audience feedback
TRANSCRIPT
• I showed my first draft of the front page, contents page and double page spread to a people that would fit my target demographic. This was to see if the product would be suitable for its audience and to highlight anything that could be changed in their oppinion.
• There was a largely positive reaction to my production work. Most people said that it does in fact look like a successful music magazine to them and that they felt the front page was very eye catching
• The main issues were that the Double page spread contained some spelling mistakes that I had not noticed Moreover they felt that the front page had too much free space and that it should be filled with more text