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Client:Wyatt ShelyStaff or Resource:MelissaDate: October 5, 2015, 12:00pm - 1:00pm

The session addressed the following::Thesis/focus; Contentdevelopment/idea invention; Organization; Revision; MLA;

Assignment:Inquiry Assignment

Description of the session:Revised for Clarity and Smooth Transitions

Comments:Hi Wyatt,It was nice meeting you today and working on your assignment with you. Ithought I'd send you list of some things to keep inmind as you revise:(1) For sources that have commonalities, use words such as "this supports"this is an example of" or "to go along with the previous example".(2) For sources that contradict, use words such as, "This contradicts theprevious" and "this source had a different perspective"

(3) Add a paragraph about the potential downfallsof combining a socialist acapitalis t principles and how you would reconcilethose downfalls.(4) For information about in-text citations click on the following link:https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/02/(5) For information about the Works Cited Page, click on the following link:https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/08/

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