[Name / all in group] QAYYUM

[ID] 0320220

[Module]

[Session] August, 2014

ESSAY 1

1. Children over 15 should be allowed to make decisions about their lives without the

inference of their parents. Society should accept that children mature at a younger

age these days and should adjust the law accordingly. What do you think are the

causes and effects of this condition? Plan your response, and then write a cause

or effect essay.

Latest investigations of mind health in teenagers might at last give the logical

power to say "No you're not!" to the parents in response to the regular youthful

protest, "Yet I'm mature enough to settle on my own choices!" That power originates

from cerebrum imaging studies that uncover some astounding peculiarities of the

pre-adult cerebrum. Deborah Yurgelun-Todd and associates at the Mclean Hospital

Brain Imaging Center in Boston, Massachusetts have utilized utilitarian attractive

reverberation imaging to contrast the movement of teen brains with those of grown-

ups. A teen's youthful frontal lobes may not be equipped for such a coolly and

rational approach, and the sentimentental of friendships may be the key to win the

fight.

The time for parents to make choices for their teenagers is an influential one. It

rests in the thought that there are such a large number of streets and ranges for high

schoolers to wind up in troublesome positions. These things can have life modifying

outcomes. It is the basic services of any guardian to help one's youngsters through

troublesome times by guaranteeing that choices made are to the greatest advantage

of the youngster. The opposite of this thought would be in the thought that

youngsters are best served when they comprehend the unpredictable and freedom of

opportunity. This contention recommends that parents won't outlive their youngsters

and, sooner or later and level, teens will have to make its own critical decision. It is a

variety of the idea that youngsters must "fly from the home”. In place for this flight to

be an effective one, parent must guide their kids in choice making, yet in the last

examination, teenagers, to be powerful grown-ups, must figure out how to settle on

and live with basic choices, understanding that their lives and their decisions are their

own.

The cause and effect for children for being able to make their own decisions

without their parent’s influential. There is pros and cons outcome as the teenagers

have the freedom to make their own decision. Firstly, the teenager will learn a lot of

new things and will get to know the capabilities of their brain in decision making skills.

It is very good for the student as they will use it in years to come. This effect would be

good for teenagers when they can experience the things they like such as in studies

where they can choose they preferred course of studies.

Youth is the most exciting, hopeful and lively part of life. The cons of this is

that the teenagers can be tend to make the wrong decision by following their friends

and so on. When the teenager have the freedom and power to make their own

decision and move, they will likely to follow some bad example of some friends and

relatives such as in drinking, gambling, drugs as they see these things is the exciting

part of their life. These effect is not good for teenagers because they will not learn

anything from all these except getting in bad situation, health and getting stuck in

their studies.

In conclusion, the teenagers could or should make all the critical desicions but

with the guidance of the parents or guardians because with these, they will not tend

to go for making the wrong decision as almost all the decision they are going to make

is crucial and will one day be their future. So it is highly recommended that a

teenager makes their own decision but with a guidance from their guardians.

Reference

Begley, S. February 28, 2000. “Getting Inside a Teen Brain.” Newsweek.

Brownlee, S. August 9, 1999. “Inside the Teen Brain.” U.S.News.

The cause and effect.

Pre-writing;

Cause and effect of 15 years old children and aabove making own

decision

Research about the teenagers.

The pros and cons.

Guidance from the parents for

the decision made.

Bad example of friends and relatives.

(drink,gambling)