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Carrie Beth WatsonWedgewood Elementary-CCISD

4 years experience4th Grade

L.A. and Social Studies

My Nephew and Niece (Twins) Jonathan and Faith

Reading Never Starts

…Too Early

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Wedgewood Elementary School CCISD

Wedgewood Timberwolves

Staff

•Extremely energetic

•76% Caucasian, 10% African American,

Asian 7%,& 7% Hispanic

Students

•Half the population is Caucasian

•Other half is Asian, Hispanic, and African American

Family life

•Middle class families- parents both working

•Many two parent families, single parent families, and step parent families.

•Some family guardians are grandparents and Aunts and Uncles.

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Architecture- Becoming the CrafterMy classroom Approach

Literature and writing need to go hand in hand. Students can’t be expected to write with out proper

modeling. Turning to the true architectures, the writers

themselves, students will see the building blocks behind a good

piece of writing..Carrie Beth Watson

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Architecture- Becoming the Crafter

“The rich language and beautiful rhythm of picture books make them excellent choices for introducing the

characteristics of great writing.”

Rosanne Kurstedt and Maria KoutrasTeaching Writing with Picture Books as

Models

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Architecture- Becoming the Crafter

“Inviting students to read a story as writers helps them learn the craft of writing from

the experts”

Katie Wood Ray Wondrous Words

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Architecture- Becoming the Crafter“There are good pragmatic reasons for not

packing picture books away after second grade. Even if children shift their reading to longer chapter books, their writing does not expand in this exponential way… The texts children write are more likely to resemble

the texts of picture books than longer books composed of extended chapters. Whatever their reading preferences, they will need the picture books as models for their writing.”

Thomas NewkirkIn Beyond Words

by Susan Benedict and Lenore Carlisle

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Architecture- Becoming the CrafterThe purpose is to invite

students to “look beyond the plot and notice the craft, the

way the story is designed and built.”

Rosanne Kurtedt and Maria Koutras

Teaching Writing With Picture Books as Models

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Architecture- Becoming the Crafter

“Writers have particular other writers they go to for inspiration.

They read the words of the masters over and over, awed, for ever relearning the trade, thrilling

to the power and beauty of language in the hands of a gifted

writer.”

Ralph FletcherWhat a Writer Needs

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Using literature to promote “powerful” word choice.

Lesson: Word Choice Literature: Somewhere in the World Right Now by

Stacey SchuettGrade: 4th grade Day #1- Read Somewhere in the World Right Now Day #2-

A. Re-Read Somewhere in the World Right Now B. Lesson: Word Choice

Day #3- A. A Student will re-read Somewhere in the World Right Now to the rest of the class.B. Extension Activity

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Using literature to promote “powerful” word choice.

Day #21. Re-read Somewhere in the World Right Now. (Students will sit

with me on the reading carpet.)a. The purpose for each student is to listen for “powerful” words or phrases; listen for words that catch your attention. b. Each student will have a clipboard and paper to take notes on.

2. Make a class list of “powerful” words/phrases from the story. 3. Talk about it…

a. “Why do authors use such “powerful” words or phrases in their writing?”

b. “What do good authors have you to do as you read” (Create a movie in your head.)

c. We as authors have the same job as the authors of books. We have to use “powerful” language just like the experts.

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Using literature to promote “powerful” word choice.

4. Compare sentences“Weak” words

“Voices said ‘sweet dreams,’ and under a dark night, lights go out, somewhere in the world…”

“Powerful” words“Voices whisper, ‘sweet dreams,’ and under a blanket of night, lights go out one by one, somewhere in the world…”

5. Processing SkillsStudents are divided into groups. Each group is given a “weak”word. The purpose is to put the “weak” word to rest, RIP, and create a “powerful” word in its place. “Powerful” words will be added to the word wall.

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Using literature to promote “powerful” word choice.

Day #3Extension Activity1. A student will re-read Somewhere in the World Right

Now to the rest of the class. (Choose a fluent reader.)2. Review chart, made on day #2, of “powerful” words

found in the story.3. Student are divided into groups of 2 or 3. Each group

will be given a note card with a “weak” sentence on it. The “weak” sentence needs to be transformed into a “powerful” sentence.

4. Groups will share their “powerful” sentence with the class.

5. Writing- Students are given time to revise pieces “in the works.” Practicing putting to rest “weak” words and replacing them with “powerful” words or phrases.

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Using literature to promote “powerful” word choice.

GT Students• Gifted and talented students can recreate “powerful”

sentences from the story. Make the sentences even more “powerful,” keeping the same meaning of the original sentence.

IEP/Modify/ELL/ Bilingual Students• These students can make a thesaurus of “weak” and

“powerful” words. One column in the dictionary would contain the weak word and the corresponding column would have the “powerful” word. The dictionary could be used through out the year as a referenced during the writing process.

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Other Ideas-Connecting Literature to

WritingPatterns (Beginning Writing)• Fortunately and Unfortunately by Remy Charlip• If You Give a Mouse a Cookie by Laura Joffe

Numeroff • If you Take a Mouse To the Movies by Laura Joffe

Numeroff • The Important book by Margaret Wise BrownWord Choice (Guided Practice)• Hello Ocean by Pam Muńoz Ryan• Welcome to the GREEN HOUSE by Jane YolenIdeas (Guided)• Nothing Ever Happens on 90th Street by Roni

Schotter

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Other Ideas-Connecting Literature to

WritingSequels (Independent) • Click Clack Moo and Duck for President by• Miss Nelson Is Missing and Miss Nelson is

Back by James MarshalCreative Writing (Independent)• Tuesday by David Wiesner• The Mysteries of Harris Burdick by Chris

Van Allsburg• Freefall by Chris Van Allsburg

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Other Ideas-Connecting Literature to Writing

Beginning of the School Year• My Teacher Like to Say by Denise Brennan-Nelson

(idioms, proverbs, clichés)• How I Spent My Summer Vacation by Mark TeagueMemoirs (Primary)• When as Little A Four-Year-Old’s Memoir of Her

Youth by Jamie Lee CurtisIntegrating

Social Studies• A picture book of Florence Nightingale by David A.

Adler• …If You Live in Colonial Times by Ann McGovern

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Other Ideas-Connecting Literature to

WritingMath• Pigs Will be Pigs-Fun with Math and Money by Amy Axelrod• Pigs Go To Market- Halloween with Math and Shopping by

Amy Axelrod• Pigs On A Blanket- Fun With Math and Time by Amy Axelrod• George’s Store at the Shore Francine BassedeScience• Red Leaf, Yellow Leaf by Lois Ehlert• A picture book of Thomas Alva Edison by David A. Adler

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Architecture Becoming the Crafter

The Connection Between Literature and Writing


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