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Color Poetry

Lauren Ferchau, and Anna Astudillo

Eced 4300 Section ADr. Tonja RootSpring/ 2011

Grade level 5th

Georgia Performance Standard

Lauren Ferchau

• ELA5W4 The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student

a. Plans and drafts independently and resourcefully.

Anna Astudillo and Lauren Ferchau

Primary Learning Outcome

• Students will prewrite a graphic organizer.


What is a Color Poem?


•11 Line poem

•Topic: Color


•Color•My color is… •My color is…•My color is…

Format



•My color tastes like…•My color smells like…•My color sounds like…

Format Cont.



•My color feels like…•My color looks like…•My color makes me…

Format Cont.


Prewriting

•Topic•Purpose•Audience


Lauren Ferchau

Prewriting


•No complete sentence•Words or short phrases

Color Poetry:PrewritingColor:

My color is…

My color tastes like…

My color smells like…

My color sounds like…

My color feels like…

My color looks like…

Ferchau, L. (2011, Spring). Color Poetry. Unpublished graphic organizer. Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

My color makes me…

My color is…

My color is…

My color is…Anna Astudillo and Lauren Ferchau

Published Example Blue is the color of the sky.

Blue is the waves in the ocean crashing against the shore.

Blue is the feeling I get sometimes when I’m sad.

Blue is the icy color of glacial snow.Blue smells like freshly washed bed

sheets.Blue tastes like blueberry Kool-Aid.

Blue sounds like jets soaring through the clouds.

Blue looks like the clear waters of the Hawaiian waters as I’m snorkeling.Blue feels like the snow on my face

while I’m skiing at Mt. Bachelor.Blue makes me want to put on my coat,

hat and gloves.Blue is my brother’s favorite color.

Renz, H. (2000). Retrieved March 29, 2011, from Redmond School District 2J:www2.redmond.k12.or.us/mccall/renz/pdf/poetry/poetry08.pdf


Practice Activity

Class Collaboration:• Class color poetry• Yellow

• Equity Sticks• Words or short

phrases Anna Astudillo and Lauren Ferchau

Practice Activity

• Topic: Yellow• Purpose: Describe

the color yellow• Audience: Class


Assessment Activity

• Individual color poem graphic organizer• Any color•Words or short phrases


Georgia Performance Standard

• GPS: ELA5W4 The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student a. Plans and drafts independently and resourcefully.


Primary Learning Outcome

• Students will use their graphic organizer to compose a rough draft for their color poem.


Drafting• Label as rough draft.• Skip every other line• Leave space for

corrections• Graphic organizer

ideas to sentencesAnna Astudillo and Lauren Ferchau

Anna Astudillo

Drafting

• No focus on mechanics or spelling

• Focus on ideas


Published Example Green

Green is the color of grass and trees,The color of spring,

A color which pleases me. Green is the color of nature in spring.

The color of a spiky green cactus. Green is a grasshopper on a blade of grass.

Green can be light, bright, or dark. Green can be fused with blue to make a new

color. A color that I like but not as much as green!

Green is joyful.

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Practice Activity

• Class rough draft • Yellow• Shared writing technique


Assessment

• Individual color poem rough draft

• Use previously created graphic organizer


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