love in mcdonough's (before you exit fanficion)

8/13/2019 Love in McDonough's (Before You Exit Fanficion)

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Prologue: "Moving"

DANIELLE'S POV:

"RI, Kaye, Danielle !wake up its already 8am and our flight to florida will be at 10 , go hurry" mom waking us up by her

lovely voice that easily catch up our ears .

"ok, im up" Ri exclaimed and jumped out of bed running through the CR.

"oh, why do we need to move ?" i asked.

because your mommy joan misses you!" mom answered.

" who is mommy joan?" ri asked.

"your not yet in this world when we met mommy joan" i answered glancing at ri standing in the CR door.

" by the way, do you still remember patrick?" mom asked.

" ahh, that ugly jerk?" kaye said and rolled her eyes.

"who is patrick?"i asked . and groaned.

" ow, dont ask me, he's nothing" kaye protested and give me a glare.

"ok, fine!" i surrendered.

"Ok fix up now, be at the kitchen at 8:30 ok?" mom said and leaved. "Ok mom."

" ok lets fix up." i exclaimed and fixed.

after i'd take my shower i wore my cutie blue sweatshirt with a print "IM A GIRL" on it , i wore a sweatshirt cuz ii know

florida is at winter state right now , i also wore my jeans and high-cut converse and ofcourse , i cant leave without my

guitar on . and after those, i curled my hair ,and i went some masskara and examin myself "PERFECT!" . after it , i

went downstairs and saw JANIE sitting on the corner waiting for me .

she's one of a kind . She is so very trustworthy girl " SHE's LIKE MY DIARY" haha. she is the one who make me

laugh everytime im in a bad mood . sometimes, she really hit me so that i may realize something , but thou, i love her

so much .


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"so you will never come back" he paley asked.

i never respond but thou, i hugged her tight causing her to start sniffing and tears fall down from her eyes and

dropped on my sweatshirt.

" i will miss you" she said between sniffs and tears.

" i will miss you too" i answered.

"promise to text me, message me, or to call me ok?" she stated.

" i promise" i answered.

after an hour , we left the house , before i went inside the car , i looked at the house for the last moment .. "oh my

gosh , i will miss this place... *sigh* "

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Hahaha... so th is is the p rologue ... hmmm .... keep reading, fanning , and vote ... also dont f orget to c omm ent

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~RI.KAYE.DANNI~

CHAPTER 1: "bye UK, Hi florida"

DANNI's POV:

"We will be landing at the florida airport in any minute , so sit back and relax thank you " a flight steward announced.

Finally after 18 hours of sitting here in my sit , i can finally stand in any minute ( i sighed in relief) but thou, i hate the

landing part.

15 minute of sitting more, and finally we got landed in the airport of florida . the Coldness of florida gives me ahead of

welcome in their country WOOOH!.

"Oh my gosh , i regret that i just wore a shirt ... woooh!.. im freezing !" i said with a freezy tone .

" just wear my jacket since im a wearing a sweatshirt then" danni respond and lend me her jacket ."thanks"

"where's mom?" ri sked.

"getting our lagguages" i answered.


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" how about dad?" ri asked more.

"he'll just go here after his business trip" i answered.

its about 20 minutes , but still mom is not yet here . we kinda start to freak out about it . but before we panicked.

someone approached us and hugged us .

"oh my , You're grown ups now!" she exclaimed

"mommy joan?" i aksed.

"ow, you still rmember me ?" she asked in astonishment .

"so, you are mommy joan?, your kinda familiar " ri said.

"of course , she's the bestfriend of our mom " i added.

"well, lets go, your mom is waiting for you in the van " mommy joan lended.

"Ow, thats why she's out here more than 20 minutes now" and we laughed about what ri said.

were in the van , sitting again . and i feel now hunger . its a 3 hours more trip to their house. and i cant ease the

hunger . so we stopped on the food chain thingy , thou, their food is awesomely delicious.

after three hours of ride , finally were home . its already 6pm. wooh! its night time . i go with my sister ri .

"toby/ riley? connor ? were home!" mommy joan yelled as we enter the house.

i heard a fast footstep right at the 2nd floor of the house like having a race through downstairs . As they went

downstairs my lacjaw dropped on what i saw .

"OH MY HOLY GOD OF FLORIDA !!!! THEY ARE SO FREAKING HAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWT!"

"oh ! this freaking jerk is home again!" the blonde one yelled and hugged my sister .

we stared at them with confusion .

'uhm.. yeah .. th-this is uhmm.. p-patrick!" she stuttered,

KAYE's POV:

"'uhm.. yeah .. th-this is uhmm.. p-patrick!" she stuttered,

wait, why am i stuttering ?oh my gosh .... plus , is this a feeling of love at first sight ? feeling dumb and stuttering ...

no!! oh my gosh HELP!!!


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Connor is not the boy i expected . the last time i saw him when we were three. he changed alot. I remembered that

time, his teeth is like a blocks that never been paired . his eyes before were brownish with grey outline , and his

blonde hair were not grown yet . But now, Everything's changed , i can just say "HE's SO PERFECT NOW!!"

"hey?" connor asked while waving his hand through my eyes.

"uh.,... yeah ?.. what?" i finally spoked.

"whats wrong ? am i that hot that you will spaced out ?" he boastfully exclaimed.

"oh my god! you're still the freak guy with worstself " i joked with sarcasm .

" hey !" connor yelled and chased me .

Ri's POV:

"ok, im confused .. KAYE and CONNOR are bestfriends since diapers ?" i asked with eyebrows up.

"well.. i dont know . i was just one year old when she was three." danni exclaimed.

" but thou, who is riley and who is toby ?" i asked pointing the two of the boys .

" i think toby is the black hair one and riley is the brunette hair one " i added.

"no , maybe riley is the black hair one and toby is the brunette hair one " danni objected .

" no!" i protested.

" yes!" she protested back.

" ok, if im right , 3 months free starbucks " i exclaimed .

"2 months , take it or leave it ?" danni protested.

" k fine"

were about to start our game when the two guys approached us .

"h-hey..." black hair one greeted us shyly .

"oh..uhm...hi!" i greeted back .

"well... im riley and you are ...?" he shyly asked.

"i-im danielle..." she answered. (kinda stuttering) and glared at me with a big smile on her face


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-_-" all i respond , i loose a game, 2 months and a half free STARBUCKS for danni .... *sigh* ....

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Well ... .. i wi l l just update the ch apter 2 ... .. maybe nextweek .. cuz kinda bu sy fo r this fol lowing days... so

hope y ou l ike the ch apie !! :))

keep voting , comment i f u l ike it o r not .. . . and yeah LOVE BEFORE YOU EXIT Mwaaahh.xX

Xxnial l_angelxX

CHAPTER 2 : "Hanging Out"

RILEY's POV:

i was irritated by the sunlight through my window , who the heck opened it??

"ugh! , im sleepy can you turn back the win-" and cutted out and jaw dropped on what i see .

GOD DAMN DANNI HAS A PERFECT BODY EVEN THOUGH IN SHADOW , AND LIGHTENED UP MORE ON

HER BEAUTY BY THE SUNLIGHT THAT OCCURS ON HER FACE !!!......

"hey!"

still spaced out

"hey!" she yelled.

"uh! yeah!?" i spoked but then she's near on my face , (i frozed) eeek.!

"its saturday ! lets hang out !" she whispered. Oh! that sweet fresh of her breath .

" yes. o-ok" i answered .


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"RI?" danni asked.

"y-yes?" i asked back.

" toothbrush now , you have a severe breath uck!" as she moves away.

"ok fine mrs. harrison " as i pushed her out and locked my door.

" hey!" she yelled through the door .

"what?!" i answered .

" fixed up ok?! we'll hang out " she yelled.

" k, just go down!" i yelled back.

"fine McDonald!" she answered and ran downstairs .

"ugh ! i cant believe im arguing with a girl "

so i fixed up and wore a v-neck shirt , black jeans , converse and a hoodie and brushed my tooth and turn my JB hair

to mesy one " HANDSOME!"

i went down to the kitchen and saw them eating pizza . (for breakfast?)well, im hungry , so i sat down next to danielle

. Cool girl, she's wearing a v-neck shirt and a hoodie , skinny jeans and a converse , she curls her hair perfectly ,

she's GORGEOUS ! w/out any make up on . and her smell like a sweet fresh berry haa!!! but wait, im not inlove with

this girl ... oh .. arent i ? ugh ! no !. >..< .. But all i think its

me ?? is it me ?? or COURTNEY ??? hmmm...

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CHAPTER 13 : " we are Going Back To UK ?!"

" c 'mon now gi r ls get up !"

" why mom ! "

" w e have someth ing to do "

"wh at ?"

" p asspor t !"

" huh ? passpo r t ? why ?"

" w ere go ing back to UK"

"WHAT?! "

"no reason ! , get up and we' l l f ix up our passpor t , now"


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Kaye's POV:

" mom ?! when we gonna leave ??"

" After the summer !"

" why are you angry mom ?"

" Because you never told me You have a Relationship with the before you exit Lads !"

" and so mom , whats wrong with that ?? you must be proud mom ?!"

" because they are not just a people around you !"

" what so you mean mom ???"

" they Are your cousins !!!"

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Connor ? Toby ? Riley ? Are Our Cousins ??!!!

O_o ?? NOOOOOO!!!!!!!! ...................

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" Kaye ? are you alright ?" ri asked.


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" y-yeah im fine !" i spoked and did a fake smile .

" o-ok ?, aaahh!! by the way .. is it true that we'll be leaving :(?" he frownly asked.

" y-yeah " i said.

" aww.... "

" i must go and inform babe !" ri added.

" NO! , dont !" i refused .

" why .?" he curiously asked.

" Just dont !!" i exclaimed .

" Why ?!" he exclaimed back ..

"BECAUSE....."

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HAAAAAAAA???!!!!!what will happened to them .... woooohh !!! )_( ... i just Cant ..... wooohhh ugh !!! ...

LOL.... Hey , im stephanie .... im a friend of Angeline ... im just a Crazy Buttler so , yeah .... TREMENDOUS

??!! not really ?! hahah wel,, shocked ??... hahahha ..

~STEPHANIE ~

CHAPTER 14: " They are our cousins ? how ?"

Ri's pov:

" what they are our cousins ?!" i exclaimed . no ... its not happening ... Riley ? connor ? and my baby Tobz are our

cousins ???? nooooooooo!!!!!>...

" hey your mouth !" danni complained .

" but how ?" i exclaimed again .


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" we dont know" kaye and danni Both Exclaimed .

"girls ?" mom knocked at the door .

" its open mom" we all said .

as she opened the door and stepped in, all questions has been out

WHY ARE THEY OUR COUSIN ? HOW? SO WHAT IS YOU AND MOMMY HOAN RELATIONSHIP ? WHY ?

HOW ? AND IN MILLIONS PEOPLE WE FELL INLOVE IS OUR COUSINS ? AND WHY YOU DIDNT TELL US

AHEAD OF TIME ??"

" GIRLS , calm down !! ... here .... me and your mommy joan are sisters ... but weve been apart when your grand dad

and grand mom died . i lived in UK while your mommy joan lived here in the florida . as the time goes by , we forgot

each other then and met in a college life and become a bestest of friends until the such time me ad her gave birth ....

and when you all got in teenage life and as we moved here , i found out that your mommy joan was my sister ... And

thats why i prepare our passport to leave out ahead so that your feelings ahead with your boyfriends , i mean youcousins will fade out ... hope you gonna understand me babies " mom explained .

Toby's Pov :

"What ?! how could you lie to us mom ?!"

" no i didnt lie !!, i just soon found out that me and your mommy christel are sisters ."

" so , that means ... we need to break up with them ??" riley asked.

" hmmm .. yeah !" mom said

( Harrison sisters ) (Mcdonough Brothers)

WHAT?!!!! .........

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hahahaha ...... so do you think ... is this true ??? are they still gonna be in a relationship ??? hmm .... just

stay reading guys .... and check out .... hmmmm /..... :))


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Xxniall_angelxX

@AmmaBYEfan

CHAPTER 15 : " Huh ? All it Was Just A Dream ?"

" WAKE UP , WAKE UP !!" all i Heard . huh ? why are they Waking me up ?? . i waked up and Saw Ri,Danni, momand dad.

" what ?" i groaned .

" wake up ! were late for vacation " Ri exclaimed .

" what ? vacation ? in where ?" i curiously asked.

" in florida " mom said .

" in mommy joan ?" i asked.

" huh ? who is Mommy joan ?" mom asked . i became silent and curioused about whats happening .

"dont mind her mom , she's dreaming about before you exit again " Ri Teased .

What , all Of those Happenings Are arent Real ? that was only just a dream ?? if thats Just a dream , That was a

Biggest Dream i've ever encounter .

were in the car driving out through the airport but my mind still on what just happened in my dream .

" KAYE ?"

STILL SPACED OUT

" KAYE ?"

STILL SPCAED OUT

" KAYE ! " Danielle Exclaimed .

"w-what ?" i spoked ....

"can u tell us why are you that weird this day ?" danielle asked.

"puulleeeaaasseee!!" Ri Applied with a Puppy face . Ow! that face .


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" ok" i surrendered . I tell My dream ... and their roles there , And they Just End up Blushing , Squeeling , Jumping ,

and always updating me whats next ... But they both Silent When in The Last part Of my dream was We are cousins

... . And i just laughed at them ..

" ow , By the way ... i want you to Stay with your cousins later ok ??" Mom said .

we got silent and .. " WHO ?"

" RILEY ? CONNOR ? TOBY ? ... The one you've addicted about .. hahaha ... Your mommy joan will fetch us in the

airport Later " Mom Said with a chuckle .

" WHAT ?!" we three Exclaimed in disbelief .... O_0??

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