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ENGLISH 1 LAU MAO HUA 0320249 FNBE0814

Pre-writing (Clustering / Mind Map)

Thesis Statement: Effects of children maturing early in life will increases in social problem, health related issues and safety level.

Effects of children mature at a younger age

Increases in the number of social problem

Illegal racing with friends

drug abuse

teenage pregnancy

Decreases in health's level

Smoking will lead to lung cancer.

Cigarette contains nicotine. Nicotine will lead to addiction to

smoking.

Sexual related diseases : HIV,AIDS

Decreases in safety level

Kidnap will occur

Family member will worry about the safety of

children when children go out at night without

their permission of thinking about their

safety.


NAME : LAU MAO HUA

STUDENT ID : 0320249

MODULE : ENGLISH 1

SESSION : AUGUST 2014

QUESTION NUMBER : 1


Effects of Children Mature at A Younger Age

Recently, children are getting more mature. Some people said that children over 15 should be

allowed to make decisions about their lives without the inference of their parents. Children

maturing early in life were caused by several factors such as society, parents, friends and other.

Law should not be adjusted according to children mature at a younger age because it will lead to

some grave effects. Effects of children maturing early in life will increase in the number of social

problem, health related issues and safety level.

First of all, children mature early in life will lead to increases in the number of social problem.

Children will involve in social problem such as illegal racing, drug abuse, teenage pregnancy and

other problems. Illegal racing not only involved in motorcycles but also involved in cars. Illegal

racing mostly occurs at late night with a few numbers of racers. Children will lead to death if

accident is occurs by unexpected. Most of the children involved in illegal racing are instigate by

their friends which is older than them. Most of the children involved in drug abuse are inference by

their friends. According to the research by National Institute on Drug Abuse (NIDA), Alcohol,

Heroin, Cocaine, MDMA are public abused drug used by the children. Children are not

concentrated on what they do after they had the drug. For example, teenage pregnancy will be

occurred after the children had the drug such as MDMA. Children are blurred after they had the

drug. Children do whatever they like such as having sexual activity and finally will lead to teenage

pregnancy.

Besides that, children mature early in life will also lead to health related issues. Smoking should

be prohibited at any time and any person. Cigarette contains nicotine, tar, carbon monoxide,

ammonia, hydrogen cyanide, arsenic, DDT and formaldehyde. Cigarette smoke contains over

4,000 chemicals, including 43 known cancer-causing compounds and 400 other toxins. Nicotine

only needs six seconds to reach the brain and it is highly addictive. Long-term smoking will cause

to lung cancer. According to the Cancer Research UK, around 35,400 people died from lung

cancer in 2012, which are around 97 peoples every day. Children under 18 years old in Malaysia

ENGLISH 1 LAU MAO HUA 0320249 FNBE0814 are blanket ban to purchase cigarette. Children will suffer from sexual related disease if they

involved in sexual activity. HIV and AIDS are two common sexual related diseases in Malaysia.

Even though children used a condom during sexual activity, but it does not provide 100% safety to

the children. Abstinence is the best way to prevent HIV and AIDS diseases. AIDS and HIV cannot

be cured nowadays because no medicine or surgery can kill the entire virus.

Children mature early in life will affect the safety level. After the children are matured, children

are not willing to pay attention the advice given by their parents. Children like to go out at night

with friends and sometimes did not get the permission from their parents. Kidnap will occur if the

children are going out late at night without accompany of their parents. The probability of kidnap

occur without the accompany of parents is higher than with the accompany of parents because it

is easier to kidnap. Family members will worry about the safety of the children if the children go

out at late night without the permission of their parents. Family members will think about the safety

of the children is their children been kidnapped or having accident if their children come back late.

Children below age are not allowed to drive because most of the car accidents are occur among

the teenage. Family members will worry about the safety of the children if the children are driving

unaccompanied at any time because accident might be occur at anytime and anywhere.

Last but not least, children mature early in life will result in many effects. Increases in the

number of social problems, health related problem and safety level are the effects of children

mature early in life. Law should not be adjusted according to the children maturity at all time. Law

should be maintained to protect the children from danger. Everyone should be in charge to protect

the children because children are future front-runner of the century.


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