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TELLING PAST ACTIVITIES

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Page 1: Grammar error in writing

TELLING PAST ACTIVITIES

Page 2: Grammar error in writing

Actually I do not want to participate.

First time junior high school, I took part in scout.

I knew come back from samrinda.

In the mid a way there is motorcycle.

Actually I didn’t want to participate.

First time when I was in junior high school, I took part in scout.

I just come back from samarinda.

On the way there was motorcycle.

Page 3: Grammar error in writing

Move quickly... At something day. I am with my father

get a long go to swim My schedule

yesterday is very full I am very tired but I

am happy The party is simple

Moved quickly.... One day... My father and I got a

long went to swim My schedule

yesterday ws very full I was very tired but I

was very happy The party was simple

Page 4: Grammar error in writing

I have a story Experience when

participating scb We can active I have a dad a great

soldier I had the incident

When I do the work... On the campus I was told to make an

appointment

I had a story My Experience when

participated scb We could active I had a dad he was

great soldier I had an incident When I did my work,,, At the campus I told to make an

appointment

Page 5: Grammar error in writing

My first I walk to the bus stop

After a long journey I feel this is not the direction

I am and friends make kapurung

My past is very sad My favourite

animal died from eating satiety

Firstly I walked to the bus stop

After a long journey I felt this was not the direction

My friends and I made kapurung

My past was very sad

My favourite animal died becaouse ate satiety

Page 6: Grammar error in writing

I always play with my pet

A very sad And to this day Property my family

is gone The robber carrying School fees my

father The birthday of me I birth

I used to play with my pet

I was very sad And untill now my family ‘s

property was gone The robber stold My father’s school

fees My birthday I was born

Page 7: Grammar error in writing

We selfie together After resting our

dinner I after home from

college Me and my brother I had to bring Finally me to go

back to college She is happened I bought food for

ate

We took selfie After resting we

had dinner After I arrived

home from college My brother and I I had to bring Finally i went back

to campus She was happy I bought some food

to eat

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Teacher mathematic Name teacher me From I small to big as

know Mom me is very sad

Mathematic teacher My teacher name When I was child untill

I grew up My mom was very sad

/ mom and I was very sad