ANALYSIS OF PREVIOUS STUDENTS WORK

HANNAH AND MEGAN

WWW- mise en scene was well thought about: e.g Lighting, setting and props were appropriate. Plot was clear and it gave the audience a sense of what is going on.

EBI- A variety of shots could have been used to reduce the use of close ups . Also, the music was contrapuntal, the music seemed more upbeat as if there'd be some action on screen.

LOUISE

WWW- Some of shots were thought through fully as they create suspense and enigma. The audience can’t see everything going on, or hear what's going on which keeps them interested. Music was suitable as it went with the character and situation.

EBI- Setting/ location could have been better, or the shots could've been different, especially the tunnel bit. Aslo some shots were confusing such as the clock and when she was spraying perfume on her wrist. It makes it seem like some shots had more attention than others.

MARCUS AND LUKE

WWW- The location suited the opening as did the costumes.. The non-diegetic music followed the action and was synchronous

EBI- The main thing that would make this even better and more realistic is if both lighting and setting were considered for the bit with the killing. It was done during the day in an open space. A quiet are with low level lighting are would have been more suitable.

BENWWW- The backing music was good along with some mise en scene features such as costume. Also setting was good. And use of camera shots/ movements were varied. And titles were included.

EBI- The camera was steadier and props were more realistic. Not necessarily get a real gun, but one that didn’t look too fake. Also the lighting was too bright for the last scence.