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Page 1: Essay Research & Writing CHST 540 May 24, 2005. Choosing a topic What interests you? What has lots of source material available? (If you’re really thinking

Essay Research & Writing

CHST 540

May 24, 2005

Page 2: Essay Research & Writing CHST 540 May 24, 2005. Choosing a topic What interests you? What has lots of source material available? (If you’re really thinking

Choosing a topic

What interests you?

What has lots of source material available?

(If you’re really thinking strategically:) What will be useful for the exam?

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Finding SourcesStart with the bibliography provided in the course outlineIf there isn’t a lot of material on your topic, or you aren’t sure which of the sources mentioned are most relevant, speak with meSearch library catalogues: Ryerson, Toronto Public (www.tpl.toronto.on.ca) and the University of Toronto (www.library.utoronto.ca)

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Finding Sources (cont’d)

Search Intelligence and National Security and International Journal of Intelligence and CounterIntelligence

Online access to Intelligence and National Security only dates back to 2000; for issues published 1985-99 go to John W. Graham Library (Trinity College, U of T)

Check footnotes/bibliographies for other sources

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Researching

Compile a list of relevant materials

First consult the most targeted material (usually journal articles/essays)

Then broaden your research - to specific books, more general books & articles, etc.

Read intros and conclusions before reading the body of a work

Mine intros and conclusions for all they’re worth

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How much research?

Enough to sustain your argument

You shouldn’t be left with too many unanswered questions

Minimum 5 sources

Using more sources can enrich your paper

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Determining your argument

If you haven’t done so already, phrase your topic as a question

Consider the evidence

Draw conclusions and frame these into an answer (your thesis) to your original question

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Planning your essay

Structure will depend partly on the type of essay you’re writing:

‘Compare and contrast’ - identify the main areas you will be comparing/contrasting; assess each in turn

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Planning your essay (cont’d)

‘Evaluate’ - identify and address relevant criteria before making a judgment

‘Discuss’ - consider arguments for or against the statement being examined

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Writing the introduction

Broad > narrow

Start with a general statement about your topic

With each following sentence, focus more on your argument, ending with your thesis

Keep it succinct: too much can be confusing

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Organizing paragraphs

Use a topic sentence at the start of each paragraph

i.e. Occasionally, signals intelligence was so clear as to suggest immediately a course of action.

i.e. In addition to measuring successes, signals intelligence could point to failures within the Allied organization.

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Organizing paragraphs (cont’d)Make transitions between paragraphs as smooth as possible - one should flow into the next

i.e. …The psychological effect of Yamamoto’s death upon the Japanese populace as a whole, not to mention that of those in the armed forces, must have been great.

Signals intelligence was not always employed to such spectacular effect…..

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Organizing paragraphs (cont’d)

Chronology may partly determine your paragraph order; but remember these are analytical papers, so theme may take precedence over chronology

Save your strongest points for last - build up to something

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Integrating quotationsDon’t just quote facts; include opinions and analysisChoose quotations that are well writtenYou can paraphrase and footnote if it sounds betterALWAYS FOOTNOTE/REFERENCE WORDS AND IDEAS THAT AREN’T YOUR OWNStrive for seamlessness

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Seamlessness

Useful verbs: argues, believes, considers, contends, demonstrates, illustrates, maintains, observes, notes, etc.

i.e. Even historians of today have not abandoned such melodramatic judgments, contending that Midway “caused the Rising Sun to set.”

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Seamlessness (cont’d)

Phrases: according to, in X’s view, etc.

i.e. In Layton’s view, Yamamoto’s death was “a trauma for most Japanese.”

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Seamlessness

Work from the quotation itself to find something that flows into it.

i.e. The consequences of this were “so simple and yet so shattering that it can be summed up in a sentence: American strike-forces, primarily submarines, ultimately destroyed the Japanese merchant fleet.”

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Polishing your language

Go over your transitions between paragraphs

Ensure your quotations are well integrated

Watch out for repeated words (get a friend to check for them); replace them with synonyms

Eliminate colloquial language

i.e. replace ‘says’ with ‘observes’, ‘states’, etc.

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Common mistakesVerb and subject don’t agree (usually in long sentences)

Wrong: The tension between Japanese and Americans were rising.

Right: The tension between Japanese and Americans was rising.

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Common mistakesRun-on sentences

i.e. Churchill found the intelligence services in a fragmented state when he took his place as Prime Minister, for instance Sigint, espionage and counter espionage lacked any adequate means of co-ordination, each suffering from internal confusion, indeed the rivalries in counter espionage between Kell’s MI5 and the special branch at Scotland Yard were proving to be highly counter productive.

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Its versus it’sIts (possessive) means belonging to it.i.e. The dog wagged its tail.It’s (conjunction) means it is.i.e. It’s time to go.

Than (NOT then) is used in comparisonsi.e. His book is more interesting than hers.

•Common mistakes (cont’d)

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Common mistakes (cont’d)

Between ten and fifteen (and, NOT to)

Affect versus effect

It greatly affected intelligence procedures. [verb]

It had many effects on intelligence. [noun]

It effected great changes in intelligence procedures. [verb, meaning ‘to prompt’, ‘to bring about’, ‘to catalyze’]

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Common mistakes (cont’d)

Use commas around ‘however’

i.e. Kahn argues, however, that German spies….

i.e. However, Kahn argues that German….

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Writing the conclusion

Narrow > broad

Restate your thesis (try to vary your wording somewhat from the thesis statement in your intro paragraph)

Discuss the wider implications of your argument/topic

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Bibliography

Include all sources you have consulted for your paper, even those you haven’t directly quoted from

Be consistent

Sample:

Richelson, Jeffrey. A Century of Spies: Intelligence in the Twentieth Century (Oxford: Oxford University Press, 1997)

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Tips

Start early

Read lots and take detailed notes

Spend time planning before you write

Ensure your argument is clear

Choose a logical structure

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More tips

Spend most of your words discussing, arguing and analyzing, not merely describing what happened

Leave lots of time to edit

Have someone else proofread your work - they’ll likely catch more mistakes than you will since they’re less familiar with it

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For further help:

Look online - for example http://www.sou.edu/history/carney/writing.htm or http://www.lancs.ac.uk/depts/history/course-sites/hist213/writing.htm or http://webster.commnet.edu/grammar/Consult the Ryerson Writing Centre (Mon-Thurs, 3:30 to 6:30, RD Besse Commons, 2nd floor, Library)Speak with/email me (the earlier, the better!) - [email protected]