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Cristina Sierra ENC 3315 Professor Weaver 25 March 2015 The high case of health risks due to pesticides in our nature of the world Research Argument Proposal My argument on sustainability that I have chosen is that chemicals and pesticides are the vast reason of radiation in our air and the cause of a rise in health risks for many animals and humans in the world. The type of audience that I am focusing on are children and adults that have experienced some type of health risk because of pesticides, workers such as florists, gardeners, pest control, that have seen firsthand the amount of pesticides that are used in the soil; also farmers that are around cattle on a daily basis that see how the cattle react to the pesticides in their hay. My warrant is that pesticides and other toxics have caused a drastic amount of health issues to many, from children to adults. My claim is a claim of policy and it is that the amount of pesticides in our environment should be reduced because

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Cristina SierraENC 3315Professor Weaver25 March 2015The high case of health risks due to pesticides in our nature of the worldResearch Argument Proposal

My argument on sustainability that I have chosen is that chemicals and pesticides are the vast reason of radiation in our air and the cause of a rise in health risks for many animals and humans in the world. The type of audience that I am focusing on are children and adults that have experienced some type of health risk because of pesticides, workers such as florists, gardeners, pest control, that have seen firsthand the amount of pesticides that are used in the soil; also farmers that are around cattle on a daily basis that see how the cattle react to the pesticides in their hay. My warrant is that pesticides and other toxics have caused a drastic amount of health issues to many, from children to adults. My claim is a claim of policy and it is that the amount of pesticides in our environment should be reduced because it is harmful towards not only animals but humans too. Dont you all agree we need to see a change in our nature of the world? A change in our health risks due to these pesticides? We must stop this high toxic from harming our soil, animals and mankind, if not who knows how many more generations there will be left to come after us. With the amount of pesticides affecting our soil, animals and humans it is only going to get worse with time if these pesticides arent made un-harmful to our nature and mankind. Based on the cause of health risks and problems pesticides have brought to our world this moment, we will see more cases of Lead, Allergen and Pesticides in children child care services, we will have more cases of children and adults getting cancer due to types of chemicals and pesticides, then lastly we will start to see a decline in our crop distribution because of the amount of pesticides within the crops that farmers are exposed to every day. Based on what we covered in class in our Sustainability book in the argument The Obligation to Endure by Rachel Carson, she gives a lot of background on how much the nature of the world is changing due to the negative effect pesticides are causing to our vegetation, cattle, and humans. Its no longer just a radiation problem thats causing our greenhouse gases to rise but now its something much greater than that. Based on another source I found by the The First National Environmental Health Survey they conducted a survey on child care centers to test how much lead, allergens and pesticides were found within the building where children are attending; based on the results the risks were high. Also there has been a study found that once some were exposed to Dicamba (which is an herbicide usually applied to crops), there was different cancer incidents that occurred soon after. Then lastly Ive found a source that has shown that farmers dealing with crop production systems in the United States have noticed a decline. It has stated that the risk of being involved in crop production increases the chance of cancer, birth defects, sterility, spontaneous abortion, etc. all due to the exposure of toxic substances, including pesticides. I plan to express the amount of harm pesticides and other toxics have brought to our nature of the world; how it has affected not only our soil but also children and adults. I think the most important appeal to my audience for my argument would be safety needs since it is affecting our health risks and stability for our lives, also our social needs is very important in this circumstance since were showing our sense of love and nurture for our friends, family and community that could be in harm of these health risks in the present or future to come.