Letter writing

How to write a letter giving adviceHow to write a letter giving advice

What we will learn.

• Writing a letter of advice.• How to deal with problems• Express advice

• Writing a letter of advice.• How to deal with problems• Express advice

Read the letter

Dear Annie, I’m seventeen years old and I have a serious problem with

my parents. I have a lot of arguments with them because they scold me for talking with my friends on the phone. In this way, they say, I interrupt my studying on weekdays evenings and I neglect my schoolwork by making these unnecessary phone calls. How can I persuade them that I need my friends and that they are wrong?

Desperate Teenager

Writing task

Write a letter to Desperate Teenager giving some advice to him/her about how he/she can deal with this problem.

Write a letter to Desperate Teenager giving some advice to him/her about how he/she can deal with this problem.

Before writing think about this.

1. Do you speak with your friends on the phone on weekday evenings?Why? Why not?

2. What would you say to convince your parents that you need to talk with your friends on the phone?

3. Do your parents let you stay out late?

1. Do you speak with your friends on the phone on weekday evenings?Why? Why not?

2. What would you say to convince your parents that you need to talk with your friends on the phone?

3. Do your parents let you stay out late?

Before writing decide:

1. What style of letter would you write?a. Informal b. Formal

2. How would you start your letter?a. Dear Annie b. Dear Desperate Teenager

3. What is the purpose of your letter?4. How would you finish your letter?

a. Yours,/ Good luck, b. Yours sincerely,5. What problem does Desperate Teenager face?

1. What style of letter would you write?a. Informal b. Formal

2. How would you start your letter?a. Dear Annie b. Dear Desperate Teenager

3. What is the purpose of your letter?4. How would you finish your letter?

a. Yours,/ Good luck, b. Yours sincerely,5. What problem does Desperate Teenager face?

How to plan the letter. (1)

IntroductionParagraph 1:

Make the purpose of your letter clear and show understanding

IntroductionParagraph 1:

Make the purpose of your letter clear and show understanding

Points to be included

- Parents objection to letting him/her speak on the phone

Points to be included

- Parents objection to letting him/her speak on the phone

How to plan the letter (2)

Main BodyParagraph 2:

Give your advice to help him/her solve the problem

Main BodyParagraph 2:

Give your advice to help him/her solve the problem

Points to be included

- Not argue with parents- Important to have friends

and talk with them- You need a break- Speaking with them is

relaxing

Points to be included

- Not argue with parents- Important to have friends

and talk with them- You need a break- Speaking with them is

relaxing

How to plan the letter (3)

Main BodyParagraph 3:

Add some more advice

Main BodyParagraph 3:

Add some more advice

Points to be included

- Parents’ advice is important- Never neglect your

schoolwork- Your friends are the same

age and have the same problems as you have

Points to be included

- Parents’ advice is important- Never neglect your

schoolwork- Your friends are the same

age and have the same problems as you have

How to plan the letter (4)

ConclusionParagraph 4:

Hope everything will be fine

ConclusionParagraph 4:

Hope everything will be fine

Points to be included

- Parents will finally show understanding

Points to be included

- Parents will finally show understanding

Useful set phrases

Dear …,Introduction: paragraph 1- Having read your problem in ….- I was sorry to read about your problem …..- I understand how you are and ….- I was in the same situation you are a few years ago

Dear …,Introduction: paragraph 1- Having read your problem in ….- I was sorry to read about your problem …..- I understand how you are and ….- I was in the same situation you are a few years ago

Useful set phrases

Main body: paragraphs 2 & 3Giving advice- It would/might be a good idea to …- I strongly advice you to/ not to ….- First of all, it’s very important you do not argue …- I think you should (also) tell them that …- The best thing for you to do is ….

Main body: paragraphs 2 & 3Giving advice- It would/might be a good idea to …- I strongly advice you to/ not to ….- First of all, it’s very important you do not argue …- I think you should (also) tell them that …- The best thing for you to do is ….

Useful set phrases

Conclusion: paragraph 4- To sum up, / Summing up, …- To conclude, / Concluding- Finally, I’m sure that if you follow my advice,

you will see that everything will work out.- Good luck,

name and surname

Conclusion: paragraph 4- To sum up, / Summing up, …- To conclude, / Concluding- Finally, I’m sure that if you follow my advice,

you will see that everything will work out.- Good luck,

name and surname

Model letterModel letterDear Desperate Teenager,

I was sorry to read about your parents’ objection to letting you talk with your friends on the phone. I understand how you feel and I hope I have some good advice for you.

First, you should not argue with your parents but try to explain to them calmly that your friends are important to you. Make it clear to them that you need a short break and talking with your friends does not distract you from studying. On the contrary, it’s relaxing and it takes your mind off your worries.

It might also be a good idea to tell your parents that you’ve always respected them and depended on their advice, that your schoolwork is your priority and so they have nothing to worry about. Finally, you should let them know that your friends are of the same age as you are and you all have the same problems and worries to discuss.

Concluding, I’m sure it will all work out and they will show understanding.

Good luck,Jose Louwes

Homework for lesson 2Read the letter in the advice column below and write your own letter.

Dear Annie,I am fourteen years old and I usually have arguments with my parents. The problem is that they don’t let me stay late at my friends’ parties. Last Saturday I came back home at 11.30 p.m. and they started shouting at me because they had told me to be back home at 10.30 p.m.I don’t know what to do with them!Can you help me?

Angry Teenager

Task: The column writer asks readers to write letters of advice to those who face a problem and send them. Write a letter giving some advice to Angry teenager about how to deal with the problem

Read the letter in the advice column below and write your own letter.

Dear Annie,I am fourteen years old and I usually have arguments with my parents. The problem is that they don’t let me stay late at my friends’ parties. Last Saturday I came back home at 11.30 p.m. and they started shouting at me because they had told me to be back home at 10.30 p.m.I don’t know what to do with them!Can you help me?

Angry Teenager

Task: The column writer asks readers to write letters of advice to those who face a problem and send them. Write a letter giving some advice to Angry teenager about how to deal with the problem

Lesson completed

Now you have learned to write a letter giving advice. Now you have learned to write a letter giving advice.