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E.L. Achieve 1 First Look: A preview of the revised content modules Form groups of 4 and select a note-taker Introduce yourselves while the note-taker writes people’s initials on a piece of paper As a group, come up with a CM related term for each letter you’ve written down Let’s see who can get eight CM related words Agenda SecCM Five Day Overview Organization of the New Content Modules Interactive Reading and Note-making Looking at multiple draft reading in the content modules Academic Writing Developing the appropriate writing support tools Closing

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First Look:���A preview of the ���

revised content modules

 Form groups of 4 and select a note-taker  Introduce yourselves while the note-taker writes people’s initials on a piece of paper  As a group, come up with a CM related term for each letter you’ve written down  Let’s see who can get eight CM related words ☺

Agenda

 SecCM Five Day Overview  Organization of the New Content Modules   Interactive Reading and Note-making –  Looking at multiple draft reading in the

content modules

 Academic Writing –  Developing the appropriate writing support

tools

 Closing

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1. Backward Design Design instruction that addresses the cognitive and linguistic demands required to meet the student learning goal.

2. Language as Part of Content Teaching Teach both content ‘brick’ and functional ‘mortar’ throughout instruction.

3. Oral Language Practice Structure peer interaction for students to use the target language in the goal.

4. Interactive Reading & Note-making Use comprehension strategies and note-taking tools to increase student independence.

5. Academic Writing Support Provide tools and facilitate processes that support students in producing complex text.

6. Continuous Improvement Engage in individual & group reflection regarding ways to improve achievement.

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design'and'deliver'instruc,onal'sequence'

examine'student'work'

reflect'and'refine'process'

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Plan

Teach Reflect

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A Closer Look at the Revised Content Modules

  During our institutes to: –  see the explicit

connection to the Common Core Standards

–  model the backward design process

–  see how the CM planning process is used

–  see sample tools specific to a content area and lesson

 English Language Arts  Social Studies  Science and Math under development

  Introduction with CCSS or Next Generation Standards reference  Unit Overview   Task Analysis for lesson   Text Analysis for the lesson   Lesson Plan, embedding

–  Structure Student Talk routines –  Process for interactive reading and

note-makers –  Tools for academic writing support

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 Form groups of 4  Two people will review the introduction and unit overview for the ELA module  Two people will review the Social Studies module

Think about and discuss:  How do the lessons

support the unit learning goal?  What CCSS stand

out to you in the unit and lesson learning goals?

Interactive Reading and Note-making

Refining Our Practice Implementing the teaching skills of Secondary CM

REV March 2013

Creating Effective Systems for English Learners

1. Backward Design Goal: Design instruct ion that addresses the cognit ive and l inguist ic demands required to meet stated student learn ing goal .

Competencies Develop student learning goal, with both

content and language objectives Determine cognitive and linguistic

demands of student outcome Identify required “brick and mortar” Divide learning sequence into discrete,

measurable tasks or skills; checks for understanding

Resources Tab 1, CM analysis tools Tab 2, CM lesson planner and Chunking Protocol Tab 5, Sample lessons

2. Language as Part of Content Teaching

Goal: Create opportunit ies to learn both content “br ick” and funct ional “mortar” throughout instruct ion.

Competencies Offer language frames at multiple

proficiency levels Ensure frames support flexible use of

language Model frames throughout learning

sequence Provide corrective feedback

Resources Tab 1, Thumbnail sketch Tab 2, Function tools Tab 5, Sample lessons Ways We Express Our Thinking hand-out

4. Interactive Reading and Note-making

Goal: Use comprehension strateg ies and note-tak ing tools to fac i l i tate the navigat ion of complex text and increase student independence.

Competencies Determine and draw attention to critically

important elements or sections of text Develop and support note-taking to

improve analytical reading Model “thinking aloud” to reinforce

metacognitive skills Pair note-taking with oral language practice

Resources Tab 3, Dialectical journal Tab 5, Content-specific note-taking tools Tab 5, Think Aloud protocol CM Instructional Units

3. Oral Language Practice Goal: Structure peer interact ion for students to use – in speech - the target language of the learn ing goal .

Competencies Group students purposefully Align oral language practice to student

outcome Model and practice routines Monitor student engagement and

production of target language Hold students accountable

Resources Tab 3, Oral language routines Tab 3, Grouping rating scale Tab 5, Sample lessons Discussion Cards CM Instructional Units

5. Academic Writing Support

Goal: Provide tools and fac i l i tate processes that support students in producing complex academic writ ing .

Competencies Use tools that address genre-specific

structure and language Deconstruct models and samples for

target language and thinking Provide rubrics to clarify expectations Prepare students to use language

independently

Resources Tab 2, CM summary template Tab 3, Genre drafting templates Tab 5, Content-specific writing tools CM Student Flipbook CM Instructional Units

6. Continuous Improvement Goal: Engage in indiv idual and group ref lect ion regarding ways to improve student achievement and ref ine expl ic i t language instruct ion.

Competencies Maintain lesson plans and document

instructional practice Collect and reflect on student

achievement data Participate in and contribute to

conversations about student outcomes Share artifacts, work samples, and

successful classroom strategies

Resources Tab 2, CM lesson planner E.L. Achieve Implementation Guide CM Planning Process hand-out Refining our Practice rubrics

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Reading Anchor Standard #10

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Close, analytic reading stresses engaging with a text of sufficient complexity directly and examining meaning thoroughly and methodically, encouraging students to read and reread deliberately. Directing student attention on the text itself empowers students to understand the central ideas and key supporting details. It also enables students to reflect on the meanings of individual words and sentences; the order in which sentences unfold; and the development of ideas over the course of the text, which ultimately leads students to arrive at an understanding of the text as a whole.

PARCC, 2011, p. 7

Reading a textbook in ‘drafts’ is very similar to writing an essay in drafts. Our preview of the text is like a pre-writing brainstorm where we list what we already know about the topic and what we will learn. Our first draft reading helps us get the gist of the text, the main ideas. Our second draft reading focuses on important details to help us understand the main ideas and think about how all parts of the text fit together.

- Nancy Spaniak

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 Chunking  Annotating  Responding  Citing  Summarizing

Close reading meansInteracting with text

How do you teach the skills of close reading?

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Close Reading starts with Knowing How It Ends

The first step in teaching the text is to determine the text(s) to be used and if there are specific sections of the text that are more relevant for the task.

ELA and Social Studies Content Modules ���An Example of Text Analysis

Take a moment to review Step One of the Text Analysis in your content module. What reading is used and are there specific sections of the reading that are more relevant for the task?

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Preparing for Close Reading Analyzing the Language of the Text

The second step is to determine if the function of the text matches the function of the task.

If so, how can the functional language be leveraged?

If not, what functional language needs to be taught?

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Take a moment to review Step Two of the Text Analysis in your content module. 1. Does the function of the text match the function of the task?

2. What functional language is leveraged in the reading or taught explicitly?

Close ReadingPlanning for Each ReadThe third step is to plan for each reading:

1. What is the guiding question for the read?

2. What reading strategies will you use to help students better comprehend the text?

3. What note-makers and structured student talk routines will you use?

Take a moment to review Step Three of the Text Analysis in your content module. 1. What is the guiding question for the read?

2. What reading strategies are used?

3. What note-makers and structured student talk routines are used?

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The purpose of first draft reading is overall comprehension – getting the gist.

The second reading requires analysis of the text. It is an opportunity to gather evidence from the text for the task.

 With your partner, read through the lesson close reading activities – ELA: Activity 4 and 5 (pages 5-11 and 5-12) – Social Studies: Activity 5, 6, and 7 (pages

5-8 to 5-10)

 Use your note-taking tool to guide your review. Be prepared to share insights in your team of four.

Close reading – first draft reading ELA Content Module

 Chunking  Annotating  Responding  Citing  Summarizing

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 Chunking  Annotating  Responding  Citing  Summarizing

Close reading – second draft reading ELA Content Module

Close reading – first draft reading Social Studies Content Module

Name%___________________________%%

New,%efficient%technology%increased%the%number%of%products%a%worker%could%make.%

The,Great,Depression,Cause,and,Effect,Graphic,Organizer,

,,

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% %Agriculture, , , , , , Industry,%% %During%WWI,%the%U.S.%needed%a%lot%of%

food%to%support%the%Allied%troops.%

Farmers%were%in%debt%from%__________%____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________%

After%WWI,%farmers%still%produced%a%lot%of%food,%but%_______________________%___________________________________________________________________________________________________%

Farmers%earned%___________________%_____________________,%even%though%__________________________________________________________________%

Food%prices%_______________________%_________________________________%

As%a%result,%_______________________%____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________%

The%profits%of%corporations%________%_______________________________,%but%the%wages%of%workers%___________%________________________________%

A%few%people%(who%owned%corporations%and%got%their%profits)%_______________%________________________________,%but%most%workers%__________________%__________________________________________________________________%

Not%enough%people%could%____________%___________________________________________________________________________________________________%

 Chunking  Annotating  Responding  Citing  Summarizing

•  One reason ____________ was because ___________________.

•  __________ led to / contributed to / resulted in ______________.

•  A critical factor leading to _____ was the fact that _____________.

 Chunking  Annotating  Responding  Citing  Summarizing

Close reading – second draft reading Social Studies Content Module

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Academic Writing Support

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Refining Our Practice Implementing the teaching skills of Secondary CM

REV March 2013

Creating Effective Systems for English Learners

1. Backward Design Goal: Design instruct ion that addresses the cognit ive and l inguist ic demands required to meet stated student learn ing goal .

Competencies Develop student learning goal, with both

content and language objectives Determine cognitive and linguistic

demands of student outcome Identify required “brick and mortar” Divide learning sequence into discrete,

measurable tasks or skills; checks for understanding

Resources Tab 1, CM analysis tools Tab 2, CM lesson planner and Chunking Protocol Tab 5, Sample lessons

2. Language as Part of Content Teaching

Goal: Create opportunit ies to learn both content “br ick” and funct ional “mortar” throughout instruct ion.

Competencies Offer language frames at multiple

proficiency levels Ensure frames support flexible use of

language Model frames throughout learning

sequence Provide corrective feedback

Resources Tab 1, Thumbnail sketch Tab 2, Function tools Tab 5, Sample lessons Ways We Express Our Thinking hand-out

4. Interactive Reading and Note-making

Goal: Use comprehension strateg ies and note-tak ing tools to fac i l i tate the navigat ion of complex text and increase student independence.

Competencies Determine and draw attention to critically

important elements or sections of text Develop and support note-taking to

improve analytical reading Model “thinking aloud” to reinforce

metacognitive skills Pair note-taking with oral language practice

Resources Tab 3, Dialectical journal Tab 5, Content-specific note-taking tools Tab 5, Think Aloud protocol CM Instructional Units

3. Oral Language Practice Goal: Structure peer interact ion for students to use – in speech - the target language of the learn ing goal .

Competencies Group students purposefully Align oral language practice to student

outcome Model and practice routines Monitor student engagement and

production of target language Hold students accountable

Resources Tab 3, Oral language routines Tab 3, Grouping rating scale Tab 5, Sample lessons Discussion Cards CM Instructional Units

5. Academic Writing Support

Goal: Provide tools and fac i l i tate processes that support students in producing complex academic writ ing .

Competencies Use tools that address genre-specific

structure and language Deconstruct models and samples for

target language and thinking Provide rubrics to clarify expectations Prepare students to use language

independently

Resources Tab 2, CM summary template Tab 3, Genre drafting templates Tab 5, Content-specific writing tools CM Student Flipbook CM Instructional Units

6. Continuous Improvement Goal: Engage in indiv idual and group ref lect ion regarding ways to improve student achievement and ref ine expl ic i t language instruct ion.

Competencies Maintain lesson plans and document

instructional practice Collect and reflect on student

achievement data Participate in and contribute to

conversations about student outcomes Share artifacts, work samples, and

successful classroom strategies

Resources Tab 2, CM lesson planner E.L. Achieve Implementation Guide CM Planning Process hand-out Refining our Practice rubrics

Writing well is not an option; it is a necessity.

 Genres are goal-oriented; they are meant to serve a purpose.  Genres have an expected overall structure; they rely on well-established patterns.   In ELA, the common genres are narrative, argument/persuasive, expository, and response to literature.   In science, a lab report is an example of a genre.

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 To successfully write a formal paper in a common academic genre or format, a skilled writer must have command of the dominant functions to: o organize and structure his/her thinking o use language specific to the writing task

What makes writers masters of their trade is not only their ability to express interesting thoughts, but their mastery of an inventory of basic moves…less experienced writers are often unfamiliar with these basic moves.

- Graff & Berkenstein, They Say, I Say

Support for ���Making Skillful Choices

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 Identifies the key components of the genre  Lists possible techniques or “moves” the writer uses  Offers language to use when making a particular “move”

To begin, complete your task analysis including the sample student response.

Problem Analys is for Language Instruct ion Grade 6 Performance Task: Field Trip Question #4

Constructing Meaning for Mathematics

Assessing Performance - sample student response

What will students need to say, write or do to explain their thinking?

Dear Mr. Townsend,

Thank you for offering to take our class on a field trip and for asking for our input on where we should visit. After analyzing the students’ preferences, the costs, and distances, I recommend that the class visit the science museum. While it’s true that a lot of students wanted to go to the zoo (12), it was also the last choice for even more students (13). However, both the science museum and the aquarium had a higher number of first and second choice votes (21 and 22 respectively). I could have chosen either of those options based on students’ preferences, but the science museum was significantly less expensive than the aquarium. The science museum would only cost each student $7.33 whereas the aquarium would cost $11.33 per student. The increased cost of the aquarium trip is due to the fact that it is farther away from school than the science museum and therefore had higher transportation costs. Also, the shorter bus trip would mean less time in route and more time in the museum. Finally, my personal preference has been the science museum all along. I haven’t visited a science museum for a long time and I would like to try all of the new interactive exhibits. For all of these reasons, I recommend that we take a class trip to the science museum.

Thank you for considering my input.

Most sincerely, Scott

Language Production - functions Which language function(s) will students be expected to produce?

Making Sense of the Task ! Description/Elaboration

! Question / Conjecture

Communication Reason X Sequencing

! Cause and Effect

Reflecting and Evaluation X Compare and Contrast

X Proposition / Support

Language Production - bricks

What content-specific language will students be expected to know and use?

student preferences, choice, distance, cost, cost per student, expensive, science museum, aquarium, zoo, field trip

Language Production - mortar

What functional words and phrases will students be expected to produce?

Prop/Support: recommend, it’s true that, based on, personal preference, for all of these reasons

Compare/Contrast: while, however, whereas, more, less, higher/farther/shorter/etc.

Student Learning Goal

Students will understand how to deconstruct and solve an algebraic story problem and be able to write a note to the teacher explaining a specific proposal for field trip location using mathematical considerations of cost and students’ preferences. (Performance Task Question #4)

Math example: final question on a 6th grade SBAC performance task

Next, deconstruct the ‘moves’ in your sample student response. Use these ‘moves’ as the architecture or plan for the template you will create.

Math%Problem%Solving%Sample%Student%Response%

Field%Trip%Performance%Task%–%Grade%6%

Math%Sample%–%DRAFT%10/14%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%©%2014%E.L.%Achieve%

%

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Dear%Mr.%Townsend,%%Thank%you%for%offering%to%take%our%class%on%a%field%trip%and%for%asking%for%our%input%on%where%we%should%visit.%(Introduction/Setting/Purpose)%%After%analyzing%the%students’%preferences,%the%costs,%and%distances,%I%recommend%that%the%class%visit%the%science%museum.%%(Proposal/Recommendation/Thesis)%%While%it’s%true%that%a%lot%of%students%wanted%to%go%to%the%zoo%(12),%it%was%also%the%last%choice%for%even%more%students%(13).%(Acknowledge/opposing/points/and/include/a/rebuttal)%%However,%both%the%science%museum%and%the%aquarium%had%a%higher%number%of%first%and%second%choice%votes%(21%and%22%respectively).%(First/supporting/detail)%%%I%could%have%chosen%either%of%those%options%based%on%students’%preferences,%but%the%science%museum%was%significantly%less%expensive%than%the%aquarium./(elaborate/and/transition/to/second/supporting/detail)/%The%science%museum%would%only%cost%each%student%$7.33%whereas%the%aquarium%would%cost%$11.33%per%student.%(elaborate/on/second/supporting/detail)%%The%increased%cost%of%the%aquarium%trip%is%due%to%the%fact%that%it%is%farther%away%from%school%than%the%science%museum%and%therefore%had%higher%transportation%costs.//(further/elaboration)/%Also,%the%shorter%bus%trip%would%mean%less%time%in%route%and%more%time%in%the%museum./(third/supporting/detail/–/if/needed)/%Finally,%my%personal%preference%has%been%the%science%museum%all%along./(fourth/supporting/detail/–/if/needed)/%I%haven’t%visited%a%science%museum%for%a%long%time%and%I%would%like%to%try%all%of%the%new%interactive%exhibits.%(elaboration)%%For%all%of%these%reasons,%I%recommend%that%we%take%a%class%trip%to%the%science%museum.%(conclusion)%%Thank%you%for%considering%my%input.%%Most%sincerely,%%Scott%%

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Finally, create a drafting template that models the organization of the thinking and contains language resources for each ‘move’ required in the assignment.

Townsend Constructing Meaning: Explicit Language for Content Instruction © 2014/E.L.Achieve www.elachieve.org

Writing a Letter to Make a Recommendation

drafting template

INTRODUCTION

Set the purpose and respond to the prompt. Open with a positive tone. Remember, your goal is to persuade.

! Thank you for ______________________.

! I/We are looking forward to ___________.

! The possibility of __ is (exciting/etc.) .

! __________________________________.

.

PROPOSAL

What is your recommendation?

! I/We/The class recommends __because___.

! After analyzing _____I propose________.

! An analysis of __ led me to suggest _____.

! __________________________________.

.

OBJECTION/REBUTTAL

Is there an alternative proposal? Why is your proposal better?

! While it is true that ____ it is also ______.

! Although others recommend _________, I

disagree due to _____________________.

! _____ argue that ______, however, _____.

! __________________________________.

.

REASONS

Explain your thinking by giving evidence to support your proposal.

(repeat as needed depending on the number of reasons in your argument)

! The recommendation is supported by the

fact that __________________________.

! ___is/would___ whereas___ is/would ___.

! However, both ___ and ___ is/have _____.

! __________________________________.

.

ELABORATION

Make further connections between your reasons and the proposal.

(repeat as needed)

! This is evidenced by _________________.

! Consequently, ______________________.

! Also, ______ would mean ____________.

! __________________________________.

.

CONCLUSION

Return to your proposal and restate your recommendation.

! For all of these reasons, I recommend ___.

! Ultimately, we should ________________.

! I sincerely hope we can move forward with

this proposal to _____________________.

! __________________________________.

.

  Think about the writing move in each sentence –  What is the writer trying to

do?  What functional language supports that move? –  Start with the language used

in the sample response –  What alternate language can

be used so that students have choice/ variety?

Model for students by deconstructing an essay and co-writing an alternative essay using the same drafting template.

The$American$Dream$was$once$a$dream$of$religious$freedom,$attainable$to$those$who$pursued$it$and$fought$for$it.$Eventually,$the$dream$evolved$toward$the$attainment$of$equal$rights.$For$African$Americans,$it$meant$fighting$for$equality$regardless$of$the$obstacles$they$faced.$For$many$people$today,$it$promises$that$each$person$can$pursue$their$own$personal$goals$and$dreams.$$$ $According$to$some,$“the$American$Dream$of$the$past$no$longer$exists.”$However,$I$believe$that$although$the$American$Dream$may$be$difficult$to$obtain,$it$is$still$attainable$to$those$who$truly$want$it.$The$American$Dream$is$not$dead;$it$has$evolved.$In$response$to$this$evolution,$working$hard$toward$a$dream$may$no$longer$be$enough.$We$must$also$demonstrate$the$right$characteristics$and$prepare$ourselves$with$the$right$skills.$$The$Ceja$family$sought$their$fulfillment$of$the$American$Dream$through$the$hard$struggles$of$field$work.$The$Cejas$held$the$view$that$hard$work$in$the$fields$and$in$the$classroom$was$necessary$to$achieve$their$goals.$Despite$their$obstacles,$I$am$convinced$that$studying$hard$and$making$the$right$choices$made$it$possible$for$them$to$attain$the$American$Dream.$$The$American$Dream$is$still$attainable,$but$today$it$takes$more$than$just$working$hard$and$being$dedicated.$$In$the$article,$“Pickers$to$Vintners,”$the$Ceja$family$exhibits$the$qualities$needed$to$make$their$dreams$a$reality.$Neither$the$father$nor$mother$knew$a$word$of$English,$nor$their$children,$“but$that$wasn’t$an$obstacle.”$Although$they$lived$in$labor$camps,$the$Ceja$family$had$ambitions$to$own$their$own$winery.$Mr.$Ceja$spent$hours$studying$English$and$learned$valuable$skills$by$specializing$in$grafting.$Eventually,$in$order$to$achieve$their$goal,$the$Ceja$family$sacrificed$their$home$by$selling$it$to$invest$in$a$winery.$The$author$states,$“now$the$Ceja$family$owns$its$own$vineyards$and$produces$critically$praised$wines,$a$global$emblem$of$the$good$life.”$$Some$readers$may$challenge$the$view$that$the$American$dream$still$exists$today.$In$the$article$“Making$It$in$America,”$by$Adam$Davidson,$the$author$takes$issue$with$the$idea$that$the$average$American$can$still$achieve$the$classic$dream$of$enjoying$a$comfortable$middle$class$standard$of$living.$Twenty$years$ago$it$did$not$matter$if$you$had$an$advanced$education.$Today,$however,$if$a$person$is$unskilled$he$could$lose$his$job$to$a$machine$that$can$often$do$the$work$more$precisely$than$a$human.$Of$course,$this$perspective$fails$to$acknowledge$the$critical$role$of$free,$public$education$to$prepare$all$students$with$the$knowledge$and$skills$needed$to$choose$postQsecondary$training$or$studies.$Today$and$in$the$future,$advanced$education$is$more$important$than$ever$as$a$gateQkeeper$to$the$American$Dream.$However,$that$door$still$exists$and$we,$as$a$society,$need$to$take$steps$to$ensure$that$all$students$who$choose$further$training$can$have$access$to$it.$$My$aunt$Alicia$is$someone$who$believed$she$could$improve$her$standard$of$living$for$herself$and$her$baby.$Because$she$didn’t$speak$English,$she$was$unable$to$get$a$high$paying$job$when$she$emigrated$to$the$United$States.$Much$like$the$Ceja$family,$she$committed$to$hard$work$and$education$so$that$she$could$realize$her$dreams.$She$worked$as$a$maid$and$at$night$she$studied$and$went$to$a$public$school.$By$working$hard$and$getting$an$education,$she$accomplished$her$dream$of$owning$a$home$and$demonstrating$to$her$child$the$value$of$committing$to$a$goal.$$I$remain$convinced$that$the$American$Dream$is$still$attainable.$I$believe$this$because$education$is$not$that$hard$if$we$practice,$put$in$effort,$and$approach$learning$with$enthusiasm,$like$we$do$with$video$games$or$Facebook.$Although$others$may$argue$that$today’s$opportunities$are$limited$to$a$select$few,$the$American$Dream$continues$to$offer$chances$to$those$who$are$willing$to$work$hard$and$invest$in$their$own$education.$In$the$words$of$former$LA$Unified$School$District$superintendent$Roy$Romer,$“The$need$for$a$college$education$is$even$more$important$now$than$it$was$before,$but$I$think$that$the$increased$costs$are$a$very$severe$obstacle$to$access.$It$is$an$American$dream,$and$I$think$that$one$of$our$challenges$is$to$find$a$way$to$make$that$available.”$

Pursuing the American Dream – Argument Drafting Template !

!Develop an introduction – define the American Dream

!

!The American Dream

! was once

! began as

! started with

!

!

With time, / Eventually, the dream

! evolved

! changed !

! grew into

!For some, it

!! meant

! promised

! offered !For others, it

!

According to , " the American Dream ." !

Present your position – state your thesis !

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Build your position – develop your ideas

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