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Clocking College Essay

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Page 1: Clocking the college essay

Clocking College Essay

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On your own essay, underline the

sentences in different colors.

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Does the essay have an interesting opening?

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Circle all the “ands” in blue

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Underline “they,” “he,” and “she” in green

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Triangle “but” in red

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Circle “I” in orange

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Box words that repeat in BLUE

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Circle in GREEN words that you think are

misspelled.

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Write RO for any run-on sentence.

Write SF for any sentence fragment.

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Circle verbs and subjects that do not

agree in yellow

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Draw a cloud in ORANGE around the

first word of every sentence.