Daily Oral Language Week 2Grade 11 Proofreading Sentences 6

a. last Summer brian attended a six week course at georgetown university he had morning classes and worked at the chinese embassy every afternoon

b. my Sister she hasnt never missed mystery a series on Public Television every thursday at 900 PM

Daily Oral Language Week 2Grade 11 Corrected Sentences 6

a. Last summer Brian attended a six-week course at Georgetown University; he had morning classes and worked at the Chinese Embassy every afternoon.

b. My sister [She] has never [hasn’t ever] missed Mystery, a series on public television every Thursday at 9:00 P.M.

Daily Oral Language Week 2Grade 11 Proofreading Sentences 7

a. soccer is different than american football in several ways the shape of the ball the parts of the body used in play and the position of goals on the field

b. the prices of european imports will raise in the united state prof rossicone states because the value of the dollar has decreased

Daily Oral Language Week 2Grade 11 Corrected Sentences 7

a. Soccer is different from American football in several ways: the shape of the ball, the parts of the body used in play, and the position of the goals on the field.

b. “The prices of European imports will rise in the United States,” Prof. Rossicone stated, “because the value of the dollar has decreased.”

Daily Oral Language Week 2Grade 11 Proofreading Sentences 8

a. rear window is the more suspenseful movie i have ever saw esther remarks at seans party

b. ayeesha did you know that the st lawrence seaway connects montreal canada and lake ontario

Daily Oral Language Week 2Grade 11 Corrected Sentences 8

a. “Rear Window is the most suspenseful movie I have ever seen,” Esther remarked at Sean’s party.

b. Ayeesha, did you know that the St. Lawrence Seaway connects Montreal, Canada, and Lake Ontario?

Daily Oral Language Week 2Grade 11 Proofreading Sentences 9

a. three officers of the hiking club decided between theirselves when the trip would occur irregardless of what other members thought

b. in her office mary gauchet noticed a box of dictionaries they were delivered their earlier by mistake

Daily Oral Language Week 2Grade 11 Corrected Sentences 9

a. Three officers of the Hiking Club decided among themselves when the trip would occur, regardless of what other members thought.

b. In her office Mary Gauchet noticed a box of dictionaries that had been delivered there earlier by mistake.

Daily Oral Language Week 2Grade 11 Proofreading Sentences 10

a. the painting two angels appeared on the christmas card this greeting was inside holiday joy to you and yours

b. after rowing to the apostle islands us boys laid in the sun on a beach beside lake superior

Daily Oral Language Week 2Grade 11 Corrected Sentences 10

a. The painting Two Angels appeared on the Christmas card; this greeting was inside: “Holiday joy to you and yours!”

b. After rowing to the Apostle Islands, we boys lay in the sun on a beach beside Lake Superior.