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Weaving & Weaving & CommentaryCommentary
With Antigone
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• Weaving is an advanced form of TLQ (Transition, Lead in, Quote)
• To weave effectively, the writer incorporates some commentary and pieces of a quote into a CD.
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CM’s before weaving…
• Topic Sentence: Antigone’s decision to bury Polyneices is defensible because all individuals deserve a proper burial. • TLQ: For example, Antigone tells Creon
“Nevertheless, there are honors due to all the dead” (799). •What can be improved?
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CM’s after weaving…• For example, when confronted by Creon
for her crime, Antigone says, “Nevertheless, there are honors due to all the dead” (799), reminding the king that even a “traitor” deserves the right to be properly buried, and that Creon’s edict will not stop her. •Why is this a strong example?
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The Big PictureThe Big Picture
• In your first commentary after a quote, write about the quote’s significance to the given scene.• In your second commentary after a quote, expand your first commentary by connecting it to another scene in the novel or analyzing its relationship to the work as a whole.
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Example of quote with commentary
• For example, when confronted by Creon for her crime, Antigone says, “Nevertheless, there are honors due to all the dead” (799), reminding the king that even a “traitor” deserves the right to be properly buried, and that Creon’s edict will not stop her.
• CM #1: Antigone knows that her decision to bury her brother is the morally right and honorable action to take.
• CM #2: Without that proper burial, Polyneices would not be able to join the gods in death, and Antigone will not allow her brother such a dishonor.
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Why???
•How will weaving help your writing sound more academically mature?•This is your last full essay…make it
a good one!
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Practice with a partner…
Topic Sentence: Antigone’s decision to bury Polyneices is defensible because all individuals deserve a proper burial.
•Find one quote from Antigone that supports this topic sentence•Write a CD that implements the weaving technique•Both partners need to write the example down on his or her own notes•7 minutes—I’ll be around to check out your progress
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Copy down your entire prompt above your brainstorm web
Quote #1 (cite with pg. #)
Thesis Statement (must have TWO arguable ideas)
Quote #3 (cite with pg. #)
Quote #2 (cite with pg. #)
Quote #4 (cite with pg. #)