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Page 1: A Presentation By- Akshat Bhatnagar Viveka Kulharia

A Presentation By-A Presentation By-

Akshat BhatnagarAkshat Bhatnagar

Viveka KulhariaViveka Kulharia

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Started by looking at a standard Wikipedia

article.

Observed the page layout. Positioning of the text Size and Positioning of images References

How We Began

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Standard Wikipedia Article

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Original Page

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Reduced the size of the images Positioned the images on the right

Changes in Page Layout

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Added an Introduction to the article

Changes in Content

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Made the article more interesting to read

Used more informal and interactive Language

“… - here’s your guide to some of the best food the campus has to offer. Bon Appetit !!”

“Bored or fed up with the mess? Want to try something new, or something different from the pre-decided menu?”

“Feel free to mix it up a little and ask for different combinations of these fillings”

Changes in Content

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“…between 10 am to 10 pm.” “…between 10 am and 10 pm.” “One of the popular and iconic food joint,..” “One of the most popular and iconic food joints,..”

Made small improvements in expressions

“..as it is a small place and quickly gets crowded” “.. as it is a small place and gets crowded quickly”

“MT is the place if you are owl-type and…” “MT is the place if you are a night owl and…”

Grammatical Corrections

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Added References

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