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    One day Mr Wigney rushed to the library. He fell into a magic book.

    He started walking in Candyland and he came face to face with three

    bulls. They knocked him down. Mr Wigney jumped up and ran to the

    village. Mr Wigney told the villagers that there were bulls on theway. The gingerbread people hid in the house. Mr Wigney stood

    outside and wrestled the bulls. He ate something to make him

    powerful and he won. The villagers came outside and they cheered.

    Authors: Tyla, Tania, Jemma and Anber

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    Lost in the forest

    Suddenly Mr Wigney shouted Its time to go! They all put on their

    heavy backpacks and neon walking shoes and hopped into the car.

    They were so excited that they laughed their heads off. They arrived

    at the rain forest but they read the map the wrong way so they all

    went in different directions. They all wandered off searching for each

    other. Carefully they walked in case there was a snake. Unfortunately

    a snake had already spotted them. Slowly the Inspector Gadgets

    used their weapons to destroy him. Sully forgot he had the map in

    his bag. He checked his bag for his drink bottle then he saw the map.

    Authors: Leo, Aidan, Thanuri and Mckayla

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    Moon Disco Ball City

    Yesterday Mr Wigney went to the moon but it wasnt a real moon, it

    was a disco ball moon. He landed on the bright disco ball and metfour aliens. The aliens names were Sticho, Max, Danco and Boogieo.

    Boogieo said Boogie, boogie, boogie, while dancing. Max said to

    Mr Wigney that he should come on in and join the party and Sticho

    said Where are you from? Mr Wigney saw a hole in the disco ballmoon and water came out of the hole. Just that second the water

    got bigger and bigger and it badly damaged the city. So he rushed to

    the city and grabbed heavy bricks and tried to get to the hole but the

    water kept pushing him back. So he finally ran straight forward and

    blocked the hole and built a little water museum with the aliens.

    Dont have any water parties in the museum! he said and they all

    started to laugh really, really hard.

    Authors: Lily, Summer V, Jett and Norman

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    Bang! Crash! Went the heavy waves. Bart and Homer sprinted across

    the sand. Bart and Homer were swimming in boiling water and

    walking on freezing sand. There looked to be a storm approaching.

    With lightening flashes that danced across the water and thethunder was like a bowling alley. Rays of sunshine appeared and

    suddenly the grainy sand was sizzling and the water was icy. That is

    how Bart and Homer remembered the beach trip.

    Authors: Tate, Moeen, Riley and Mrs Mac

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    The Bad Dog

    Mr Wigney was going to go home and BANG!... the dangerous

    potion was gone. It was a mystery! Who took it? He was so worriedabout where the potion and his dog went. So he tried to call the

    cops. But his dog was drinking the potion. Luckily the potion only

    had an effect on humans. The dog thought he was a chicken.

    Authors: Kyla, Noah, Kayley and Ethan

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    Why the water went away

    On a brilliant planet called Paradise, Mr Wigney was having a

    holiday. Until he got trapped in a cave with his cuddly teddy bear

    called Teddles. Issey and Larra told Beach Girl and Sea Girl that Mr

    Wigney was trapped in a cave. Help! Help! cried Mr Wigney. Oh

    no! screamed Sea Girl, The water is going away! Oh no!

    shouted Sand Girl, My sand is disappearing! Oh look, said BeachGirl theres a rock with eyes and a mouth! Oh thats my pet.

    sniffed Issey. Rockey? asked Lara. Yes its rocky. said Issey. Thats

    our pet we lost a while ago. I can get the water back. said Rockey.

    Give me my collar. So they gave it to him and the water appeared.Ill jump on the rocks! said Sand Girl. The sand appeared and

    because it appeared Mr Wigney was free. Phew! said Mr Wigney.

    Authors: Elizabeth, Jayme, Mia and Summer G

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    The Cadbury Chocolate Factory

    Ahhh Mr Wigney, Mr Kornfeld, Miss Mc Connon and Miss Coath

    screamed when they walked in. The chef stomped in and yelled.

    What are you doing here and why? We are just here to

    visit. Suddenly a storm hit a tree and it fell on the

    factory. Everybody in the factory was injured besides the chef

    because he was rushed into his car. Because it was raining thefactory got flooded so the people had to swim. All the workers in

    the factory ran under a tree. The chef called the builders to the

    factory. Soon everyone evacuated out of the factory to go

    home. Finally the strong builders came and fixed the factory. Thenthey were happy.

    THE END

    Authors: Jas, Talia, Ali and Kaine

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    The Lollies Rainbow Palace

    Mr Wigney goes under the sea and sees a Palace. It was made out of

    Lollies. He was amazed by the Lollies. There was a magical rainbow

    that made everything right and they fixed everything

    right. Somebody came down and ate the Lollies from the

    palace. Then, suddenly the palace came down. The magical rainbow

    comes back and the evil men never came back again.

    THE END

    Authors: Ella, Grace, Tyler and Latariah

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    Our Adventure

    Mr Wigney had a decision to make. His friends said I will come with

    you if you got under water. If you stay up here I want to stay with

    you. I will go under water. Suddenly Mr Wigney lost his phone. He

    was worried about his black phone in the water. He found four kids

    names Kayla, Layla, Brodie and Natalie. The four kids dived in. Layla

    grabbed the phone. So the kids dieved down and gave the phone

    back.

    Layla, Brodie, Natalie, Kayla

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    The Magical Park

    Mr Wigney went for a spooky walk in the freaky forest looking forwoods. Suddenly he was lost and couldnt find his way home. Gently

    he fell over a big stick and hurt his ankle very hardly. Although a

    friendly dog came running up.

    Oh no he yelled very loudly tears dripping down from his eyes.

    Meanwhile his legs got very tired. Slowly he walked and walked.

    Finally a mysterious stone shivered and shone. A magical park

    appeared from the stone. Suddenly Mr Wigney saw a map of the

    world. Then he found his house and appeared in the backyard where

    he made a fire. He cheered and danced around because he found hisway home!

    Authors: Alicia, Shania, Ryan, Aryan

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    Mr Wigneys Adventure

    Suddenly Mr Wigney was tip toeing through the creepy forest. He

    dropped his very special drink bottle!

    When he was quickly tiptoeing through the creepy forest until he got

    stuck in a ginormous spider web.

    We heard him screaming loudly and rustling in the sticky spider web.

    The movement set off our fluffy dogs alarm. Macey, Ethan and

    Linuki rescued Mr Wigney with a super dog.

    Authors: Macey, Ethan, Linuki

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    Mr Wigney Saves the Baby Minions

    There once was a man called Mr Wigney. He just got up then he

    looked out the big window and saw a space ship full of baby purple

    minions. The purple baby minions took Mr Wigney to the bomb

    yard. They were eating the tnts and bombs. But Mr Wigney stopped

    them! Next quickly Mr Wigney got ready then he ran outside and

    said What are you doing? The purple baby minions quickly cried

    Were Hungry.

    Authors: Tana, Summer, Lachlan, Alahna