Download - Unit- Relationships- Mock Feedback
Learning intentions:
• To analyse what we have done well.
• To identify where we can improve.
Success criteria:
• Improving one exam answer.
• Not referring back to the question.
• Not using specific religious examples/teachings.
• Not using key words, i.e. Celibate, sacrament.
• Not using PEE in (c) and (d).
With your highlighter, show where you got
marks.
With your purple pen, write ‘AO1’ next to the question – this means
you need to knowabout religion.
Write in purple pen
With your highlighter, show where
you got marks.
With your purple pen,
write next to the answer 1
point you could have included.
With your highlighter, show on your version of this mark scheme what mark you got, then identify on your answer where you met this
criteria.
Using the extra points, rewrite your 6 mark answer, then use a different coloured
highlighter to show where you have made your improvements.
With your highlighter, show on your version of this mark scheme what mark you got, then identify on your answer where you met this
criteria.
What you could have included:
• The law has made same sex marriages legal.
• Places of worship can perform same sex marriages, as long as the religious leader of that place of worship agrees.
• Many places of worship offer blessings, rather than marriage ceremonies.
• Some Muslims are against same sex marriage, as sex within marriage is for procreation, so will not let same sex marriages take place.
• Catholics say for homosexuals to be celibate, so will not allow marriages to take place, but gay people must be treated with respect.
• Some Anglicans will allow marriage ceremonies to take place, others won’t.
• Quakers say it is the quality of the relationship that counts, and the expression of love, so will allow.
• By refusing a same sex marriage to take place in a place of worship could be seen as discrimination.
• Highlight in a different colour where you can make improvements in your essay.
• Using the textbooks and your books to help you, as well as the exam criteria, rewrite your 8 mark answer.