8/13/2019 Academic Writing Task 2

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Names: Hung - Tuan - Son - Huy (Trouble boys)

Class: IELST Preparation Semi

Academic writing task 2

There is an excessive number of cars on our roads today and this leads to many

problems. Individuals and governments should ensure that public transport plays a

more role in modern life in order to tackle these problems.

To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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In recent years, the amount of transportation has been expo!ing gobay" Some peope

beie#e, both citi$ens an! ea!ers shou! be responsibe for this consi!erabe issue" %rom my

point of #ie&, I party agree &ith this statement for the foo&ing reasons

%irsty, pubic transport shou! be appreciate! more because it benefits the citi$ens in a

number of &ay" Specificay, it has the abiity to ser#e numerous peope at the same time,

thus pre#ents traffic congestions significanty re!uce the number of #ehices on roa!s"

%urthermore, buses prices are reasonabe enough for neary a peope" Therefore, ess

money &ou! be re'uire! to pro#i!e fue for in!i#i!ua #ehices"

e#ertheess, using pubic transportation has its negati#e si!e" %or instance, pic poceting,

sexua harassment, &hich are reati#ey common in *sian countries ie +apan, hina"

esi!es, buses ten! to tae a ot of time. therefore, it/s ess efficient for commuting"

onse'uenty, the !e#eopment of pubic transportation ea!s to the !ramatic re!uction of the

figure of #ehices on streets" y contrast, it aso creates ne& in!s of crime, &orthess time

for &aiting as &e as incon#enience" Personay, I recommen! that the go#ernment shou!

combine harmoniousy bet&een pubic transportation an! others"

0or!s count: 123

8/13/2019 Academic Writing Task 2

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Names: Hung - Tuan - Son - Huy (Trouble boys)

Class: IELST Preparation Semi

Academic writing task 2

There is an excessive number of cars on our roads today and this leads to many

problems. Individuals and governments should ensure that public transport plays a

more role in modern life in order to tackle these problems.

To what extent do you agree with this statement?

***

In recent years, the figure of transportations has been expo!ing gobay" Some peope

beie#e, the go#ernments shou! be enhancing the roe of pubic transport &ith the aim to

so#e !ifficut probems !ue to persona #ehices" %rom my point of #ie&, I party agree &ith

this statement for the foo&ing reasons"

%irsty, pubic transit shou! be appreciate! more because it benefits the citi$ens in a number

of &ays" Specificay, it has the abiity to ser#e numerous peope at the same time, thus

pre#ents traffic congestions, as &e as significanty o&ers the number of #ehices on roa!s

in or!er to re!uce fue consumption an! ha$ar!ous emission" %urthermore, the price of

pubic transport such as buses an! sub&ay are reasonabe enough for neary a peope"

Therefore, ess money &ou! be re'uire! to pro#i!e fue for in!i#i!ua #ehices"

e#ertheess, the use of pubic transportation aso has its !isa!#antages" %or instance, it

faciitates a number of socia e#is such as pic poceting, sexua harassment, &hich are

reati#ey common in *sian countries" esi!es, in a fe& ocaities, buses ten! to tae a ot of

time. therefore, it is ess efficient for commuting an! inhibite! users"

onse'uenty, the !e#eopment of pubic transit ea!s to the !ramatic re!uction of the figure

of #ehices on streets" y contrast, it aso creates se#era in!s of crime, &orthess time for

&aiting as &e as incon#enience" Personay, I recommen! that the go#ernment shou!

combine harmoniousy bet&een pubic transportation an! others"

0or!s count: 345