bi- ghost story

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F A Frishtenine E4pefience The stars - dqnced - p\q{u\ \ {h , sending their faithtully dim z o F rJ a o d F 2 4 light down. The air srnefled {."s}l "t\t. {he . I stepped out into the co\d , {qrk n\a h I through my throat, my * bcee{t dtstipetl^g from a cloud of steam. I wrapped myself more tightly into iny black cape, and ventured forward into the night. The sounds of my +qql- cru+rrv +he ?ebt\es * *rn 4ecn qoth , the ravens spilling out their haunting call, my own breath quivering in the icy atmosphere - these noises chilled me even further. Shook "l$ Stinc qqd {roze E' hQqr\. Asf apnrooct?d jh" t increasingthespeedofmywalkinglstartedto $ee\ a bit _{rtg}t_tr,cO I couldn't hear anything apart from my footsteps and the one behind me. Yes, the one behind me, I looked back, saw no one and started walking backwards. The - \iq.hts wer€ 0+t and there was nobody else around. It was except for {he {q\r\t t\ght bf \hr Again I heard another sound of iootsteps. They became louder and louder which gave me the idea of someone corning closer. I stopped. I looked back. I saw no one. But I hsard . I leapt nact< in fright and neqrV losk ru loa\qnce approached the park I feel a bit frightened pitch-black I the faint light of the stars eerie voice whispering into my ears I entire park lights were off neady lost my balance breath dissipating danced playfully in the moonlit sky feet crushing the pebbles underneath and froze my heart. gasped as the cold air sliced smelled fresh after the late evening rain cold, dark night

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  • FA Frishtenine E4pefience

    The stars -

    dqnced -

    p\q{u\ \ {h , sending their faithtully dim

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    light down. The air srnefled {."s}l "t\t. {he . I stepped out into

    the co\d , {qrk n\a h Ithrough my throat, my * bcee{t dtstipetl^g from a cloud of steam. I wrapped myself moretightly into iny black cape, and ventured forward into the night. The sounds of my +qql- cru+rrv +he

    ?ebt\es * *rn 4ecn qoth , the ravens spilling out their haunting call, my own breathquivering in the icy atmosphere - these noises chilled me even further. Shook

    "l$ Stinc qqd {roze E'hQqr\.

    Asf apnrooct?d jh" t increasingthespeedofmywalkinglstartedto $ee\ a bit_{rtg}t_tr,cO I couldn't hear anything apart from my footsteps and the one behind me.Yes, the one behind me, I looked back, saw no one and started walking backwards. The

    -

    \iq.hts wer 0+t and there was nobody else around. It wasexcept for {he {q\r\t t\ght bf \hr Again I heard another sound ofiootsteps. They became louder and louder which gave me the idea of someone corning closer. I stopped. I

    looked back. I saw no one. But I hsard . I leaptnact< in fright and neqrV losk ru loa\qnce

    approached the park I feel a bit frightenedpitch-black I the faint light of the starseerie voice whispering into my ears I entire park lights were offneady lost my balance

    breath dissipatingdanced playfully in the moonlit skyfeet crushing the pebbles underneath

    and froze my heart.

    gasped as the cold air slicedsmelled fresh after the late evening raincold, dark night

  • TI heard nothing. There was a shq.dOw tutk\rg beh\nd ,ne . At firsr glance Ithought it was a cat then I looked again and I thougbt it was far too big to be a cat. 4 rhirtr o$ {tor ran ufmy spine. I thought thal it could be a mugger, or even a murderer! Where ever I went I could still hear thefootsteps. t bE"" l" .rqttr t""ter to get away from the t\"\se "+ +hr {oo+stef .All the the exception of one, a few seconds latereven that sUeet lamp went off. The only thing that could be seen was {he

    '^ooh . . It wasshining brightly as though it knew I needed assistant in the midst of

    -y-esqgpgjro-l th e {"otgqolqnd.

    _\art - tq\siY whtsper * ** a distant sheet of tigh*niv cracLedt\tou0h .lhe sU

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    briefly lighting a g\avtV o,ppeanqncefloating directly in front of me. Its * {orduted, hq\{ oW ed -fq ce ** spooky that I could not even letout a scream what more, ran for my life. Instead I stood frozen for a while with my face u,ht{o qs, sheetandmybodywasbathedwithmysweat. Thenthe- Q"\sLy--e\-s-dgg 4tsappeertd in{o fhin qr.and not to be seen nor heard n0 more.

    I ran as fast as my legs could carry me and straight into my house. I locked all doors and windows and

    cudA\rd nJse[P - -

    onthesofa. rhe n\oodied hnqoe oftheghostlyfacewas still playing in my mind, as though it did not want to let go of me. I shut my eyes tightly and praying

    hard for protection and mercy. Obviously, lwas ntedllqlinq until lfell asleepand was awaken by a knock on the door which*em jo$rd rne .rP ftsq mV

    . Upon seeing my mother, I hugged her tightly and cried uncontrollably.

    my mother asked what had happened the night before and I told her my.

    with a- ho"yrd $hrfL_After lhad calmed down,

    .

    qnn$Vin$ encountoc

    A shiver of fear ran upstreet lamps trere brokenthe moonescape from the footsteps and hair-raising whisper.lightning cracked through the skyghastly appearance

    shadow lurking behind mebegan to walk fasternoise of the footstepstortured, hallowed facewhite as sheet

    bloodied imagemeditatingpetrifying dream

    cuddled myselfjolted me uphorrid ghost

    unnerving encounter

  • Later that day, my mother informed me of my ghastly experience. I was haunted by a young girl who wasmurdered there a year ago and the day I experienced her existence was her first death anniversary. I couldfeel a cold

    -chill in my spine and my hair stood on ends.

    I promise myself that I will never ever go out alone at night, no matter how important the need is-

    Introduction: Describe how was the situationr\e

    How was,.day like?

    How was the night?

    -the environment- the situation- the atmosphere

    Body:

    who wherewhen

    Describewhat happennext

    Describe howos your feeling?what do you see or feel

    -especially thesurrounding?

    describe how you feeldescribe the surroundingusing your five senses

    Bodycliniax

    what was theevent thatunfold?

    Describe what you encounter -describe the thing/ ghostly experience youfaced- how it looked like-what did it do you

    conclusion

    describe theafter event

    Describe what you did after the encounter - describe what was Yourreaction after the event

    - What was the conclusionlike?

  • Describe how ttre night was likehow you feel about the night

    I was in jubilant mood when my tuition class ended ten minutes earlierthan the usual 10pm. After packing my bags and saying goodbye to my

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    Describe the'who,when'o whgre'.

    where

    inside an old, run-down housein a cemeteryon a dark, empty streetunder creaky basement stairs

    on a storrry nightat midnightone hun&ed years agolast month during a full moon

    who

    a witcha goblina skeleton

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  • Describe about a scary or surprisingthing ttrat could happen on that night

    write a closure to your story

    I tumed and ran down the street...

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    L {"\d trnu hn\lvn {rs.n sd\tb \o

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