assignment 5 different types of essays - mohd halim shah

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A REVIEW OF NARRATIVE ESSAY

INTRODUCTION

The title of this essay is The Climb and the writer of this essay is Amy. I get this essay from the

internet. The website of this essay iswww.thewritesource.com/studentsmodels/wi-theclimb.htm.

ORGANIZATION OF THE ESSAY

Paragraphs

The paragraphs in this essay are short and they are reader friendly. The writer uses simple words

to express her ideas to the reader. Some paragraphs also contains dialogues to make the essay to

be more interesting.

Thesis Statements

The essay is about the fear that the writer feels as she ascends a path to an area above a 100 feet

waterfall.

Topic Sentences

Despite of the fears, she still climb the mountain because the beautiful and attractive scene of the

surroundings.

Supporting Details

The supporting details are well done delivered until we as the reader can feel the excitement and

the writers experience.

Strengths

The writer uses simple language and the essay is understandable by the reader.

Weaknesses

The dialogues are unformal and they are not suitable for the new reader because kids maybe will

be influence with the unformal style of language.
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A REVIEW OF CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAY

INTRODUCTION

The title of this essay is Causes and Effects of Low Self-Esteem and the writer of this essay is

Joseph Malek. I get this essay from the internet. The website of this essay is

www.helium.com/items/973692-causes-and-effects-of-low-self-esteem


Paragraphs

The paragraphs in this essay are short not more than five sentences in a paragraph. The usage of

the language is in medium level . The language that been use is the language of counselor

because it seem like to motivate the reader.

Thesis Statements

The essay is about cause and effect of low self esteem.

Topic Sentences

The article is about the modern society of America

Supporting Details

The supporting details writes by the writer are based on his observation.

Strengths

The writer gives many examples to make sure the reader can understand the message delivered

by him. The essay is short, so the reader can understand easily compare to the long essay.

Weaknesses

It is based only to the society of America. The situation may be different with the other country

society.
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A REVIEW OF PROCESS ESSAY

INTRODUCTION

The title of this essay is How To Change a Flat Tire and the writer of this essay is Brent Romans.

I get this essay from the internet. The website of this essay is www.edmunds.com/how-to/how-

to-change-a-flat-tire.html


Paragraphs

This essay has 16 paragraphs. The usage of the language in this essay is easy to be understand.

The writer use understandable technical term. The process to change a tire is very clear and the

reader can easily do it because the writer explain precisely.

Thesis Statements

The essay is about a process to change a flat tire.

Topic Sentences

The topic sentence is at the beginning of the paragraphs. The steps of the process shown clearly

to the reader.

Supporting Details

The supporting details writes by the writer is given completely and in details.

Strengths

The writer include pictures so it is easy for the reader to understand the process. The paragraphs

are well organized. It is also follow the sequence and in order.

Weaknesses

The essay write by the writer is delivered in form paragraphs so it can be change into list form

because it is more understandable and reader friendly.


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A REVIEW OF COMPARING AND CONTRASTING ESSAY

INTRODUCTION

The title of this essay is Lincoln and Douglass: Struggle between Freedom and Slavery and it is

written by Feross Aboukhadijeh. It is available in the internet. The website of this essay is

www.apstudynotes.org/english/sample-essays/compare-and-contrast-lincoln-douglass/


Paragraphs

The paragraphs for this essay are very long especially for second paragraph. The usage of the

language in this essay is very high and it is suitable for matured reader.

Thesis Statements

The essay is about the opinions of two political figure during Civil War in America and it

emphasizes on freedom and slavery.

Topic Sentences and Supporting Details.

Paragraph 2:

TS : Lincolns desire to maintain national unity.

SD : His job as the president of USA.

Lincoln freed all the slaves to weaken the South opponent.

He also stresses and conveyed harmony, reconciliation and unyielding unity.

Lincoln appealed to Northeners, Southeners and foreigners and gives them hope.


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Paragraph 3:

TS : Douglas view to gain civil liberties for blacks.

SD : Douglas believed in the equality of all men, regardless of skin colour.

He expresses his experience working together with the blacks.

Douglas also uses appeal to emotion to make his audience empathize with the slaves

dismal situation.

Strengths

The reader can evaluate which and choose between freedom and slavery.

Weaknesses

The paragraph is based on one persons opinion. It is quite long and may bring boredom to the

readers.


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