Assignment two reflection

Assignment two was a really difficult assignment. We was told to do many researches about our figure world that we discussed on assignment one. The strength that I have is I have a clear idea about what I research. In last assignment, I did a good job on discussing my sneaker figure world. And also I think I pick a topic which is very specific, so I have a clear idea about how to research. I talk about how basketball sneakers improve basketball player’s performance from different aspects. I mention how different technology and design that use in different part of sneaker effect, which I think it can give reader a good introduction. But because my topic is specific, so there are not many research materials that I can find I use in my own paper. I only find no more than 12 resources that are relative to my topic and some of them didn’t give enough evidences to support my opinion.

My peers give me many useful comments. For instance,I write “No matter where you go, basketball would still be a trend.” some of my peers think it’s better to use “is a trend” . They also said my literature review and entering the conversation are detailed, so they can easily understand what I am talking about. This time is not like the first time workshop. It was not easy to give comments. Everyone write a lot of data or information that research from outside which most of them are very professional, so we can not give our opinions to judge whether it was good or not. Also I think this time everyone write almost 12 or more pages, so we all feel tired after finishing read all this staff. So it lets us brain ger slow and hard to analysis and give our ideas.

In the final paper, I have four major parts and I add heads on each on them. I briefly summarize the main points of the article, and describe how the article shapes your viewpoint. I talk about how I change my mind after I do all the research. I explain how your views intersect, contradict, or complicate what your sources have to say. Paper incorporates at least 10-12 different reputable resources on your subject. In order to above and beyond the guidelines, I add some pictures that can help me explain my idea. I add picture about the first pair of basketball sneaker, different part of shoes and different technology. I tried to find some videos that maybe someone do a lab about basketball shoes improve player’s performance but I can’t find anything. I think this paper is hard to do more thing. This paper should be a little professional, so everything we do is how to use researches that we find to organize our idea and spread it. We can not add more things like last assignment.