development on front cover
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Picture takes too much attention away from the main image
Fill this blank area
Layout of pugs does not look professional
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Change colour of this
Change font to make more variety
This seems in an odd place and doesn’t look right
Masthead is not following Codes and conventions
Brits is a pop music award – this is an alternative magazine
White background on barcode does not fit in with the main background
Tagline does not look ‘right’
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The angle here looks a lot better – more professional
Red price code does not follow the usual conventions
Looks a lot fuller and professional
Say in what?
Masthead still needs to be larger
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At the last moment I looked at using this other picture – primarily meant to be used on my contents page on the front cover because I felt at first it looked more professional. In reflection on this decision, I do not think number 2 follows the genre of alternative and looks more like a pop magazine and I think number 1 is bolder and looks more fun.
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Slight adjustments were made here such as lining up the puff, adding ‘hot gossip’ and making the masthead larger
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It has taken a lot of development – peer assessment, asking my target audienceand many people to create this completed magazine.
Here is VIDA: