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Page 1: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words
Page 2: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

Governor Crist

Executive Order

Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and

free of needless words

Page 3: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

Governor Crist

Page 4: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

What is plain language?

• Clear language • Only the information

needed by the recipient• Short sentences written

in the active voice • Layout and design

Page 5: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

Plain language

• Where have we been?

• Where are we going?

• How will we keep score?

Page 6: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

Plain language inventory

Presentations on agency websites, letters, notices,

applications, reports, pamphlets and any

other communication meant for public

consumption 

Page 7: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

Plain language translator

driveway connectionvehicular access connection

Page 8: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

driveway lengththroat depth

Plain language translator

Page 9: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

Plain language translator

detectable warning surface on existing sidewalk curb ramps

truncated dome detectable warning surface on the existing sidewalk

curb ramps

Page 10: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

replace existing traffic signals with new signals

replace the existing concrete strain pole systems with new mast arm

signal systems

Plain language translator

Page 11: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

Plain language translator

spherical bladdersbasketballs

Page 12: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

What is a plain language document?

• Uses few words as possible

• Audience can understand it

• Easy to look at and easy to read

Page 13: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

“Talking down to the public?”

• Does not mean baby talk

• Clear, concise language

• Short, easy-to-understand sentences

Page 14: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

Karen Friedman

Page 15: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

External customers

• Did you get the info you needed?

• Was it written in plain language?

Page 16: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

Internal customers

• Are you using the PL checklist?

• Do you find the checklist helpful?

• How has PL affected your communications with the public?

Page 17: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

Plain language benefits

• Saves time and money

• Good customer service

• Reduces burden we place on public

Page 18: Governor Crist Executive Order Written communication to the public must be clear, concise, and free of needless words

Any questions?