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f s a aby 5030Md Delwar Hussain
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TIME SUBMITTED 23-MAR-2015 10:09PM
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230315DELWOR_A_REPORT_ON_FINANCIAL_SYTEM_AND_AUDITING.DOC (72.5K)
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f s a aGRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
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Comment 1Ref erral
Comment 2The f ollowing did not meet the criteria2.1,2.3,3.1,3.2,3.3,4.1, & 4.2 They should be repeated
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Comment 3What do all theses types of risks mentioned mean?
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VagueUnclear:When making a point in one of your body paragraphs, one of the most common mistakes is tonot of f er enough details. A paragraph without much detail will seem vague and sketchy. A paperis always strengthened when your claims are as specif ic as possible, The more detailedevidence you of f er, the more ref erence points your reader will have. Remember that you arecommunicating your argument to a reader who has only your description to go by. Someonewho reads your essay will not automatically know what you mean to express, so you have tosupply details, to show the reader what you mean, not just tell him or her.
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Comment 4Properly suggest and explain how to detect risks of f raud
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Comment 5Which audit did you plan?What is the scope and risk of the situation?
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Comment 8Where is address?
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Comment 9Who is the auditor?
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