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DOCTOR WHO

SERIES 12

EPISODE SEVEN

CAN YOU HEAR ME?

PROGRAMME NUMBER: DRAA740R/01

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10:00:00 BBC WORLDWIDE STING

10:00:05 EXT. DISTANT GALAXY

RAKAYA

Can you hear me?

10:00:13 EXT. ALEPPO – EVENING

10:00:13 Music in ‘M1 Let Me Back In’

DMP: The sun is setting over the beautiful ancient city of Aleppo.

It is a breath taking sight.

CAPTION: ALEPPO, SYRIA, 1380.

We move down from the overhead view, down into the lanes and alleys

and the gorgeous architecture, down the exterior wall of a building,

and land with a girl running amongst the markets - slamming against

a beautiful panelled door, and rapping on it!--

CUT TO:

10:00:21 INT. DOORWAY ENTRANCE/ALEPPO – EVENING

MARKET SELLER

Thief!

TAP-TAP-TAP-TAP-TAP! Secret, urgent rap on the door. A panel opens

it and NURSE MARYAM (pronounced MARRY-AM, 30s), wearing a simple

tunic, looks from the other side.

TAHIRA

Let me back in!

MARYAM

How did you get out there?!

TAHIRA

Seeing a friend.

An unseen voice yells from the distance --

MARKET SELLER

I’ll chop off your hand!

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TAHIRA

(looks back anxiously)

I say friend, we're not that close.

Please let me back in! Please let me

back in fast?!

She flashes a big wild smile -- Maryam relents and opens the door

-- Tahira spills through the door --

TAHIRA (CONT'D)

Thank you.

CUT TO:

10:00:42 INT./EXT. BIMARISTAN/PASSAGEWAY/OCTAGONAL COURTYARD -

EVENING

Long, vaulted passageway with individual cells with latticed doors,

on either side. The passageway leads out on to an octagonal

courtyard. TAHIRA and MARYAM walk towards it. As they walk and talk,

there are another 10-15 patients milling about. Calm atmosphere.

MARYAM

You can't keep stealing from

merchants in the souk. They know

where you're from.

(Beat)

You tell me creating happiness is

important to my mental wellbeing. A

game like this makes me happy.

Now they're into the beautiful dusk-lit courtyard: Pale terracotta

stone octagonal courtyard adorned by lots of flowers and plants,

a water feature at the centre.

MARYAM

(looking up)

Time to go back in your room. It'll

be dark soon.

And now Tahira's mood changes -- as she realises.

TAHIRA

Have you taken precautions. Have you

told everyone?

MARYAM

Tahira.

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TAHIRA

We have to keep everyone safe.

MARYAM

Nothing is going to happen, Tahira.

TAHIRA

Of course it is.

(Beat)

I told you to tell them. I told the

doctors. I told all of you. They're

real.

MARYAM

I understand they seem real to you.

You just need to rest: sleep will

help.

TAHIRA

Sleep is when they'll come. I can feel

them coming. They'll be here tonight.

(Beat)

MARYAM

Rest well, Tahira.

On Maryam: reassuring smile. She's not going to listen.

We close in on Tahira. The worry is etched on her face.

CUT TO:

10:01:31 EXT. BIMARISTAN/OCTAGONAL COURTYARD - NIGHT

Moonlight. The camera tracks forward into the courtyard. Lanterns

of light cast geometrical patterns on the floor.

CUT TO:

10:01:37 INT. BIMARISTAN/CELL - NIGHT

TAHIRA in the doorway of her room. We move on in to her face.

TAHIRA

Maryam! Maryam!

MARYAM

Over here.

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TAHIRA

I told you to lock the doors.

MARYAM

We don't do that.

TAHIRA

Get everyone out. They’re here.

The fountain slows -- and stops. The sound of this world cuts out

to almost nothing. Tahira looks to Nurse Maryam beseechingly --

tight on Tahira's face --

And as she says this, a long limb, with a clawed hand and matted

fur snakes around Maryam's face -- and covers her mouth --

The sound of a wolfish beast mixed with a rattlesnake --

Maryam freezes mid-sentence. Her eyes widen in horror -- and Tahira

opposite her can't move, is frozen. So quiet.

TAHIRA (CONT'D)

I tried to warn you. Don't struggle.

They like it more when you struggle.

On Tahira's face as there's whoosh of wind and a BLUR of motion

as the Chagaska has snatched Maryam and is gone. Maryam's screams

echo down the corridor -- we close in on Tahira.

Tahira looks at the space where Maryam was. Tahira starts backing

into her room.

ANGLE ON: the camera moves low through the courtyard. Flashes of

shapes, contorted shadows, flickers of lights. There is the sound

of people running, things crashing, people screaming, the roars

of animals, things smashing.

And we're back on Tahira, so haunted and wide-eyed. She has seen

the horrors. She stands still, looking back towards the doorway.

And move in on her from another POV. As we move in, we can hear

alien animalistic footsteps, breath, movement, padding towards

her. We realise this is the Chagaska POV. It stops, right in front

of Tahira, as she stares fearfully.

PROFILE SHOT: Tahira takes up half the frame as -- a terrifying

creature leans in to her! Tahira face to face with a CHAGASKA. Its

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face is a few inches from her. Its mouth opens -- there are legions

of teeth. She is terrified. It looks her directly in the eyes --

a shot like the Alien Queen and Ripley, both their faces taking

up the whole of the frame. The terrifying layers of teeth and extra

jaws inside the Chagaska's mouth. This is truly the stuff of

nightmares --

Hold on Tahira's terror --

10:02:40 Music out ‘M1 Let Me Back In’

CUT TO:

10:02:40 OPENING TITLES

10:02:40 Music in ‘M2 Opening Titles’

10:02:47 Caption 'Jodie Whittaker'

10:02:49 Caption 'Bradley Walsh'

10:02:50 Caption ‘Mandip Gill’

10:02:52 Caption ‘Tosin Cole’

10:02:55 Caption 'BBC Doctor Who'

10:03:02 Caption 'Producer Alex Mercer’

10:03:04 Caption 'Director Emma Sullivan’

10:03:09 Caption ‘Can You Hear Me?’ Written by Charlene James

and Chris Chibnall

10:03:14 Music out ‘M2 Opening Titles’

CUT TO:

10:03:14 EXT. SHEFFIELD – DAY

10:03:14 Music in ‘M3 Peace and Quiet’

Overlooking Sheffield by day. Drawing into the city to

see the TARDIS materialising in the middle of the

street.

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CUT TO:

10:03:26 INT. TARDIS - DAY

RYAN and GRAHAM are by the door, as YAZ pursues THE DOCTOR round

the console. As this happens, Ryan's phone pings away --

THE DOCTOR

Here we are – Sheffield!

YAZ KHAN

Is it the right day?

THE DOCTOR

It's the right day --

YAZ KHAN

In the right year.

THE DOCTOR

The day you asked in the year you

asked, at the time you asked. You're

home. Everyone meet back here.

Tomorrow lunch time.

RYAN SINCLAIR

What you gonna do?

THE DOCTOR

(literally has no idea)

Me? Ohh, very busy. Very busy indeed.

Maintenance. Correspondence.

Correspondence about maintenance.

(console beeps)

OK. Not exact right time. 77 minutes

out. Late.

YAZ KHAN

(alarmed)

What!

And she's gone -- and the lads head on after her --

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Sure you'll be alright on your own?

THE DOCTOR

Finally get some peace and quiet.

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Graham smiles and goes.

Beat. WIDE: the Doctor alone in the TARDIS. Not sure what to do.

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

Um. Err...

(Beat)

I could always -- .... --- nah.

She stands still. Lonely Doctor without the fam.

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

Maybe I'll just nip straight to

tomorrow lunchtime –

WHOOMPH! All of the lights go out on the TARDIS! Power down. Mist

and smoke -- vestigial emergency lighting turns the TARDIS into

an ominous space of silhouettes and shapes and greyness. Like

colour has been drained.

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

What was that?

And an animalistic HOWL echoes through -- The Doctor spins, looking

around -- nothing there -- freaked out --

And as she does, behind her, in the doorway, the bald tattooed head

of a man GHOST-GLITCHES IN FOR A SECOND -- stare-smiling, a

terrifying fast image -- there, briefly and gone --

Before the TARDIS powers up again. Back to its warm lovely self.

She's freaked. It's not OK. An alert -- checks the screens.

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

The location for that noise -

Aleppo?!

(checks watch)

I've got time.

Pre-lap sound of a doorbell.

CUT TO:

10:04:42 EXT. PARK HILL FLATS - DAY

Establisher of the block of flats where Yaz's family lives.

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CUT TO:

10:04:45 INT. YAZ'S FLAT - DAY

SONYA at the table, laid for two, checks her phone impatiently --

as the door slams. WHIP-PAN to the door -- YAZ!

YAZ KHAN

Soory, sorry! Am I late? It is the

right day isn't it? Have you been

waiting long? Am I really late?

SONYA

Yes, yes, yes and yes. Mum and Dad

left hours ago. Whitby for the night.

YAZ KHAN

(incredulous)

Did you cook? Can you cook now?

And Sonya hugs Yaz. Yaz surprised for a sec. Then hugs her back.

SONYA

Hey loser.

YAZ KHAN

Hey no mark.

CUT TO:

10:05:12 INT. TIBO'S FLAT, SHEFFIELD/HALLWAY - AFTERNOON

POV: Through a FISH EYE LENS peep hole: RYAN.

The sound of locks and bolts being undone. A door opens and we see

Ryan properly, a smile on his face.

Ryan's POV: TIBO, surprised to see Ryan at his door. He's not quite

as cheery as we saw him in ep 1. Finds it harder to keep eye contact.

There's a disconnect between their energies.

TIBO

What you doing here, man?

RYAN SINCLAIR

Got your messages, didn't I.

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TIBO

It's been months.

RYAN SINCLAIR

Phone's been playing up.

TIBO

So are you back?

RYAN SINCLAIR

Yeah. Sort of. Not really. Few hours.

(holds up a bag)

I bought chips. You gonna let me in

or what?

TIBO

It's not a good time.

RYAN SINCLAIR

I got chips, though.

Tibo lets him in, reluctantly. Ryan steps inside. Close in on Tibo

locking the door with three heavy duty locks and bolts.

On Ryan -- OK, that's weird.

CUT TO:

10:05:58 INT./INT. GABRIEL'S FLAT/THE ORB - NIGHT

GRAHAM round a table with two of his old bus driver mates from the

depot (including GABRIEL, whose wife was out on the town in ep 1,

and FRED, 50s). They're playing cards, matchsticks for chips,

having a hoot, old mates --

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

(lays his cards down)

And that gentlemen, is a full house!

GABRIEL

What?!

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

I been practising. On my travels.

(as he gathers up and

re-deals)

Nice to see you lads. Although it

doesn't sound like I've been missing

much.

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GABRIEL

Nothing at all. I'd rather be on

cruises, like you.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Oh yeah, they're lovely, the boats.

Very calm.

FRED

And how's your health, now, Gray?

Alright?

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Yeah, it's good, it's good.

GABRIEL

And you're coping. Without Grace.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Have to, don't I. Traveling helps.

Means I don't get stuck in the past.

CUT TO:

10:06:31 EXT. BIMARISTAN/OCTAGONAL COURTYARD - NIGHT

The TARDIS materialises in the now deserted octagonal courtyard.

The door to the TARDIS opens and THE DOCTOR steps out.

Looks round at her new surroundings. Broken and upturned plant pots.

Crushed flowers. Debris. A battle here.

THE DOCTOR

Aleppo, 1380. Welcome to Syria. Now-

(turns to the others)

Oh, not here, are they.

She sees a plaque on the wall with the inscription: BIMARISTAN

ARGHUN AL-KAMILI.

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

Bimaristan. Means 'sick place'. Must

be one of the oldest hospitals in the

world. Course, Islamic physicians

were known for the enlightened way

they treated people with mental

health problems. What happened here?

You guys go this way --

(turns; stops; irritated)

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Who'm I meant to share the

interesting stuff with?!

And then a voice --

TAHIRA (O.S.)

Is someone there?

The Doctor heads in the direction of the voice, calling out --

THE DOCTOR

Friendly visitors -- visitor.

Where are you? I am coming to say

hello!

CUT TO:

10:07:22 INT. BIMARISTAN/PASSAGEWAY/CELL - NIGHT

THE DOCTOR walks cautiously down the passageway. Notes scratch

marks on the wall. Keeps on walking.

THE DOCTOR

I'm the Doctor.

And now there's sobbing/crying from ahead. She walks towards a

doorway in the wall -- inside there's a cell. She looks in, keeping

an eye all round -- it's dark -- there's a FIGURE in the corner

--

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

I've here to help.

CUT TO:

10:07:31 INT. BIMARISTAN/CELL - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS

THE DOCTOR enters the cell carefully. It's dark. TAHIRA is huddled,

bunched up in a corner of the cell. The Doctor goes over to her,

kneels by her --

TAHIRA

Stay away --

THE DOCTOR

It's alright, you're safe, I promise

--

TAHIRA

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No -- they took everyone --

THE DOCTOR

What happened here?

TAHIRA

(so wide-eyed)

You have to get out --

THE DOCTOR

Why?

TAHIRA

(terrified)

Because there's one still here.

She looks up to the ceiling. The Doctor follows her gaze --

THERE'S A CHAGASKA SPREAD ACROSS THE CEILING!

Bang! It drops down and ROARS at the Doctor!

The Chagaska magnificent in front of the Doctor -- sniffs the

Doctor -- so close in on her -- face to face close --

Tahira tense, watching, can't bear it -- but the Doctor is

preternaturally calm and curious --

THE DOCTOR

What are you?

TAHIRA

Leave her alone!

And -- whoomph! -- the Chagaska DARTS out the cell door --

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

(to Tahira)

Stay here --

The Doctor follows -- into the passageway --

CUT TO:

10:08:06 INT. BIMARISTAN/PASSAGEWAY - NIGHT

THE DOCTOR looks down the passageway --

Nothing. Spins -- checks the other way. Also nothing.

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THE DOCTOR

Gone! That was fast!

(sonics the air)

Nothing. Nothing at all.

Close in on the Doctor.

10:08:21 Music out ‘M3 Peace and Quiet’

CUT TO:

10:08:21 INT./INT. GABRIEL'S FLAT/THE ORB – NIGHT

10:08:21 Music in ‘M4 The Bloke’

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Right lads, ready? Here we go?

He deals out some cards -- as he does, the sound drops out, we're

in on Graham -- a high whine replaces the sound --

He blinks. Bit woozy. We close slowly in on Graham.

FLASH IMAGE: the two planets colliding.

Back on Graham -- shaken. He's just had a vision.

FLASH IMAGE: the planets becoming two eyes.

Again back to Graham -- freaked out by this! He's dealing cards,

his mates watching on, but he feels like (and we see it as if) he's

dealing in slow motion --

FLASH IMAGE: the face of the WOMAN in the orb. Her POV: the

atmosphere within it. Smoke and light and heat. The sound: the

constant rumbling.

RAKAYA

Can you see?

Intercut back to Graham. His eyes widen.

Back to the orb: the face of the woman clear. Staring ahead. Her

face tear-stained.

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WHOOMPH. GRAHAM IS IN THE ORB. Surrounded by the same atmosphere.

RAKAYA (V.O.)

Can you see it?

The panic in Graham -- like he's in a nightmare, can only move

slowly -- he's so trapped, unable to move -- a trippy paralysis

dream -- surrounded and trapped by light and smoke and noise --

RAKAYA (V.O.)

I'm trapped here. This is what he did

to me.

(Beat)

Help me. Graham, it’s close.

And he's back in the room -- with Gabriel and his other mate. The

cards are spread all over the table, in a mess. He looks to the

two mates, who are looking at him --

FRED

Think you lost count.

On Graham, freaked out --

CUT TO:

10:09:06 INT. TIBO'S FLAT - AFTERNOON

Chip papers nearby, RYAN and TIBO on the sofa playing FIFA -- Ryan

super-engaged, Tibo half-hearted, caring less. (We're on them, we

don't need to see the game).

RYAN SINCLAIR

Goes past one, goes past two --

(flick of the controller;

goes wild)

Oh, it's a screamer! Top bins! Final

seconds!

(the whistle goes; Ryan

can't contain himself)

He's done it! He's a legend, Ryan

Sinclair, FIFA legend!

(Beat; calms)

I never lost it. I’ve still got it.

But all through that, we've been closing in on Tibo, who's sat there,

looking ahead. Not engaged. Not himself. Not really even

registering Ryan's celebrations --

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Ryan calms, looks to Tibo -- wonders if he's offended Tibo.

RYAN SINCLAIR (CONT'D)

I'll make tea.

On Tibo.

ANGLE ON: RYAN in the kitchen. Raises an eyebrow at the mess. The

table littered with take away food containers. Dirty dishes in the

sink. Ryan looks to TIBO in the doorway.

RYAN SINCLAIR

Your place is normally spotless. This

ain't you.

TIBO

Mate, you ain't been around. So don't

tell me what I am.

Beat. Ouch. Ryan recoils. That hurt. And this isn't like the friend

he knows.

RYAN SINCLAIR

OK.

(Beat)

Listen, I'm sorry for not answering

your messages. But -- you ain't

yourself.

TIBO

Just finding things difficult at the

moment.

Ryan looks at his friend -- seeing this, concerned for him.

RYAN SINCLAIR

You talk to anyone about this?

TIBO

(tough)

No. And I'm not going to.

RYAN SINCLAIR

Alright.

Beat. Tibo doesn't deny that.

TIBO

There's something else.

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(Beat)

Promise you won't laugh at me.

RYAN SINCLAIR

You know I can't ever promise that.

TIBO

(smiles but it fades fast)

Last few days, I've been having

nightmares. Dark, messed-up stuff.

(Beat)

And there's this... bloke in them.

Keeps recurring. Like he's

--watching my dreams.

(close in on Ryan)

Waiting. In the dark.

Ryan leans forward -- engaged --

RYAN SINCLAIR

Alright, that's creepy.

TIBO

That's not the mad bit.

(Beat)

Past few days -- I've seen him. At

night. Outside the flat. Across the

hall.

(Beat)

In my room.

Close in on Ryan -- woh.

RYAN SINCLAIR

The guy that’s in your dreams, is in

your room?

TIBO

I knew you'd laugh --

RYAN SINCLAIR

Look at me. Not laughing. Cos I've

seen some weird stuff while I've been

away. Things you wouldn’t believe

were possible.

Tibo looks to Ryan -- grateful for that.

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TIBO

Would you kip here, tonight?

Ryan looks at Tibo -- Tibo is genuinely scared.

CUT TO:

10:11:20 INT. YAZ'S FLAT - MOMENTS LATER

SONYA and YAZ eating round the table.

SONYA

Can you say where you've been?

Where've they sent you?

YAZ KHAN

Madagascar. California. Hong Kong.

(Beat)

Gloucester.

SONYA

Oh, they had a thing in Gloucester!

Dad was going on about it, something

to do with Russians.

YAZ KHAN

It were nowt to do with Russians.

How's the new job?

SONYA KHAN

Sacked.

YAZ KHAN

Sonya!

SONYA KHAN

What?!

YAZ KHAN

That's the third time!

SONYA KHAN

People are really annoying. And they

hate being told that. I'm not cut out

for customer services.

YAZ KHAN

No kidding.

(Beat; delicate)

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Sonya, we could...stop doing this.

Stop marking it.

Beat. Sonya looks at Yaz -- the mood's changed; more delicate.

Sonya more vulnerable.

SONYA KHAN

I thought it was a good thing.

YAZ KHAN

Yeah, no, I just dunno whether having

a sort of anniversary dinner is the

right --

SONYA KHAN

(quiet; over her)

I still think about it.

(Beat)

Do you?

Close in on Yaz. Sisterly banter stripped away now.

YAZ KHAN

(quieter)

I dream about it sometimes.

Beat.

YAZ KHAN

(attempts to lighten mood)

Sofa movie after?

SONYA KHAN

What, so you can fall asleep halfway

through?

YAZ KHAN

I do not do that!

CUT TO:

10:12:28 INT. YAZ'S FLAT – EVENING

10:12:28 Background TV music in: Such Sweet Sorrow

TV blaring. YAZ asleep on the sofa. SONYA stands looking at her.

SONYA KHAN

(affectionate)

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Idiot.

We close in on Sonya's face. And we hear her voice as if in a distant

memory for her -- the voice tinny, echo-y. And Sonya's face worried,

absorbing, unable to keep this memory out –

10:12:44 Background TV music out: Such Sweet Sorrow

SONYA KHAN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Hi. I didn’t know who to call. We need

help.

CUT TO:

10:12:47 INT. YAZ'S NIGHTMARE

YAZ on a deserted country road. Middle of the Peak District. Yaz

is stood in the centre of the road, as alone here as she was in

the infinity space. She looks ahead. She looks back. Deserted.

Yaz blinks. Now there's a police car parked rakishly in the middle

of the deserted road. And a figure standing there, impassive,

daunting. This is ANITA -- an older police officer. She looks

ominous, judgmental. Close in on Anita. Close in on Yaz. The sound

of a man laughing ..

A figure distant in the middle of the road.

Now that figure appears closer: SONYA.

Two sisters facing each other.

CUT TO:

10:13:10 INT. YAZ'S FLAT - NIGHT

YAZ SLAMS UP startled -- in the darkness of the flat, but then --

-- a FIGURE in the corner of the room! -- the same face, bald,

tattooed -- barely visible in the dark but unquestionably there

--- Yaz recoils --

YAZ KHAN

Who are you? What're you doing

there?!

Looks again -- the figure gone. On Yaz: freaked. Did she just dream

that? Pre-lap the sound of laughter --

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CUT TO:

10:13:32 INT. TIBO'S FLAT/LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

RYAN is lying on the sofa, in TIBO's lounge. The clock ticks --

3:31AM.

When all the ambient sound drops out of the room --

CUT TO:

10:13:40 INT. TIBO'S FLAT/BEDROOM - NIGHT

WIDE: Tibo's bedroom. Tibo in bed. Room otherwise empty.

Pull focus to reveal TIBO sleeping in his bed. Move in slowly on

him.

WIDE: now there's a figure in the corner of the room. ZELLIN steps

out of the shadow in the corner of the room half-lit by moonlight.

Bald headed, tattooed. Terrifying.

He stands, distant from the bed, looking at it. Impassive.

Staring at Tibo, sleeping. Close in on Zellin, his eyes cold. His

body still.

He holds up his left hand, looks at his palm. Turns it, in the light,

looking at it.

And as he does, the fingers detach!

Schunk! All at once, all in unison! Four fingers, one thumb!

Fingers detaching, at the join to the main body of the hand.

They hover and float a couple of feet in front of Zellin's face,

elegant, gliding -- Zellin smiles, so cold, he relishes this --

The disembodied fingers glide elegantly across the dark moonlit

room, flat, almost pointing, towards Tibo, gliding six feet off

the ground, eye level -- weird, dreamlike, almost balletic --

They hover over Tibo -- slowly circling! Then, two of them lower,

as the others hover --

And PLUNGE INTO TIBO'S EARS!

Like USB sticks locking on! Stumps in first, fingers pointing

outwards! Freaky and weird and YUK!

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Tibo's body goes rigid and stiffens -- his back arching a little

-- his eyes still closed -- he gasps in his sleep --

And Zellin, all the time, watching, still, poised --

CLOSE: the fingers become translucent. And they fill up with dark

smoky mist -- emanating from within the ear --

Zellin watching it all. The fingers filling up with the mist --

He looks at his own hand -- the knuckle stumps. Raises an eyebrow

at them -- and FINGERS GROW BACK! The hand back to normal.

When the door slams open -- RYAN! Sees Tibo --

RYAN SINCLAIR

What you doing? Hey!

Zellin turns slowly to look at Ryan --

And as Ryan speaks -- Zellin gestures, minimally, with the index

finger on his right hand, a tiny flick of the finger almost as if

conducting --

And he, and Tibo, and the fingers -- all vanish! GONE!

On Ryan -- shocked, scared. He checks -- empty bed, no Tibo. Looks

round the room, no Zellin. Close in on Ryan.

RYAN SINCLAIR (CONT'D)

Tibo.

CUT TO:

10:14:32 INT. BIMARISTAN/CELL - NIGHT

THE DOCTOR sonic'ing the ceiling. TAHIRA with her --

THE DOCTOR

What's your name?

TAHIRA

Tahira.

THE DOCTOR

Have you seen those creatures before,

Tahira?

TAHIRA

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Not really. Who are you? I've never

seen you here before, Doctor.

THE DOCTOR

My brief is quite wide ranging.

(considering evidence)

No signs of those creatures outside

of the walls of the Bimaristan. So:

deliberately targeting a hospital of

vulnerable people.

TAHIRA

The place is silent. Where is

everyone else?

THE DOCTOR

How many people were there?

TAHIRA

Maybe ten or twelve patients.

THE DOCTOR

I'm sorry. I think those creatures

must have taken them.

TAHIRA

Taken them where?

THE DOCTOR

I don't know. And why did they leave

you behind?

(looks to Tahira)

How long have you been here? If it's

not a personal question, which it is.

TAHIRA

A few weeks.

(Beat)

I've travelled a long way. Seen a lot

of things I wish I hadn't. My family

were killed when I was seven.

(Beat)

I ran. Aleppo was safety for me. They

let me in here, because I wasn't doing

well.

THE DOCTOR

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I promise to keep you safe. We will

work this out.

(and her phone is ringing)

I'm really sorry -- message device.

(answers her phone)

Just in 14th century Syria. Is it

tomorrow lunchtime already?

INTERCUT: RYAN in Tibo's room --

RYAN SINCLAIR

I need your help. My mate's been taken

--

THE DOCTOR

(as her phone beeps)

What? Wait -- another call -- hang on

--

(presses button)

Yaz?

INTERCUT: YAZ in her flat --

YAZ KHAN

Doctor -- there was a figure in our

flat --

THE DOCTOR

(as her phone beeps)

OK, hold on --

(presses button)

Graham?

INTERCUT: GRAHAM in a corner of Gabriel's house (maybe the loo or

bathroom?) all alone --

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Doc, I keep seeing these images, of

planets, like they're being

projected into my head.

THE DOCTOR

Hold on --

(sonics the phone)

Call merge --

(down the phone)

Coming to get you all now.

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(and her eye is caught by

something)

And I'm bringing my new friend

Tahira.

INTERCUT: split screen Ryan, Graham and Yaz, all on the phone --

RYAN / GRAHAM / YAZ

(simultaneously)

Who?!

THE DOCTOR

There in a sec.

(hangs up; looks past

Tahira)

Aha!

TIGHT: the Doctor's face goes close to the wall. There are scratch

marks on it. She peers even closer. A couple of tiny, barely

viewable strands of fur.

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

They did leave something behind. I

knew it. This'll tell us something.

(she takes the strands

carefully -- then --)

Come on! I'll explain as we go, but

it might blow your mind --

And she races out -- we're on bewildered Tahira, who follows –

10:16:20 Music out ‘M4 The Bloke’

CUT TO:

10:16:20 EXT. SPACE-TIME VORTEX – DAY

10:16:20 Music in ‘M5 Your Worst Fears’

The TARDIS moves through the vortex --

CUT TO:

10:16:25 INT. TARDIS - DAY

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TARDIS in flight as THE DOCTOR's at the lab table examining the

Chagaska strands of fur -- as TAHIRA stands, still frozen in wonder,

looking round. GRAHAM, YAZ and RYAN on board now.

ANGLE ON: THE DOCTOR looking at the Chagaska hair through a

diamond-cutters eyeglass -- with tiny clamps attached to each hair,

as they sit on the TARDIS lab table -- on one of the roundel screens,

data is flooding across -- in Gallifreyan -- the Doctor looks

between the data, and the strands of hair --

THE DOCTOR

(as she works; distracted)

Tahira, this is Graham, Ryan and Yaz

-- Tahira's from Aleppo, in 1380.

I've explained the TARDIS, and the

fact that you're from 700 years in her

future.

TAHIRA

(looks from the TARDIS to

the smiling trio)

I'm really not ready for today

THE DOCTOR

(really cross)

No, don't tell me that cos you're

wrong --

(TARDIS sounds)

-- well I'm telling you you are --

TAHIRA

(to Ryan, Graham and Yaz)

Who's she arguing with?

THE DOCTOR

The TARDIS cos it's telling me --

quite defiantly -- that these two

strands of fur do not exist.

(pointedly, to the TARDIS)

When they're right there!

(to Tahira)

Those creatures that we saw don't

register in its databanks. They have

never existed and will never exist.

Except they must. Cos if they don't

exist, if they can't exist -- where

did they come from? And how?

(to Ryan)

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Tell me what happened to your mate.

RYAN SINCLAIR

This guy was in his room, dunno how

he got in. And his fingers, they like

detached from his hand -- and

connected Tibo's ears. It was like

they were draining him of something.

YAZ KHAN

What did he look like?

RYAN SINCLAIR

Bald, tattooed head.

YAZ KHAN

(freaked out)

Woh. Same bloke that was in the flat.

(Beat)

THE DOCTOR

(turns to Graham; grave)

And you -- a psychic incursion in your

head. Someone trying to communicate

with you.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Yeah, but it was a woman, trapped

inside this -- I dunno what. Couldn't

make it out.

(Beat)

And I saw, like, planets. Burning.

Like she was connected to them,

somehow.

THE DOCTOR

Someone's targeting us.

(to Graham)

Do you have any idea where those

planets might be.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Oh, yeah, if you've got an A-Z of the

universe, I'll stick my finger on it

straight on. No, of course I ain't.

THE DOCTOR

Right then. Better idea.

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(unleashing a panel)

TARDIS telepathic circuits.

CUT TO:

10:17:53 INT. TARDIS - MOMENTS LATER

THE DOCTOR is connecting GRAHAM into the TARDIS telepathic

circuits via cables, wires, electrodes all around his face. Very

steampunk and very high-tech at the same time.

THE DOCTOR

Stop fidgeting will you!

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Doc, I don't like it -- you sure it's

safe?

THE DOCTOR

You trust me, don't you?

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Do I have to answer that?

THE DOCTOR

Oy!

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Is it gonna hurt?

THE DOCTOR

No. Probably not. Maybe, yeah. Ready?

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

No!

THE DOCTOR

(at the console)

Focus on that image.

She activates the circuits. Graham closes his eyes. We move in on

him --

FLASH IMAGE: RAKAYA IN THE ORB -- GRAHAM IN THE ORB --

BANG! The console explodes! But the rotor starts moving!

THE DOCTOR

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Found something -- we're moving --

but where?

But it's really bumpy! Juddering and shaking, and lots of groaning

from the TARDIS -- this is hard won.

And the TARDIS lurches again --

CUT TO:

10:18:22 EXT. SPACE

Asteroid rocks and space debris hang in an inky indigo vista.

And as we close in slightly amongst them, a strange unusual object

-- in the shape of a scutoid, as if the scutoid were on its side.

Some form of building in space. Pre-lap: the sound of the TARDIS

materialising.

CUT TO:

10:18:28 INT. MONITOR STATION/MAIN SPACE - DAY

The TARDIS materialising: THE DOCTOR, RYAN, GRAHAM, YAZ and TAHIRA

step out into a dark sci-fi space, illuminated and defined by

magenta and blue neon. Walls stripped with screens and lights. Half

a dozen uniformed cobwebbed skeletons dotted about the place --

otherwise deserted. Spooky, creepy, ominous.

THE DOCTOR

(to Graham)

Deep space. Distant future. Is this

what you saw?

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

No. Nothing like this.

THE DOCTOR

Then why are we here? What did the

telepathic circuits lock on to?

RYAN SINCLAIR

If they were hooked into your mind,

no wonder we’re somewhere dark and

weird.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Oi!

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YAZ KHAN

D'you even know where we are?

THE DOCTOR

Half a galaxy past the Geskon Straits.

Very little out here. No

civilisations left by now. Doesn't

feel like a ship, though, we're in

geo-stationary orbit. But that would

be deliberate. So why here?

TAHIRA

(to Yaz)

Are we underground? Is that why it's

so dark?

YAZ KHAN

The Doctor reckons this is a building,

among the stars. We've come a long way

from home.

TAHIRA

That's impossible. Nobody can travel

across the stars.

YAZ KHAN

Unless you know the Doctor. She's

basically the definition of

impossible.

Tahira can't help a smile of wonder, amidst all her fears. Yaz

smiles back -- these two would be mates, in another time.

In the centre of the room, a circular space is marked out in a wall

of cyan light and steam/mist. The Doctor approaches it -- walks

round it. She reaches through it. Inside, several vertical magenta

beams, width of drinking straws, height of the room pop up. Half

a dozen of them.

THE DOCTOR

Control hub? Operator activated.

The Doctor steps through -- and as she does -- behind her, and the

group, a massive section of the main wall starts to open --

revealing a huge viewing panel.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Now you've got something there Doc.

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THE DOCTOR

Yeah, but what?

And it's showing: two planets, dangerously close together, near

to collision, burning with intense reds and oranges. The quintet

are awestruck.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN (CONT'D)

(transfixed)

Hey, look! That's exactly what I saw.

Those two objects.

THE DOCTOR

This must be a monitor platform.

Observing events in this part of the

solar system.

RYAN SINCLAIR

What are they -- planets? They look

they're falling into each other.

THE DOCTOR

Colliding, about to destroy each

other -- an extinction event.

(peers)

Except they're not colliding, and

they should be. What's stopping the

final collapse? Let’s take a little

zoom in.`

The Doctor plays with the pins of light - and on the screen -- we

zoom in and focus on a tiny bubble sat between the planets.

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

There's something there. Between

those planets.

RYAN SINCLAIR

What sort of something?

Close in on Graham -- as the image ZOOMS FURTHER: a translucent

orb in between the planets. Giving off a stasis force field --

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

Good question. Wow. The engineering

required to create that, and keep it

in plac. Brava, whoever built that.

Round of applause from me.

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GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Can you magnify that? Zoom in.

His certainty surprises them all. The Doctor and the others look

to him. He's transfixed, serious. The Doctor does --

THE DOCTOR

Why?

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

I think there's more to see.

The Doctor increases the magnification. A shape inside the orb.

THE DOCTOR

A tiny geo orb locked in place.

It blurs and increases on screen. A shape -- a silhouette --

RYAN SINCLAIR

Is there someone in there?

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

That’s it. She's trapped. That’s what

I saw.

On Graham's startled reaction. The voice in his head.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Doc – we’ve got to help her out.

RAKAYA (V.O.)

(in Graham's head)

Please.

YAZ KHAN

Hey -- seen this? This whole section

is covered in fingers!

She's been exploring -- and is now at the furthest wall panel. It

becomes more illuminated as she gets closer. It's like it's been

broken open, ransacked and re-purposed -- and now it's a wall of

vials. All full of thick black liquid. Dozens and dozens of them.

And to the side, alien graphics fizzing around --

THE DOCTOR

(running over)

What? Covered in fingers? And there's

a signal coming from them.

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(checks sonic)

Broadcasting to that orb. To that

girl. A psychic signal. Fed by all of

this. But what is it?

She sonics the section -- an adjacent part of the wall comes open

-- within it a smaller version of the orb, glowing with light and

chittering --

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

This place has so many secrets to

yield.

The Doctor -- examining the orb, but not touching. Then checking

the projections/screens which surround it, fizzing out

calculations and data in alien script.

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

This is the tech powering the

platform, powering that orb --

keeping it in place between the two

planets. And at its heart – a quantum

flux lock! A sequence of changing

combinations, hundreds of billions

of combinations every millisecond.

(looks to the screen)

Which would mean that Orb - It's a

prison. She's been locked in there.

And fed by that signal. Signal of what

though?

YAZ KHAN

(looking around)

Where's Tahira?

CUT TO:

10:22:11 INT. MONITOR PLATFORM/SECOND CHAMBER - CONTINUOUS

TAHIRA walks into this chamber -- circular, as big as the first.

Around the space, humans are clamped to the walls (in set-back

alcoves) held in place by hand clamps above head height. Lit in

shadow, unconscious. Including: TIBO and MARYAM.

TAHIRA looks to another section of the wall, a clear panel. As she

goes to peer in -- a CHAGASKA SLAMS against the panel, making her

jump! A Chagaska prison -- it roars and howls.

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TAHIRA

Maryam!

ZELLIN

D'you recognise them? The Chagaskas

She turns -- ZELLIN is in the shadows: imposing, calm, assured.

ZELLIN (CONT'D)

Your worst fears. My creativity.

As Tahira watches, the fingers from both hands detach -- schunk!

RYAN SINCLAIR

There she is! Oy freakhands! Get away

from her.

From the panel where Tahira entered, step RYAN, GRAHAM and YAZ.

YAZ KHAN

Plus, you can release all of these

people, right now. And don’t you ever

come sneaking into my family’s flat!

Zellin turns to them, as Tahira joins them, and AIMS HIS HANDS!

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Oh, that's not good --

And the FINGERS COME FLYING AT US LIKE ARROWS! HEADING FOR THE

SCREEN! Heading for the gang! As they hit -- WHAM! Go to black!

10:22:59 Music out ‘M5 Your Worst Fears’

CUT TO:

10:22:59 EXT. PEAK DISTRICT/DESERTED ROAD - DAY – NIGHTMARE

10:23:00 Music in ‘M6 Board for a Game’

YAZ in the middle of the road. Tiny figure in the huge landscape.

Absolute isolation.

Totally alone. The wind is whipping up. She spins round --

A figure distant in the middle of the road.

Now that figure appears closer: SONYA.

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Two sisters facing each other.

On Yaz. Confused.

SONYA KHAN

Do it right this time.

(Beat)

I won't be calling anyone. No point.

(Beat)

You're weak. You run.

(Beat)

Nobody's coming Yaz.

(Beat)

You're alone in the dark.

Yaz turns -- ANITA, ominous, daunting, in front of the police car,

as per the nightmare earlier is standing there -- but then she fades

away.

Yaz turns back. No Sonya.

YAZ KHAN

Sonya?

WIDE: YAZ is left all alone. Dark skies. Endless landscape.

TIGHT: On tearful Yaz.

YAZ KHAN (CONT'D)

(so quiet)

Anyone.

The tiny figure alone in the world.

CUT TO:

10:24:05 INT. FIERY DARKNESS - NIGHT

Flames. Heat haze. Smoke. RYAN -- shot through a heat haze, and

flames -- stands, waving away the smoke --

He looks around. Dark indistinguishable place. Echo-y. It's

defined around the edges by flames, flickering. The roar of it,

the sound of everything on fire in the distance.

And as he looks, he sees an OLD MAN, sat on an old chair. Looking

at Ryan. Couple of old men, identical to him, distant behind him,

also sat on chairs, looking on, impassive, unimpressed. In the

distance behind them, more flames.

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Ryan stares at the old man, who's staring looking at him.

RYAN SINCLAIR

Tibo?

OLD TIBO

Where you been, man? We waited for you.

You said you'd be back.

RYAN SINCLAIR

How long you been waiting?

OLD TIBO

Our whole lives.

RYAN SINCLAIR

What's all the fire?

OLD TIBO

The place is burning.

RYAN SINCLAIR

What place?

OLD TIBO

Earth. You weren't here.

I thought we were mates.

Close in on Ryan -- traumatised by this. He looks back through the

flames –

The faces of TIBO and the other two are now the faces of DREGS!

Dripping, jaws open, roaring, surrounded by smoke and fire!

CUT TO:

10:25:08 INT. CONSULTING ROOM - DAY - NIGHTMARE

AN IV DRIP. Dripping into a tube. We move off it, onto Graham

looking at it, confused. He checks his arm -- a canula. He's

connected to the IV drip. What?

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Why am I hooked up to this?

He looks over at the table. GRACE, in consultant's clothes, is

sitting on the desk. She's brisk, professional, disinterested.

GRAHAM is sat on the examination bed, as per ep 1. Confused,

disorientated. But it feels real, uneasy, not super-heightened.

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GRAHAM O'BRIEN (CONT'D)

Grace?

GRACE

I'm sorry to tell you, Mr O'Brien.

Your cancer has returned.

Close in on Graham -- thrown.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

What? That can’t be right. I had a

check-up. You're not my doctor,

anyway.

GRACE

This time it’s very aggressive.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

How long have I got?

GRACE

(checks watch)

Couple of hours.

Why didn't you save me?

Close in on Graham: so sad, so traumatised.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Let me try again.

CUT TO:

10:26:10 INT. MONITOR STATION/MAIN SPACE - DAY

Close on THE DOCTOR at work on the orb system --

THE DOCTOR

(chatting quietly)

For most people, a quantum flux lock

is unbreakable. A hundred billion

combinations every millisecond --

but I've got an app for that.

(Beat)

One sonic --

(looks back to the TARDIS)

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-- connected to the calculating power

of one TARDIS, shouldn't take long at

all --

(realising)

-- and I'm talking to myself again,

which means --

She turns. The place is empty.

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

The others aren't here.

And she looks at her arm -- the tiny hairs on her arm are standing

on end -- and the sound has dipped out of the room.

ZELLIN

Hello Doctor. I've watched you,

stumbling round this universe.

THE DOCTOR

I presume this is your doing. Who's

that girl in the orb?

And where are my friends? Who are you?

ZELLIN

I go by many names. My preferred, my

original is Zellin.

THE DOCTOR

No. Zellin's a mythical name -- way

beyond this universe. Zellin was

thought to be a God.

ZELLIN

I blush.

On the Doctor's horror --

THE DOCTOR

You can't be.

ZELLIN

We immortals need our games, Doctor.

Eternity is long -- and we are cursed

to see it all. The Eternals have their

games, the Guardians have their power

struggles. For me, this dimension is

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a beautiful board for a game. The

toymaker would approve.

(Beat)

And I do like this form. It's so...

small. To exist within molecules and

atoms is fascinating. I can shape

them -- regrow, mould my form --

(Beat)

-- to provoke fear from humans. As I

extract nightmares, from the scared,

and vulnerable.

(Beat)

Now that is a good game.

THE DOCTOR

(realises; checks the

vials)

Wait. Are you transmitting

nightmares? Taking nightmares from

humans, and forcing them into the

mind of a girl you've trapped between

planets?

ZELLIN

I've seen many races, Doctor. And the

humans are infinitely fascinating.

Infinitely pathetic.

(Beat)

But of course, you know that. We share

the same obsession.

THE DOCTOR

We are not the same.

ZELLIN

No. You are so much lesser.

(Beat)

You know the best part of humanity?

The thing that truly sets them apart.

(Beat)

The cruelty of their own minds,

directed towards themselves.

(Beat)

The doubt and fear. The endless

voices telling themselves they're

incapable and unworthy.

(Beat)

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Such an exquisite animal. Built-in

pain. And the repositories of that

pain: the nightmares.

(nods to the vials)

And the system orb makes a sound -- the Doctor's eyes light up.

ZELLIN

I presume that’s your doing Doctor?

Always interfering.I've watched you

blunder into this.

THE DOCTOR

Blundering. Yes, top of my CV.

Alongside plays well with others and

excellent tap dancer in a crisis.

ZELLIN

(fascinated)

Almost clever, but not quite clever

enough.

THE DOCTOR

Sure about that?

The Doctor glances at the orb -- glowing, glowing --

-- as the orb's glowing, shaking, trembling -- THE DOCTOR keeping

ZELLIN talking, buying time --

Cos -- look -- your prisoner? She's

free. Used your technology against

you --

And as they watch: RAKAYA materialises, balled up on the floor.

Zellin turns back to the Doctor --

ZELLIN

No Doctor. I used your instincts,

against you.

THE DOCTOR

What?

ZELLIN

I made the Chagaskas, targeted the

humans -- to entice you here.

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(close in on the Doctor)

I needed someone from this realm, to

break a lock from this realm. And only

one would do. You.

THE DOCTOR

(so quiet now)

No.

CUT TO:

10:30:31 INT. THE ORB

ZELLIN

You did find the right answer. You

weren’t asking the right questions.

RAKAYA in the orb -- begins to glow --

RAKAYA

My freedom --

And she begins to shimmer!

CUT TO:

10:30:41 INT. MONITOR STATION/MAIN SPACE - DAY

ZELLIN

This platform isn’t my technology. I

didn't make this prison.

(Beat)

She was always the more powerful of

us. The more dangerous. That's why

they imprisoned her first.

(off the Doctor's horror as

he turns to watch)

I just ride in her slipstream.

And as she watches, Rakaya slowly, gradually, opens up, rises --

and stands to her full height. Looks at her limbs -- looks to Zellin.

He walks over. He has tears in his eyes. So does she. The Doctor

watches on in horror.

RAKAYA

Release. After all this time.

And we're closing in on the Doctor's horror --

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THE DOCTOR

I don't understand --

RAKAYA

Let me make you.

She flicks a hand -- there's a white flash we

10:31:20 Music out ‘M6 Board for a Game’

CUT TO:

10:31:20 GODS MONTAGE

10:31:20 Music in ‘M7 His Eternal Partner’

We start on the two planets. Separate, in space.

RAKAYA (V.O.)

Two creatures from another realm

descended into the universe, where

they were worshipped as Gods. They

saw two planets, and laid a wager.

(Beat)

Which of them could bring their

planet to destruction first.

And now we move into cave paintings or tapestries. The story played

out through drawn or carved images. Old school.

RAKAYA (V.O.)

The Gods set to their games: sowing

chaos across the populations of the

planets. Wars began - between species,

then between the planets themselves.

The Gods delighted in the carnage.

(Beat)

It passed the time.

(Beat)

But slowly, the inhabitants of the

worlds grew wise. Realised what these

creatures had done to them. They

unified and fought back against their

so-called Gods.

(Beat)

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They set their own planets into a

collision course. And at the heart of

the collision, they laid a prison.

(Beat)

They trapped one creature, between

the planets, for eternity.

(Beat)

The other fled, vowing to return. To

release his eternal partner.

CUT TO:

10:32:23 INT. MONITOR PLATFORM/SECOND SPACE - DAY

THE DOCTOR's eyes open as she comes back to consciousness. Looks

to her side -- GRAHAM, YAZ, RYAN, TAHIRA, all unconscious, arms

chained upwards like the others. The vials of dark liquid poke out

their ears (not looking like fingers now, as they're full).

Dangerous, eerie, chilling. The platform is rumbling. FINGERS and

RAKAYA in front of her.

ZELLIN

Wake up Doctor. Welcome back. I hope

you understand now. I wasn't

torturing her with nightmares. I was

feeding her what she needed to stay

sane. The pain of others.

(Beat)

But even Gods need a helping hand,

Doctor. Thank you.

(Beat)

You all won't feel a thing when this

all burns.

RAKAYA

Yes they will.

ZELLIN

(looks at the Doctor)

Yes.

The Doctor looks along at the others -- unconscious -- the platform

shaking --

ZELLIN (CONT'D)

(to Rakaya)

Where now?

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RAKAYA

All those nightmares. I loved them.

ZELLIN

Humans.

RAKAYA

(so simple)

Earth. Let's take them all.

ZELLIN

Yes.

He clasps her hand -- Bonnie and Clyde, but creepier, weirder and

wronger -- and they disappear.

Close in on the Doctor. The horror! And there's one finger

remaining -- it hovers in the air, tauntingly --

THE DOCTOR

Oh come on --

She struggles -- as it zooms at her -- and we pull focus to YAZ:

CUT TO:

10:33:20 EXT. SHEFFIELD - EVENING

Establisher: aerial footage of Sheffield.

CUT TO:

10:33:27 EXT. DOMESTIC STREET - NIGHT

ICONIC: RAKAYA strides slowly down the centre of a long domestic

street in Sheffield. Walking like she owns the planet.

A BLOKE at a window of his house looks out, bewildered. Another

PASSER-BY on the opposite pavement looks at her strangely. What

is she doing?

ZELLIN standing at the other end of the road. Rakaya far away,

walking. We close in on Zellin admiring her -- and then, as we cut

back, she's there, closer to him.

RAKAYA

What do you think it feels like, for

them? To be such tiny, ephemeral

flashes of existence.

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(Beat)

They feel so much.

It must burn them.

ZELLIN

I think it does.

10:34:21 EXT. SUNLIT MONUMENT - DAY

The Doctor – her dreaming. Sunshine. A huge monument. Rumbling

sounds, all around. Move down the monument to reveal a VERY YOUNG

GIRL standing at the bottom of it. She turns, looking --

At the other edge of the monument's area, is THE DOCTOR. Standing,

looking confused.

We now here The Masters word’s from a previous episode ,

echoing throughout The doctor’s dream:

It’s buried deep in all our memories.

In our identity. Built on the lie of

the timeless child.

Close in on the Doctor. Close in on the girl.

CUT TO:

10:34:40 INT. MONITOR PLATFORM/SECOND CHAMBER - DAY

THE DOCTOR gasps awake -- the place still rumbling -- looks up at

her hands -- clamped -- the others awake –

THE DOCTOR

Right. Think this will hold me do you?

THE DOCTOR looks down at her coat pocket. She jumps, while still

clamped. And FLICK-KICKS upwards -- the edge of her coat pocket

with her boot.

Not quite. She grimaces and tries again -- FLICK-KICK -- and the

sonic is slightly visible popping up! But then back down again!

The Doctor frustrated -- grr! One more time. Jump! Kick! The sonic

FLIES out of her pocket UP --

-- and she grabs it in her clamped hand! SONICS! The clamp opens

-- and the other -- she's free --

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-- She grabs the finger shaped vial out of her ear --

THE DOCTOR (CONT’D)

Disgusting --

She's up -- stumbling as the platform lurches -- and FAST CUTS as

she PULLS the finger/vials out of YAZ, RYAN, GRAHAM and TAHIRA's

ears -- sonics their hands free --

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

(waking with a start)

I've just had the maddest dream --

THE DOCTOR

I know. You all have.

(holding up one of the

deadly fingers)

Tranquillising psycho-extraction.

RYAN SINCLAIR

I need to get Tibo --

THE DOCTOR

(sonics Tibo's clamps; then

the finger)

We have to get all these people safe,

and back in their rightful place.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Maybe if you stopped messing with

those finger things --

THE DOCTOR

(sonics the finger: it

hovers)

Tapped into the bio-organic code. My

sonic does fingers!

(to the finger)

Down.

(it drops to the ground)

Stay. Good dog.

YAZ KHAN

Ew.

THE DOCTOR

Could be useful!

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ANGLE ON: RYAN waking up TIBO -- (during this in b/g, YAZ and THE

DOCTOR wake up TAHIRA).

TIBO

Ryan. Umm -- where am I?

RYAN SINCLAIR

Don't freak out. But you're on

floating space platform, in the

gravitational pull of two colliding

planets, halfway across the universe,

cos of that guy who was stealing your

nightmares through creepy detachable

fingers.

Tibo stares at Ryan. Beat.

TIBO

Prank?

RYAN SINCLAIR

No.

TIBO

(Beat)

Take me through that again.

BANG! ROAR! A CHAGASKA roar! ANGLE ON: THE DOCTOR and TAHIRA by

the frosted panel it's behind. We can still hear it.

THE DOCTOR

I know why they didn't attack you.

Because they're yours. Zellin -- that

man -- created the Chagaskas from

your nightmares.

(Beat)

So they couldn't kill you, they

wouldn't -- because you created them.

(Beat)

10:36:18 INT. MONITOR PLATFORM/MAIN SPACE - DAY

THE DOCTOR, back with the control orb, as the platform judders --

THE DOCTOR

So, how do you defeat two rampaging

immortals? Answer: you don't. Those

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two planets, they spent millennia

trying to work out how to do it.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Motivational speech needs work, Doc.

And also a plan by the way.

THE DOCTOR

Oh, I've got plans crashing through

my brain, all the time. You want plans,

come to me. Identifying the one

that's gonna work. That's the tricky

bit.

And she glances down to the ground. Sees something: LOW ANGLE

looking up at THE DOCTOR: she beams! An idea!

Close in on her. And there's 12% of a thought starting to coalesce

-- big big smile --

CUT TO

10:36:48 EXT. DOMESTIC STREET - NIGHT

She stops right in the middle of the street.

RAKAYA (CONT'D)

This is perfect, Zellin. You've done

well.

ZELLIN

Take them all. Billions in one go.

Gorge on their fears.

And Rakaya looks at him --

RAKAYA

Why would we rush? We have so much

time.

(Beat)

To walk in their nightmares.

(Beat)

We can pass eternity here. If we take

it slow.

Close in on Zellin -- in awe of her.

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ZELLIN

Of course.

Zellin smiles.

CUT TO:

10:37:33 INT. CHILD'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

A tired crabby MOTHER tucking her ten year old CHILD into bed.

MUM

I've told you - there are no bogeymen.

Nothing to be worried about. Night

night.

She exits the room. Closes the door.

On the child in the bed, covers pulled up, head on pillow. Looks

round the dark, deserted room.

Child's POV scanning the bedroom. Nothing there. Now scanning back

the same way the camera's just been past, reverse motion.

And there is ZELLIN! Standing in the dark. Half in shadow.

ZELLIN

(whispers)

That's not true.

The hairs on the child's arms stand up!

Close on: the fingers detaching!

CUT TO:

10:38:10 EXT. DOMESTIC STREET - NIGHT

RAKAYA stands in the middle of the street -- BLACK NIGHTMARE MIST

is flowing out all of the houses, and directly into her --

ZELLIN stands watching her. It feeds her, it's like a drug --

But then, there's a howl of a Chagaska -- Rakaya lowers her head.

Zellin bemused --

RAKAYA

What was that?

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ZELLIN

I manifested a creature from a human

nightmare. It's calling across the

timewaves.

RAKAYA

A pet. I want to see.

10:38:40 Music out ‘M7 His Eternal Partner’

CUT TO:

10:38:40 EXT. BIMARISTAN/COURTYARD – NIGHT

10:38:40 Music in ‘M8 The Strength of Humanity’

ZELLIN and RAKAYA fade into existence, in the night-time

courtyard.

CUT TO REVERSE: THE DOCTOR stands before them. Iconic, heroic. RYAN,

GRAHAM, YAZ and TIBO behind her. In front of them, the orb from

the heart of the monitor platform system. It's glowing --

THE DOCTOR

Nice entrance. Welcome to Aleppo.

Very beautiful city.

ZELLIN

(suppressed fury)

How are you here?

THE DOCTOR

I am that little bit smarter than you

thought I was.

(Beat)

Now you listen to me. Earth is not

your play thing.

(Beat)

You're wrong about humans. They're

not pathetic. They're magnificent.

They live with their fears and doubts

and guilts. They face them down,

every day. And they prevail. That's

not weakness. That's strength.

(Beat)

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That's what humanity is.

(calls)

Isn't that right, Tahira?

TAHIRA

Yes Doctor!

THE DOCTOR

Why don’t you show them how strong you

are.

TAHIRA walks out of one of the courtyard spaces --

-- and a CHAGASKA jumps out of one of the opposing ones, howling

-- the gang flinch, TAHIRA doesn't. She points to next to her --

-- and the single growling Chagaska rests there --

TAHIRA

My Chagaska!

ZELLIN

How can you control it?

YAZ

Literally conquered her fear.

RAKAYA

Are you -- confronting us?

THE DOCTOR

Yeah. You immortals, so entitled, so

spoilt. Never clear up after

yourselves.

(Beat)

And you really should be careful what

you leave lying about.

She taps the orb with her foot -- the whole world rumbles! Dust

falls from the building -- the Doctor looks alarmed --

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

Oops. Sorry – I won’t do that again.

She sonics the air -- and fingers come flying through -- from

opposite sides of the courtyard.

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

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Just returning your lost property.

Thanks for lending a helping hand.

RYAN SINCLAIR

Really?

THE DOCTOR

Sorry, couldn't resist.

(to Zellin)

What's your worst nightmare?

She sonics -- and the fingers FLY AND SLAM into Zellin and Rakaya's

ears -- then she turns it on to the heart of orb --

THE DOCTOR (CONT'D)

Now Tahira!

Tahira drops her hand -- The Chagaska RUNS at ZELLIN and RAKAYA

As they do -- A blinding light envelopes Zellin, Rakaya and the

Chagaska --

CUT TO:

10:40:14 INT. THE ORB

WHOOMPH! ZELLIN and RAKAYA are transmatted, crammed back in –

As the light dies to reveal:

THE FACE OF THE CHAGASKA NEXT TO THEM! Bearing teeth, roaring!

CUT TO:

10:40:17 EXT. THE ORB

The tiny orb, in the shadow of the crashing planets.

TAHIRA

You made my nightmares real. Now you

can live with them. For all

eternity.

As we pull out, we can hear Zellin and Rakaya's screams --

And the howls and barks of the Chagaska --

And they fade off into silence. Stuck for all eternity together.

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CUT TO:

10:40:22 EXT. BIMARISTAN/COURTYARD - NIGHT

The light dies down -- leaving no sign of the immortals.

The gang look over --

THE DOCTOR

Gods, back in their box.

(the orb rumbles; she

kneels)

Need to get this back to the monitor

platform. And all those other people

out of the TARDIS jacuzzi. Come on!

She picks up the orb and heads back to the TARDIS, visible in the

passageway.

10:40:33 Music out ‘M8 The Strength of Humanity’

FADE TO:

10:40:33 EXT. SHEFFIELD – DAY

10:40:33 Music in ‘M9 On We Go’

Sunshine over Sheffield - establisher/stock footage.

CUT TO:

10:40:37 INT. TIBO'S FLAT, SHEFFIELD - DAY

TIBO

Slept like a baby last night.

RYAN SINCLAIR

Good job. You need all the beauty

sleep you can get.

TIBO

Oi, man's still looking fresh.

Beat. Both of them awkward, not knowing what to say.

TIBO (CONT'D)

You'll be going again.

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RYAN SINCLAIR

Yeah.

TIBO

Could've told me the truth about it

all!

RYAN SINCLAIR

Would you've believed me?

TIBO

Nope.

(Beat)

Bit more than just the world, you're

seeing. Know when you'll be back?

Close in on Ryan. He's finding it had to admit.

RYAN SINCLAIR

Not sure.

Tibo nods. He's a bit gutted, masking it.

TIBO

Don't make it too long.

(Beat)

I need my best mate.

(Beat)

I get a bit lost without him.

Ryan nods.

RYAN SINCLAIR

I get that too. I've been looking at

what might help. For my mate. There's

something I need you to do for me.

(Beat)

And you can't argue.

CUT TO:

10:41:47 INT. DOMESTIC FRONT ROOM, SHEFFIELD - AFTERNOON

A warm welcoming, shambolic front room. A small group of MEN. TIBO

is there, listening as ANDREW is regaling them with a story,

laughing at himself --

They're all grinning at him and Tibo looks around and dares to speak

(his first time)

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TIBO

I get down. And I shut myself off. And

it's like I'm paralysed with it. For

days -- and weeks. It's in control of

me.

(Beat)

And I thought I'd try to do something

about it. I went to the supermarket

just so I could talk to the cashier.

Get back to human contact.

(Beat)

But I got there -- and it's those

self-service checkouts.

They all laugh. Tibo smiles.

TIBO (CONT'D)

I haven't said that to anyone before.

I felt like, it's just me.

ANDREW

It's not just you.

Tibo looks round the circle -- and is so grateful he could weep.

CUT TO:

10:42:31 INT. YAZ'S FLAT - DAY

YAZ sat on the sofa.

CUT TO:

10:42:37 EXT. PEAK DISTRICT - DAY – FLASHBACK

CAPTION: THREE YEARS EARLIER

YAZ, 16ish, with a big rucksack or bag, crammed and overflowing.

She's sat by the side of the road (the same road where we've seen

her in the middle, throughout the episode). She's emotional and

upset.

ANITA PATEL

Hitch-hiking?

YAZ KHAN

(defensive)

No.

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ANITA PATEL

Just, taking in the view?

YAZ KHAN

I'm not breaking the law, am I?

ANITA PATEL

Nope.

(Beat)

Where you off to?

YAZ KHAN

Away.

ANITA PATEL

It's good there.

YAZ KHAN

Leave me alone.

ANITA PATEL

Can't do that.

YAZ KHAN

Why?

ANITA PATEL

People are worried about you.

YAZ KHAN

No they're not.

ANITA PATEL

Your sister is. That’s why she

called us.

(Beat)

She's worried you've left and are

gonna do something stupid.

(Yaz looks down)

I've heard things are tough.

(Beat)

Getting bullied at school. Grades

have gone a bit wonky. Parents don't

get what's up.

(Beat)

You must be feeling pretty trapped

and alone.

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Yaz looks at Anita, defiant and bleak.

YAZ KHAN

I'm feeling way more than that.

ANITA PATEL

That's better than the other way.

YAZ KHAN

What?

ANITA PATEL

Well, feeling things isn't wrong.

YAZ KHAN

I don't want your speech.

ANITA PATEL

I know. Terrible thing about being

older is, you have all this

experience, and nobody ever wants to

hear it.

(Beat)

Cos I know that there will be so much

ahead of you. Joy. Laughter, Love.

And, yes, pain and upset too. Cos

that's what a life is. The mix.

(Yaz has gone quiet)

What if: this moment, where you want

to run, away from everyone including

yourself, is just that. A moment.

What if we find a way to get you

through it and out the other side.

(Beat)

I've been where you are. Moments

change. Help's out there. As much or

as little as you need.

YAZ KHAN

I'm not listening to you.

ANITA PATEL

Would hard cash make a difference?

(Yaz looks up; bemused)

I'll make you a deal. Look me up, in

three years. If I'm wrong, I'll give

you fifty quid. I'd say more, but the

pay's rubbish.

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YAZ KHAN

Get another job, then.

ANITA PATEL

Can't. Love it too much.

(Beat)

But if I'm right, you owe me 50p.

(Beat)

Come on those are good odds.

Close in on Yaz, looking at Anita. And we match cut it back to Yaz

in her flat, in the present day, on the sofa, thinking --

CUT TO:

10:45:26 EXT. RESIDENTIAL STREET - DAY

YAZ walks down a street, checking her phone. Goes up and knocks

at a door. Waits. The door opens: ANITA PATEL. Bit older.

ANITA PATEL

Hi. Can I help you?

YAZ KHAN

Hi. You won't remember me. My name's

Yasmin --

ANITA PATEL

(in unison)

Yasmin Khan.

Yaz standing there, hearing her say her name, brings tears to her

eyes. She nods. And both their hearts are bursting.

ANITA PATEL (CONT'D)

I flippin' do remember you.

YAZ KHAN

I’ve got something for you.

She holds up a shiny gleaming 50p piece, between her fingers. The

light trips off it.

And Anita beams, the biggest, deepest most heartfelt smile you've

ever seen in your life.

ANITA PATEL

You wanna come in?

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WIDE: Yaz enters the house. The world carries on.

Pre-lap: GRAHAM's voice.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN (O.S.)

Thing is Doc --

CUT TO:

10:46:12 INT. TARDIS - DAY

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

-- I worry.

(Beat)

About getting sick again. About the

cancer recurring.

(Beat)

I don't know who to say that to. So

I thought I'd said it to you.

(Beat)

Seeing as you're a Doctor.

(Beat)

Once you have it, it's with you all

the time. Not quite a shadow.

I mean, my check-ups are all fine. But

it made me think.

(Beat)

I thought I should talk about it. Cos,

those nightmares, made me realise,

that fear's still there..

The Doctor nods. Beat.

THE DOCTOR

I should say a reassuring thing now,

shouldn't I?

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

Yeah. Probably.

THE DOCTOR

Still quite socially awkward.

(Beat)

So I’m just going to subtly walk

towards the console and look at

something. And then in a minute, I'll

probably think of the thing I

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should've said that would've been

helpful.

GRAHAM O'BRIEN

OK.

(she moves away)

I'm so glad we had this chat.

And he's grinning to himself.

ANGLE ON: RYAN and YAZ, sitting at the top of the steps.

RYAN SINCLAIR

How long is this gonna last, Yaz?

Hanging out with the Doctor?

YAZ KHAN

I don't know.

RYAN SINCLAIR

Is this our lives? Going from one

place to the next. Ignoring home.

I'm getting older. But without them.

I'm missing bits of their lives.

YAZ KHAN

When we're done, the Doctor can drop

you back whatever point you want

though.

RYAN SINCLAIR

But we'll have changed. And they

wouldn’t have. It’s like we're like

living at different rates.

YAZ KHAN

The Doctor said: we wouldn't come

back the same.

The Doctor springs up, between them.

THE DOCTOR

I was thinking -- Frankenstein!

RYAN SINCLAIR

What?

YAZ KHAN

What?

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THE DOCTOR

Did I interrupt? Am I interrupting?

RYAN SINCLAIR

No.

THE DOCTOR

Cool. You might need to change

clothes.

And she's off -- Yaz looks to Ryan.

YAZ KHAN

On we go.

RYAN SINCLAIR

On we go.

They look at each other. We close in on Ryan, as in the background,

the Doctor slams the lever.

10:48:32 Music out ‘M9 On We Go’

END OF EPISODE.

10:48:32 Music in ‘M10 End Credits’

10:48:32 End Credits Roll

The Doctor Jodie Whittaker

Graham O’Brien Bradley Walsh

Yasmin Khan Mandip Gill

Ryan Sinclair Tosin Cole

Zellin Ian Gelder

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Tibo Buom Tihngang

Rakaya Clare-Hope Ashitey

Grace O’Brien Sharon D Clarke

Sonya Khan Bhavnisha Parmar

Tahira Aruhan Galieva

Maryam Sirine Saba

Anita Patel Nasreen Hussain

Gabriel Everal A Walsh

Fred Michael Keane

Mum Amanda Liberman

Old Tibo Willie Jonah

Andrew Anthony Taylor

1st Assistant Director Guy Murray-Brown

2nd Assistant Directors Christopher J Thomas

Mark Corden

3rd Assistant Director Lauren Pate

Assistant Directors Jennifer Day

Christian Jeffcoat

Assistant Director Trainee Mathew-Lee Heath

Unit Drivers Paul Watkins

Jolyon Davey

Steve Darwent

Location Manager Gareth Roberts

Unit Manager Jac Jones

Location Assistant Kyle Yates

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Production Manager Delmi Thomas

Production Coordinator Sandra Cosfeld

Assistant Production Coordinator Jade Stephenson

Production Secretary Ellie Simmons

Production Assistant Ariana Scott

Executive Assistant Caroline Cook

1st Assistant Accountant Debi Griffiths

Assistant Accountant Rose Wasdell

Art Department Accountant Hywel Thomas

Cast Payroll Helen Searle

Camera Operator Mark McQuoid ACO

Focus Pullers Jonathan Vidgen

Steve Rees

Camera Assistants Dan Patounas

Scott Waller

Gwilym Jenner

Evangeline Davies

Key Grip John Robinson

Grip Ash Whitfield

Grip Assistant Steffan Allen

Apprentice Grip Harry Spencer

Script Supervisor Alana Marmion-Warr

Assistant Script Editor Caroline Buckley

Sound Maintenance Engineers Christopher Goding

Joe Malone

Gaffer Mark Hutchings

Best Boy Andy Gardiner

Electricians Gawain Nash

Andrew Williams

Gareth Sheldon

Stuart Gale

Construction Art Director Julia Jones

Art Director Nick Murray

Standby Art Director Cerys Lewis

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Set Decorator Vicki Male

Production Buyer Rosy Pearce

Assistant Buyer Billie Blue Williams

Petty Cash Buyer Hannah Miller

Set Designers Daniel Kennedy

Lauren Harper

Art Department Assistant Celyn Davies

Graphics Trainee Anya Kordecki

Animation Illustrator Nina Chakrabarti

Animators DNEG

Prop Master Paul Aitken

Props Chargehand Trystan Howell

Standby Props Matthew Ireland

2nd Standby Props Lewis Reece

Set Dressers Dewi Thomas

John Thomas

Anwen Haf

Tom Major

Storeman Lucy Hammond

Workshop Manager Mark Hill

Workshop Assistant Chris Slocombe

Concept Artist Louis Knight

Graphic Designer György Simán

Head Modelmaker Lee Radford

Prop Fabrication Penny Howarth

Practical Electricians Matthew Dunford

Robert Hearne

Standby Carpenter Colm Garrett

Rigging Shadow Scaffolding

Standby Riggers Colin Toms

Scott Williams

Construction Manager Mark Painter

Construction Chargehands Dean Tucker

Joseph Painter

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Carpenters Terry Horle Campbell Fraser

Dave Quinlan Kristian Tucker

Charlie Wright Chris Daniels

George Rees Jonathan Tylke

Dave Hobbs Stephen Crump

Junior Carpenter Matthew Painter

Construction Trainee Marcus Scholl

Construction Driver Darren Bousie

Construction Labourer Jason Tylke

HOD Painter Steve Fudge

Chargehand Painters Mark Reece

Lloyd Reece

Scenic Artists Chelsea Moore

Rachel Willsher

Assistant Costume Designer Simon Marks

Costume Supervisor Grace Brooks

Costume Assistants Andie Mear

Ian Fowler

Chloe Gauci

Costume Trainee Ashleigh Muza

Make-up Supervisor Emma Cowen

Make-up Artists Amy Riley

James Spinks

Junior Make-up Artist Hanna Lewis-Jones

Unit Medic Glyn Evans

Casting Associate Ri McDaid-Wren

Casting Assistant Ray Böhm

Business Affairs Elaine Evans

Kyle Parsons

Steve Robson

Talent Team Hannah Williams

Leanne Bowcott

Jeanette Sigsworth

Deborah Evans

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Clare Baker

Assistant Editors David SJ Davies

Hayley Williams

VFX Editor Georgina Careless

Assistant VFX Editor Alastair Gray

Additional VFX BBC Wales Graphics

The 2D Workshop

Post Production Coordinator Liv Duffin

Sound Designer Harry Barnes

ADR Editor Matthew Cox

Dialogue Editor Darran Clement

Foley Bang Post Production

Online Editor Christine Kelly

Assistant Online Editor Luke Stanbury

Music Recorded by Olga FitzRoy

Music Mixed by Goetz Botzenhardt

Original Theme Music by Ron Grainer

Title Sequence & Additional VFX Ben Pickles

Series Script Editor Sheena Bucktowonsing

Script Editor Fiona McAllister

Series Editor Rebecca Trotman

Colourist Jateen Patel

Heads Of Production Radford Neville

Jacquie Glanville

Production Executive Tracie Simpson

Post Production Producer Ceres Doyle

Production Accountant Rhys Evans

Supervising Location Manager Iwan Roberts

Sound Recordist Deian Llŷr Humphreys

Dubbing Mixers Howard Bargroff

Kiran Marshall

Visual Effects DNEG

Special Effects REAL SFX

Prosthetic Maker Suzi Battersby

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Casting Director Andy Pryor CDG

Music by Segun Akinola

Editor Agnieszka Liggett

Director Of Photography Ed Moore BSC

Production Designer Dafydd Shurmer

Costume Design & Prosthetic Design Ray Holman

Make-Up Designer Claire Pritchard-Jones

Line Producer Steffan Morris

Series Producer Nikki Wilson

Executive Producer for the BBC Ben Irving

10:49:01 NEXT TIME

THE DOCTOR

How about writing the most gruesome,

spine chilling ghost story of all time?

LORD BYRON

Tales of the dead.

BBC STUDIOS LOGO

10:49:15 Music out ‘M10 End Credits’

10:49:25 CUT TO BLACK