let's strive for excellent english 2013
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A Discussion with SK Gong Kapas Pupils as preparation for UPSR 2013 by TCH YUSTRANSCRIPT
LET’S STRIVE FOR EXCELLENT ENGLISH
014 A ON TARGET
I am just an ordinary teacher looking for something a little more out of the ordinary…
I love teaching and l love teaching English Language subject. However, I am here not to teach, I am here to share ideas, knowledge and experience.
BAND MARKS
EXCELLENT 9 – 10
GOOD 7 – 8
CREDIT 5 – 6
ACHIEVEMENT 1 – 4
SECTION A No. 1
HOW TO DO IT RIGHT???
What do you need to do? 1. Read the instrucMon. 2. Look at the picture. 3. Do the circling and labelling. 4. Look at the notes given. 5. Construct sentences.
It is advisable that you use… PRESENT CONTINUOUS TENSE SUBJECT VERB Object/
Compliment/ Adj/Adv/Noun
are ……ing washing eaMng doing
? is
And you have to remember… • NO ASSUMPTIONS • NO IMAGINATIONS • NO FEELINGS (UNLESS THE WORDS ARE GIVEN) • NO ADJECTIVES (UNLESS THE WORDS ARE GIVEN) • N0 ADVERBS (UNLESS THE WORDS ARE GIVEN)
(WHAT YOU SEE IS WHAT YOU WRITE)
Discussion on SecMon B
QUESTION NO 2A WHAT SHOULD YOU DO? Be careful ¢ when transferring informaMon ¢ with your spelling ¢ with your punctuaMons Remember ¢ to follow the paberns
QUESTION NO 2B WHAT SHOULD YOU DO?
Be careful ¢ when construcMng sentences ¢ with your spelling ¢ with your punctuaMons Remember
¢ to give reasons for every aspect
QuesMon No 2b
BAND MARKS
EXCELLENT 5
GOOD 4
CREDIT 2 – 3
ACHIEVEMENT 1
ASPECTS POINTS + (Linkers)
REASONS
CHOICE I would prefer Nike for my sister
because it suitable for her. She likes the brand.
PRICE The price is RM 45.00. Besides, it is reasonable and affordable.
COLOUR It comes in two colours. They are blue and black.
- They are my sister’s favourite colours.
MATERIAL It is made of canvas. Furthermore, it is long lasting.
SOLD AT It is available at Nikko’s Souvenirs.
- One of the shops is near my house. I can cycle there to buy it.
COMPARTMENTS It has two compartments with two side pockets.
In addition, my sister can put her things/stuff into them.
ASPECTS – POINTS + REASONS
ASPECTS POINTS + (Linkers)
REASONS
CHOICE I would prefer Nike for my sister
because she likes the brand.
PRICE The price is RM 45.00. Besides, it is reasonable and affordable.
It is worth buying.
I will not burn a hole in my pocket if I buy it for my beloved sister.
COLOUR The bag is available in blue and black
Furthermore, they are my sister’s favourite colours.
MATERIAL It is made of canvas and it is long lasting.
SOLD AT I can buy it at Nikko’s Souvenirs.
In addition, one of the shops is just a stone’s throw away from my house.
COMPARTMENTS It has two compartments with two side pockets.
My sister can put her things/stuff into/in them.
Based on the above reasons, I am sure this is the best choice.
ASPECTS – POINTS + REASONS
DISCUSSION ON SECTION C
QuesMon No 3 BAND MARKS
EXCELLENT 13 – 15
GOOD 9 – 12
CREDIT 5 – 8
ACHIEVEMENT 1 – 4
What is the easiest way? 1. IdenMfying the verbs. 2. ExtracMng them. 3. Recognising the subjects to the verbs
extracted. 4. ConstrucMng sentences. 5. Modifying the verbs and nouns.
+ SUBJECT VERBS O/C
Last week, Amir was walking home from school alone.
On his way, he saw mangoes on the tree.
They looked very delicious.
Amir decided to take the mangoes
because he was hungry.
Without thinking, he climbed up the tree.
Unfortunately, the branch of the tree
broke.
He fell down to the ground.
and he hurt himself.
-‐one word one sentence-‐ WORD SENTENCE
walking Amir was walking ager school
home As usual, he’s walking home alone
saw On his way, he saw a mango tree.
Words of Wisdom A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
Lao-‐tzu, The Way of Lao-‐tzu Chinese philosopher (604 BC -‐ 531 BC)
Dreams are journeys that take one far from familiar shores, strengthening the heart,
empowering the soul. ~ Unknown