day 5 edit and display - east ayton community primary school
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DAY 5
Edit and display instructions
Sequence of writing: Instructions x 2 weeks
Immersion
Analyse instructions
Writing skills
Plan instructions
Write instructions
Edit and present instructions for display
Today you will edit and present your instructions
• Yesterday you wrote your instructions.
• Today you will edit these and add pictures so they can be displayed in class at school.
• When you have finished editing, please send a final photo so I can print and share with the whole class.
Edit
Check you have included the following genre features:
• Main title
• Opening paragraph
• List of equipment using bullet points
• Method using numbered steps in chronological order (the order you do them)
Edit
Check you have included the following writing features:
• Prepositions
• Adjectives to expand nouns
• Imperative (bossy) verbs
• Time adverbials
• Place and how adverbials at the front and end of sentences
Edit
The box below shows you which writing skills each group needs to focus on.
Take a photo
• Take a photo of your final instruction and send them to me. I will print these and put them on display in the classroom.
• I can’t wait to see them!