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First draft audience feedbackSUMMARY
By Josh Davey
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Camerawork
The first drafts’ camera work is entirely conventional because:
•Correctly represents characters •Correctly represents the psychological
disorder•Shows necessary scenes
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Editing
The editing was entirely conventional because:
• It’s fast paced and dramatic•Adds conventional themes such as tension•Speeds up as the sound does
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Sound
The sound was entirely conventional because:
• It adds tension and mystery• It starts of slow and increases in speed• Increases in speed in conjunction to the
editing
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Mise-en-scene
The mise-en-scene was conventional because:
•The low key lighting shows the protagonist in danger and builds tension
•Locations are everyday locations which matches the plot
•Transitions in lighting between protagonist and antagonists
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Summary
In order to improve I have been given the following list from the feedback:
• -Change locations for the antagonist scenes (as it's obvious it's a classroom)
• -Add in more little details• -Re-film the pill taking scene in a vast
amount of locations• -Show more of the antagonist, create more
fear