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Alliance Primary School, Sheung Shui

2017-2018

A Collection of

Students’ Writing

Preface

Congratulations to our students!

Their enthusiasm for writing gave birth to this heartfelt collection. We

can’t help but show our appreciation of them. We hope that you enjoy

reading it and share a great sense of achievement with our lovely and

energetic students. Last but by no means least, there’s no doubt that;

Alliance’s writers are

Progressive in different aspects,

Sincere at heart,

Sensible in thought, and

Sunny in character.

It’s time for us to turn the page and say

Hooray!

English Panels

CONTENT

1. Kitty, the Singing Girl P.1

2. Hayden, the Riding Boy P.1

3. Priscilla, the Singing Girl P.2

4. Bobo, the Drawing Girl P.2

5. Jasper, the Swimming Boy P.3

6. The Weather P.3

7. A Visit to Disneyland P.4

8. Go Shopping P.4

9. There’s a Lion at the Zoo P.5

10. There’s a Crocodile at the Zoo P.5

11. There’s a Zebra at the Zoo P.6

12. There’s a Hamster at the Zoo P.6

13. There’s a Giraffe at the Zoo P.7

14. There’s a Zebra at the Zoo P.7

15. The School Picnic P.8

16. The School Picnic P.9

17. An Exciting Day P.10

18. A School Picnic P.11

19. Free Time Activities P.12

20. Free Time Activities P.13

21. When I was … P.14


23. An Unforgettable Experience P.16

24. An Unforgettable Experience P.17



27. A Horrible Night P.20


29. A Diary P.22

30. A Diary P.23



33. A Bad Day P.26

34. A Bad Day P.27

35. A Bad Day P.28

36. A Bad Day P.29

37. My Dream Job P.30

38. My Dream Job P.31

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1A Kitty

Kitty, the Singing Girl

I am Kitty, the singing girl.

I sing near my friend.

I sing on the stage.

I sing under the balloons.

I am happy.

1A Hayden

Hayden, the Riding Boy

I am Hayden, the riding boy.

I ride in front of the restaurant.

I ride near the hotel.

I ride behind the supermarket.

I am happy.

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1B Priscilla

Priscilla, the Singing Girl

I am Priscilla, the singing girl.

I sing in the classroom.

I sing on the stage.

I sing near my mother.

I am happy.

1B Bobo

Bobo, the Drawing Girl

I am Bobo, the drawing girl.

I draw on the table.

I draw near the bed.

I draw in front of the chair.

I am happy.

3

1C Jasper

Jasper, the Swimming Boy

I am Jasper, the swimming boy.

I swim in the swimming pool.

I swim near my sister.

I swim behind my father.

I am happy.

1C Hailey

The Weather

Today is snowy.

It is cold.

I can eat hotpot.

I can watch TV at home.

I feel great.

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2A Jocelyn Mok

A Visit to Disneyland

I go to Disneyland with Mum and my sister. There is Buzz Lightyear

Astro Blasters behind Sleeping Beauty’s Castle. We play a shooting game in

Buzz Lightyear Astro Blasters. I pick up the laser gun to shoot the bad guys.

I feel very excited!

2A Stephanie Yu

Going Shopping

It is my Christmas party. Dad and I go to Toys R Us to buy a Christmas

gift and Christmas decoration. I want to buy a remote control car but it is too

expensive. I need to buy a Christmas tree, a Santa Claus costume and toys. Then,

I go back home.

I love the Christmas party. I spend one hundred dollars. I feel great.

5

2B Jerry Ip

There’s a Lion at the Zoo

There’s a lion at the zoo.

It is wearing four shoes.

It wants to play with a goose

but the goose goes to school.

The lion is so full

because it drinks too much soup.

The goose comes back from school.

They play happily at the zoo.

2B Jacky Chan

There’s a Crocodile at the Zoo

There’s a crocodile at the zoo.

It is basking in the sun.

It is very hungry but can’t eat the fish.

It meets a breeder.

The breeder gives it a big fish.

The fish is so yummy!

However, the crocodile gets very unhappy.

The breeder feels very sorry!

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2C Angus

There’s a Zebra at the Zoo

There’s a zebra at the zoo

and the turtle is there too.

They want to play with you

but you are going to school.

The school bus is passing through.

They are feeling blue.

They jump in the pool.

They may catch a flu.

2C Anders

There’s a Hamster at the Zoo

There’s a hamster at the zoo

and the panda is in there too.

They are eating a big apple

but they want to eat a big tomato.

They are swimming in the big pool

but they want to run in the zoo.

They like red and blue

but the people have the flu.

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2C/2S Cindy

There’s a Giraffe at the Zoo

A giraffe is in the zoo.

It is eating some food.

It is very happy.

It plays with a puppy.

It likes eating grass.

It doesn’t like wearing sunglasses.

They are taller than a house.

They are bigger than a mouse.

2A/2S Louis

There’s a Zebra at the Zoo

There is a zebra in the zoo.

It is eating some food.

It is very happy.

It plays with a puppy.

It likes tomatoes.

It doesn’t like potatoes.

The zebra is big.

It is fatter than a pig.

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3A Kaidence

The School Picnic

It is cloudy. In the morning, I go on the school picnic in the forest with

Jojo and Lucky. I can see colourful flowers and fresh grass. I fly a kite and have

a picnic there. I feel fantastic.

In the afternoon, we have lunch under a tree. We have sandwiches,

cupcakes and orange juice. I feel wonderful because I like eating the food.

Suddenly, I see an ox on the grass. ‘It looks like a monster.’ I drop my

sandwich and I feel frightened. Then it says, ‘Moo Moo.’

Next, the teacher helps me and she says, ‘Get away from him’. I feel

great because I am safe. What an unlucky day!

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3A Anthony

The School Picnic

It is sunny today. In the morning, I go to the country park with Sky and

Kate. I can see flowers and trees. I have a picnic there. I feel great.

In the afternoon, we have lunch under a tree. We eat bananas, cupcakes

and drink orange juice. I feel cheerful because the food is yummy.

Suddenly, I see a giant cow. It sits on the grass. It is as big as a monster.

It says ‘Moo, Moo’ to me. I feel scared.

At that time, Sky helps me. He shouts, ‘Get away!’ The cow goes away.

I feel happy because I am safe. What a wonderful day!

10

3B Sandy

An Exciting Day

Today is a sunny day. I go on a school picnic with my classmates and

teachers in the country park. There are some trees, flowers, grass, insects and

birds.

At noon, we are under the tree to share juice, sandwiches and cupcakes.

I feel full because I eat too much food.

Then, I see an ox. It looks like a monster. It says, ‘Moo! Moo!’ I feel

scared and drop my sandwiches.

Finally, my classmate Sandy gives me a hug. I feel wonderful because

she is my best friend. What an exciting day!

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3B Jacky

A School Picnic

Today is a sunny day. I go to the country park with my classmates and

teachers. There are big brown trees, pink flowers, green grass, birds and insects.

I feel excited and fantastic.

At noon, we sit under the tree. We drink orange juice and eat cupcakes

and ham sandwiches. I feel great because I can eat the delicious food.

Suddenly, I can see a big brown ox near me. I shout, ‘There’s a big brown

ox near me!’ I feel surprised because the ox is in the country park.

Finally, a farmer takes the ox back to the farm. I feel great because the

farmer takes the ox back.

What an unforgettable day!

12

3C Kitty

Free Time Activities

Hi! My name is Kitty. I live in Hong Kong.

In my free time, I like playing board games. My favourite game is

Rummikub. I like playing Rummikub with my sister on holiday. I feel wonderful

because I can learn to think fast and clear.

I also like swimming. My favourite swimming place is Fanling

Swimming Pool. I swim with my best friend at weekends. I feel excited because

swimming makes me strong.

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3C Barry

Free Time Activities

Hi! My name is Barry. I live in Fanling.

In my free time I like playing card games and board games because I

think playing card games or board games with friends is so exciting! My

favourite card game is UNO. I also like playing Chinese checkers. I win more

than 100 times.

Moreover, I like going shopping with my family. Dad and I like looking

at basketball shoes. Mum likes looking at clothes. I feel cheerful because I think

shopping is cheerful.

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4A Andrew

When I was …

When I was one,

I thought the world is fun!

When I was two,

I got a clue.

When I was three,

Everything I agreed.

When I was four,

I liked the shore!

When I was five,

I wanted to fly!

When I was six,

I liked playing with bricks.

When I was seven,

I went to 7-Eleven.

When I was eight,

I felt great!

Now I’m nine,

I never sigh.

When I’m ten,

I’ll make many friends!

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4A Ellfie

When I was …

When I was one,

I kicked a bun.

When I was two,

My eyes were blue.

When I was three,

My mum didn’t love me.

When I was four,

I could climb to the fifth floor.

When I was five,

I could drive.

When I was six,

I loved doing magic tricks.

When I was seven,

I hit Kelvin.

When I was eight,

I cooked an egg.

When I was nine,

I planted a pine.

Now I’m ten,

My mum loves me again!

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4B Liam

An Unforgettable Experience

Yesterday the Chan family wanted to have a picnic. They went to a

supermarket. At the supermarket, they bought some food and drinks. It all looked

delicious.

They bought a loaf of bread, a bunch of bananas, a can of sausages, three

cartons of blackcurrant juice and two packets of potato chips. They went to the

cashier to pay the bill. They needed to pay two hundred dollars sixty cents.

Then, they went to the Ma On Shan Country Park by bus. When they

arrived, they suddenly felt scared because they left the food and drinks on the

bus. They felt hungry and disappointed. At last, they went home by bus.

When they arrived home, they all felt hungry and unhappy so they had a

big meal before going to sleep.

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4B Reagan Ho

An Unforgettable Experience

Yesterday the Chan family wanted to have a picnic. They went to a

supermarket. At the supermarket, they bought some food and drinks.

They bought a loaf of bread, two packets of potato chips, three cartons

of blackcurrant juice, a bunch of bananas and a tin of sardines. It was one

hundred dollars sixty cents.

After that, they went to the Ma On Shan Country Park by bus. When they

arrived, they wanted to have the picnic. Unluckily, they could not find the food.

They left it on the bus! They were upset. Little brother was as hungry as a bear.

Dad said, ‘No worries! Let me buy you something to eat.’

Fortunately, there was a supermarket nearby. Dad bought lots of food and

drinks. They had a nice picnic finally. All of them were over the moon.

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4C Jessica

When I was …

When I was one,

I ate a chocolate bun.

When I was two,

I liked blue.

When I was three,

I sat under a tree.

When I was four,

I could open the door.

When I was five,

I couldn’t drive.

When I was six,

I had many sticks.

When I was seven,

My best friend was Bevan.

When I was eight,

I ate fried eggs.

When I was nine,

I was fine.

Now I’m ten,

I can cook with Chef Ben.

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4C Adrian

When I was …

When I was one,

I ate a bun.

When I was two,

I was cool.

When I was three,

I saw a bee.

When I was four,

My leg was sore.

When I was five,

I could not drive.

When I was six,

I played with some bricks.

When I was seven,

I had a friend, Kelvin.

When I was eight,

I stood straight.

When I was nine,

I couldn’t drink wine.

Now I am ten,

I have a new light pen.

20

5A Abby Tong

A Horrible Night

Yesterday afternoon, my parents left home to go somewhere. Mum said,

‘Please take care of your younger sister.’ I said, ‘I will take care of her well.’

Then, I did puzzles with my sister and read a story to her. Kelly said, ‘I am thirsty.

Can you give me some drinks?’ I gave her a cup of water and some snacks but

she dropped them on the floor. I said, ‘Hey! Please sit down and eat your food.’

I swept the floor after I said that. She went into the bedroom ‘Get away from

me!’ she said angrily. Suddenly, I saw a ghost flying in the bedroom. I went into

the bedroom with curiosity. I screamed loudly because I thought I saw a ghost.

Then, my parents came back and said, ‘Why don’t you be helpful? Why is the

floor dirty?’ They were very angry.

At that night, I had a nightmare. I thought it was a horrible night!

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5A Vanise Wong

A Horrible Night

Yesterday afternoon, my parents left home to Mainland China for two

days. Mum said, ‘Please look after your younger sister.’ I promised to take care

of Kelly well.

After my parents left home, I tried to find some interesting things to do

with my sister. We planted games and read her favourite storybooks. My sister

finally felt tired and went to her room to take a nap. I started to clean up the mess

and tidy up the living room.

Suddenly, I heard a scream in my sister’s room. “Get away from me!”

said my sister. I rushed to her bedroom and saw her in a panic. It was a mouse

hiding under her bed. I quickly used a sweeper and banged on the mouse. Luckily

I was able to catch it and I decided to let it free in the park.

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5B Joyce Ng

A Diary

Tuesday 10th October, 2017 Sunny

This was my worst day ever! Today, I was on duty. As I was ready to

wash my hands, Miss Lee came to my classroom and said, ‘There is rubbish!

You should throw it into the rubbish bin!’

Then, I saw the rubbish under Mira’s chair! ‘Mira! Why did you throw

the rubbish onto the floor? It’s so dirty, you know?’ I shouted at her angrily.

However, she said that she didn’t do that. Then, we started to quarrel and we

were mean to each other.

One of the classmates saw what we did all, and told Mr. Kiu. Mr Kiu

found us and asked us why we had quarrelled with each other. Mr Kiu said that

Mira and I were also wrong. I should not lose temper so easily and Mira should

be honest.

In the end, we were all punished but we had learnt a lesson.

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5B Esther Leung

A Diary

Tuesday 10th October, 2017 Sunny

Yesterday afternoon, I quarrelled with my best friend, Susan. We were

playing badminton together in the playground. At first we enjoyed playing it. I

won that game many times. However, Susan was in a bad mood as she lost the

game. At the beginning, I was patient but I got angry gradually. I said to her,

‘Today your behaviour is not good. It’s wrong that you’re angry because you lost

the game.’ She didn’t feel her behaviour was wrong and started giggling at me.

I got angrier so I shouted at her.

I felt shameful for quarrelling with my best friend but I didn’t have the

courage to apologize. Mum said that it was my fault. I should talk to her. I will

do that tomorrow.

I hope we won’t quarrel with each other forever.

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5C Tam Cho Ying

A Horrible Night

Yesterday afternoon, my parents had a trip to Cheung Chau and they said

they will stay there for a night. They asked me to look after my younger sister,

Kelly. I promised them.

After we had lunch, we did puzzles. However, the puzzles were

complicated so we spent a lot of time to complete it. We finished it in the

evening. We had dinner quickly. Then I told her a story ‘Three Little Pigs’. She

felt sleepy so she went back to her bedroom.

I swept the floor in the living room. Suddenly, I heard my sister shout

loudly, ‘Get away from me!’ In Kelly’s bedroom, she saw a big cockroach. The

cockroach flew towards her. She felt frightened.

I went into her bedroom and looked for the cockroach. Then, I used my

broom to kill it. In the end, it was dead.

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5C Lai Hiu Wing Candice

A Horrible Night

Yesterday afternoon, my parents asked me to look after my younger sister

because they needed to pick up my grandparents.

First, I did a cat puzzle with my younger sister. We felt excited. Then, I

read her a story, ‘Goldilocks’. It was interesting.

After a while, she felt sleepy so she went back to her bedroom to sleep.

When she was sleeping, I swept the floor. Suddenly, she shouted loudly, ‘Get

away from me!’

After that, I saw a lot of cockroaches come out of her room. I used some

insecticide to kill them.

Finally, I killed all the cockroaches. We felt happy.

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6A Hanson Chong

A Bad Day

11th April (Sunday) Cloudy

I had a bad experience last night! I had piano practise in the music centre

because I needed to do a piano exam soon. At seven o’ clock, I left the music

centre. I walked on the street. There were very few people on the street so I

walked quickly. I walked quickly so that I could get back home as soon as

possible.

When I arrived home, I rang the doorbell. I rang many times but there

was nobody to open the door. I felt tired because my bag was heavy. I thought

there wasn’t anyone at home.

Suddenly, I remembered I had a key so I searched for the key. I tried my

best to find my key but I couldn’t find it.

Luckily, Mum and Dad went back home. They said, ‘Why do you stay

here? Grandpa is at home.’ Then, we got into our home. Actually grandpa was

sleeping when I rang the doorbell. I shouted, ‘Oh no!’

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6A Marcus Fung

A Bad Day


I had a bad experience last night! Since I will have a piano examination

next week, I practised the piano at the music centre until seven o’clock at night.

When I went home, there were very few people on the street and it was very dark.

When I got home, I rang the doorbell but nobody answered. I heard

someone was inside the flat so I rang the doorbell again but still no one

responded. I searched my backpack for my key but I couldn’t find it. I tried to

call my mum and dad. Neither mum nor dad responded. I went down the stairs

and then I found my key! It was under the staircase. When I went into the flat,

there was a burglar!

In the end, he jumped out of the windows and escaped. I called the police

and they told me to calm down. They found the burglar and arrested him. It was

the worst night ever!

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6B Natalie Shiu

A Bad Day


I had a bad experience last night! My piano exam is coming so I was

practising the piano in a studio. I finished practise at seven o’clock. I worked

really hard so I was tired. When I went back home, the road was dark and quiet.

I pressed the doorbell when I arrived home. At that time, I heard some

sound from the TV and I thought that Mum was at home but nobody opened the

door. I thought that Mum didn’t hear the doorbell so I looked for my keys to

open the door but I lost my keys. I was frightened since I couldn’t get inside my

home and waited for Mum to open the door.

Fortunately, Mum came back home later and opened the door. I asked,

‘Did you turn off the TV when you left home?’ Mum said, ‘Of course! But why

is the TV still on? Let’s check the CCTV.’

We found that a burglar broke into my house. The burglar stole some

cash. He watched TV too but he forget to turn off the TV while he was escaping.

Fortunately, the burglar stole only a small amount of cash and most

importantly we were safe.

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6B Quock Fung

A Bad Day


I had a bad experience last night! Yesterday evening, I packed up my

things and I was ready to go back home. When I was walking on the dark streets,

I heard something fall on the ground but I did not care about it.

When I got back home, I rang the doorbell again and again. Still no one

opened the door for me. I thought my mum was sleeping like a pig again. I

wanted to get the key from my school bag but I found nothing. I thought, ‘Oh

my goodness. I cannot find my key! ’ I went back to the piano school but I

couldn’t find my key. I went back home sadly, I knew I would be punished by

my father and mother. Suddenly, I tripped on something. I fell down on the

ground and shouted, ‘Ouch! That hurt! I am very unlucky today!’ And I turned

my head then I saw my key and said, ‘Oh! It is here, yes!’

At last, I went back home. My mother asked me, ‘Why are you so late?’

I smiled and said, ‘Nothing happened.’

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6C Wallace Lee

My Dream Job

I like doing different kinds of sports and participating in sports

competitions. So, I want to be a Physical Education teacher in a primary school.

As a PE teacher, I have to teach the students to play different sports and

have fun in the PE lessons. I also need to encourage potential students to join

competitions and help them achieve good results for the school.

In order to be a PE teacher, I need to be well-educated and physically fit

because a PE teacher must be good at sports. I also need to be patient with the

students in the PE lessons.

I hope I can be a PE teacher when I grow up. I need to study very hard at

school and have a good habit of doing physical exercise every day. I also hope

that my students will have outstanding achievements in sports in Hong Kong.

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6C Sara Lam

My Dream Job

When I grow up, I want to be a fashion designer. I need to learn about

trends and sketch the initial clothing or accessory design.

I want to be a fashion designer because I love drawing. I like designing

clothes too. I want to design a lot of beautiful clothes when I grow up!

If I become a fashion designer, I will design something eye-catching and

some interesting clothes. I will take the rough sketch or modal and develop a

more specific working pattern too.

Fashion designers need to be creative so that they can have more ideas

for their designs. They also need to be hard-working so that they can complete

the work before the fashion shows.

I am going to study really hard so that my dream can be achieved. I have

to read more fashion magazines. I even have to get good grades in exams so that

I can go to university and study fashion design.

I hope I can be the best fashion designer in the world. Maybe you will

find my name in a fashion magazine easily in the future.

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