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Theatre teacher support material 1
Example 9
CollaborativeTheatreProject
StudentB(SLandHL)
CONTENTS
1 Mypersonalcontext
3 Myapproaches
7 Theformationofmygroup
8 Explorationofthestartingpoint
9 Practicalandphysicalexplorations
11 Thedevelopmentofourpiece
14 Specificexplorationsledbyme
15 Finalstructureofthepiece
16 Mycontributiontotheperformance
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Example 9
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CollaborativeTheatreProject–Processportfolio1. Mypersonalcontext
DuringthetheatrecourseIhavebeeninspiredbysomequitecontrastingtheatreformsandthesehavecertainlycontributedtothedevelopmentofmy“personalcontext”.IamatmystrongestwhenIapproachtheatreworkfromtheperspectiveoftheperformer.Ihaveparticipatedinquiteafewpracticalworkshopsandproductionsintheroleofperformerandthesehavehadquiteaconsiderableimpactonme.Workshops:Metamorphosis(Kafka/Berkoff1969)DuringaphysicaltheatreworkshopwiththetheatreclassIplayedthepartofGregorSamsa,theunfortunateindividualwhoawakesonemorningtofindhimselftransformedintoagiganticinsect.
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Example 9
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ThisbizarreandintenselyphysicalplayintroducedmetotheworkofdirectorandperformerStevenBerkoff.Berkoff,whowasheavilyinfluencedbyBertoldBrecht,AntoninArtaudandJean‐LouisBarrault(http://www.iainfisher.com).HetrainedattheWebberDouglasAcademyinLondonandlaterunderthemovementandmimeguruJacquesLecoqinParis.MyexperienceofBerkoff’sperformancestyleBerkoff’stheatreprovokesanaudiencebycreatinggrotesqueimagesofcharactersandbyemployingexaggeratedmime,movementandgesture(RobertCross,2004).Ifoundthisparticularstyleoftheatrereallyexciting.WhileIenjoycreatingacharacterandparticipatingin“realistic”drama,Iamquiteaphysicalandenergeticperson,andthedemandsofthisscriptreallypushedmeasanactor.Icertainlywanttoexplorethisaspectofperformanceevenfurtherinthecollaborativetheatreproject.Workshops:TotaltheatreAnotherstyleoftheatre,whichlinksseamlesslytotheworkofBerkoff,istotaltheatre–anideathatallaspectsoftheatre(movement,text,music,visuals)aredeemedequal.Thisworkwasleadbyourteacher,andatfirstinvolvedeachmemberofthegroupcreating“non‐human”objectsandimages.Somakingletters,coathangers,treeswithourbodies,andthendevelopingthisconceptevenfurtherintopracticalobjectsthatcanbemovedormanipulated–linkinggroupmemberstogether.
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Example 9
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This“physicaltheatre”stylewasthentakenastepfurthertometaphoricaltheatre,whenwebeguntouseourwholebodiesandvoices,togetherwithtechnicaltheatreelements,tolaunchanassaultonthesensesofouraudience.Wereenactedahurricaneinthisway,playingrecordedsoundtracksalongwithintenselightingandamovementsequenceoffranticrunning,jumpingandtwistingalongwithscreamsofterror.Thishadaverystrongimpressiononmeandbegantosparkmyinterestinhowanaudiencecanbeengagedandchallengedbytheatre(Artaud,Thetheatreanditsdouble,2013)2.MyapproachesAsaperformer,Iaminterestedinphysicalperformanceswhichpushmyskillsandrequirestrength,concentrationandintensity.Ienjoyusingmyvoiceindifferentwaysandthechallengeofcreatingsoundeffectsandnon‐languages(asIhadexperimentedduringthetotaltheatrework).Othertheatrestylesthatinterestme: Epictheatre:definedbycleardescription,choralworkandprojectionprovidecommentary.Makinganaudienceawaretheyarewatchingperformance.ParticularlydefinedbyBrecht.
In‐Yer‐Facetheatre:“thekindoftheatrethatgrabstheaudiencebythescruffoftheneckandshakesituntilitgetsthemessage(http://www.inyerface‐theatre.com).CuttingedgedramathatemergedintheUKinthe1990s.
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Example 9
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IwasborninSweden,andmuchofthetraditionaltheatreinmyhomecountryisconcernedwithnaturalisticplaysbyIbsenandChekov.Ipersonallyfindthisstyleoftheatreratherstale,andIhavefoundthechallengingandvisceralnatureofphysicaltheatreextremelyliberating!Thisdesiretogoagainstnaturalistictheatreledmetodiscovertheworkofprofessionalcollaborativetheatrecompany,Gecko.Thiscompany,firstformedin2001,createsandtoursitsownbrandofphysicaltheatrebothintheUKandinternationally.“Withanexpandingensembleofinternationalperformersandmakers,Geckocreatesworkthroughcollaboration,experimentationandplay”(http://www.geckotheatre.com)Thehighlyphysical,andoftensurrealstyleoftheirperformancesmadethiscompanyparticularlynoteworthyforme,especiallyastheyhaveclearlybeeninfluencedbytheworkofStevenBerkoffandLecoq.AsMermikidesandSmart(2010)noteinthechapteronGeckointheirbook“Devisinginprogress”:“Gecko’sworkhasbeeninfluencedbyLahavandNedjari’sworkwiththeDavidGlassEnsemble.AlongwithStevenBerkoff,alongtimecollaboratorofLahavandNedjari,GlasstrainedunderLecoq.AmajorideawiththeDavidGlassEnsemblethatcanbeseenintheGecko’sworkandtheimportanceofparticipationactivities”(pages165‐185).
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Example 9
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Thiscollaborativetheatreprojectwill,byitsverynature,relyonparticipatoryactivitiestoensurethatthewholegrouphaveaninput,roleandsenseofownershipofthefinishedpiece.IaminterestedintheprocessthattheGeckoCompany,whichisrelativelysmallcomparedtoothercompaniesofthesamestyle,undergoestocreatetheirwork.
“TheprocessforalltheshowsIhavemadestartsbyallowingtheinitialthoughts,ideasandscenes,characters–whateverthesemightbe–toemerge.Theprocesscantakealongtimeandyouhavetobepatient”(TheGeckoprocess.AmitLahav,Artisticdirector.Source:http://www.geckotheatre.com/wp‐content/uploads/2013/05/Gecko‐Student‐Resources.pdf)TheDavidGlassEnsemblespecialiseinphysicalandvisualtheatre,makingpiecesthatrisk,experiment,innovateandcelebrate(http://www.britishcouncil.org/arts)Methodology:
Geckofocusesontheirpersonalexperiences,relationshipsandemotionalresponsestotheworldfortheirinspiration.GeckoattemptstofollowGlass’idealmethodologyforcreativedevelopment,whichincludefivesteps……Aswithmostdevisedworkcompanies,theyneverconsideranyoftheirproductionstobecompletelyfinished(Ibid,pages165‐185)
Preparation Creativeorigination
Creativeorganization
Manifestation/presentation
Reflection&renewal
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Becauseofthelongprocess,everythingisaninfluenceinsomeway–somanythingscanimpactontheprocess…Westartwithablankprocess(p.1)
Themainlanguageisnotwords.Languagecomesfromthesameplaceasmovement;itisanemotionalvehicle…itisvisuallanguagethatinterestsme…(p.1)Althoughcollaborative,Amitkeepsaveryclearholdonthefinaldirectionofthepiece.
Theidea–theseedoftheideaisthecatalystfornewideasandimages,andthisunfoldsanddevelops
Investigatingthefirstidea–Thisistestedoutphysically
DevelopmentofnewideasNewideasandimagesareexploredinreactiontothis,musicideasarrivefromphysicaldiscoveries;thesestimulatemorephysicalwork.Earlystructuralanddesignthoughts.Explosionsofideashere!
TestingadraftsequencePuttingtogetherarunorsequenceofideas,possiblywithsomesimpleelementofset.Givingasenseofwhatthe“world”mightbe.Creatingthe“world”
Finaldecisionsabouttheworldofthepiece
It’snotaconventionaltheatreprocesswheresomebodyisintherehearsalroomwithascriptandthentheyaddthelights.Allthevariouselementshappentogether.(p.1)
FirstdraftoftheshowImprovising,choreography,rehearsing,creatingtransitions.Thestoryboardisredraftedcontinually.
WorkingupadraftstoryboardA“flaginthesand”storyboardiscreated.Ideasplacednexttoeachother.Testingthestructure.
Secondandthirddraftsleadtoamodeloftheshow.Neverfinished.
Gecko’sartisticdirector,AmitLahav,clearlyoutlinestheprocessofcollaborativecreationintheGeckoStudentResources,whicharehostedontheirwebsite(http://www.geckotheatre.com/wp‐content/uploads/2013/05/Gecko‐Student‐Resources.pdf)
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Example 9
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TheformationofmygroupIndiscussingtheformationofourensemble,Iwasveryhappytoidentifyothermembersofmyclasswhowereasexcitedaboutthephysicalandsurrealelementsofperformanceasme,andwhosharedanideaofthepotentialforthisstyleoftheatretohaveanimpactonanaudience.ForthiscollaborativeprojectIwillbeworkingwith: Me(Alex) Carmen:dancer,verygoodatmovement.Wouldliketochoreographsomesequences.
Ele:Verystrongatmime,alsointerestedinmovementsequences.Workingonsoundeffectsorsoundtrackstoaccompanyanymovementisalsoastrength.
Alena:Agoodcharacteractor.Notalotofphysicalexperiencebutverygoodwithhervoice.Excitedbythenonnaturalisticfeaturesofthevoice.Lotsofexperiencein“naturalistic”roles.Willhelpwithfleshingoutalittledepthtoroles.
Wewillbesharingtherolesofdirecting,choreographingandblocking,butaswehavesuchclearstrengthswewillbeallocatingresponsibilitiestospecificsectionstoindividualstolead.Fromtheoutsetofthisprocess,thegrouphadimmediateagreementthatwewantedtocreateanintenseandengagingpieceoftheatrethatwouldresonatewithouraudienceonavisceral(withhowtheyfeelratherthanhowtheythink)level.Averyearlypossibilityasastartpointforuswasmentalillness.Thisthemeispresentinalotoftheworkthatinspiresus–linkedtoArtaud,SarahKaneandBerkoff,butwefeltthiswastoobroad.Innarrowingdownthethemeintocategories,Elesuggestedinsomnia.Thisideaslowlytookholdandweallfeltsecure‐thiswasourstartingpoint.
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Example 9
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Explorationofthestartingpoint:Insomnia“Whenyouhaveinsomniayou’reneverreallyasleep…andyou’reneverreallyawake.Nothing’sreal.Everything’sfaraway.Everything’sacopyofacopyofacopy”(FightClub,ChuckPalahniuk,1999).Welookedatquiteafewhealthwebsiteswhichtoldusmostpeoplesufferfrominsomniaatsomepointintheirlives.Oneinthreepeoplehaveboutsofinsomniaregularly(sources:http://www.nhs.uk/,http://www.sleep.com).Lifestyleisabiginfluenceronsleeppatterns.“Insomnia”caughtourimaginationsasastartingpointbecauseofthemanydifferentreasonssomeonemighthavefordevelopinginsomniaorbeexperiencingthesymptoms,andthepotentialthesehaveforbeingintenseandengagingforanaudience.PossiblecausesofInsomniaStress Work Money Sex Relationships Identity FamilyDepression Addiction Illness Exams/study ResponsibilityDrugs Fear Technology Isolation Unemployment Lackofpurpose Abuse Troubledpast Food Haunted Tediouslife UnwantedpregnancyFromourmindmapwehighlightedthecausesthatreallyinterestedus.Nextweexploredpossiblesymptoms,andthisiswhereourideasforpracticalexplorations,charactersandscenesreallylitup:
Tiredness
Yawning
Apprehension
Anxiety
Aching
Tension
Twitching
Blurryvision
Changed
appetite
Sweating
Restlessness
Slurredspeech
Bagsundereyes
Shortattentionspan
Clumsiness Listlessness Addictiontocoffee
Addictiontogaming
Crying
Shaking
Shouting
Groaning
Fighting
Selfharm
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Example 9
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PracticalandPhysicalExplorationsOncewehadsharedourresearchontheapproachesofprofessionalcompanieswhocollaborativelycreateoriginaltheatre,weunanimouslyagreedthatthemosteffectivewayofkickingofftheprocesswastogetpracticalassoonaspossible.Geckotheatrebeginbyphysicallyexploringthefirstidea,sowewoulddothesame!Weimmediatelystartedselectingimagesthatcametomindfromlookingatourmindmaps.Westrungaveryshortsequencetogetherandimprovisedaroundthis(seesequenceabove).Weexperimentedwithwhitesheets‐usingthesenotonlytocoverme(playingtheroleofacharactertossingandturninginbed)butalsotocoverothersinthegroupwhowereusingtheirbodiestoprovidetheoutlineofabed.VeryearlyonintheprocesswecreatedanicemomentwhereIwaswrithingtryingtogettosleepwhiletherestofthegroup–hiddenfromview–providedanocturnalsoundscape,creatingsoundeffectsofdrippingtaps,tickingclocks,mutteredspeechandominousnoises.Thiswouldcertainlybesomethingtoreturnto.
Charactersleepless
Nightmaresinbed
Tryingtowork
Mundanejob
Flashbacktoyouth:Thisisn’thowIthoughtmylifewouldbe!
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Fromtheseearlyexperimentswewereabletobegintopiecetogetheraroughstructuretoourpieceintheformofanarrative.WeallrealizedfromourresearchthatALLcollaborativecreatorsoftheatremakesignificantalterationsandadditionstotheworkduringtheprocess,butitwasessentialtocommittoaDRAFTstructureagainstwhichwewouldbeabletoconstructourINSOMNIAworld.Lookingbackatmytheatrejournalwewantedourpiecetopresentthefollowing:Ourconcept:Brianisoverworked,depressedwiththetediouslifehehas.Lifeisn’ttheglossymagazinehepredicteditwouldbe!Briancan’tsleep.Heisplaguedbyvisions.Brianisfailingtokeepontopofthingsatwork.Pressureisstackingup.Hehasn’tgottheresourcestocope.Thedepressionatworkismakingthesleepingpatternevenworse.TocopewiththisBriantakessleepingpills.Thesehavestrongadverseeffects–thenightmaresbecomemoresurrealandvivid.Brianeventuallyreceives“medication”tosedatehimandbecomesacloneoftheotherswhoinhabithisworld‐machine‐like,exhaustedandemotionless‐therealityof21stcenturylife!Throughoutthisweseeineffectiveleaders,medicalpractitionersandcolleagues,alllookingoutforthemselves.Brianisavictimofthis,buttakestheblame.VerysimilartoBerkoff’s“TheTrial”(AdaptedfromKafka’s“Thetrial”,1914)
Onecharacter ‐Brian(tobeplayedbyme)Anensemble‐toplayallotherpeopleinthe
‘insomniaworld’andtophysicallycreatetheobjectsandenvironments(tobeplayedbythethreegirls).
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Example 9
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TargetAudienceTheidealaudienceforourpiecewouldbeschoolleaversandyoungadults.Thehard‐hittinglife“mightnotbeallthatyouareexpectingittobe”messageandthemesofidentity,stressandlackofsenseofpurposewouldhopefullyresonatewiththisagegroup.Intentions Tocreateapieceofintenseandengagingtheatrewhichchallengestheaudiencethroughtheuseofhighlyphysicalandstylizedperformancetechniques.
Topushourselvesasactorstothelimits,tofullyuseourbodiesandvoicestoengagetheaudienceinaslickperformance.
ThecollaborativedevelopmentofourpieceWemutuallyagreedthatourpieceshouldcentrearoundthecentralcharacterof“Brian”veryearlyonintheprocessandthisdecisionseemedtoworkwell.AlenahadtheideathatBrian’sinsomniashouldbeasaresultofhavingdoneeverything“right”inlife,andyetstillfeelinghehasalackoffulfillment.Thisstraight‐Astudenthadsecuredagoodjobasanaccountantbutthegrindandstressoflifewassappinghimofeveryounceofenthusiasmorhopeforescapingthedrudgeryofa9‐5officejob!Weexperimentedwithwaysofillustratingabusyanddemandingofficeenvironmentwithonlyfouractors,whichwasquiteademandingtask.
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AlthoughCarmentookoverallresponsibilityforthedirectionoftheofficescene,itwasveryimportantforustocollaborateandfeelabletomakesuggestionsorrecommendalterationstoeachscene.Thisbalancewouldbeessentialthroughouttheprocess.Carmenwantedusalltofeelcomfortablemovingourbodiesineachscene,andforustoberelaxedwhenmakingcontactwitheachother.Sheledafewexercisestohelpusdeveloptrustandtobegincreatingstrongphysicalimages.Thisearlyworkcertainlyhadapositiveeffectonthedynamicofthegroupandonourconfidencetoworkpracticallyandphysically.Tobeginthe‘officescene’wewantedtohaveofficeworkerssatdownatdesks,butcertainlydidn’twanttocluttertheperformancespacewithanyunnecessaryitemssuchaschairsortables.Thislinkedparticularlywithourintentionfortheperformancetobeslick.Wedidn’twantblackoutsorsetchangeswhichwouldslowthepaceofthepiece.Thiswouldn’tbehelpfultomakeanengagingpieceiftheaudiencewasconstantlywaitingforsetchanges.PhysicaltheatrecompaniessuchasDV8andCompliciterarelyslowtheirworkwithblackoutsorunnecessaryset.Oneofthecreativeideaswehadfortheofficewastohaveonepersonasthedeskandchair,providingtypingnoisesandoffice‘hub‐bub’onthebackground.Anotherpersonthensitsontheirkneesandmimestyping(usingthefingersofthe“chairperson”asakeyboard)asshowninthesketch.WhatIreallylovedaboutcreatingthisscenewashowquicklywewereabletoaddsmalldetailstothescenetomakeitevenmoreclear:sequencesofnumbers,usingthehandofthe“chair”asatelephonereceiver,etc.
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Example 9
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Thebeautyofbeingabletomakefurnituresosimplywithourbodies(suchasatableandachairforthedoctor,slidingdoorsforthetrainandthestructureofthebed)wasthattheimagescouldsoquicklyandsimplybeevoked.Theaudiencewouldhaveto“tunein”tobeabletointerprettheseimages,butoncetheywereonboardwiththeconcept,thepaceofthetheatrepiececouldreallypickupandmorealong.Thissequencewasintendedtobearhythmic,fast‐paceddisplayofefficiencyfromBrian’sday‐to‐dayofficejob.Elecreatedasoundtrackofasimpledrumbeat,clackingtypewritersandtelephonenoisestoaccompanytheactionusingGarageBand.Thisaddedlayerofsoundandclearrhythmgaveanaddeddimensiontothehuman‐madesoundeffectsweweremakinglive.IntermingledwiththisofficeenvironmentwealsothoughtitwasimportanttoshowthecharacterofBrianandgiveaninsighttohispastasa“perfect”studentandyoungmanfilledwithaspirationsandpotential.Wedecidedtoinsertabriefsceneintotheactionveryearlyon–amonologueframedasBrian’svaledictorianspeechathishigh‐schoolgraduationceremony–centredaroundtheconceptof‘beingsomething’–whichwouldclearlybeironicwhentheaudiencefullygraspshiscurrentdepressionandlackofselffulfillment.ThisisanearlydraftofmymonologueasBrianMyfellowgraduates,itisanhonourtobestandingbesideyoutoday,aswereadyourselvestotakethenextstepintolife.Westandherehavingreachedourfullpotential.Andnowit’stimeforustodosomethingwiththatpotential.Tobesomething.Whateveryoudo,doitwithintegrity.Makeitcount.
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Specificexplorationsledbyme“TheNightmare”Havingresearchedintototaltheatreandthein‐yer‐facestyleofperformance,Iwasparticularlyinterestedindirectingthegroupforthe“nightmare”sequence.Afteravisittothemedicalpractitioner,Brianisprescribeddrugstosettlehisnervesandsendhimtosleep.Alena’sresearchintomedicationforinsomniaindicatedthatsomeofthedrugscancausehallucinationsandnightmares.Thiswasperfectfortheshockingandchallengingfeatureswewerehopingfor.Wepurchasedsomeboxesofsmallmintswhichwouldworkefficientlyonstageas“pills”.Idirectedthegirlstofranticallywrithearoundtryingtosleep,showingtheaudiencemorethanjustthecentralcharacterofBrian.ThemomentBriandecidestotakeoneofthetablets,Idirectedthegirlstofreeze,creatingacontrasttothefranticmovementandtobuildtensionasIshakeoutahandfulofpillsandswallowthem.OnceIhadswallowedthepillsthefourofuscoveredourselvesupunderthewhitesheet(whichhadbeenusedtodelineatethestagespace).Atthismoment,Idirectedthegirlstobeginloudbreathingsounds,exhalingandbegintorepeatBrian’snameagainandagainasI(asBrian)begantwitchingandclearlyfallingintothedream.Ilaterdirectedthegirlstodothiswiththesheetsovertheirfaces,whichmadethemmoreghost‐likeandbizarrewhentheyfinallysatup.Wecarriedoutafewexperimentstoseejusthowshockingandintensewecouldgetwiththenightmarewithoutmakingthescenecomicalorunbelievable.Weexperimentedwiththegirlsmovingtowardsmelikeharpiesandwrappingmeinthesheets,bindingme,andactuallycreatinganoosewithoneofthesheetsandbeginningtostrangleme‐symbolicofBrian’srestrictiveandunfulfilledlife.IthendecidedtorepeatmymonologuefromearlierinthepiecetofullyillustrateBrian’sstruggleandinnertorments.WithasinisterandsurrealsoundtrackcreatedbyEleonGarageBand,thissequencebecamereallyeffectiveinfulfillingourintentions.
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Makeup:white,bleachedfaces,darkheavybagsundereyes.Messy“bedhair”.
Costumes:acrossbetweenpyjamasandasylumclothes.Needtobeabletomove.¾lengthtrousers.
Setandlighting:studiospace,audienceonthreesides.Simplewhitebrightlighting.Stark.Whitesheets.
Storyboard–Finalstructureofthepiece1. Stagemarkedwithfoldedwhitesheets.Studioperformance.2. Busyofficescene,non‐stopnoiseandhardwork.3. Brian’smonologue.Previouslifeleavinghim.“Besomething”.4. Backinwork,busysequence.Brianbecomesoverwhelmed.Breakdownalarms.
“Youareacog!”5. Brianiscalledtoseehisboss.Heisfailing.Instructedtosorthimselforfindanotherjob.Briantriestoexplain.Ignored.
6. Briandecidestoseekhelpfromamedicalpractitioner.7. Thedoctor’ssurgery.ThedoctormocksBrian.Heisprescribedmedication.
8. Brianreturnshomeonatrain,withothers.Allreadingsideeffectslabel.
9. Brianathome.Apartmentblock.Allresidentsstruggletosleep.
10. Monologuesfromeachperson–blendedovereachother.“Mysymptoms”.
11. Thenoiseistoomuch.Briantakesatablet.Sleep.12. TheNightmare.Brianishallucinating;heisattackedbyvisionsofhislifeandhispast.
13. Whatiswrongwithme?Outburst.Everythingstops.14. Allbecomeinmatesinanasylum–warningbell‐allimmediatelytidyandawaitinspection.
15. Thedoctor.Medicalpractitionerinspectsinmates.Brianpleads:“Ishouldn’tbehere!”
16. Allgivenpills.Sedated.Brianisincarcerated.17. Brian’sfinalwords‐reiteratesopeningmonologue.“Doitwithintegrity”.Hetakesanotherpill.Blackout.
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Example 9
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MycontributiontotheperformanceThroughoutthepreparationprocessIfeltthatIcontributedsignificantlyandeffectivelytothedevelopmentofourpiece,bothasaperformerandafellowcollaborator,attemptingtofairlybalancemycreativeinputandmysupportive,responsiveandpliableroleasamemberoftheensemble.ThissuccessfullysupportedmycontributiontothefinalperformanceinthesensethatIhaddevelopedapositive,openandresponsiverelationshipwithmyfellowgroupmembers,whichenabledustofeelsafeandsupportedduringtheliveperformance,aswellasfeelingthatIhadcredibleownershipovermyshareofthepiece,whichItrulyfeelhelpedmakeuseachmoreassertive,committedandpassionateasperformers.MyrolerequiredmetoplaythecharacterofBrianthroughoutthepiece,andtousemyphysicalandvocalskillstocommunicateagrowingsenseofdesperation,completeandutterexhaustion,afixedandfrozenstatewhenotherswerethefocusofattentionandstrongandsupplemovementstotransitionbetweenscenes.Iwasalsorequiredtocontrastthiswithaflashbacktomycharacterinhisyoungerdays,freshfaced,fullofenthusiasm,energyandpassion.Iwasrequiredtomanipulatemyskillsandsustaineachofthesecharacteristicsatgivenpointsthroughoutmyperformance.IbelieveIwasabletoshowthesecharacteristicsbyadaptingmyvoice:theslow,slurredandheavyspeechofaninsomniac,thequick,highpitchedrantofadesperateman,spittingeverysyllable,andthepained,anguishedBrianofthenightmarescene,findingalow,harshtoneasIwailmyspeechasthegirlsslowlybegintostrangleme.Icommunicatedthesescenesthroughtheuseofmybodyandmyposture,contrastingthebouncy,energeticandyouthfulBrianofthepastwithhunched,aching,heavy‐footedandslowpacedcharacterwhowasdesperateforsleep.Eyecontactisessentialfor“truthful”performances,Ibelieve,andIwassuretofixmyeyesinastaring,blankexpressionwhencreatingfrozenphysicalobjects,topleadwithmyeyespinnedsharplyonthecharactersofmybossandthemedicalpractitioner,andtoengagefacetofacewithseatedaudiencemembersforthesequencesofnarrationorpleading.Ibelievetheseactionsenabledtheaudiencetoengagemoredeeplywithmyperformanceandassistedthegroupinoursharedintentions.
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Example 9
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Ibelievethatthevideoclipsofourperformanceevidencetheseskillseffectively.Ihaveselectedtheopeningscenes,fromtheofficeenvironmentandtheintroductionofBrian,whichleadsintoBrian’sbreakdown.This,Ifeel,evidenceshowweattemptedtomakethepieceslick,withtheswiftandfluidmovementbetweenscenes,andengaging.Iamparticularlyimpressedwithhowwellourskillsappeartobeevenly‘pitched’intheperformance.Somethingwespentagreatdealoftimeon,givingtheaudienceasenseofusasaunited,polishedandcollaborativegroupofstorytellers.Ibelievethissceneusesmusic,movement,soundeffects(verbal)andactiontoengagetheaudienceeffectively.ThesecondsceneIhaveselectedfromthewholevideorecordingisthescenethatIpersonallyled,theNightmarescene.HereIbelievetherecordingdemonstrateshowwecontrastedsilence,recordedsound,stillnessandactiontobuildthesenseofthenightmarelooming.Thesoundofthegirlslaughingastheyleaponmewiththewhitematerial,andthestrikingimageofthenoosearoundmyneckandthemedicationbeingtippedovermecontributeswelltoashockingandtroublingscene,hopefullymakingtheaudiencequestionifthesurrealeventstheyarewitnessingarerealorimaginedbythecharacterofBrian.Iamveryproudofhowthesetwomomentsshowusunitedandfocusedasagroupandhowtheyhopefullygiveaflavorofthetotaltheatreandhighlyphysical/stylizedpieceoftheatrewewereaspiringtocreate.Wewereencouragedbyourteachertoreflectinourtheatrejournalswhatwewouldeachdodifferentlyifweweretogothroughthisprocessagain.Iamquiteconfidentthatasagroupwewouldhaveaimedtocreateapieceoftheatrelikethisagain,butwouldcertainlyhavebenefittedfrommoretime,particularlyworkinginthechosenandperformancespace.IfeltthatEledidafantasticjobwiththesoundtrack,butagainmoretimewiththisbeforetheperformancedaywouldhavemeantwecouldhavesortedthesoundlevelsmore(sometimestooloud,otherstooquiet)andalsobemoreconfidentaboutwhensectionsstartedorstopped.OtherwiseIwasutterlydelightedwithwhatwecreated.