narrative reflection writing rhetoric
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Narrative Reflection Writing RhetoricTRANSCRIPT
Conor Ward
January 22, 2015
Dr. Dietel-Mclaughlin
First Assignment Reflection
In the beginning , this assignment was extremely difficult for me. I did not have any clue
what I was going to write about, because originally I thought that the assignment was just to
write a narrative. As my narrative says, I took me a longtime to come to the idea about writing
about the assignment itself. However, once I figured out a topic the essay almost wrote itself. I
was able to breeze through the actual typing of the essay, because I was basically just typing
about events that had occurred only a few hours before. Thus, because I had a lot of material to
work with I was able to quickly fill up an essay that would meet the time requirements. If any-
thing, I was scared that the narrative would be too long.
Even though I was able to type up the essay at a very fast pace, it was still very rough
grammatically. I took a lot of reviewing and editing to finally get the essay to a place where I
was happy with how it sounded grammatically. This part of the essay was the most time consum-
ing, mostly because it took multiple drafts and read throughs to achieve this goal. Once I was
able to Finnish this part I was able to take it to the writing center where I put some fine touches
on it. I added some more description and elaborated more on how I would use screens to pro-
crastinate.
Usually when I write an essay I will make some type of outline or I will at least bullet
point my ideas. However, with this essay I just typed all the thoughts that were going through my
head. I knew that if I didn't get everything down on the paper, I would forget what I wanted to
write. I think not writing an outline for this assignment had some advantages, because I was able
to just write down all my thoughts. It gave the narrative a more flowing and natural sounding
rhythm. Through this process my transitions were less forced and I was naturally move from idea
to idea.
For me the most difficult part of this assignment was recording it, because I would con-
stantly mess up and have to restart. I ended up recording it piece by piece so if I messed up I
wouldn't have to completely restart. Otherwise, I don't think I would have been able to Finnish
recording it. I would accidentally skip a word or misread something and this would make me
have to start over. Once I finished though, I was very happy with the finished product.
In the end, I was very happy with my final product. I was able to put all the thoughts and
experiences I had into a coherent narrative that conveyed my struggle of finding a way to over
come procrastination and distractions.