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Gerry RauFall 2021
Class 4
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English� Because we are terrible in English, we just can
understand a part of what you say, so I think that you can demonstrate first , then let us do it. In addition, I am terrible at listening, so I understand what you say by looking at the PPT. I think we need a Teaching assistant to help us.
� It should be easier in person. � I have tried to find a TA, but no one was available or
willing, but if you know someone ... � We will work together to solve the problems.
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Components� Components are:
� Useful� Hard to find
� Framework is hard to find
� We will talk more about each in the next 3 weeks.� Yes, framework is the hardest to find.
� We will talk more about it next week.
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Peer Review Component markers
Presentations
Introduction Division:
Component Analysis
Assignment
Establishing Importance
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Purpose of Peer Review� Learn to evaluate other work
� What makes some writing clearer
� Help one another� Check to see if everything is included, clear� Get ideas to improve your own work
� See other document structures
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Checking what you have doneHomework, Chapters 2, 3, 4:Overall structure
Claim about overall structure (does your field follow IPTC or IMRD format?)and support (number of sections, section titles, length of sections, other)with comments on any unusual features or problems
Tables for 3 articles: overall structure (like those in ch. 2)Text summary pointing to tables: “As shown in Table …”Tables well-formattedNumber and Title for each table
IntroductionClaim about structure of Introduction (does it follow the expected pattern?)
and support (order of components, other)with comments on any unusual features or problems
Tables for 3 articles: Introduction (like those in ch.. 4)Text summary pointing to tables: “As shown in Table …”Tables well-formattedNumber and Title for each table
HeadingsEach part (Overall structure, Introduction, References) has a heading
Headings use Word Style to enable use of navigation paneReferences
References for the 3 articles10
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Text� Is the claim clear? � Is the support clear? Does it talk about:
� number of sections, section titles, length of sections?� Does the text refer to the tables for support?
� “As shown in Table 1, …”� “As you can see in Table 1, …”
� Does it note any unusual features or problems?
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Table format� Is the column alignment clear?
� Words: Left or center align� Numbers: Right or center align
� Could things be added to make the tables clearer?� Division totals� Color to highlight
� Totals� Largest division
� Is there blank space that could be eliminated?
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Headings and References� Are there headings?
� Do the headings use Word Styles?
� Are there references?� Are the references in the same format?
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Time to fix a few things� This will be part of your final exemplar description
� End of the first half of the course
� Correct it now, before you forget
� If you do not have time to finish, write a comment to yourself
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Adding parts� Add more to each assignment
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OverviewIntroduction
Revise O, I
ProcessTesting, Concl.
Revise O, I
Revise P, T, C
CitationsGraphics
Writing a Claim 3 Divisions Complete Description
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Chapter 4
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Presentations� W: Prof. Rau
� Th: Richard, Sammy
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Modified from: Woraphrut Kornmaneesang (Bung)
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Joining a Community3 Key Rules of Joining a Community� Know the vocabulary� Know the important people� Know the history
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“May the Force be with You!”
“Jedi”
“Light Saber”
“Sith”
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Component Analysis & Markers“In English, each paragraph should have a single purpose
that clearly contributes to the argument”
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Expected order
Distinct(Marker)
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Claims and Components IPTCClaim Components DivisionImportant, unresolved problem Importance
NeedResearch goal
Introduction
Workable solution FrameworkResearch details
Process
Better than other existing solutions Testing methodsData patternsComparisonsInterpretationsContribution
Testing
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1. Importance
Claim &(Support)
Sub-component
Component Importance
General
Society(General knowledge)
Specific
Specific research area(Citation)
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2. Need
Claim &Support
Sub-component
Component Need
Research gap
Gap in current knowledge
Limitation
Current solutions have problems
Benefit
Beneficial to society or field
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Citation
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3. Research Goal
Main Claim
Sub-component
Component Research goals
Specific goal
Add to previous research
Proposed solution
Propose a better solution
Contribution
Specific contributions
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Exercise 4.1 (from MOOC 4b)
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Exercise 4.1
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Components in the Introduction1. Identify the components in each paragraph in the
Introduction division of your first exemplar article and the component markers that help you identify them. Summarize this in a table. [Use Appendix 1]
2. Does the Introduction follow the order of components as listed? [This is the claim, part 1 is the support.]
3. Where is the research goal stated in your exemplar articles, and how? If they use the phrase “to [the best of ] our knowledge” or additional bullet points or sentences to expand on the goal, make note of that.
4. Is there a paragraph at the end of the Introduction that describes the organization of the rest of the paper?
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Component markers� Phrases or groups of words that mark each component
� Examples in following slides� More examples of each in the textbook
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1. Importance� Why should the reader be interested in this topic?
1a. It is important to society� “… essential part of …”
1b. It is important to researchers� “Extensive research has been conducted …”
� Story to generate interest� (common in popular writing, not in research articles)
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2. Need� Why is more research needed on this?
2a. Nothing has been done� “To the best of our knowledge, this is the first …”
2b. What has been done is not good enough� “However”, “drawbacks”, “limitations”
2c. Society will benefit� “… use less material, lower cost, …”
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3. Research goal� How does this research contribute?
3a. Our goal addresses that need� “Therefore, our aim in this paper …”
3b. Our solution solves the problem� “In this paper we propose …”
3c. Our research makes a positive contribution� “… faster, more efficient [than current best]”� May be a bulleted list
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Organization of the paper� Final paragraph in Introduction
� Describes briefly what is in each section� “In section 2, we … Section 3 presents …”
� Not present in all papers
� Not a ‘claim’ – not a component� Still important to notice� Mark as ‘Organization’
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Locating component markers
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Component markers
Citations
Graphics
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Component analysis� Main component in each paragraph
� Possibly 2 components (Need/Goal)� Mark component number
� You may mark subcomponents, but not required� Highlight component marker
� Check with me after you finish marking one article
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Make a table
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Write� Homework 4:
� Repeat Exercise 4.1 for other two articles� Write a claim:
� “My articles do/do not follow the expected pattern”� Expected pattern: components 1, 2, 3 in order
� Support the claim: � Make a table for each article � Show the component markers in each paragraph� “Table 4 shows …”
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Turn in� Writing a Claim
� Look at Hints in Textbook, Homework, chapters 2, 3, 4
� Submit by � Section 1: Sunday night/Monday morning 2 AM� Section 2: Monday night/Tuesday morning 2 AM � Late penalty applies
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See example on ECourse2: Sample, Writing a Claim
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Writing a claim: Include:Homework, Chapters 2, 3, 4:Overall structure
Claim about overall structure (does your field follow IPTC or IMRD format?)and support (number of sections, section titles, length of sections, other)with comments on any unusual features or problems
Tables for 3 articles: overall structure (like those in ch. 2)Text summary pointing to tables: “As shown in Table …”Tables well-formattedNumber and Title for each table
IntroductionClaim about structure of Introduction (does it follow the expected pattern?)
and support (order of components, other)with comments on any unusual features or problems
Tables for 3 articles: Introduction (like those in ch. 4)Text summary pointing to tables: “As shown in Table …”Tables well-formattedNumber and Title for each table
HeadingsEach part (Overall structure, Introduction, References) has a heading
Headings use Word Style to enable use of navigation paneReferences
References for the 3 articles46
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Grading standards
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� See Word file: Assignments and Grading standards� On ECourse
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Read� Chapter 5
� Component analysis in division 2
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Bring to class� Homework (Chapter 4), with my comments/grade
� Marked pdf: components in second division(one article, first look)
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Presentations next week� Do NOT
� Copy from the chapter
� Do� Summarize� Give examples from your exemplar articles� Show how to do the exercise(s) we will do� Submit to Ecourse by 11:00 am
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Rubric for Presentation� See Word file: Assignments and Grading standards
� On ECourse
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Rubric for Presentation
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Category/Criteria
Content5: Clearly demonstrates how to use the exercise(s) in that chapter to determine the
structure of exemplars, in both words and visuals4: Demonstrates how to use the exercise(s) in that chapter to determine the structure of
exemplars3: Demonstrates how to use the exercise(s) in that chapter to determine the structure of
exemplars, but may have some difficulty, or partially incorrect2: Does not effectively demonstrate how to use the exercise(s) in that chapter to determine
the structure of exemplars1: Misses the point of the assignment, for example summarizes the content but does not
show how to do the exercise(s)0: Does not address the assignment
Organization5: Clear, concise, well organized, well supported, with attention to detail, effective visuals,
good use of time4: Well organized, with support of all main points, acceptable time use3: Organized, but some misunderstanding of concepts or minimal support2: Main points can be determined, but hard to follow or not supported, or very poor use of
time1: Main points are not clear, or difficult to follow0: Totally disorganized or unclear
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Exemplar presentations (W)� Introduction 10/6 Prof. Rau� Process/Method 10/13 William� T&C / R&D 10/20 Yu Cheng� Citations 10/26 Johnny� Graphics 11/3 James
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Exemplar presentations (Th)� Introduction 10/7 Richard Sammy� Process/Method 10/14 Hsuan Kent� T&C / R&D 10/21 Corn Jenny� Citations 10/27 Dao Max� Graphics 11/4 Han
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