24Excellence
Excellence exemplar for 90878 Total score 24/24
Q Grade score Annotation
1 E8
The candidate has clearly exemplified thorough understanding of the text. He /
she has provided a complete answer as to why Sophie could not see her boyfriend including the idea of helping out every day on her grandparents’ farm. She / he has also included Jack’s reasons for coming to France as well as a detailed explanation of how Sophie is feeling and her likely path of action for getting to know Jack.
2 E8
The candidate’s high level of understanding is once again demonstrated in this response. A detailed understanding of directions, pronouns, adverbs is evident here. The candidate’s accuracy is exemplary and all details that are relevant are included.
3 E8 The candidate has demonstrated thorough understanding of the passage including accurate rendering of tenses, double verbs (j’ai demandé à ma mère de me laisser partir), taking detailed account of pronouns, adjectives, adverbs.