I could watch a great number of linnets flying to nest.
How I wish I could go to Innisfree right now. I think of it every day and night. Sometimes,
when I stand on the roadway, or on the grey payment, I can hear the lake water lapping softly by
the shore in my heart.
(B) Imitation
This is the most advanced stage of model-based writing. However, it will be
interesting for students to imitate the pattern of the poem and write their own one. In
the beginning, the teacher can give them a cloze test, but different from the real test,
there is no correct answer. Here is the example.
I will arise and go now, and go to ,
And there, of made;
will I have there, a for the ,
And I live alone in the .
And I shall have some peace there, for peace comes dropping slow,
Dropping from to ;
There midnight’s all , and noon a ,
And evening full of .
I will arise and go now, for always night and day,
I hear ;
While I stand on the road way, or on the payments grey,
I hear it in the deep heart’s core.
Besides that, the teacher may ask students to create their own poems freely. Students
can follow the pattern of the original poem, or just use the same theme. However,
creating a poem is difficult. Before assigning the kind of practice, the teacher should
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estimate carefully the students’ abilities.
(C) Writing on the poem
Writing on the poem includes the traditional assignments—written responses to
questions, in-class essays, and take-home compositions (Stern, 1991). Such
assignments may be appropriate for all students. As with reading, questions and topics
for writing can be found at all three levels of literary understanding. First, the literal
level can be for short writings dealing with comprehension of the poem. Second, the
inferential level can be writing topics requiring analysis. Third, the personal level can
be the basis for essays in which students express their personal reactions to the poem
and comments about it.
(1) The literal level
1) What is the cabin made of?
2) What will the poet have in Innisfree?
(2) The inferential level
1) How many insects and birds are found in the poem? Do they have any special
meanings?
2) Try to find the visual images used by the poet, and explain them.
(3) The personal level
1) What do you yearn for in life?
2) If you yearn for some place, what kind of place is it?
Ⅴ. Oral reading
Poetry is distinguished from other kinds of literature by its sound and rhythm. Thus,
the teacher should make good use of this characteristic in teaching language. The
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teacher may play a tape or read the poem himself in class to make listening
comprehension. Or he may have students read the poem aloud to practice
pronunciation and rhythm. Having students read poems aloud helps develop not only
speaking but also listening ability.
CONCLUSION
Poems can serve as excellent material in language teaching as long as the teacher
knows how to make the utmost of it. If the teacher can adapted the integrated
approaches presented in this article to teach the poems in the textbooks, students will
be stimulated not only to take an interest in language learning but also to love
literature. As a teacher, we should not neglect the benefits literature offers. After all,
besides teaching English, we expect the students to be a lifelong reader after leaving
school, which is our responsibility and ultimate goal.
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