Thesis Statement

I am strongly agree that being financially rich is necessary due to certain reasons. The reasons are to ensure good life through having a comfortable home, getting the best healthcare services and getting the best education.

Topic Sentence

1. First of all, being financially rich is necessary because it can make us possible to afford a comfortable home.

2. Other than that, it is worth considering that we can choose to get the best healthcare services if we are financially rich.

3. In addition, it is necessary to be financially rich due to the increasing demand of getting the best education.

Concluding Sentences

1. Thus, it is undoubtedly clear that a comfortable home is affordable for the rich.

2. Based on the justification, it is hard to deny the fact that we can “trade” health with wealth.

3. By referring to the argument, it is undeniable that those who are financially well-equipped are able to get the best education that they desire.

A+Other than that, it is worth considering that we can choose to get the best healthcare services if we are financially rich. In many cases, the sick are treated based on their ability to afford the cost of the treatment. For instance, there are quite a number of cases where people with severe illnesses could not afford the high cost of treatment posted and shared on social media. These cases have eventually become viral and caught the attention of others who could afford to make donation. On the contrary, the rich can choose any hospital of their preferences. In fact, they are always prepared in case of emergency such as when immediate treatment of high cost is needed. Based on the justification, it is hard to deny the fact that we can “trade” health with wealth.

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“I wish I could send my daughter to a specialist. I couldn’t bear seeing her suffering like this,” said a mother of three, whose third child was battling with brain tumor. Her husband was at that time working as a laborer at a construction site earning just enough for them to eat daily. Never did they have more to repair the dilapidated house they live in nor to buy a car that could commute them to the hospital for weekly check up. I read about them on a blog recently and I make up my mind thinking that being financially rich is necessary. It is my firm belief now that we must be economically well-equipped to ensure good life through having a comfortable home, getting the best healthcare services and getting the best education.

“That’s amazing! My house! That’s my house”, cried a classmate. Another cry sounded “My dream house, absolutely! I want that,”. Those were just some pieces of expressions by most students of 5 SF when the picture of a house was displayed via the projector. It seemed like everybody start dreaming of having one of its kind. Most importantly, everybody should realize a house like that costs lots of money. As for me, being financially rich is necessary not just to ensure better future with a comfortable home but also to afford the best healthcare services and education.

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