assignment one draft with comments
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Observation: Sneaker
Observation One
Wednesday, January 22nd
to Saturday, January 24th
Time: 7pm- 9pm
Description of Location: my first observation has two different locations, which are
online websites and retail store. There are many websites that introduce sneaker’s
information to us. One of my favorite and also the one that I observe is
sneakernews.com. This is a very professional and awesome website which provides
the newest information, picture about any kind of special sneakers. You also can
check the release date about specific shoes. However, the most interesting thing in
this web is you can make comments about what you think about shoes. Another
location is a retail store which locates at Southpark Mall named Footlocker.
Footlocker is one of the most big and success sportswear and footwear retailer. It
cooperates with many sports company like Nike and Adidas. So each time Nike will
release some limited shoes, footlocker also release.
Figured World: It is a world that has its particular rules and behaviors. It consists
of its own actors and artifacts.
Rules: For the store sales, most of time, you have to get up early to line up in front of
store because the shoes are limited. You will have signed a ticket and the staff will
draw the sweepstakes. So it’s pretty hard to get it from stores unless you know some
special ways or people. In this observation, I observed how kobe prelude 8 released.
In partnership with mall management, select House of Hoops by Foot Locker stores
will implement a sweepstakes ticket procedure* in order to purchase the Nike Kobe
Prelude VIII (on sale 1/25/13 for $200). The sweepstakes tickets will be given out
Wednesday, January 22nd and Thursday, January 23rd. If your ticket number is
selected, you will be notified by phone on Friday, January 24th. These procedures are
for select stores only. You have to wait for the select store open and get tickets from
store staffs. They will ask you phone number and size of your shoes. After all of this
process, the only thing you can do is waiting. For the online sales, it will be much
easier but expensive. You can check and follow information about the shoes you want
from sneakernews.com. It will give you the information about how and where you can
buy it. For example, it will post a link to ebay or other website for you to purchase.
You also can see the comment in the talking area. Some people talks about they have
some easy way to get it and if you want, you can connect with them. Some people do
the business of selling limited shoes online,so you can purchase them from e-bay or
some other private website. Most of time you can get whatever you want, however,
you can to pay double or more price compare with the original price that the shoes is.
Comment [YL1]: Describe more about what this
Footlcoker looks like incase of some people never
want to there before.
Comment [YL2]: The describe of location is
good.
Comment [YL3]: You have really good
description of the rules about the people in actor.
So either ways have their advantages and disadvantages. By the way, there are also
plenty of websites or books introduce the newest information about shoes. You can
see some people give their comments about how they think about specific shoes. In
general, different situations have different rules. For instance, when you are lineup for
waiting, you cannot cut in line unless you want some strong black people to kick your
ass. Also, when you sell shoes no matter from stores or online sales, you must make
sure that the shoes are authentic. If you sale fake shoes, you will have a big trouble.
Actors: actors are people who play in specific figure world. They follow the
certain rules and behaviors.
Fans of sneaker: they are people who really love and collect shoes. I am a
good example. Collecting shoes is my biggest interest. I view sneaker’s
information every day. We also view some sneaker online forum to talk about our
experience about buying and maintaining shoes. When we find some shoes that
we really like, we will try our best to collect more information about how to buy
it.
Seller: in some sense, sellers are also fans of sneaker but they but it not for
collecting, they buy it for business. Most of time, they are not doing business by
self, they will be groups. They will have different role in this figure world. For
instance, some people will be scalpers; some people are in charge of selling. So
they have different responsibility.
Retail staff: retail staffs are people who work in store. Before the shoes release,
it will first arrive at store, so the retail staffs are the first people to see it. Their job
gives them a big opportunity to deal through backdoor. So retail staffs are biggest
seller.
Artifacts: artifacts are things that are made or created by actors. They don’t need to
be an actual thing; they can be minding or thought.
Shoes: everything we talk about is around shoes. The most value and hottest
shoes that most of sneakers like is jordan. Every year, nike will retro several
jordan shoes which attract our best attention.
Website: there are two kind of website.First is website like sneakernews.com to
introduce information to us. Second are online sales. It is a important source for
both seller and buyer to easily get the shoes they want. But, online sales website
also has their different. First is official website like Nike. This kind of website
sells shoes with original price, so both seller and buyer can but it fairly. However,
Comment [YL4]: Funny.
Comment [YL5]: Include the store and ticket
here.
Comment [YL6]: Also add money and computer
into this catalog.
another website like ebay, it is a good place for seller to sell shoes with a high
price.
Discourse community: it groups of people share common goals.
Fans of sneaker: This is good example of discourse community. They have
common goal which is getting their favorite shoes.
Seller: the common goal for the seller is getting all shoes and selling a nice price
for anyone.
Literacy practice: way of communication.
Website comment: you can see many people talking their opinion in forum area.
They will ask many questions that were relative to sneakers like price and where
to buy.
Observation:
January 22, 7pm. I viewed the sneakernews.com and check the newest information
about a pair of shoes which would release on Saturday. It gave us lots of pictures
about this pair of shoes from different angles.
7:10pm- I opened footlocker.com and find that this shoes will implement a
sweepstakes ticket procedure in order to purchase. The sweepstakes tickets will be
given out Wednesday, January 22nd and Thursday, January 23rd. If your ticket
number is selected, you will be notified by phone on Friday, January 24th. I checked
the Footlocker in the Southpark Mall was one of the retail stores that would
implement ticket, so I prepared to go there tomorrow.
January 23, 7:30am- now I am stand in front of a retail footlocker store in order to get
ticket. Even through it was 7:30am, I was not the first one to be here. There was three
man already waiting here.The store was closed and it will open at 8am.
7:50am- now there were about ten people here. Everyone lined up and chatted with
eath other. I talked with a person who named Joe and he showed me his collection’s
picture from his Facebook.
8am- the store open. Everyone went to the front desk to register personal information.
Everyone followed the rules. The process was very successful.
8am-6pm. There were many people view shoes in store, only part of them registered
for ticket. After one day’s observation, almost 100 people went to get the ticket. I
asked the salesman when they will call the lucky men and they said if you didn’t get
call before 9 pm, you ticket number will not be selected.
Comment [YL7]: A little bit confusing for
people didn’t know about.
Comment [YL8]: Talking about how they talk in
a friendly or rude way.
9pm- I went back to home and still didn’t get the call from store, so I checked some
comment forum in footlocker.com and sneakernews.com. Most of people didn’t get
call and complain about the salesman only call their friends to let them get the shoes.
There were a few people starting to advertise for these shoes and tried to sell it with a
high price.
Observation two
January 25th
Time: 7:30am- 8:30am
Description of Location: my second observation is observing how a pair of shoes
sells from official channels. There are four most common official channels, which are
Footlocker, Finishline, Footaction and Nike. Twitter is also observation because Nike
use twitter to release the link that let you directly find the selling page.
Rules: Because when some limited shoes will sell online, the website will have lots of
viewers. So you have to login in to your account several minutes before the launch
time. Due to the number of people that want to purchase shoes, you’d better to have a
high-speed computer and high-speed internet. Most of time, after you add shoes into
your cart, you will wait several minutes to let website to confirm. You need to be
patient to wait the confirmation. If you close the waiting page, you will lost the
chance to purchase. Even through everyone want to have equal opportunity to
purchase shoes from official website, there are still some way you can easily get. In
the figure world of sneaker, there is a cheat application called bot, which can shorten
your buying time to increase your opportunity to get the shoes. This is a tacit rule in
sneaker’s world.
Actors:
Fans or buyer: people like me get up early, sit in front of laptop and keep refresh the
selling page in order to purchase shoes.
Observation:
7:30am: I got up early because the shoes will release at 8am EST. You had to login in
your account 30 minutes before to make sure you will not be kicked out. I opened
four major website which will sell the shoes: footlocker, finish-line, footaction and
Comment [YL9]: Even though I have no idea
about what are you talking about, I still think this
have many details.
Nike. The website showed a countdown clock. By the way, Nike had a difference
between other online seller, which is they will post a link on twitter at 8am. I checked
twitter and it didn’t post yet.
7:40am: I opened some pervious twitters that talking about this shoes. Some people
left messages that asking the price of this shoes and asking if it had a grade school
size. There was a people whose twitter name was Kyle Tittle said that the real launch
tip was staying in the bed and going to ebay when you wake up, gonna be impossible
via twitter link. This is a truth in some sense because it is pretty hard to buy it from
official channels.
8am: now it was 8am, the twitter post a link and I clicked it. I quickly selected my
size and clicked add it to cart. The website showed in the waiting page. At the same
time, I also did the same thing in other online store. I could open the waiting page in
Finishline and Footaction. However, I even could not open footlocker’s website and it
said there is a website error because the number of viewers.
8:05am: I still could not open Footlocker’s website and Nike, Finishline and
Footaction kicked me out from the waiting page and showed this item was out of
stock.
8:10am: now, I finally opened Footlocker’s website, I selected my size, clicked add to
my cart but the website said now the shoes current are all in others cart. So I refresh
their website again and again to see if there were some replenishment.
9:21am: Nike post a twitter said the kobe prelude VIII has sold out on Nike.com. So it
means you could not buy it from any online store.
9:30am: after Nike post this twitter, there were many people left comment here. Some
people complain that the quantitive was small, so it’s impossible to get it. Also, some
people sais some bad words like shoes were gone before the link tweeted...WTF. It
was really funny to see how people react.
Observation three
January 26th
to January 27th
Time: 10am to 8:47pm
Description of Location: in my third observation, I am going to observation how you
can buy a pair of limited shoes from ebay when you have no chance to buy it from
official store. Ebay is one of tthe biggest online store platform in the world. You
almost can buy anything you want include limited shoes.
Comment [YL10]: Move the people in actor.
Rules: the most important rule is the shoe is authentic. Because most of the shoes you
want to buy is limited, so many seller will sell fake or replica to replace authentic
shoes. The first thing you need to do is check the description of this item to see if the
seller says this is authentic. No one wants to pay more to buy a fake one, so as a seller
you must sell authentic shoes if you have a high price. For buyer, you also need to pay
the item quickly, the fast you pay, the less problem you will receive. In this case, the
seller opened a bid for this shoes, if you offer a highest price at the time the bid was
end, you will win this auction.
Actors:
Buyer(myself): Buyer like me already buy several limited shoes from ebay. Although
they are expensive, this is a way you can get it.
Seller: In this observation, I observed a people whose name on ebay is hoffmanj92
sell a pair of nike air jordan 1 retro high og.
Observation:
Jan 25th
, 10am: in order to do this observation and also buy a pair of shoes that I
dream, I search this shoes from ebay and find a appropriate item. A ebay member
hoffmanj92 opened a bid for air jordan 1 retro with a price $0.99. This item started
from January 23rd
and ended on January 26th
at 17:46:13 PST.
10:10am: I checked some information about whether the shoes is authentic, after I
made sure about that, I followed the seller and wait for place bid. The reason I did this
is when you place bid at the last minutes, other buyer didn’t have enough time to
place a high bid again, so you will get it.
10:20am: I noticed that there were some buyers already placing bids. The first people
whose name is O***J placed a bid 26 minutes after the seller opened the bid with a
price of $200. Now the highest bid was $360.
3pm to Jan26th, 8pm: I checked this bid serval times during these 23 hours but no one
placed a high bid. The highest bid was still $360, so maybe many buyer had same
thought with me, which was place at the last minutes.
8:45pm: now, it was the last one minutes for this bid, I could not wait and place a bid
with $370. After 10 seconds, another buyer place $375. Five seconds later, a new bid
came out with $380. During the last one minutes, this bid became more competitive.
There were seven buyer placed bid and I became the winner with $405 after a
successfully place the highest bid in the last two second.
Comment [YL11]: Add some actors about bid
shoe with you at the same time.
Comment [YL12]: This observation show pretty
good process and details how you buy a shoe.
Interview:
I interviewed my friend Vincent. He is in Wisconsin, so I interview him by phone.
1) Are you a sneaker? If you are, how long have you been a sneaker?
Yeah, of course I am a sneaker. I have been a sneaker for six years.
2) Why do you want to be a sneaker?
Em. This is a long story. I bought my first pair of shoes when I was a senior in
middle school. At that time, I started to play basketball and watched NBA. Every time
I saw those players wear cool shoes and played well, I dreamed that one day I can
play like them or wear like them. So I bought my first sneaker, I still remembered it
was Jordan 20 team. After I bought some sneakers, I started to understand the culture
of sneakers and the sneakers didn’t only wear it to only play basketball, it also became
a kind of fashion and I do love shoes. That’s why a wan to be a sneaker.
3) How do you collect information about sneaker, from website or magazine?
Actually, I get information more than that. You know there are many way you can
get sneaker information. For example, there are some apps in the apple store, so if you
have an iphone you can download and most of them are free. They will give you
enough information of sneaker and you can check it whenever you want. I also get
news from sneakernews.com, twitter or instagram, there are many people talking
about shoes today, so you can get it in many ways.
4) How many collections do you have?
I don’t know, man. I do have a lot of shoes but I never count it. Maybe 70 or 80.
5) Where do you get them?
One third of them get from Nike or some online store like that. Others are getting
from ebay or some personal retail store.
6) Can you give us some suggestions for someone who want to be a sneaker?
Sure. First of all i money, you know. Being a sneaker need to collect shoes. And
most of them are not cheap, so you must have enough money to support you keep
working on it. Second are friends. Having more friends in this circle will help you a
Comment [YL13]: The interview is good, it is
very describe.
lot. More friends mean you will have more opportunities than others to get what you
what. So trying to get more friends will do help you.