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Amy Cichon & Abby Thurmond
ECED 4300 B Dr. Tonja Root Spring
20114th grade
Prewriting Simulated Letters
Abby ThurmondPrewriting
ELA4W4 The student consistently uses a writing
process to develop, revise, and evaluate
writing. The student a. Plans and drafts
independently and resourcefully.
PLOThe student will plan their writing using a graphic organizer to construct a draft of a
simulated letter.
Form of Writing• “Pretend” letters • Not actually sent to the
person you are writing to. • Author pretends that they
are someone else. • Take on persona of a
character from history, or a character in a story.
Form of Writing Continued
• Next you will need a greeting. Often times a greeting begins
with “Dear person you are writing to” or just the
person’s name followed by a comma.
Form of Writing Continued
• Following the greeting, you will write the body
of the letter. The body is the main part which
includes what you want to say.
Form of Writing Continued
• The last part of a simulated letter is the closure. Here you will end your letter.
• Finally you will sign your name, or the name of the character you are pretending to be.
Stage of Writing• Prewriting
–Everything you do before you write your draft.
–Focus on • Form- genre of writing• Purpose- why you are writing• Audience- who you are writing to
• Topic- what you are writing about
Simulated Letter Graphic Organizer
Who Am I? What Do I want to Say?
When did this take place?
Where did this happen?
Why am I writing this letter?
Eunice, Jeannett. (2003). Simulated letter graphic organizer. Retrieved by Abby Thurmond from vstate.info/.../Graphic_Organizers.../Graphic%20Organizers%20F03.doc
Published Example Hey Gilly, That was the best note you have ever written. That was cool because you actually made Miss Harris curse. I bet you none of the kids at this school could ever make a teacher do that. I wish I could write cards like that and make teachers curse. You are also very brave because you wrote that to a teacher. No kid is crazy enough to do something like that. That is how crazy I think you are. Your classmate, Steven
Paterson, K. (1987). The great Gilly Hopkins. New York: Harper & Row.Personal Writing. (2007). Retrieved from http://www.pearsonhighered.com/assets/hip/us/hip_us_pearsonhighered/samplechapter/0131597892.pdf
Practice Activity• With guided
instruction students will plan
a graphic organizer based around the story
of The Three Little Pigs.
Assessment Activity • Read students the book,
“Escape North! The story of Harriet
Tubman.”• Have students write a
simulated letter taking on the persona of a slave thanking Harriet Tubman
for helping him or her escape to freedom.
Amy Cichon
Drafting
• ELA4W4 The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student a. Plans and drafts
independently and resourcefully.
PLOThe student will plan their
writing using a graphic organizer to construct a
draft of a simulated letter.
Form of Writing
• “Pretend” letters • Not actually sent to the person you
are writing to. • Author pretends that they are
someone else. • Take on persona of a character
from history, or a character in a story.
Form of Writing Continued
• Next you will need a greeting. Often times a
greeting begins with “Dear person you are writing to” or just the
person’s name followed by a comma.
Form of Writing Continued
• Following the greeting, you will write the body of
the letter. The body is the main part
which includes what you want to say.
Form of Writing Continued
• The last part of a simulated letter is the closure. Here you will end your letter.
• Finally you will sign your name, or the name of the character you are pretending to be.
Stage of Writing• Drafting
–Form sentences from graphic organizer
–Do not focus on •Grammar•Spelling •Mechanics
Simulated Letter Format Amy Cichon Abby Thurmond ECED 4300 Section B
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Published Example
Dear William,
I ’m having f un here. There was a very big storm here. I t was so big it looked like the sea. Sometimes I am very lonesome for home but sometimes it is very f un here in Ohio. We swam in the cow pond and I taught Caleb how to swim. They were af raid I would leave. Maggie and Matthew brought some chickens. Love, Sarah
MacLachlan, P. (2004). Sarah, plain and tall. New York: HarperCollins.Personal Writing. (2007). Retrieved from http://www.pearsonhighered.com/assets/hip/us/hip_us_pearsonhighered/samplechapter/0131597892.pdf
Practice Activity Students will draft a simulated
letter from the graphic organizer we completed on
the story of The Three Little Pigs.
Assessment Activity
Students will draft a simulated letter from the graphic
organizer completed from the book, Escape North! The Story of Harriet Tubman.