muthia - 1st draft - violence among students

8/10/2019 Muthia - 1st Draft - Violence Among Students

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Title

Topic : Violence among students

Narrowed down : Violence among junior and high school

students in Indonesia

Controlling Idea : By banning tv programs, which give bad

example to students, giving morale education

to students and setting stricter rules

urpose : to persuade !mode : argumetative"

Introductory paragraph

Thesis statement :

By banning tv programs, giving morale education to students, and

setting stricter rules are government can do to prevent violence

among junior and high students

Body paragraph

aragraph #Topic sentece : Banning tv programs which give bad example

to students

$upporting details :

%& Banning tv programs which contains violence

'& (ive a warning to tv stations which broadcast

aragraph B

Topic $entence : (iving morale education to students


%& (ive sociali)ation to school


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'& $ociali)ing morale education by public service annoucement or

social medias

aragraph C

Topic $entence : $etting stricter rules


%& *a+e the rules in school more threatening

'& $ociali)ing to parents that they should setting stricter rules at

home


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What can government do about violence

among students?

e o-ten hear about violence among students. Violence

among students usually happen between junior and high school

students& Violence among students have become serious problem

in recent decades& #ccording to .omisi erlindungan #na+ Indonesia

!.#I", violence among students which reported to the police

increased '/0 in '/%1& $chool, parents, and also government have

tried to overcome and prevent this problem& 2owever government

has important role to prvent this matter& By banning tv programs,

giving morale education to students, and setting stricter rules are

what government can doto prevent violence among junior and high

school students in Indonesia&

By banning tv program which give bad example to students is

one o- the e3ective ways to prevent this matte r& Technologies have

become important in our daily li-e& #ll o- us seems can4t be

separated with gadgets and stu3 including students& 5ne o- the

technologies that has been improving is television& $tudents usually

watch tvand don4t realise that the shows they watch aren4t suitable

-or their ages& ithout parental guidance, they tend to copy some

violancecontained in the shows which can led to violance action& To

prevent violence among students, government has to banning tv

programs which contain violence& I- the tv stations +eep

broadcasting inappropriate shows -or students, government has to

give them warning or government can give the tv stations 6ne &


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(iving morale education to students is also essential steps&

7irst, government has to go to schools to give sociali)ation& By

sociali)ing what is violence, the negative e3ect that we can get and

others, it can ma+e students more understand about violence

among students and choose to avoid it& #nd they can also share it

to their -riends who involved in violence among studens&

(overnment can also use public service announcements !$#" and

social medias as the tools to give sociali)ation& This can be e3ective

because most o- students watch tv and use social medias these

days& To ma+e the students ta+e this seriously, government has toma+e the public service annoncement and advertisements more

interesting& 7or example, they can use public 6gure or celebrity as

the model to warn the students about violence among students&

Because idols usually have big in8uences to teenage li-e& #nd the

$etting stricter rules is also important to prevent violence

among students not only in school but also in the house&

(overnment must demand the schools that they have to ma+e the

rules more threatening& Because the more stricter rules that the

school have the more li+ely students obey the rules& 7or example,

school should give punishment li+e suspension or even drop out

-rom school&The other option is school can give counseling -or all

students involved, not only the one who do the violence but also

the victims&

In conclusion, to prevent and overcome violence among

students, all the institution should cooperate together& Not only the


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government but also parents, school, and also the students

involved& 2owever, the government has important roles to

overcome this problem

muthia - 1st draft - violence among students

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