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MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24
“1788 DAN”
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MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 2 -
1 45.05 OPENING TITLES RUN OVER
VARIOUS VIEWS OF THE BIG TREE
TITLE 1 BEGINS AT 10 00 02 09SCREEN AUSTRALIAANDTHE AUSTRALIAN CHILDREN’STELEVISION FOUNDATIONPRESENTTITLE 1 ENDS AT 10 00 05 20
TITLE 2 BEGINS AT 10 00 09 20A MATCHBOXPICTURES PRODUCTIONFORTHE AUSTRALIANBROADCASTING CORPORATIONTITLE 2 ENDS AT 10 00 13 09
TITLE 3 BEGINS AT 10 00 14 13IN ASSOCIATIONWITH SCREEN NSWANDSCREEN TASMANIATITLE 3 ENDS AT 10 00 19 09
TITLE 4 BEGINS AT 10 00 33 03BASED ON THE BOOKBY NADIA WHEATLEY&DONNA RAWLINSTITLE 4 ENDS AT 10 00 36 05
TITLE 5 BEGINS AT 10 00 36 00My Place1788 DANTITLE 5 ENDS AT 10 00 44 22
THEN FADE TO BLACK
CHILDREN’S VOICES (VARIOUS OOS)
I'm not scared. I'm coming with you to keep you
safe. Are there Ghosts? That is so naughty. Let's
see who's the real scaredy cat. He is gunna
spiflicate you [Laughter and squeal]
MUSIC 1 BEGINS ... 48 SEC
10 00 00 00
10 00 00 12
>> SCENE 1. EXT DAY THE BIG TREE
2 14.10 FADE UP FROM BLACK TO PAN
AROUND BRANCHES OF TREE THEN
DOWN TO ROOTS IN FG WITH DAN
WALKING SLOWLY IN BG
MUSIC 2 BEGINS ... 1 MIN 13 SEC
MUSIC 1 ENDS
10 00 45 05
10 00 47 13
10 00 47 23
3 5.16 SLO-MO LA TILT WMS DAN WALKS DAN (VOICEOVER) 10 00 59 15
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 3 -
TOW CAM My name’s Dan, and this is her place.
4 8.05 LA TILT WS DAN CARRIES
BUCKET TOW CAM
DAN
Waruwi! Waruwi, it’s Dan! Lapa! Lapa, here girl!
10 01 05 06
5 4.05 LA TILT WMS DAN LOOKS
AROUND
10 01 13 11
6 3.08 LA TILT WS DAN PICKS UP
BUCKET AND WALKS LEFT
10 01 17 16
7 1.22 WIDE MLS PROFILE DAN EXITS
LEFT
10 01 20 24
>> SCENE 2. EXT DAY BUSH/RIVER
8 1.21 WS SMALL WATERFALL AT
RIGHT
10 01 22 21
9 2.20 WS BIRD WAVES WINGS AS IT
SITS ON ROCKS
10 01 24 17
10 2.04 WS BUCKET PULLED FROM
WATER
10 01 27 12
11 6.07 LA TILT WMS DAN CARRIES
BUCKET TOW CAM AS LAPA
ENTERS SHOT
DAN
Hey, Lapa.
10 01 29 16
12 2.10 WS LAPA AND DAN MOVE TOW
CAM OVER ROCKS
DAN
Where’s Waruwi?
10 01 35 23
>> SCENE 3. EXT DAY BEACH
13 2.06 WS MARINES AT CAMP AS
ROBERTS SIGNALS
10 01 38 08
14 2.10 LA TILT WS DAN STANDS ON
WATERFALL
ROBERTS (OOS)
Dan!
10 01 40 14
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 4 -
15 2.11 LA TILT WS DAN TURNS AND
EXITS LEFT
10 01 42 24
16 3.16 ELEVATED WLS MARINES NEAR
SMALL BOAT ON BEACH
10 01 45 10
17 3.11 WIDE MLS DAN CARRIES
BUCKET OF WATER TO MARINES
IN FG
10 01 49 01
18 2.19 LA TILT MS ROBERTS LOWERS
TELESCOPE
10 01 52 12
19 1.11 LA TILT WMS REV ROBERTS
TURNS TOW CAM
10 01 55 06
20 5.13 WMS DAN PUTS DRUM DOWN ROBERTS (OOS)
Was that a native dog following you?
MUSIC 2 ENDS
DAN
Yes, sir.
10 01 56 17
10 02 00 08
21 1.22 LA TILT MCU PROFILE ROBERTS
WITH DAN IN FG
ROBERTS
Hmm. Fine looking animal.
10 02 02 05
22 3.02 LA TILT WMS DAN DAN
Yes, sir.
MUSIC 3 BEGINS ... 2 MIN 11 SEC
10 02 04 02
10 02 06 03
23 2.01 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS ROBERTS
The Governor needs a hunting dog.
10 02 07 04
24 6.03 LA TILT WMS DAN ROBERTS (OOS)
On your feet, men. We’re going to catch a dog.
MARINES (OOS)
10 02 09 05
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 5 -
Yes, sir. Let’s get to it.
>> SCENE 4. EXT DAY BUSH
25 2.24 MS ROPE CARRIED IN HAND DAN (OOS)
What if it belongs to someone?
10 02 15 08
26 5.20 WS PROFILE GOODWIN AND
DAN WALK RIGHT THRU BUSH
GOODWIN
Who?
DAN
A native.
10 02 18 07
27 4.19 WMS PROFILE GOODWIN WALKS
RIGHT THRU BUSH THEN PAN
RIGHT TO DAN
GOODWIN
Well maybe the natives don’t own things. Maybe
the dogs just hang around them like they’re other
animals.
DAN
No, that’s stupid.
10 02 24 02
28 2.01 LA TILT WMS DAN AND
GOODWIN STOP
10 02 28 21
29 2.22 LA TILT WMS REV DAN THEN
PAN LEFT TO GOODWIN
DAN
What’d you hear?
GOODWIN
A growl.
10 02 30 22
30 3.16 LA TILT WMS PROFILE DAN AND
WMS GOODWIN
DAN
I didn’t hear any- ...
GOODWIN
You go that way. Go that way.
10 02 33 19
31 2.07 LA TILT WMS PROFILE
GOODWIN MOVES RIGHT AS
DAN STEPS TOW BG
10 02 37 10
32 3.09 WMS DAN AND WARUWI EXIT
SHOT
10 02 39 17
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 6 -
>> SCENE 5. EXT DAY THE BIG TREE
33 2.14 LA TILT WS DAN APPEARS BEHIND
LARGE TREE ROOT
DAN
Waruwi?
10 02 43 01
34 7.14 LA TILT WMS DAN WALKS LEFT DAN
Waruwi?
MARINE (OOS)
Dan! Dan!
DAN
Waruwi!
10 02 45 15
35 4.19 LA TILT WS WARUWI SITS IN
TREE THEN TILT DOWN TO CU
DAN
DAN
Waruwi?
MARINE (OOS)
Dan!
10 02 53 04
36 1.03 LA TILT WMS REV DAN AS LAPA
ENTERS SHOT
10 02 57 23
37 1.13 LA TILT WMS REV WARUWI
DROPS INTO FG AS DAN TURNS
IN BG
10 02 59 01
38 0.24 LA TILT WMS REV DAN TURNS
WITH LAPA AT LEFT
10 03 00 14
39 3.12 WMS WARUWI WALKS TO MCU
REV DAN
DAN
No, you’ve got to run away. Stop
10 03 01 13
40 2.22 LA TILT WMS DAN AND MS REV
WARUWI
it, Waruwi! They’re coming 10 03 05 00
41 3.06 CU REV DAN IN FG WITH WMS
WARUWI IN BG LAUGHING
to take Lapa! Waruwi! 10 03 07 22
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
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42 2.00 MCU REV DAN AND WMS
WARUWI
DAN
Go!
GOODWIN (OOS)
Try down that way!
10 03 11 03
43 1.18 MHA WIDE MLS GOODWIN
APPEARS FROM BUSHES
10 03 13 03
44 1.17 LA TILT WS REV WARUWI EXITS
FROM DAN AND LAPA
DAN
Hide!
10 03 14 21
45 1.00 WS WARUWI TURNS AT TREE AS
DAN STANDS IN FG
GOODWIN (OOS)
Dan!
10 03 16 13
46 1.22 LA TILT MS REV DAN TURNS
TOW CAM
10 03 17 13
47 2.15 WIDE MLS PROFILE GOODWIN
WALKS LEFT
10 03 19 10
48 3.08 LA TILT WMS PROFILE DAN IN
FG WITH LAPA AND GOODWIN
IN BG
GOODWIN
He’s found him, men! Lieutenant Roberts, Dan’s
10 03 22 00
49 3.17 LA TILT CU DAN found the dog!
MARINE #1 (OOS)
Got him, eh?
MARINE #2 (OOS)
Good boy, Dan. Don’t let him give
10 03 25 08
50 4.15 PAN RIGHT OVER WIDE MLS
MARINES MOVING TOW CAM
you the slip! Good on you, Dan!
MARINE #1
Nab him, Dan!
MARINE #3
Three cheers!
10 03 29 00
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 8 -
51 2.12 WMS PROFILE DAN SLIPS ROPE
OVER LAPA’S HEAD
10 03 33 15
52 1.17 LA TILT WS ROBERTS AND
OTHER MARINES
10 03 36 02
53 3.06 LA TILT WMS WARUWI LOOKS
AROUND AT TREE ROOT
10 03 37 19
54 3.22 LA TILT WS REV DAN RUNS TOW
MARINES WITH LAPA
10 03 41 00
>> SCENE 6. EXT DAY CAMP
55 4.09 TILT UP OVER WMS REV DAN
LEADING LAPA TO ROBERTS
ROBERTS
This is
10 03 44 22
56 2.24 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS the spot, there. Good line of sight. 10 03 49 06
57 4.01 WMS REV ROBERTS IN FG AS
DAN TIES LAPA TO POST
ROBERTS
I'm giving you responsibility for this animal. See
her safely
10 03 52 05
58 2.14 WMS PROFILE DAN TIES LAPA
TO POST
delivered to the Governor.
DAN
Yes, sir.
10 03 56 06
59 2.02 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS EXITS AS
OTHER MARINES MOVE THRU
SHOT
10 03 58 20
60 2.13 WMS REV MARINES WALK TOW
BG
10 04 00 22
61 3.10 WIDE MLS DAN TIES LAPA TO
POST AS OTHER MARINE MOVES
IN FG
10 04 03 10
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
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62 6.04 WS PROFILE DAN AT LAPA DAN
Don’t even think about escaping, girl. Those
muskets, they’re loaded.
10 04 06 20
63 3.22 WMS PROFILE ROBERTS
STUDIES MAP IN FG WITH DAN
AND LAPA IN BG MUSIC 3 ENDS
10 04 12 24
10 04 16 15
64 5.16 WMS LAPA MOVES NEAR DAN DAN
What is it, Waruwi?
10 04 16 21
65 3.16 WMS DAN ENTERS SHOT AND
LOOKS AROUND
10 04 22 12
66 2.00 LA TILT WIDE MLS WARUWI
TOSSES STONE
10 04 26 03
67 1.02 WMS PROFILE DAN GRIMACES
AS STONE HITS HIS HEAD
MUSIC 4 BEGINS ... 53 SEC
10 04 28 03
10 04 28 04
68 1.09 LA TILT WMS DAN GRABS HEAD 10 04 29 05
69 1.16 LA TILT WMS PROFILE
GOODWIN STARTLES
10 04 30 14
70 1.13 WMS GOODWIN MOVES RIGHT GOODWIN
Help!
10 04 32 05
71 1.06 WMS PROFILE DAN MOVES
RIGHT
GOODWIN (OOS)
The natives are attacking!
10 04 33 18
72 1.17 WMS DAN AND LAPA WITH
GOODWIN MOVING IN FG
10 04 34 24
73 1.20 WMS MARINES EXIT TENT 10 04 36 16
74 2.04 WS MARINES EXIT TENTS MARINE 10 04 38 11
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 10 -
Where are they?
75 1.05 LA TILT WMS GOODWIN LOOKS
AROUND IN FEAR
10 04 40 15
76 2.00 WMS DAN HOLDS LAPA 10 04 41 20
77 1.07 WS MARINES ASSEMBLE IN
CAMP
10 04 43 20
78 3.02 WMS PROFILE ROBERTS STANDS
FROM MAP
10 04 45 02
79 1.10 WMS GOODWIN ROBERTS (OOS)
Return to your positions.
10 04 48 04
80 5.03 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS WALKS
RIGHT PAST MARINES AND LAPA
GOODWIN (OOS)
They’re throwing stones, sir.
10 04 49 14
81 2.12 WMS ROBERTS AND DAN 10 04 54 17
82 2.17 WIDE MLS WARUWI DUCKS
BEHIND BUSH
ROBERTS (OOS)
Can you see her, Dan?
10 04 57 04
83 1.19 LA TILT MCU DAN DAN
Yes, sir.
10 04 59 21
84 2.18 LA TILT MCU PROFILE ROBERTS
LOWERS TELESCOPE AND TURNS
ROBERTS
Stand up,
10 05 01 15
85 6.02 WMS GOODWIN THEN PAN LEFT
TO OTHER MARINES
marines. It’s only a little girl. 10 05 04 08
86 4.02 WS PROFILE WARUWI
STRAIGHTENS AT BUSH
DAN (OOS)
Sir?
ROBERTS (OOS)
Hmm?
10 05 10 10
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 11 -
87 3.11 LA TILT MCU PROFILE DAN
WITH ROBERTS IN FG
DAN
I think she wants her dog.
ROBERTS
Her dog?
10 05 14 12
88 1.13 LA TILT MCU PROFILE ROBERTS ROBERTS
What makes you think it’s her dog?
10 05 17 23
89 2.04 MCU DAN
MUSIC 4 ENDS
10 05 19 11
10 05 21 12
90 2.02 LA TILT MCU PROFILE ROBERTS
LOOKS THRU TELESCOPE
10 05 21 15
91 2.12 WS WARUWI STRAIGHTENS DAN (OOS)
Can I take it
10 05 23 17
92 2.07 WMS ROBERTS AND DAN to her, sir?
ROBERTS
Do you think an armed troop
10 05 26 04
93 4.09 MCU DAN of marines cannot defend the Governor’s property
from a small girl with a handful of pebbles?
10 05 28 11
94 2.02 LA TILT MCU ROBERTS ROBERTS
I said on your feet, marines.
10 05 32 20
95 2.04 MONTAGE FAST EDITS WARUWI
THROWS STONE
MARINES (OOS)
Yes, sir!
10 05 34 22
96 5.07 WMS ROBERTS AND DAN WITH
GOODWIN INTO SHOT IN BG
GOODWIN
Aghh! Are we supposed to return fire, sir?
ROBERTS
Fire
10 05 37 01
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 12 -
97 1.16 LA TILT WMS PROFILE
GOODWIN IN FG WITH OTHER
MARINES IN BG
over her head! 10 05 42 08
98 0.21 LA TILT MCU PROFILE ROBERTS ROBERTS
Scare her off.
10 05 43 24
99 1.13 LA TILT WMS PROFILE
GOODWIN COCKS WEAPON
10 05 44 20
100 1.01 WMS PROFILE GOODWIN FIRES
WEAPON
10 05 46 08
101 0.20 MCU DAN STARTLES 10 05 47 09
102 3.01 WIDE MLS WARUWI RUNS OFF
INTO BUSH
10 05 48 04
103 2.05 LA TILT MCU PROFILE ROBERTS
LOWERS TELESCOPE
ROBERTS
Where there’s one native,
10 05 51 05
104 4.08 WMS ROBERTS AND DAN WITH
GOODWIN IN BG
there's bound to be a tribe. Goodwin! First watch.
Dan,
10 05 53 10
105 3.08 MCU DAN IN FG AS ROBERTS
WALKS IN BG
you’ll relieve him.
MUSIC 5 BEGINS ... 48 SEC
DAN
Yes, sir.
10 05 57 18
10 05 59 17
>> SCENE 7. EXT NIGHT CAMP
106 2.22 LA TILT WS FULL MOON IN
NIGHT SKY
10 06 01 01
107 3.09 WMS FIRE BURNS WITH TENT IN
BG
10 06 03 23
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 13 -
108 4.09 HA MCU DAN STARES PAST CAM 10 06 07 07
109 7.24 WS DAN EXITS TENT AND
WALKS RIGHT PAST FIRE
10 06 11 16
110 3.05 WMS DAN DAN
Lapa, stay!
10 06 19 15
111 1.12 WS PROFILE LAPA LOOKS
AROUND
10 06 22 20
112 4.21 WMS PROFILE DAN WALKS
RIGHT TO GOODWIN
10 06 24 07
113 3.18 LA TILT MS DAN LOOKS AROUND 10 06 29 03
114 1.19 WMS GOODWIN STANDS AS DAN
STANDS AT RIGHT
10 06 32 21
115 4.13 WMS DAN LOOKS AROUND TO
GOODWIN
GOODWIN
Watch out for dog thieves.
10 06 34 15
116 1.15 LA TILT MCU DAN DAN
Apart from us.
10 06 39 03
117 12.07 WMS GOODWIN TURNS AND
WALKS FROM DAN
MUSIC 5 ENDS
10 06 40 18
10 06 47 05
>> SCENE 8. EXT NIGHT CAMP
118 3.00 LA TILT WS TREES SILHOUETTED
AGAINST NIGHT SKY
10 06 53 00
119 11.24 MONTAGE EDITS LAPA GROWLS
QUIETLY AS DAN STRAIGHTENS
TO WARUWI
WARUWI
Lapa.
10 06 56 00
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 14 -
120 3.21 WMS DAN AND MS REV WARUWI
WITH LAPA IN BG
DAN
You can’t. They’ll see you. Go!
10 07 07 24
121 4.01 LA TILT CU REV DAN AND WMS
WARUWI
WARUWI
Dan. Lapa.
DAN
I don’t dare.
10 07 11 20
122 2.17 WMS DAN WAVES AT MS REV
WARUWI
DAN
It’s the Governor’s orders. Go.
10 07 15 21
123 3.14 LA TILT CU REV DAN IN FG AS
WARUWI TURNS
10 07 18 13
124 15.06 MONTAGE EDITS DAN GRABS
WARUWI’S ARM THEN SHE
CONTINUES TO LAPA AS
GOODWIN EXITS TENT
GOODWIN
Hey, Danny boy.
10 07 22 02
125 3.02 WS GOODWIN REENTERS TENT
AS WARUWI EXITS FROM LAPA
GOODWIN
Hey, what you doin’?
10 07 37 08
126 2.08 WMS GOODWIN EXITS TENT
WITH WEAPON
GOODWIN
Marines! Lieutenant Roberts, intruder!
MUSIC 6 BEGINS ... 32 SEC
10 07 40 10
10 07 41 23
127 2.15 WMS PROFILE GOODWIN RUNS
RIGHT PAST OTHER MARINES
10 07 42 18
128 1.05 WMS GOODWIN AND OTHERS
WITH WEAPONS
10 07 45 08
129 1.09 LA TILT WMS MARINES GOODWIN (OOS)
She wants
10 07 46 13
130 0.19 LA TILT MCU GOODWIN the dog. 10 07 47 22
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 15 -
131 1.13 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS FIRES
WEAPON INTO AIR
10 07 48 16
132 0.19 WMS MARINES STARTLE 10 07 50 04
133 1.19 WMS MARINES TURN ROBERTS (OOS)
Marines! Attention!
10 07 50 23
134 1.09 WMS MARINES MOVE PAST
ROBERTS
MARINE
Yes, sir.
10 07 52 17
135 1.06 LA TILT WS PROFILE MARINES
LINE UP AT RIGHT WITH
ROBERTS AT LEFT
10 07 54 01
136 10.18 WS ROBERTS WALKS PAST
MARINES TO DAN AND
GOODWIN
ROBERTS
Goodwin.
GOODWIN
Yes, the girl, sir. She’s come for her dog.
ROBERTS
Her dog, Mr. Goodwin? You're beginning to sound
like him.
GOODWIN
Yes, sir.
10 07 55 07
137 1.06 LA TILT MCU ROBERTS ROBERTS
Who’s on guard?
10 08 06 00
138 1.13 WMS DAN RAISES HAND DAN
I am. Goodwin –
GOODWIN
Me,
10 08 07 06
139 1.14 LA TILT MCU PROFILE GOODWIN sir. Dan isn’t due to start for ten minutes. 10 08 08 19
140 1.13 MCU DAN DAN 10 08 10 08
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 16 -
She sneaked up silently, sir.
141 1.16 LA TILT MCU PROFILE GOODWIN GOODWIN
It’s dark, sir.
10 08 11 21
142 1.13 LA TILT MCU PROFILE DAN
MUSIC 6 ENDS
10 08 13 12
10 08 13 19
143 2.21 LA TILT MCU ROBERTS ROBERTS
She’s got to be about here somewhere.
10 08 15 00
144 2.23 MHA WMS DAN DAN
She escaped that way, sir.
10 08 17 21
145 3.00 LA TILT MCU ROBERTS ROBERTS
Back to your tents, men.
10 08 20 19
146 1.08 LA TILT MCU PROFILE GOODWIN 10 08 23 19
147 7.11 WMS DAN TURNS TO LAPA AS
MARINES EXIT SHOT
ROBERTS (OOS)
We appear to have courageously fought off an
attack from a little native girl.
10 08 25 02
148 3.22 WMS PROFILE ROBERTS
STRAIGHTENS
ROBERTS
The Governor will be pleased.
10 08 32 13
149 4.22 MCU PROFILE LAPA EXITS LEFT
AS WARUWI LOOKS ON FROM BG
10 08 36 10
150 14.21 WS PROFILE DAN MOVES TOW
CAM AS GOODWIN STANDS IN
BG BEFORE FINALLY MOVING TO
TENT
10 08 41 07
151 5.09 WMS GOODWIN ENTERS TENT
THEN PAN RIGHT TO WARUWI
10 08 56 03
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 17 -
152 3.09 WMS DAN STANDS AND STEPS
TOW BG
DAN
Quick!
MUSIC 7 BEGINS ... 25 SEC
10 09 01 12
10 09 01 21
153 5.13 WS WARUWI MOVES TOW TENT
ENTRANCE
DAN (OOS)
Go!
10 09 04 21
154 7.00 LA TILT WS PROFILE DAN AT
LEFT AS WARUWI RUNS THRU
SHOT AND EXITS
DAN
Go!
10 09 10 09
155 2.22 LA TILT MCU DAN 10 09 17 09
>> SCENE 9. EXT DAY BEACH
156 3.07 ELEVATED WLS MARINES MOVE
ABOUT NEAR WATER
10 09 20 06
157 2.13 WS REV DAN TOSSES STICK
NEAR LAPA
DAN
Here, Lapa. Fetch.
10 09 23 13
158 2.08 LA TILT MCU LAPA LOOKS
AROUND
DAN (OOS)
Go on, bring it back to me.
MUSIC 7 ENDS
10 09 26 01
10 09 26 19
159 1.13 CU REV LAPA AND MCU DAN ROBERTS (OOS)
Why is that animal not
10 09 28 09
160 1.15 WMS PROFILE LAPA AND DAN
WITH ROBERTS IN BETWEEN
tied up? 10 09 29 22
161 9.05 MHA MCU DAN DAN
I'm teaching her to fetch, sir.
ROBERTS (OOS)
If that dog is not delivered safely to the Governor,
I'll nail your hide to a tree.
10 09 31 12
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 18 -
162 3.02 LA TILT MCU PROFILE ROBERTS
EXITS LEFT
ROBERTS
Tie it up.
10 09 40 17
>> SCENE 10. EXT DAY CAMP
163 11.23 LA TILT WMS DAN WALKS LEFT
TO GOODWIN AND SITS
DAN
If I stole an English girl’s dog, they’d send me to
Pinchgut.
10 09 43 19
164 5.21 LA TILT MCU PROFILE GOODWIN GOODWIN
The Governor’s the law. He wants a dog, it ain’t
stealing.
DAN (OOS)
But it’s not the Governor, it’s Roberts.
10 09 55 17
165 5.15 MCU PROFILE DAN DAN
The Governor’s orders were not to take things
from the natives without paying compensation.
10 10 01 13
>> SCENE 11. EXT DAY CAMP/INT DAN’S TENT
166 3.06 WIDE MLS DAN SITS IN TENT
MUSIC 8 BEGINS ... 21 SEC
10 10 07 03
10 10 09 00
167 4.04 HA WS BUTTON, DIE AND
THREAD
10 10 10 09
168 3.17 LA TILT MCU DAN SHAKES HEAD 10 10 14 13
169 0.23 HA WMS HAND PICKS UP
BELONGINGS
10 10 18 05
>> SCENE 12. EXT DAY CAMP
170 3.00 LA TILT WS BRITISH FLAG FLIES
IN FG
10 10 19 03
171 3.00 TILT UP FROM POT TO WMS
COOK TASTING FOOD
10 10 22 03
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 19 -
172 4.03 TILT UP OVER DAN WALKING
RIGHT TO COOK
10 10 25 03
173 2.24 LA TILT MCU PROFILE COOK
CHEWING FOOD AS DAN SITS IN
FG MUSIC 8 ENDS
10 10 29 06
10 10 30 00
174 7.16 LA TILT WMS DAN COOK (OOS)
You can’t be hungry already.
DAN
No, sore feet. Need some dripping to rub into my
boots.
10 10 32 05
175 2.10 LA TILT MCU COOK WITH DAN
IN FG
COOK
Dripping? To be wasted on boots?
10 10 39 21
176 3.09 LA TILT MCU DAN COOK (OOS)
Anyone heard such a thing? The colony is starving
and he wants
MUSIC 9 BEGINS ... 19 SEC
10 10 42 06
10 10 43 02
177 2.22 LA TILT MS HAND PICKS UP
SACK AS DAN STANDS FROM
COOK
to waste precious dripping on his boots. 10 10 45 15
178 1.24 LA TILT WMS DAN HOLDS SMALL
SACK IN HAND
COOK (OOS)
No food grows here
10 10 48 12
179 0.12 LA TILT WMS REV DAN TOSSES
SACK PAST CAM
that's fit to eat. 10 10 50 11
180 1.03 WS SACK LANDS OUTSIDE TENT COOK (OOS)
There’s no sign of a boat
10 10 50 23
181 2.03 LA TILT MCU PROFILE DAN
WITH COOK IN FG
from England. 10 10 52 01
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 20 -
182 2.07 TILT UP FROM CAMPFIRE TO
COOK HANDING PANNIKIN TO
DAN
COOK
Now, take this to the Lieutenant,
10 10 54 04
183 4.13 LA TILT MCU DAN EXITS FROM
CU PROFILE COOK
would you? You'll be eating them boots if no ship
turns up.
10 10 56 11
184 3.20 LA TILT WMS REV DAN WALKS
OVER ROPES TOW BG
MUSIC 9 ENDS
10 11 00 24
10 11 01 16
185 8.04 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS AT
TELESCOPE AS DAN ENTERS
SHOT TO HIM
DAN
Your rations, sir.
ROBERTS (OOS)
In my bag.
10 11 04 19
186 2.10 WS REV DAN BENDS AT
ROBERTS
10 11 12 23
187 5.05 WMS PROFILE DAN
STRAIGHTENS TO ROBERTS AND
TAKES TELESCOPE FROM HIM
ROBERTS
On your feet, men!
MUSIC 10 BEGINS ... 18 SEC
10 11 15 08
10 11 19 19
188 7.20 LA TILT WMS DAN HOLDS
TELESCOPE AS ROBERTS EXITS
IN FG
ROBERTS
We’re marching to the point.
MARINES (OOS)
Yes, sir!
10 11 20 13
189 4.14 WMS PROFILE DAN TUCKS
TELESCOPE INTO BAG AS
ROBERTS TURNS TO HIM
ROBERTS
My bag.
10 11 28 08
190 5.15 WMS DAN CARRIES BAG TO
ROBERTS IN FG
MUSIC 10 ENDS
10 11 32 22
10 11 37 13
191 3.05 WMS ROBERTS HANDS HAT TO 10 11 38 12
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 21 -
DAN AND TAKES BAG
192 1.11 WMS PROFILE ROBERTS PUTS
BAG OVER SHOULDER
10 11 41 17
193 2.06 LA TILT MCU DAN AS HAT MOVES
THRU SHOT
10 11 43 03
194 2.05 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS PUTS
HAT ON AND TURNS TOW BG
10 11 45 09
195 4.16 LA TILT WS DAN DRUMS AS
ROBERTS ENTERS FG TO
MARINES
ROBERTS
Drum us out, Dan.
MUSIC 11 BEGINS ... 26 SEC
10 11 47 14
10 11 48 11
196 10.20 LA TILT WS PROFILE ROBERTS
AND MARINES TURN IN FG AS
DAN DRUMS IN BG
ROBERTS
Marines, right turn! Right and left, quick march!
10 11 52 05
197 3.13 LA TILT WS DAN DRUMS IN BG
AS MARINES MARCH THRU FG
10 12 03 00
198 3.17 ELEVATED WIDE MLS MARINES
MARCH LEFT FROM DAN AND
GOODWIN
10 12 06 13
199 3.00 LA TILT WMS REV DAN DRUMS
AS MARINES MARCH IN BG
10 12 10 05
>> SCENE 13. EXT DAY CAMP
200 9.08 WMS DAN WALKS TO FG AND
PICKS UP SMALL SACK
MUSIC 11 ENDS
10 12 13 05
10 12 14 02
201 2.07 LA TILT ECU DAN 10 12 22 13
202 2.04 VIEW THRU TENT TO WMS 10 12 24 20
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 22 -
PROFILE COOK
203 1.09 ECU DAN EXITS RIGHT 10 12 26 24
>> SCENE 14. EXT DAY BUSH
204 17.01 WMS DAN WALKS THRU RAINY
BUSH THEN STANDS AND DRUMS
MUSIC 12 BEGINS ... 02 SEC
MUSIC 12 ENDS
10 12 28 08
10 12 38 11
10 12 40 12
205 1.16 LA TILT WMS PROFILE DAN
WALKS RIGHT THRU BUSH
10 12 45 09
206 2.03 LA TILT WMS WARUWI LOOKS
AROUND
WARUWI
Lapa?
10 12 47 00
207 5.09 LA TILT WMS DAN SITS
OPPOSITE WARUWI
DAN
Not with me. Back at camp.
10 12 49 03
208 2.00 LA TILT WMS WARUWI AND MCU
REV DAN
10 12 54 12
208 7.02 MCU PROFILE WARUWI IN FG AS
DAN TAKES SACK FROM BAG
MUSIC 13 BEGINS ... 53 SEC
10 12 56 12
10 13 02 18
210 3.04 WMS PROFILE DAN TASTES
SUGAR AS WARUWI SITS AT
LEFT
DAN
Sugar. It’s called sugar.
10 13 03 14
211 2.14 LA TILT MCU WARUWI AND MCU
REV DAN
10 13 06 18
212 2.16 WMS PROFILE WARUWI TAKES
BAG FROM DAN
10 13 09 07
213 4.17 LA TILT WMS WARUWI TASTES 10 13 11 23
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 23 -
SUGAR WITH MCU REV DAN IN
FG
214 3.01 LA TILT MCU DAN THEN TILT
DOWN TO BAG
10 13 16 15
215 1.05 LA TILT MS WARUWI LICKS
FINGER
10 13 19 16
216 3.18 WS TELESCOPE EXTENDED THEN
DAN HOLDS UP
DAN
It’s a spyglass.
10 13 20 21
217 3.00 LA TILT MCU WARUWI AND CU
REV DAN
DAN
Lieutenant Roberts’ spyglass.
10 13 24 14
218 2.02 LA TILT MCU PROFILE WARUWI
AND WIDE MCU DAN
10 13 27 14
219 3.20 LA TILT WMS PROFILE WARUWI
LOOKS THRU TELESCOPE WITH
DAN AT RIGHT
10 13 29 16
220 2.11 WMS WARUWI HOLDS OUT
HAND TO CU REV DAN
10 13 33 11
221 1.06 WMS PROFILE WARUWI AND
DAN LAUGH
10 13 35 22
222 3.11 WMS WARUWI LAUGHS AS SHE
LOWERS TELESCOPE
10 13 37 03
223 3.19 WMS ITEMS HELD OUT TO
WARUWI
DAN (OOS)
All for Waruwi. Spyglass, sugar,
10 13 40 14
224 2.00 LA TILT MS REV WARUWI AND
MS DAN
satchel, dice. 10 13 44 08
225 5.24 TILT UP FROM ITEMS TO MS DAN (OOS) 10 13 46 08
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 24 -
WARUWI All for you. Lapa for Roberts,
226 1.20 LA TILT MS REV WARUWI AND
WMS DAN
to take to the Governor. 10 13 52 07
227 4.18 LA TILT MCU WARUWI HOLDS
OUT ITEMS
WARUWI
Lapa, Waruwi. Dan, sugar.
MUSIC 13 ENDS
10 13 54 02
10 13 55 16
228 2.14 MCU PROFILE DAN WITH
WARUWI AT LEFT
DAN
I can’t just give you Lapa.
10 13 58 20
229 2.04 WS ITEMS HELD OUT THEN TILT
UP TO MCU DAN
DAN
Just take this
10 14 01 09
230 2.18 WMS WARUWI AND CU REV DAN stuff. It’s all you'll get.
WARUWI
Lapa.
MUSIC 14 BEGINS ... 31 SEC
10 14 03 13
10 13 06 01
231 2.21 MCU REV WARUWI TURNS TOW
CAM WITH DAN BEHIND
10 14 06 06
232 1.03 WMS WARUWI AND DAN 10 14 09 02
233 4.11 WMS ITEMS PICKED UP THEN
TILT UP TO MS PROFILE
WARUWI WITH DAN AT RIGHT
10 14 10 05
234 2.19 LA TILT MCU PROFILE DAN
WITH WARUWI AT LEFT
10 14 14 16
235 8.07 MCU PROFILE WARUWI IN FG AS
DAN EXITS SHOT
10 14 17 10
>> SCENE 15. EXT DAY BUSH
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 25 -
236 9.05 TILT DOWN OVER BUSH TO WS
DAN MOVING OVER WATERFALL
TOW CAM
10 14 25 17
237 1.14 WIDE MLS GOODWIN NEAR
TENTS
GOODWIN
Dan! Dan, quickly. The troops
10 14 34 22
238 2.13 WS DAN RUNS LEFT FROM
WATERFALL
are coming. Get to your post!
MUSIC 14 ENDS
10 14 36 11
10 14 37 07
239 3.05 LA TILT WS DAN RUNS TOW CAM
AND TRIPS
10 14 38 24
240 1.12 MONTAGE FAST EDITS DAN
LANDS HARD ON GROUND
10 14 42 04
241 2.08 TILT DOWN FROM DAN TO
BELONGINGS ON GROUND
10 14 43 16
242 1.08 MS PROFILE GOODWIN BENDS GOODWIN
That looks like ...
10 14 45 24
243 1.21 MHA WMS REV DAN ON GROUND
AS GOODWIN LOOKS AT HIM
DAN
Lieutenant Roberts’ spyglass.
10 14 47 07
244 5.12 WMS DAN STRAIGHTENS TO
GOODWIN
GOODWIN
In the bag.
MUSIC 15 BEGINS ... 18 SEC
DAN
No, no, he’ll check.
10 14 49 03
10 14 52 12
245 3.07 LA TILT WMS REV DAN AND
GOODWIN IN FG WITH ROBERTS
APPROACHING FROM BG
10 14 54 15
246 1.14 LA TILT WMS DAN PULLS 10 14 57 22
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 26 -
SATCHEL OVER SHOULDER
247 1.11 LA TILT WMS GOODWIN AND
DAN
10 14 59 11
248 1.11 LA TILT WS ROBERTS WALKS
TOW MS REV DAN IN FG
ROBERTS
Where’s my spyglass?
10 15 00 22
249 3.03 LA TILT WS REV ROBERTS
WALKS TOW GOODWIN AND
DAN IN BG
DAN
Spyglass, sir?
ROBERTS
Spyglass, marine.
10 15 02 08
250 2.21 LA TILT WMS REV DAN AND
GOODWIN AND WMS ROBERTS
ROBERTS
We march all the way to the point to check for
ships and I discover some
10 15 05 11
251 5.00 LA TILT MCU PROFILE DAN idiot has removed my spyglass.
MUSIC 15 ENDS
DAN
Idiot, sir?
ROBERTS (OOS)
It was in my bag
10 15 08 07
10 15 10 16
252 1.08 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS WITH
DAN AND GOODWIN IN FG
when you brought my rations. 10 15 13 07
253 1.01 WS BAG DROPS TO GROUND 10 15 14 15
254 1.19 LA TILT WMS PROFILE ROBERTS
AND GOODWIN
ROBERTS
Open your satchel.
10 15 15 16
255 1.11 LA TILT MCU DAN DAN
Sir.
10 15 17 10
256 7.02 DAN SHOWS ROBERTS OPEN 10 15 18 21
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 27 -
SATCHEL AS GOODWIN DROPS
TELESCOPE ONTO BAG
257 2.05 LA TILT WMS PROFILE ROBERTS
AND GOODWIN
GOODWIN
It’s
10 15 25 23
258 1.01 LA TILT MCU PROFILE DAN
LOOKS DOWN
here, sir. 10 15 28 03
259 1.14 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS WITH
DAN AND GOODWIN IN FG
10 15 29 04
260 7.17 TILT UP FROM BOOTS TO WMS
ROBERTS AND MCU REV DAN
AND GOODWIN
ROBERTS
As you were.
10 15 30 18
261 1.14 LA TILT MCU PROFILE DAN
NODS
10 15 38 10
262 1.11 LA TILT WMS PROFILE ROBERTS
AND GOODWIN
10 15 39 24
263 2.03 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS LOOKS
ON AS DAN AND GOODWIN EXIT
SHOT MUSIC 16 BEGINS ... 3 MIN 56 SEC
10 15 41 10
10 15 43 11
>> SCENE 16. EXT DAY CAMP
264 3.06 WIDE MLS MARINES PULL TENT
DOWN
10 15 43 13
265 2.19 LA TILT WMS MARINE AT
BLANKET AS OTHERS MOVE
ABOUT IN FG
10 15 46 19
266 2.00 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS WALKS
TOW CAM
10 15 49 13
267 2.11 WMS PROFILE MARINE PICKS UP 10 15 51 13
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 28 -
BASKET
268 3.07 TILT UP OVER MS PROFILE DAN
ROLLING BLANKET UP AS
ROBERTS ENTERS SHOT
ROBERTS
Ah, there you are, Dan.
10 15 53 24
269 2.05 LA TILT WMS PROFILE DAN
WITH ROBERTS IN BG
ROBERTS
Now you get some food and water for the
Governor’s animal.
10 15 57 06
270 7.09 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS EXITS
TENT THEN PULL BACK TO DAN
IN FG
ROBERTS
You'll be responsible for it in the longboat.
10 15 59 11
>> SCENE 17. EXT DAY BEACH
271 4.14 WS PROFILE DAN TAKES ROPE
FROM LAPA’S NECK
DAN
Go. Go Lapa,
10 16 06 20
272 16.00 MCU LAPA AND MCU PROFILE
DAN THEN TILT UP TO ROBERTS
IN BG
DAN SLIPS ROPE AROUND
LAPA’S NECK AND EXITS WITH
HER
go. Go! Go away!
ROBERTS
Get that dog to the boat, Dan! Now, man!
10 16 11 09
273 3.07 WMS MARINES WADE THRU
WATER
10 16 27 09
274 4.03 WS MARINES AT BOAT AT LEFT
AS DAN CARRIES DOG AT RIGHT
ROBERTS
Keep moving.
10 16 30 16
275 2.16 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS LOOKS
AROUND
10 16 34 19
276 4.08 LA TILT WMS DAN HOLDS DOG
IN WATER
10 16 37 10
277 2.06 WMS PROFILE DAN PLACES DOG 10 16 41 18
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 29 -
IN WATER
278 1.24 WMS GOODWIN AND OTHERS GOODWIN
What are you doing?
10 16 43 24
279 5.09 WS PROFILE LAPA MOVES RIGHT
FROM DAN
ROBERTS (OOS)
Get that dog.
DAN
She hasn’t done her business yet, sir.
10 16 45 23
280 1.23 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS AND CU
REV DAN
ROBERTS
Well quickly, then. Make her
10 16 51 07
281 9.08 WMS DAN TURNS AND FOLLOWS
LAPA THRU WATER
do it on the beach. 10 16 53 05
282 1.17 WS REV ROBERTS AND OTHERS
IN FG AS DAN EXITS RIGHT
10 17 02 13
283 1.23 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS 10 17 04 05
284 4.04 WMS PROFILE LAPA RUNS ONTO
BEACH WITH DAN FOLLOWING
DAN
Go, Lapa, go!
WARUWI (OOS)
Lapa!
10 17 06 03
285 2.19 LA TILT WMS PROFILE ROBERTS DAN (OOS)
Go!
10 17 10 07
286 1.20 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS RAISES
WEAPON
ROBERTS
Dan!
10 17 13 01
287 1.05 LA TILT WMS GOODWIN LOOKS
AROUND
10 17 14 21
288 19.10 MONTAGE FAST EDITS WIDE
MLS REV DAN RUNS AFTER LAPA
WARUWI (OOS)
Lapa!
10 17 16 01
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 30 -
RUNNING ON BEACH
DAN REACHES WARUWI AND
ROBERTS LOWERS WEAPON
ROBERTS
You bring back that dog or I'll shoot it!
>> SCENE 18. EXT DAY BUSH
289 3.20 LA TILT WS COCKATOO IN TREE 10 17 35 11
290 5.24 WS DAN, WARUWI AND LAPA
THEN TILT UP TO ROBERTS
MOVING THRU BUSH
ROBERTS
Keep up, Goodwin.
GOODWIN
Sir!
10 17 39 06
291 5.24 WS LAPA, WARUWI AND DAN
EXIT IN FG AS ROBERTS MOVES
ABOUT IN BG
10 17 45 05
>> SCENE 19. EXT DAY CAMP SITE
292 91.09 MONTAGE EDITS WARUWI, DAN
AND LAPA MOVE THRU BUSH
UNTIL THEY REACH CAMP SITE
WARUWI TURNS SLOWLY FROM
DAN AND RUNS TO FAMILY
GROUP AT CAMP SITE THEN DAN
TURNS AND WALKS AWAY
10 17 51 04
>> SCENE 20. EXT DAY CAMP
293 5.22 POV FROM TENT AS DAN WALKS
WITH MARINES TOW CAM
10 19 22 13
294 3.02 LA TILT WMS DAN WALKS TOW
CAM WITH GOODWIN AND
MARINE BEHIND
10 19 28 10
295 4.18 WMS ROBERTS CLOSES BOOK AS
DAN ENTERS SHOT
10 19 31 12
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 31 -
296 5.13 WS REV ROBERTS SITTING WITH
DAN AND OTHERS NEARBY
ROBERTS
Dan?
MUSIC 16 ENDS
DAN
Sir.
ROBERTS
You disobeyed an order.
10 19 36 05
10 19 39 24
297 2.18 WMS ROBERTS ROBERTS
You stole the Governor’s dog.
10 19 41 18
298 6.21 LA TILT MCU DAN WITH
GOODWIN IN BG
ROBERTS (OOS)
You deserted your post.
DAN
Yes, sir.
ROBERTS (OOS)
I have no choice.
DAN
No, sir.
10 19 44 11
299 3.20 MHA WMS ROBERTS WITH DAN
AT RIGHT
ROBERTS
Get a good night’s sleep, lad.
10 19 51 07
300 7.10 LA TILT MCU DAN TURNS AND
EXITS FROM GOODWIN IN BG
ROBERTS (OOS)
You'll be flogged at dawn.
MUSIC 17 BEGINS ... 3 MIN 08 SEC
10 19 55 02
10 19 57 09
>> SCENE 21. EXT DAWN CLEARING NEAR CAMP
301 4.01 LA TILT WS DAWN SUN THRU
TREES
10 20 02 12
302 3.22 WS PROFILE KOOKABURRA IN
TREE
10 20 06 13
303 15.17 TILT DOWN OVER TREE TO WMS ROBERTS 10 20 10 10
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 32 -
ROBERTS AND GOODWIN INTO
SHOT
ROBERTS EXITS THEN DAN
STEPS INTO SHOT
Build the triangle here.
GOODWIN
Yes, sir.
304 4.21 LA TILT WS PROFILE GOODWIN
AND DAN IN FG AS WARUWI
ENTERS SHOT WITH ANIMAL
SKINS
10 20 26 02
305 10.00 LA TILT MCU PROFILE GOODWIN
LOOKS AROUND THEN PAN LEFT
TO DAN STANDING AND
TURNING TOW CAM
DAN
Waruwi.
10 20 30 23
306 3.18 LA TILT WMS WARUWI WALKS
TO MS REV DAN HOLDING SKINS
GOODWIN (OOS)
Oh, for the love of- ... Dan,
10 20 40 23
307 1.04 LA TILT MCU GOODWIN AND ECU
PROFILE DAN
aren't you in enough trouble already? 10 20 44 16
308 2.06 LA TILT MCU DAN LOOKS
AROUND
10 20 45 20
308 14.00 MONTAGE EDITS WARUWI
HOLDS ANIMAL SKINS UP TO
GOODWIN AND DAN
DAN
Goodwin, it’s alright. Look what she’s brought.
GOODWIN
Ohh!
10 20 48 01
>> SCENE 22. EXT DAY CLEARING NEAR CAMP
310 21.06 WMS PROFILE MARINE WALKS
RIGHT TO ROBERTS, DAN AND
OTHERS
ROBERTS
You are charged with desertion, disobeying an
order and stealing the Governor’s dog. Do you
have anything to say for yourself?
DAN
Yes, sir. I ... I didn’t
10 21 02 01
311 2.24 LA TILT WMS REPORTER WITH steal the dog. I returned it to its owner. 10 21 23 07
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 33 -
DAN AT RIGHT
ROBERTS
One warning, soldier.
DAN
In exchange
312 4.05 MCU DAN for something better. 10 21 26 06
313 3.04 WMS COAT PULLED AWAY TO
REVEAL DINGO PUP
10 21 30 11
314 2.03 WMS ROBERTS WITH DAN
HOLDING PUP AT RIGHT
DAN
It’ll be much easier for the Governor
10 21 33 15
315 3.11 MS PROFILE PUP ASLEEP IN
COAT
to teach a puppy to be a hunting dog than a
grown dog.
10 21 35 18
316 1.07 LA TILT WMS PROFILE
GOODWIN WITH MARINE IN BG
GOODWIN
He’s right, sir.
10 21 39 04
317 3.14 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS AND MCU
REV DAN
ROBERTS
Oh, do be quiet Goodwin.
DAN
And the puppy was a gift, from the natives.
10 21 40 11
318 5.12 LA TILT WMS REV ROBERTS AND
WMS DAN WITH GOODWIN AND
OTHERS IN BG
DAN
A friendly gift, so we’re keeping the Governor’s
will.
MARINE
Hear, hear.
10 21 44 00
319 2.05 LA TILT MCU DAN 10 21 49 12
320 4.17 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS STEPS
RIGHT TO DAN
MARINE (OOS)
Hear, hear.
10 21 51 17
321 1.05 MHA HANDS REACH OUT TO PUP 10 21 56 09
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 34 -
322 2.11 WMS PROFILE ROBERTS PICKS
UP PUP AS DAN STANDS AT
RIGHT
10 21 57 14
323 1.23 MCU PROFILE PUP IN HANDS 10 22 00 00
324 5.23 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS HOLDS
PUP AS DAN STANDS AT RIGHT
ROBERTS
Very good, soldier.
10 22 01 23
325 1.15 LA TILT MCU DAN ROBERTS (OOS)
Well done.
10 22 07 21
326 2.18 WMS PUP IN HANDS WITH MCU
REV DAN IN FG
ROBERTS (OOS)
Back to camp, men.
10 22 09 11
327 1.23 WMS ROBERTS HOLDING PUP
WITH MCU REV DAN IN FG
ROBERTS
In some sort of order.
10 22 12 04
328 2.04 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS AND DAN
WITH PUP AT LEFT AND
GOODWIN AT RIGHT
MARINES
Yes, sir.
10 22 14 02
329 2.20 LA TILT WMS PROFILE ROBERTS
AND DAN WITH PUP
ROBERTS
Dan, you're responsible
10 22 16 06
330 1.04 MS PROFILE DAN TAKES PUP for this one. 10 22 19 01
331 2.15 LA TILT MCU ROBERTS AND CU
REV DAN
ROBERTS
And this time, try not
10 22 20 05
332 3.02 LA TILT MS PROFILE DAN
HOLDING PUP
to disobey orders.
DAN
Yes, sir.
10 22 22 20
333 4.12 LA TILT WMS ROBERTS NODS
AND TURNS FROM MCU REV DAN
10 22 25 22
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 35 -
334 1.11 LA TILT WMS GOODWIN SMILES
AND CLAPS DAN ON SHOULDER
10 22 30 09
335 2.23 LA TILT WMS REV DAN CARRIES
PUP BEHIND OTHER MARINES
10 22 31 20
336 3.05 WS REV DAN AND GOODWIN
WALK BEHIND OTHER MARINES
IN BG
10 22 34 18
>> SCENE 23. EXT DAY BEACH
337 6.08 LA TILT WS WARUWI AND LAPA
STAND ON ROCK AS WARUWI
WAVES
DAN (VOICEOVER)
She was happy to see us go.
10 22 37 23
338 3.05 10 ELEVATED WIDE MLS
LONGBOAT MOVES RIGHT FROM
BEACH
DAN (VOICEOVER)
I didn’t know how to warn her that we would be
back,
10 22 44 06
339 12.14 LA TILT WMS DAN AND OTHERS
MOVE AWAY FROM CAM THEN
FADE TO BLACK
and there would be more and more of us. I didn’t
know how to tell her, this is our place now.
MUSIC 29 BEGINS ... 59 SEC
10 22 47 11
10 22 59 12
340 45.23 END CREDITS RUN OVER BLACK
BG
Directed byMICHAEL JAMES ROWLAND
MUSIC 17 ENDS
Written byGREG WATERS
Produced byPENNY CHAPMAN
Co-ProducerHELEN PANCKHURST
Executive ProducersBERNADETTE O'MAHONYSIMON HOPKINSON
10 23 00 00
10 23 04 20
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 36 -
Script ProducerJOHN ALSOP
Line ProducerMICHELLE RUSSELL
Casting DirectorsDANNY LONGGREG APPS
Director Of PhotographyMARTIN McGRATH ACS
Film EditorCHRISTOPHER SPURR
ComposerROGER MASON
Production DesignerFELICITY ABBOTT
Costume DesignerXANTHE HEUBEL
Hair & Make-Up DesignerREBECCA TAYLOR
History & Story ConsultantNADIA WHEATLEY
Indigenous Cultural AdvisorALLEN MADDEN
DanJARED ZIEGLER
WaruwiLEONIE WHYMAN
RobertsMARTIN JACOBS
GoodwinCHARLIE GARBER
Marine #1LEIGH SCULLY
MY PLACESERIES 2 - EPISODE 24 – “1788 DAN”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
- 37 -
Marine #2BENEDICT SAMUEL
CookBEN WOOD
Aboriginal Boy #1BAYKALI GANAMBARR
Aboriginal Boy #2WAKARA GONDARRA
Production CoordinatorCASSANDRA SIMPSON
Assistant Prod.. CoordinatorJONATHAN KENNERLY
Production SecretaryMICHAEL HORVATH
Production RunnersHENRY DOWNESTOM JACKSON
Extras CastingALANNA PERRY
DramaturgMELISSA BRUDER
Casting/Producer's AssistantKATHLEEN TAN
Production AccountantJAMES BRAMLEY
Assistant AccountantTU NHI LAM
LocationsPETER LAWLESS
Location CoordinatorADAM JESSER
1st Assistant DirectorTONY GILBERT
2nd Assistant Director
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3rd Assistant DirectorCHRIS EVANS
Script SupervisorMELINA BURNS
Camera Operator/ SteadicamSIMON HARDING
Focus PullersWEI-CHING CHONGJOSIE NAGEL
Clapper LoaderPATRICK SHORT
Video Split OperatorKYLE MATHIS
GafferBEN DUGARD
Best Boy ElectricsRICHARD MASON
Third ElectricsCHRIS FOLLETT
Key GripCRAIG '"JACKO'" JACKSON
Best Boy GripAARON RAPIRA
Sound RecordistMARK BLACKWELL
Boom OperatorMANEL LOPEZ
Sound AssistantMARTIN COX
Art DirectorSOPHIE NASH
Art Dept CoordinatorCOLETTE BIRRELL
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Set DecoratorTANIA EINBERG
Property MasterPETER MALATESTA
Props Buyer/Set DresserELOISE STUART
Set DresserFOSTER
On Set DresserMARK HARMAN
Standby PropsANTHONY McNEIL
Asst Standby PropsSHONA MENZIES
Art Dept RunnerARCHER COX
Art Dept AttachmentsCARLY GLOVERCATHERINE SIMMONS
ArmourerTONY GARLAND
Costume SupervisorALISON PARKER
Assistant Costume DesignerSIMONE ROMANIUK
Costume BuyerKATE ABERCROMBY
Costume StandbyBERNADETTE CROFT
Costume AssistantLEAH GIBLIN
Costume CutterLEONIE GRACE COSTUMES
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Hair & Make-up ArtistsCATHERINE BIGGSALEXANDRA SCOTT
Unit ManagerTIC CARROLL
Unit Assistant ManagerAYA GERAHTY
Unit AssistantsANDREW PLAYFORDTIM DICKSON
Safety SupervisorsRICHARD BOUEJONNY HALLYDAYDEAN GOULD
Unit NurseJULIE DEAKIN
Dingo WranglerKIRSTIN FEDDERSEN
CatererREZA MOKHTAR
Camera EquipmentLEMAC
Production LawyersTRESSCOX LAWYERSCLARE MIRABELLO
Business Affairs CoordinatorCECILIA RITCHIE
Production InsuranceH.W. WOOD
Completion BondFACB
Post SupervisorDAVID BIRRELL
1st Assistant EditorJOHN COLE
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2nd Assistant EditorHANNAH CARROLL CHAPMAN
Titles DesignROCHELLE OSHLACKCATHIE BROUGHTONSTUART CADZOW FSMN
Edited atSPECTRUM FILMS
HD Post ProductionFSM
FSM ProducerPAULINE PIPER
Conform EditorsDAVID BIRRELLBEN BROAD
ColouristTRISTAN LA FONTAINE
Online EditorHEATHER GALVIN
Sound FacilityABC
Dialogue EditorPETER HALL
Sound Effects EditorLEON HORROCKS
ADR & Foley RecordistIAN DONATO
Foley ArtistNATALIE CHOO
MixerMICHOL MARSH
Music Orchestrated& Arranged byROGER MASON
Violin
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MARCUS HOLDEN
CelloMIRANDA KLEIN
FlutesPAUL JARMAN
Music Recorded & Mixed atCOLLYWOOD STUDIOS
Thanks toSCOTT ROSEBEN PROVESTTHE SOUTHPORT SCHOOL
Stills PhotographerMARK ROGERS
EPK DirectorALEX SERAFINI
Timescape Stills PhotographerLUKE STAMBOULIAH
My Place TimescapeBLUE ROCKET PRODUCTIONS
Produced with the assistance of the City of Sydney
Special thanks toHero Frock Hire, Old Sydney TownHistoric Houses Trust, AFTRSIndigenous Consuiltant: Keith Vincent-SmithCarla de Jong, Tim Brooke-Hunt, Jenny Buckland
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Developed and produced in association with the AustralianBroadcasting Corporation
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Developed with the assistance ofand distributed by theAustralian Children’s Television Foundation
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TELEVISION FOUNDATION
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Produced with assistance fromScreen Tasmania
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