q3) what have you learnt from audience
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Q3) what have you learnt from audience feedback
1) The back ground is to dark 2) The image isn't very sharp3) To much negative space4) Sub headings aren't lined up and look
untidy5) Make Afflecks palace bigger6) Less space between each line of text7) Make ‘tensions between the girl
gangs reaches breaking point’ bigger and closer to ‘afflecks palace’
8) Make all text justified to the side of the page
9) Make the more channels feature canted to draw in the audience
10) Brighten the stars faces 11) Make strap line bigger
Messages I received on my blog about my front cover
Audience feedback on my trailer
Billboard feedback
Needs a hash tag to create brand loyalty Date and time need to be bigger
Need to improve tag line it need to relate to the trailer more subtle
Tag line needs to be bigger and remove dots
Change back ground colour put it on a brick background
Some characters are to dark
Dressed to differently
You can still see some of the green screen here the eraser hasn't been hard enough
Printscreens on how I improved my work
Taking out the background
Filling the background with a lighter shade of grey
Tidying up the areas around the hair line
The finished product
Adding the new photo to my front cover
Improving the position of the text
Canting the more channels box
Billboard improvements One of the comments made about my old billboard was that it would work better on a brick wall back ground so I started by removing the original background
Finding a new background that would work with all my text positioned on it
I then added lots of layers with the bricks behind my stars
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