Article edits

Removed first 4 lines from second paragraph - it felt repeated from first paragraph

Removed ‘reviving your sexy.’ – it didn’t specify what Removed ‘and’ from ‘hair and nails’ – needed a comma instead Added ‘and’ between ‘nails’ and ‘upping’ – it wouldn’t have made sense

with a comma Replaced ‘morning breath,’ with ‘Morning breath is’ – it made more sense Moved ‘the messy bedhead can be seen as sexy and slid back under the

duvet.’ – it made more sense to have it after the part about bad breath. Replaced ‘sexy,’ with ‘sexy.’ – it made more sense to have that be the end

of the sentence Removed ‘a’ from ‘lower a high blood pressure’ – incorrect grammar Removed the part about PMS – it made the article only for women instead

of gender neutral Changed ‘that guy you like a lot clearer.’ to ‘the equipment much clearer.’

– I felt it was unnecessary Removed ‘and for those of you who are not biology experts, this is’ – I felt

that is wasn’t needed Removed ‘defiantly’ from ‘(you defiantly won’t look 80 either)’ – you can’t

guarantee that would happen Removed the first 10 lines from the third paragraph – they felt like they

were trying to spread fear about eating meat Removed ‘It doesn’t take a biology degree to know what you should and

should not be putting into your body.’ – It isn’t needed or necessary Removed ‘making you smell like that Victoria’s Secret model you’ve

always wanted to be.’ – it’s gender specific rather then gender neutral Removed ‘tea’ from ‘Green tea’ – it didn’t need it Changed ‘so wish’ to ‘want’ – one word that gives the same meaning Removed ‘A lifestyle’ and added in ‘from your diet’ – it made more sense

to me Lowered a few sentences onto other lines to keep up with the style of

writing Changed ‘bikini’ to ‘beach’ – more gender neutral

Fact checking

Changed 8 million to 10 million – the amount could have gone up since this was written

Changed ‘commonly occurs at approximately the age of 60.’ to ‘occurs over the age of 60, approximately.’ – more medical sites say it occurs over 60 rather then at 60