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The TEM-4 Exam
Introduction to Note Writing
Note Writing
For the purposes of the TEM-4, a “note” is some type of letter – an apology, invitation, advertisement, setting an appointment, etc. It can be just about anything. Be prepared!
• 50 to 60 Words• 10-Minute Time Limit
The breakdown of how marks are awarded (maximum 10 points) corresponds to the following:
Content (3 points):
• Is it interesting and relevant?• Does it flow naturally?• What about sentence variety and the proper level of
formal / informal language?• What about clarity, specificity, transitions, misused
terms, conciseness, etc.?
Organization (3 points):
• The wording and location of the “dear” and closing sections
• Is there a logical sequence to the body?• Does it flow and have clarity?
Language (4 points):
• Grammar (especially verb tenses), word choice, punctuation, formality/informality, awkward constructions, repeated mistakes.
Other (possible loss of points):
• Have the instructions been followed?• Has the question been answered?• Proper indentation / formatting?• Word Count OK?
General Content
• Date / Time• Greeting / Salutation• Message / Body• Valediction (Farewell / Good-Bye
Statement)• Signature
Monday, August 24
Dear Teacher Wayne,The first English Corner is two weeks
from this Saturday, from 7 to 9 PM. On behalf of the Student Union, I would like to invite you to be our special guest. I know the students would love to interact with you. Please let me know if you can attend. Thank you.
Sincerely, Liu Ming
Salutation称呼
Salutation称呼
Date日期Date日期
Valediction套语
Valediction套语
Signature署名
Signature署名
Body正文
Body正文
Appointments
Monday, May 12
Tom,I need to pick up my wife at the airport
tomorrow at 5 PM. Would it be convenient for you if we reschedule our meeting for the day after tomorrow at 3 PM? If that’s not a good time, please give me a call and we’ll figure something out. Thanks for understanding.
John
Apologies
Good: I’m sorry that I …I am so / really sorry …I apologize for …Please accept my sincerest apologies for
…
Maybe OK: I really feel bad about …I didn’t mean to offend you when I …
Bad: I’m sorry if I offended you.I’m sorry you were offended.I’m sorry for anything that was offensive.
Tuesday, October 10
Dear Prof. Wang,I am so sorry that I missed our 4 o’clock
appointment yesterday. Prof. Zhang’s lecture lasted much longer than I expected. I am available all afternoon tomorrow and Thursday. Please let me know if there is a convenient time to meet on one of those days. Thank you for understanding.
Sincerely, John
Invitations
Monday, August 24
Dear Teacher Wayne,The first English Corner is two weeks from this
Saturday, from 7 to 9 PM. On behalf of the Student Union, I would like to invite you to be our special guest. I know the students would love to interact with you. Please let me know if you can attend. Thank you.
Sincerely, Liu Ming
Monday, August 24
Dear Teacher Wayne, The first English Corner is scheduled for
September 14, from 7 to 9 PM. On behalf of the Student Union, I am inviting you to be our special guest. I know the students will love interacting with you. Please let me know if you can attend. Thank you.
Sincerely yours, Liu Ming
Mr. and Mrs. George Carter
request the honor of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
Mary Danielleto
Mr. John Richard Jackson
son ofMr. and Mrs. John Aaron Jackson
on Saturday, the ninth of June
Two thousand and thirteen
at two o'clock in the afternoon
First Church of Christ
219 North Carrey Road
Stars Hollow, Connecticut
R.S.V.P. by the first of June
to Mrs. George Carter
555-1212
Thank You Notes
July 12
Dear Ms. Li,Thank you for your warm hospitality during
my recent stay in Beijing. Your entire staff treated me like a king and made my visit a memorable experience. Please extend my heartfelt thanks to them. I’m looking forward to future conferences at Qinghua University.
Sincerely,Zhang Min
Congratulations
Dear Sally,
Good news travels fast. I’m really happy to hear that you and Peter got engaged last week. The two of you are a perfect match.
Congratulations on taking this exciting step together. Please pass on my well wishes to Peter, too. Wishing both of you all the best for a lifetime of happiness!
Yours, Julie
Dear Jenna,I was very pleased to hear that you have
been offered a position at the Garnet Company. You have my heartfelt congratulations on graduating and your new job.
I'm sure you will meet the challenges of these exciting changes with your usual optimism and capability. I wish you all the best as you move forward in your new career.
Sincerely, John
Condolences
An expression of sympathy,especially on the occasion of a death.
Don’t say:I know how you feel.
He’s in a better place.
She’s at peace now.
Put this behind you and get on with life.
Call if you need anything.
“You should” or “you will” statements.
Dear Jennifer,I am so sorry to hear that your dear
husband, John, has passed away. He was a man of warmth who always put others first. I will miss him very much.
My love and support will always be here for you. You are in my thoughts and prayers.
With deepest affection,Mary
Asking for Leave
Tuesday, March 5 Dear Miss Johnson,
Please excuse my son Jim’s absence from school for the next 2 days. He has a high fever and chest cough, and he has lost a lot of sleep.
Please find enclosed a note from his doctor. Jim will resume his studies and attend school as soon as he feels better.
Respectfully yours, Sue Smith
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