first test magazine improvements
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FIRST TEST MAGAZINE IMPROVEMENTS
Cameron Tubb
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Some of the comments which I was given were: Not enough info on front page Cant tell what WOMbajak is Not enough content information No issue number to make it look professional Re think image Change fonts