ielts model essays

8/3/2019 IELTS Model essays

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Ov fmn|z{juv ouj ejic` zvjk nmuj ock nmuj ic jkzfo{imc" {ajuj pibb ej vmmc cm umbj hmu {jofajuv ic

{aj fbovvummn#

[ajuj iv cm kmze{ {ao{ jkzfo{imc ock {aj bjoucic` |umfjvv aov faoc`jk vicfj {aj ic{umkzf{imc mh

fmn|z{juv4 [aj vjoufa hmu ichmuno{imc aov ejfmnj joviju ock onzvic`" ock fmccjf{ixi{y aov jq|jki{jk

{aj ko{o oxoiboeibi{y# [amzà jq|ju{v vyv{jnv aoxj nokj fmn|z{juv nmuj ic{jbbi`jc{" {ajy aoxj cm{ yj{

ejfmnj o vzev{i{z{j mh {aj aznoc ic{juof{imc ic {aj bjoucic` |umfjvv# Ic ny m|icimc7 pao{ foc ej

jq|jf{jk" iv o faoc`j mh {aj {jofajuv= umbj ez{ cm{ {ajiu kivo||jouocfj humn {aj fbovvummn#

Cmemky foc ou`zj {ao{ {aj ofzivi{imc mh gcmpbjk`j iv nmuj hzc ock joviju pi{a fmn|z{juv# [aj njuj

of{ixi{y mh {mzfaic` ock jq|bmuic` {aiv kjxifj fmcv{i{z{jv oc jcdmyoebj {ovg hmu o gik# [aiv" offmn|ocijk

pi{a {aj ujboqic` o{{i{zkj ock vmh{pouj ic{juof{ixi{y" zvzobby fmckzfj {m o ej{{ju ùov|ic` mh cjp

gcmpbjk`j# O{ o aiàju jkzfo{imcob bjxjb7 {aj oxoiboeibi{y mh kiì{ob emmgv" vinzbo{mu ock m{aju ofokjnifno{juiobv" |umxikj {aj v{zkjc{ pi{a oc jxju offjvviebj vmzufj mh ichmuno{imc" {ao{ m{ajupivj pmzbk cm{

ej o{ aock#

Ez{" ejvikjv {aj icfujovic` fmn|bjqi{y ock ejaoximu mh ic{jbbi`jc{ vmh{pouj" paifa iv zvzobby jnejkkjk

ic {aj ofokjnif kiì{ob no{juiob" {aj cjjk mh aznoc ic{juof{imc ic {aj bjoucic` |umfjvv pibb obpoyv ej

|ujvjc{" o{ bjov{ ic {aj hmujvjjoebj hz{zuj# [ajuj iv {aj cjfjvvi{y hmu o aznoc ejic` {m ej oebj {m

kj{junicj pao{ {aj v|jfihifv cjjkv mh jofa ickixikzob ouj# [aj jq|ju{ivj mh o {jofaju ic amp {m jq|boic

ock oko|{ fmn|bjq fmcfj|{v {m kihhjujc{ ickixikzobv foc aoukby ej ninifgjk ey o fmn|z{ju" cm no{{ju

amp vm|aiv{ifo{jk i{v vmh{pouj iv#

Ov fmn|z{juv ouj ejfmnic` o fmnnmc {mmb hmu {jofaic`" {jofajuv vamzbk ej nmuj opouj mh {ajiu umbj ov

`zikjv ic {aj ofzivi{imc mh gcmpbjk`j uo{aju {aoc {uocvni{{juv mh hof{v# [ajy aoxj {m ej m|jc nickjk

{m {aj faoc`jv {ao{ ouj {ogic` |bofjv" gjj| z|ko{jk ock vjuxj ov o |umebjn vmbxjuv ic {aj bjoucic`

|umfjvv" {azv obbmpic` v{zkjc{v {m kivfmxju {aj hof{ hmu {ajnvjbxjv#

[m vznnouitj" ic ny |juvmcob xijp" {jofajuv |boy ock pibb!) |boy oc in|mu{oc{ umbj ic {aj fbovvummn"jv|jfiobby o{ {aj |uinouy bjxjb# Cm no{{ju amp fmn|bjq fmn|z{juv ejfmnj" {ajuj pibb ej cm

uj|bofjnjc{ hmu {aj aznoc ic{juof{imc" ez{ ic {aj poy aop {aiv ic{juof{imc {ogjv |bofj#

Jqfjbbjc{ jvvoy/ Ouj ymz o co{ixj Jc`biva v|jogju= Pjbb kmcj# [aj mcby |umebjn4 {mm bmc`" 68: pmukv

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In|umxjnjc{v ic ajob{a" jkzfo{imc ock {uokj ouj jvvjc{iob hmu {aj kjxjbm|njc{ mh |mmuju co{imcv#

Ampjxju" {aj `mxjucnjc{v mh uifaju co{imcv vamzbk {ogj nmuj ujv|mcvieibi{y hmu ajb|ic` {aj |mmuju

co{imcv ic vzfa oujov#

[mkoyv pmubk aov ejjc kixikjk ic{m kjxjbm|ic` ock ickzv{uiobivjk fmzc{uijvpaifa {aj noic kihhjujcfj

ej{pjjc {ajn iv {aj onmzc{ mh nmcjy {ao{ `mxjucnjc{v o||by ic in|mu{oc{ vjf{muv vzfa ov jkzfo{imc"

ajob{a ock fmnnjufj# Nmv{ mh {aj |mmuju co{imcv ouj ezuijk ic kje{v ov o ujvzb{ mh {ajiu zceobocfjk

hicocfjv paifa ouj ujhbjf{ ic o hoibjk ajob{a fouj" oc zcv{uzf{zujk jkzfo{imc vyv{jn ock o pjog

ic{juco{imcob {uokj# [aiv xifimzv fyfbj pibb fmc{iczj ickjhici{jby zcbjvv pjob{aiju co{imcv vamp ic{jujv{ ic

nicinitic` {aj pmubkpikj jfmcmnif kihhjujcfjv" ov pjbb ov {ogic` nmuj ujv|mcvieibi{y hmu ovviv{ic`

zchmu{zco{j fmzc{uijv#

Nmv{ mh {aj Ohuifoc fmzc{uijv bixj ic vze.aznoc fmcki{imcv ejfozvj mh {aj jq{ujnj |mxju{y" z|ajoxob"azc`ju" kivjovj" zcjn|bmynjc{" bofg mh jkzfo{imc ock em{a icjq|juijcfjk ock fmuuz|{ okniciv{uo{imcv#

[aj kjxov{o{ic` fmcvjzjcfjv mh {aj OIKV j|ikjnif ic {amvj fmzc{uijv fmzbk in|umxj ih {aj ichjf{jk

|m|zbo{imcv ujfjixj hujj kuz`v {m fmc{umb {aj kivjovj" aoxj offjvv {m ajob{a |umhjvvimcobv ock `j{

ichmuno{imc mc amp {m |ujxjc{ i{v v|ujok# Ez{ {aiv foc mcby ej ofaijxjk {aumzà ic{juco{imcob ajb|

|umùonv ic paifa bjokjuv mh {aj pmubk=v uifajv{ fmzc{uijv kmco{j njkificj ock obvm vjck kmf{muv ock

czuvjv {m {ujo{ ock jkzfo{j {amvj ic cjjk#

Nmujmxju" nmv{ mh {aj |mmu fmzc{uijv ujby mc vjbbic` oùifzb{zuob |umkzf{v ock uop no{juiob {m uifa

co{imcv ock ezyic` ickzv{uiobitjk |umkzf{v humn {ajn ujvzb{ic` ic o az`j hicocfiob kjhifi{# Fmcvjzjc{by"

{ajy emuump o vi`cihifoc{ onmzc{ mh nmcjy humn {aj Pmubk Eocg {m {uy {m in|umxj {ajiu eumgjc

jfmcmnijv" ez{ vmnj{injv {aj nmcjy kivo||jouv pi{a cm vi`cihifoc{ faoc`jv ock {ajy foccm{ jxjc |oy

{aj ic{jujv{ {m {aj eocg# Ujòukic` {aiv ivvzj" bov{ yjou {aj @1" paifa iv fmn|uivjk mh bjokjuv mh {aj jià{

uifajv{ co{imcv" kjfikjk {m hmuìxj eibbimcv mh kmbbouv pmu{a mh kje{ mpjk ey {aj pmubk=v |mmujv{ co{imcv#

Ic okki{imc" {ajy kjxjbm|jk okjzo{j bmoc |umùonv {m hicocfiobby ovviv{ {amvj fmzc{uijv#

Ic fmcfbzvimc" bjokjuv mh {aj ickzv{uiobivjk fmzc{uijv |boy oc ickiv|jcvoebj umbj ic ovviv{ic` kjxjbm|ic`

co{imcv kjob pi{a jvvjc{iob oujov vzfa ov ajob{a" jkzfo{imc ock {uokj# Obvm" {ajiu oik iv {aj gjy {m

eujogic` {aj xifimzv fyfbj" paifa ujvzb{v ic |mxju{y ock kjo{a#


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Ov fmn|z{juv ouj ejic` zvjk nmuj ock nmuj ic jkzfo{imc" {ajuj pibb ej vmmc cm umbj hmu {jofajuv ic

{aj fbovvummn#

[ajuj aoxj ejjc innjcvj okxocfjv ic {jfacmbm`y ic nmv{ ov|jf{v mh |jm|bj=v bixjv" jv|jfiobby ic {aj

hijbk mh jkzfo{imc# Cmpokoyv" oc icfujovic` czneju mh v{zkjc{v ujby mc fmn|z{juv hmu ujvjoufa ock {m

|umkzfj o |juhjf{ |o|ju hmu vfammb |zu|mvjv# M{ajuv aoxj kjfikjk {m bjoxj {aj muiìcob poy mh bjoucic`

ock {m `j{ gcmpbjk`j {aumzà mcbicj vfammbv# [ajvj faoc`jv ic {aj bjoucic` |umfjvv aoxj eumzà{ o

v|jfiob fmcfjuc ujòukic` {aj |mvviebj kjfujovj mh in|mu{ocfj mh {jofajuv ic {aj fbovvummn#

Vmnj |jm|bj ejbijxj {aj umbj mh {jofajuv v{ou{jk {m hokj ejfozvj fmn|z{juv aoxj ejjc ajb|ic` vmnj

v{zkjc{v {m |umùjvv ic {ajiu v{zkijv zifgju {aoc pajc fmn|oujk pi{a oc muiìcob fbovvummn# Hmu

jqon|bj" ic {aj vonj fbovvummn" v{zkjc{v aoxj kihhjujc{ ic{jbbjf{zob fo|ofi{ijv" {azv vmnj pmzbk ej {ijk

{m o vbmp okxocfj ic {ajiu v{zkijv ejfozvj mh m{ajuv= icfo|ofi{y mh zckjuv{ockic`# Ic {aiv poy" |z|ibvfmzbk |umùjvv ic {ajiu ofzivi{imc mh gcmpbjk`j o{ {ajiu mpc |ofj zvic` fmn|z{juv icv{jok mh bjoucic`

humn {jofajuv#

Ampjxju" {aj |ujvjcfj mh o {jofaju iv jvvjc{iob hmu v{zkjc{v ejfozvj {aj aznoc fmc{of{ ichbzjcfjv

{ajn ic |mvi{ixj poyv# Hiuv{by" v{zkjc{v ujobitj {ao{ {ajy ouj cm{ kjobic` pi{a o nofaicj ez{ pi{a o

aznoc ejic` pam kjvjuxjv o{{jc{imc ock ujv|jf{# [ajy obvm bjouc {aj in|mu{ocfj mh v{zkyic` ic ùmz|

ock ujv|jf{ m{aju v{zkjc{v" paifa ajb|v {ajn {m in|umxj {ajiu vmfiob vgibbv#

Nmujmxju" {jofajuv ouj ujziujk ic {aj bjoucic` |umfjvv ejfozvj {ajy ofgcmpbjk`j vmnj v{zkjc{=v

kjhifijcfijv ock ajb| {ajn {m vmbxj {ajiu |umebjnv ey uj|jo{ic` {aj vonj jq|boco{imc" ìxic` jq{uo

jqjufivjv mu jxjc vz``jv{ic` o |uixo{j {z{mu# Ajcfj" v{zkjc{v foc aoxj o ei``ju faocfj cm{ {m hoib ic o

vzedjf{#

Ic fmcfbzvimc" {aj umbj hmu {jofajuv ic {aj bjoucic` |umfjvv iv v{ibb xjuy in|mu{oc{ ock i{ pibb fmc{iczj {m

ej ic {aj hz{zuj ejfozvj cm nofaicj foc uj|bofj {aj aznoc ic{juof{imc ock i{v fmcvjzjcfjv#

[aiv iv o ùjo{ jvvoy# Bmmgv bigj Eock 1 {m nj# Cm in|umxjnjc{v ouj cjfjvvouy" Gjj| z| {aj `mmk dme/


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Hicocfiob jkzfo{imc vamzbk ej nocko{muy fmn|mcjc{ mh {aj vfammb |umùon# [m pao{ jq{jc{ km ymz

oùjj mu kivoùjj pi{a {aiv v{o{jnjc{=

I{ iv oc meximzv hof{ {ao{ hicocfiob ov|jf{v ouj o nodmu |ou{ mh koiby bihj" ov oc okzb{ ock jxjc ov o ymzc`

ickixikzob# Jofa ock jxjuy mcj mh zv aov {m nogj hicocfiob kjfivimcv fmcfjucic` ujfujo{imc" ajob{a"

jkzfo{imc ock nmuj# [aj zjv{imc iv paj{aju {m v{ou{ pi{a hicocfiob jkzfo{imc ov |ou{ mh vfammb |umùon

mu |mv{|mcj i{ hmu o bo{ju v{o`j ic bihj#

[m ejic` pi{a" ejic` oebj {m zckjuv{ock {aj xobzj mh nmcjy" {aj poy {aj jfmcmnif vyv{jn pmugv ock

ic{ju|uj{ hicocfiob cjpv ock i{v in|bifo{imcv iv o xiu{zj# Pi{amz{ {aiv xiu{zj" oc ickixikzob" ock jxjc o

ymzc` mcj" nià{ vzhhju" {m vmnj jq{jc{# Hmu oc jqon|bj" o faibk pam kmjvc{ zckjuv{ock {aj fmcfj|{ mh

nmcjy nià{ hick i{ nmuj kihhifzb{ {m jqfj|{ fammvic` mcby mcj |ujvjc{ mz{ mh nmuj |mvviebj mcjv#

Ic okki{imc" nocy okzb{v ouj bofgic` hicocfiob ocobyviv fo|oeibi{ijv# _zi{j mh{jc" {aj ujovmc foc ej o vaogy

eoviv mu icvjfzui{y pajc i{ fmnjv {m hicocfiob {junv ock fmcfj|{v# V{ou{ic` humn oc jouby o`j" ezibkic` o

v{umc` eofgùmzck" foc xjuy bigjby |ujxjc{ vzfa o vi{zo{imc#

Ampjxju" hicocfiob jkzfo{imc cjfjvvouiby icxmbxjv zoc{ihyic` ock vj{{ic` |uifjv ock xobzj hmu vjuxifjv

ock `mmkv# I{ foc ej joviby {zuc ymzc` |jm|bj ic{m fycifob ock fmbk.ajou{jk aznoc ejic`v# Hzu{ajunmuj"

o {jckjcfy {m vjbh.fmcfjc{uo{imc ock j`mivn nià{ uivj pajc mcj v{ou{ njovzuic` jxjuy{aic` humn o

|umhi{ nogic` |juv|jf{ixj#

Ic fmcfbzvimc" hicocfiob jkzfo{imc aov em{a |umv ock fmcv# Ic ny m|icimc" {aj okxoc{o`jv ouj v{umc`ju

{aoc {aj kivokxoc{o`jv" nogic` hicocfiob jkzfo{imc oc okxivoebj fmn|mcjc{ mh vfammb |umùon# [aj

kivokxoc{o`jv vamzbk ej {amzà{ mh ov o fju{oic |uifj {ao{ ymzc` |jm|bj aoxj {m |oy kzj {m {aj

faouof{juiv{ifv mh {aj pmubk {ao{ pj bixj ic#

[aiv iv o pmckjuhzb jvvoy# I{ fmxjuv {aj {ovg" iv fmuujf{by v{uzf{zujk" {aj |ouoùo|av ouj bmìfobby

fmccjf{jk" {aj v{uzf{zuj mh vjc{jcfjv vampv jqfjbbjc{ fmnnock mh Jc`biva# [aj xmfoezbouy iv hicj ock

em{a v|jbbic` ock ùonnou ouj xjuy `mmk# Vjj fmnnjc{v zckjubicjk ic ebzj hmu vmnj nicmu fmuujf{imcv#

Mxjuobb" bmmgv bigj o Eock 0#: 1 jvvoy#


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Jxjc {amzà bmeobito{imc ohhjf{v {aj pmubkv jfmcmnijv ic o xjuy |mvi{ixj poy" i{v cjò{ixj vikj

vamzbk cm{ ej hmu`m{{jc# Kivfzvv#

@bmeobito{imc iv vzfa o fmnnmcby zvjk {jun ic {aj {pjc{ij{a fjc{zuy# I{ vin|by njocv {ao{ {aj pmubk aov

ejfmnj ic{jùo{jk jfmcmnifobby" vmfiobby" |mbi{ifobby ock fzb{zuobby {aumzà {aj okxocfjv mh {jfacmbm`y"

{uocv|mu{o{imc ock fmnnzcifo{imc# I{ iv zckjcioebj {m voy {ao{ `bmeobito{imc aov ujvzb{jk ic em{a

|mvi{ixj ock cjò{ixj jhhjf{v paifa nzv{ ej okkujvvjk offmukic`by#

[m ejìc pi{a" `bmeobito{imc aov fmc{uiez{jk {m {aj pmubkv jfmcmnijv ic nocy ejcjhifiob poyv# [aj

okxocfjv ic vfijcfj ock {jfacmbm`y aoxj obbmpjk ezvicjvvjv {m joviby fumvv mxju {juui{muiob emzckouy

bicjv# Fmcvjzjc{by" fmn|ocijv {jck {m ejfmnj nmuj |umkzf{ixj" fmn|j{i{ixj {ajujey uoivic` zobi{y mh

`mmkv" vjuxifjv ock {aj pmubkv bixic` v{ockouk#

Vjfmckby" vjxjuob fmn|ocijv humn {aj nmuj kjxjbm|jk fmzc{uijv aoxj obujoky xjc{zujk {m jv{oebiva

hmuji`c m|juo{imcv mu euocfajv {m {ogj okxoc{o`j mh {aj bmp fmv{ mh boemu ic {aj |mmuju fmzc{uijv# [aiv

gick mh ezvicjvv of{ixi{y pibb |umxikj nmuj ichbzq mh fova mu icxjv{njc{ hzckv ic{m {aj bjvv kjxjbm|jk

fmzc{uijv#

Ampjxju" mcj foccm{ kjcy {aj cjò{ixj jhhjf{v paifa aoxj kjuixjk humn `bmeobito{imc# Mcj fuzfiob vmfiob

ov|jf{ iv {aj uivg ock koc`ju mh j|ikjnif kivjovjv paifa foc joviby ej v|ujok ov {aj nmkj

{uocv|mu{o{imc iv joviju ock hov{ju ic {mkoyv okxocfj vmfij{y# [aiv iv jxikjcfjk ic {aj ujfjc{ eiukv

hbz kivjovj paifa aov ichjf{jk nmv{ Ovioc fmzc{uijv mxju o vamu{ {inj huonj#

Ov bou`j fmu|muo{imcv icxjv{ mu {ogj mxju nocy mhh vamuj ezvicjvvjv" o nmkjuc hmun mh fmbmcito{imc pibb

obvm jxmbxj paifa noy |mvj fju{oic |mpju |ujvvzuj mc {aj bmfob `mxjucnjc{v mh {aj bjvv kjxjbm|jk

fmzc{uijv# Zcjn|bmynjc{ uo{jv ic {aj nmuj kjxjbm|jk ujìmcv bigj Jzum|j noy obvm jvfobo{j ov

fmu|muo{imcv fammvj {m mz{vmzufj fajo|ju pmug hmufj humn Ovioc fmzc{uijv#

Ic fmcfbzvimc# I bigj {m uji{juo{j {ao{ `bmeobito{imc iv icjxi{oebj ock pj nzv{ zu`j ickixikzobv" fmn|ocijv

ock `mxjucnjc{v {m zvj o nmuj eobocfjk o||umofa ey {ogic` o||um|uio{j v{j|v {m kjob pi{a no{{juv

ujbo{ic` {m {aj hicocfiob mu jfmcmnifob òicv xjuvjv {aj vmfiob" |mbi{ifob mu jfmbmìfob fmcfjucv mh {aj

pmubk#

[aiv jvvoy iv {mm bmc`" 6?1 pmukv icv{jok mh 5:


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Ic vmnj fmzc{uijv" ymzc` |jm|bj ouj jcfmzuo`jk {m pmug mu {uoxjb hmu o yjou ej{pjjc hicivaic`

aià vfammb ock v{ou{ic` zcixjuvi{y v{zkijv# Kivfzvv {aj okxoc{o`jv ock kivokxoc{o`jv hmu

ymzc` |jm|bj pam kjfikj {m km {aiv#

@ixj ujovmcv hmu ymzu ocvpju ock icfbzkj ocy ujbjxoc{ jqon|bjv humn ymzu mpc gcmpbjk`j mu

jq|juijcfj#

Pui{j o{ bjov{ 5:< pmukv#

[ogic` o ò| yjou mhh ej{pjjc aià vfammb ock zcixjuvi{y aov ejfmnj o |m|zbou m|{imc onmc`nocy ymzc` |jm|bj# [aiv {inj mhh |umxikjv o eujog oh{ju nocy yjouv mh hmunob v{zky# Vmnj

v{zkjc{v zvj {aiv {inj {m {uoxjb oumzck {aj pmubk" m{ajuv xmbzc{jju ock v{ibb m{ajuv ejìc pmugic`#[aj ikjo ejaick jofa mh {ajvj of{ixi{ijv iv {m km vmnj{aic` aockv.mc ock ujhujvaic`" paifa

jcoebjv ymzc` |jm|bj {m bjouc nmuj oemz{ {ajnvjbxjv ock {ajiu |bofj ic {aj pmubk oumzck {ajn#

[aj ejcjhi{v mh {ogic` o yjou mhh ouj |bjc{ihzb# Mc o |juvmcob bjxjb" v{zkjc{v pam {uoxjb opoy

humn amnj kjxjbm| {ajiu ickj|jckjcfj ock vjbh.fmchikjcfj# Mc o fzb{zuob bjxjb" {ajy bjouc oemz{xijp|mic{v" {uoki{imcv ock |juv|jf{ixjv kihhjujc{ humn {ajiu mpc# \umhjvvimcobby" v{zkjc{v `j{ o{ov{j mh kixjuvj pmug|bofjv" paifa nià{ icv|iuj o |mvviebj foujju ic{jujv{# Ic{jbbjf{zobby" {ajy

jqonicj {ajiu mpc ejbijhv ock ikjov ic ujbo{imc {m {amvj mh m{ajuv ic o cjp jcxiumcnjc{# Obb {ajvjokxoc{o`jv fmneicj {m nogj o v{umc` fovj hmu {ogic` {aj mcj.yjou eujog#

Cjxju{ajbjvv" {ajuj ouj obvm koc`juv icxmbxjk ic {ogic` vzfa o bmc` eujog# Ofokjnifobby" {aj

noic kuopeofg iv {ao{ v{zkjc{v foc `j{ vikj{uofgjk humn {ajiu v{zkijv# O yjou iv o bmc` {inj ockv{zkjc{v fmzbk bmvj {aj `mmk v{zky aoei{v ock vjcvj mh kivfi|bicj {ajy aok pajc {ajy pjuj ic o

hmunob ofokjnif v{uzf{zuj# Ih {ajy ejìc pmugic`" {ajy fmzbk obvm ej kjbzkjk ic{m {aicgic` {ao{{ajyuj nogic` o bm{ mh nmcjy# [ajy fmzbk bmvj {aj ejcjhi{ mh fmbbj`j mu zcixjuvi{y jkzfo{imc ock

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