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Page 1: Christopher Columbus By, Zoct 6, Drewpat87, and game freak 97

Christopher Columbus

By,Zoct 6, Drewpat87, and game freak 97

St Thomas School
Excellent front page. The three graphic images show the danger of the quest, the speaker and the thinker that he was. You might make this better by adding animation.
Page 2: Christopher Columbus By, Zoct 6, Drewpat87, and game freak 97

His Childhood

When he was a child his father pushed him into a career of business. He began to sail on the trading ships and worked for Spinola and other families. During this he examined the sky and found that the stars were never the same and by this he drew the conclusion that the world was round.

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He first sailed the ocean blue….

After pleading with the King and the Queen for several years to get the ships to go to Asia, finally he got his way the Queen sold all of her Jules to get 3 ships made. Then Christopher went to what he thought was Asia to get more spices faster.

St Thomas School
First the mechanical errors. Jewels is misspelled.This would be a good plaace to add a few screens about what his theory was, why the Spanish were most interested in finding a new pathway to the east, more details about how he got his ships and his sailors.
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The voyage It was a long and hard journey and it got the men mad and annoyed with Columbus . They were tired and were sick of the sea. When they finally got there and met some of the weirdest people you have ever seen!!!!They were naked and were unarmed except tiny spears that were clearly for hunting.

St Thomas School
Explain a bit more why the men were emotional. Tell about the real hardships of the jounney. Journey and wierd are misspelled. (When ever you see your word underlined in red, right click to find the spell checker's best guesses as to the correct spelling of the word) You might want to insert another page here telling about the natives in more detail.
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The NativesWhen Columbus arrived he wasn’t the only one around. There originally were native Americans there. Columbus called them Indians because he thought that he was in India. They thought Columbus how to grow corn and stuff. If it hadn't been for the native Americans they never would have survived the winter.

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When they got back...

They were greeted with a warm welcome.then the questions came lots of questions came from the Queen and the King.then they all thought he was wrong and that wasn't Asia so this guy Balboa set out to prove Columbus wrong, and it worked…..

St Thomas School
The first sentence needs to be reworked so that it is a complete sentence. There is some missing infoespuchrmation, How many trips across the ocean sea did he make?How old was he when he made his last voyage? How was he rewarded by the crown? How old was he when other explorers began to doubt what he had found. What were there reasonings?
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200 years after Columbus died...

A book was published that said Columbus had found a new world . And now everyone can know about what Columbus did.

Until….

St Thomas School
Nice ending but some information is still missing. How did he die, and where, what happened to his family?
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How he died.

He died for an unspecified reason in Spain and his remains were buried in the Seville cathedral in Spain.

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The reminders

Today he is still remembered by people who have coins with something to do with him or visit statues of him.

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